Comments received on poems by Neville



It Don’t Help to Forget None
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

Beautiful sentiments for your beautiful lady. What truly counts is that you’ve remembered what you forgot.

Laura 🌻

December 30th, 2021 11:41

It Don’t Help to Forget None
Fay Slimm. said:

Words mean a lot to a lady when they come from a purely romantic heart - and who could wish for a better \"forgetter\" than thee mon ami - -- - a lovely warm read.............. x

December 30th, 2021 11:26

Chasing Light
SureshG said:

You are full of romance that your pen lovingly exposes, letting us dream a little

December 30th, 2021 10:24

Chasing Light
Draven said:

Very nicely written.

December 30th, 2021 09:38

Chasing Light
orchidee said:

Should I meet her? Can I meet her?! heehee.

December 30th, 2021 03:03

Chasing Light
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words Neville, may she always be with you.

Andy

December 30th, 2021 01:46

Chasing Light
Fay Slimm. said:

Your tender expressions put romantic poetry on a whole different level and to say I enjoyed this would be putting it mildly - -- a sigh of a read Nev........x

December 30th, 2021 01:41

Chasing Light
Rozina said:

Romantic beautiful lines.

December 29th, 2021 18:30

Chasing Light
dusk arising said:

(swoons)..... hold that thought.... I think I just fell in love too.

December 29th, 2021 16:09

Chasing Light
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely words Neville ))

December 29th, 2021 15:16

Chasing Light
Michael Edwards said:

And so may she blossom. Enjoyed the read.

December 29th, 2021 15:13

On Being But a Poet
Rozina said:

A good one.

December 29th, 2021 01:26

On Being But a Poet
Goldfinch60 said:

We will all leave this earth at some time but hopefully we will leave some fond memories Neville.

Andy

December 28th, 2021 14:39

On Being But a Poet
orchidee said:

The didn\'t kill me off, or martyr me, like a poem of recent days, but they chucked me in a hole, and shovelled in a pile of stones, or proverbial \'ton of bricks\'. Why? Cos I began to sing! lol.

December 28th, 2021 11:56

On Being But a Poet
spilleronsheet said:

A poet the most sensitive being, noticing even minute details….a tale or two from his recount never leaves the heart….maybe he isn’t a king with green but a king with words
Well penned dear Neville

December 28th, 2021 09:21

On Being But a Poet
Dove said:

Mine will say!

A Poet
wouldn\'t you know it
A Romantic
knew how to show it


December 28th, 2021 09:06

A Life Lived Sadly
Dove said:

The variant is here , this one makes your nose run! Hope you have a wonderful New Year!

December 28th, 2021 08:54

On Being But a Poet
Fay Slimm. said:

As suitable a place as any methinks Nev. for a dreamer to rest covered with stony reminders on a windy hill maybe that he wrote out his own heart in those re-told tale-tellings - -- a simply smart poet would not want to lay any other way. - -- though I am curious now for his name................x

December 28th, 2021 08:53

On Being But a Poet
dusk arising said:

Whether it be us poets or the men who could plough the straightest furrow, we all shall pass. Our individual prowess shall be lost to the world, save for any tangible relic, and we shall be superceeded just as we took on roles once praised by our forebears....

...... and what then is left to say but \"that\'s life\"

December 28th, 2021 08:38

A Life Lived Sadly
Poetic Dan said:

Think I\'m lost on this one but 3 lines can send anyone over the edge... just stick with the one! Lol

Hope your well my friend

December 27th, 2021 03:50

A Life Lived Sadly
Rozina said:

A word, a punctuation, a rephrase, can change a meaning, make a difference. It\'s great.

December 26th, 2021 21:31

A Life Lived Sadly
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever words Neville.

Andy

December 26th, 2021 16:22

A Life Lived Sadly
Fay Slimm. said:

Certainly a variant Nev. - -- even within the title an important rephrasing - -- a life lived sadly shows tragic mind-sets and I guess that three lines would cover it\'s negative life-style - - - the read raises pity for those in such mental states - - - an interesting difference in postings mon ami ..................x

December 26th, 2021 13:32

A Life Lived Sadly
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

It’s a variant indeed…ever so present!
It’s been nice to “see” you.

Thank you for sharing.

Laura 🌻

December 26th, 2021 11:37

A Life Lived Sadly
orchidee said:

Good write N. :)

December 26th, 2021 08:01

A Life Lived Sadly
dusk arising said:

Ithought I\'dseen it before but quickly realised its syllables this time around.
Lines can be long or short.

December 26th, 2021 06:56

A Life Lived Sadly
dusk arising said:



December 26th, 2021 06:55

A Life Lived Sadly
Paul Bell said:

Two hundred and fifty thousand lines of grief, and probably some of them died under the pretence of covid just to get them on their way. Here\'s to the next one with the fancy name.

December 26th, 2021 06:53

A Life Sadly Lived
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Neville.

Andy

December 24th, 2021 01:52

The Taking of Innocence
spilleronsheet said:

The closing of eyes won’t die the sad and anguish truth the society hides
A heinous crime like this boils the inner core
The respect and dignity stripes without caring about another soul
Well placed are those lines
Though tragic and pointing to inhumanity of mankind
Wish people could respect others choice
Even satan can’t define the evil those mind store
Felt sad while reading this
And yes the word anger can’t be hidden
The news lace with such incidents
Don’t know where the full stops lie
Wish the heinous devils could stop making such crimes

December 24th, 2021 01:00



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