Comments received on poems by Neville
Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
Neil Higgins said:
North Somerset cider.Now your talking Nev.Cheers 🥳
August 1st, 2022 12:28
Neil Higgins said:
North Somerset cider.Now your talking Nev.Cheers 🥳
August 1st, 2022 12:28
Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
Fay Slimm. said:
Your imagery is as brill. as ever.........x
August 1st, 2022 06:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Your imagery is as brill. as ever.........x
August 1st, 2022 06:56
Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'of that nectar of life
your ink, drips
...ever sweet\'
August 1st, 2022 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'of that nectar of life
your ink, drips
...ever sweet\'
August 1st, 2022 03:55
Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
Doggerel Dave said:
Aah! Cunnilingus at the right time in the right place can have it\'s own rewards....
August 1st, 2022 03:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Aah! Cunnilingus at the right time in the right place can have it\'s own rewards....
August 1st, 2022 03:50
That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings
MendedFences27 said:
Memories woven into a quilt of poetic
recollections; of \"cotton squares,\" \"501\'s,\" \"crosses,\" \'kisses,\" \"Sunday
mornings,\" \"Cohen, Dylan,\" \"a Dansette,\" and, Oh Yeah, that other thing. So well written, I need to save it. - Phil A.
July 31st, 2022 17:06
MendedFences27 said:
Memories woven into a quilt of poetic
recollections; of \"cotton squares,\" \"501\'s,\" \"crosses,\" \'kisses,\" \"Sunday
mornings,\" \"Cohen, Dylan,\" \"a Dansette,\" and, Oh Yeah, that other thing. So well written, I need to save it. - Phil A.
July 31st, 2022 17:06
That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings
Neil Higgins said:
501,Dylan,Danzette.You make me feel old Nev.Oh.Wait a minute….
July 31st, 2022 12:12
Neil Higgins said:
501,Dylan,Danzette.You make me feel old Nev.Oh.Wait a minute….
July 31st, 2022 12:12
That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings
Bella Shepard said:
Each line beautifully expressed! So often it is the little things in life that our brain tenderly stores away for us, that we may retrieve cherished memories and smile. I enjoyed every line.
July 31st, 2022 11:44
Bella Shepard said:
Each line beautifully expressed! So often it is the little things in life that our brain tenderly stores away for us, that we may retrieve cherished memories and smile. I enjoyed every line.
July 31st, 2022 11:44
That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - what intimate memories of long gone relationships brought to this most readable romantic poem by your expert know-how - -- - the stiches on those patched 501\'s did it for me - - your take on making reality from musings is simply amazing mon ami.................x
July 31st, 2022 03:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - what intimate memories of long gone relationships brought to this most readable romantic poem by your expert know-how - -- - the stiches on those patched 501\'s did it for me - - your take on making reality from musings is simply amazing mon ami.................x
July 31st, 2022 03:01
The Shame of Yesterday’s News
MendedFences27 said:
Shameful! The way children across the Globe get treated these days. Mankind has gone insane. News outlets only report what people will tune in to see.
A small waif of a life gets annihilated, and stupid people get more attention. Glad you showed them for what they are. - Phil A.
July 30th, 2022 21:52
MendedFences27 said:
Shameful! The way children across the Globe get treated these days. Mankind has gone insane. News outlets only report what people will tune in to see.
A small waif of a life gets annihilated, and stupid people get more attention. Glad you showed them for what they are. - Phil A.
July 30th, 2022 21:52
The Shame of Yesterday’s News
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve not heard or seen news the past couple of days, and this truly sickens my heart. I googled and found Lilia Valutyte, a beautiful name of the beautiful little girl I saw pictured. The murder of an innocent child always leaves me in a place where I can make sense of absolutely nothing, especially when it simply becomes a footnote in today\'s news. Her life goes unlived, all that she might have been and done lost through a senseless and cowardly act. Good for you my friend, addressing this. We all need to shout!
July 30th, 2022 13:21
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve not heard or seen news the past couple of days, and this truly sickens my heart. I googled and found Lilia Valutyte, a beautiful name of the beautiful little girl I saw pictured. The murder of an innocent child always leaves me in a place where I can make sense of absolutely nothing, especially when it simply becomes a footnote in today\'s news. Her life goes unlived, all that she might have been and done lost through a senseless and cowardly act. Good for you my friend, addressing this. We all need to shout!
July 30th, 2022 13:21
The Shame of Yesterday’s News
KRWonder said:
So sad, and your words ring so true. Thanks for sharing this and honoring a lost life through your words.
July 30th, 2022 11:59
KRWonder said:
So sad, and your words ring so true. Thanks for sharing this and honoring a lost life through your words.
July 30th, 2022 11:59
The Shame of Yesterday’s News
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes what was important has radically changed in these uncaring days my friend. \'We have no inkling of what that little girl felt before her last breath.......................x
July 30th, 2022 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes what was important has radically changed in these uncaring days my friend. \'We have no inkling of what that little girl felt before her last breath.......................x
July 30th, 2022 03:48
The Lovers of Modena Disturbed
MendedFences27 said:
Two people in one grave is unusual, today, but I can\'t say about the fifth century. Lovers buried together perhaps was a common thing, but to die together at the same moment raises questions of murder or assassination. Surely, they would have clung to one another if killed at the same time.
An interesting and quizzical piece. Why were they uprooted in the first place? Were they murdered? From what has been said, we\'ll never know. - Phil A.
July 29th, 2022 15:11
MendedFences27 said:
Two people in one grave is unusual, today, but I can\'t say about the fifth century. Lovers buried together perhaps was a common thing, but to die together at the same moment raises questions of murder or assassination. Surely, they would have clung to one another if killed at the same time.
An interesting and quizzical piece. Why were they uprooted in the first place? Were they murdered? From what has been said, we\'ll never know. - Phil A.
July 29th, 2022 15:11
The Lovers of Modena Disturbed
orchidee said:
Seems like you\'re describing when I first started singing. The shock of it psychologically brought delayed screams for as long as 1600 years! heehee.
July 29th, 2022 13:17
orchidee said:
Seems like you\'re describing when I first started singing. The shock of it psychologically brought delayed screams for as long as 1600 years! heehee.
July 29th, 2022 13:17
The Lovers of Modena Disturbed
Jerry Reynolds said:
Deliciously written, Neville.
You foxy devil.
July 29th, 2022 08:45
Jerry Reynolds said:
Deliciously written, Neville.
You foxy devil.
July 29th, 2022 08:45
The Lovers of Modena Disturbed
Doggerel Dave said:
Would it be possible to cite context for this one Neville?
July 29th, 2022 06:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Would it be possible to cite context for this one Neville?
July 29th, 2022 06:53
Behind That Navajo Smile
Doggerel Dave said:
Never mind the Navajo....I mean do mind the Navajo but also mind the First Nations of Australia, who for at least 65,000 years kept this environment in pristine condition... that is until 1788....
A beautiful committed write, Neville.
July 29th, 2022 06:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Never mind the Navajo....I mean do mind the Navajo but also mind the First Nations of Australia, who for at least 65,000 years kept this environment in pristine condition... that is until 1788....
A beautiful committed write, Neville.
July 29th, 2022 06:48
The Lovers of Modena Disturbed
dusk arising said:
Such emlightened times we live in. Or did we always until some man made religious hoo gah was concocted (probably to despose of a rival knowing the roman churches corrupt background).
Love is love, period. Innit.
July 29th, 2022 05:21
dusk arising said:
Such emlightened times we live in. Or did we always until some man made religious hoo gah was concocted (probably to despose of a rival knowing the roman churches corrupt background).
Love is love, period. Innit.
July 29th, 2022 05:21
The Lovers of Modena Disturbed
L. B. Mek said:
\'With a reason for their untimely
demise, both
conveniently and reverently denied ..\'
reverently, as your word choice
is the difference
between, a simple line and decadent subtlety..
such a lovely read, dear Poet supreme!
and yes those fella\'s took
\'forever and ever\' to a new level of extreme.. lol
funny how when Vesuvius erupted
it managed to preserve so many
people in their act of living
but not a single, couple embracing...
(am I strange for thinking like this
and connecting the two?)
lol
my bad, if it\'s in bad taste
July 29th, 2022 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'With a reason for their untimely
demise, both
conveniently and reverently denied ..\'
reverently, as your word choice
is the difference
between, a simple line and decadent subtlety..
such a lovely read, dear Poet supreme!
and yes those fella\'s took
\'forever and ever\' to a new level of extreme.. lol
funny how when Vesuvius erupted
it managed to preserve so many
people in their act of living
but not a single, couple embracing...
(am I strange for thinking like this
and connecting the two?)
lol
my bad, if it\'s in bad taste
July 29th, 2022 04:16
The Lovers of Modena Disturbed
Fay Slimm. said:
Sounds like more than one Italian secret was uncovered in those bones Nev.. ---- who knows -- but maybe liaisons between same sex was taboo back then and perhaps meant certain death - your words caught the mystery so well it has set me atingle with more curiosity ..................x
July 29th, 2022 03:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Sounds like more than one Italian secret was uncovered in those bones Nev.. ---- who knows -- but maybe liaisons between same sex was taboo back then and perhaps meant certain death - your words caught the mystery so well it has set me atingle with more curiosity ..................x
July 29th, 2022 03:38
Behind That Navajo Smile
Goldfinch60 said:
The Native Indians had a true way of life for the good of all that was taken from them by those that invaded their country and changed the world.
Andy
July 29th, 2022 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
The Native Indians had a true way of life for the good of all that was taken from them by those that invaded their country and changed the world.
Andy
July 29th, 2022 00:19
How Far Do You Really Want to Go
Fay Slimm. said:
Poetry pleasure-ified my dear sir Neville.
July 28th, 2022 12:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Poetry pleasure-ified my dear sir Neville.
July 28th, 2022 12:18
Behind That Navajo Smile
orchidee said:
I\'m more equal than others. To me, 2 + 2 = 5! Dunno why I\'m waffling on. lol.
July 28th, 2022 08:34
orchidee said:
I\'m more equal than others. To me, 2 + 2 = 5! Dunno why I\'m waffling on. lol.
July 28th, 2022 08:34
Behind That Navajo Smile
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
forgive my rudeness, dear Poet
but was wondering if this would be a good accompaniment for your heartachingly beautiful words:
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6nOPPuuWBec
)
July 28th, 2022 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
forgive my rudeness, dear Poet
but was wondering if this would be a good accompaniment for your heartachingly beautiful words:
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6nOPPuuWBec
)
July 28th, 2022 03:47
Behind That Navajo Smile
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh the questions such victims of cruel land-rape must ask and penned here with raw and powerful lines the proud history of many indigenous peoples that now only know second-hand about old times of living with and not off their land -- shameful the displacements to concentration camps that breed only vague smiles - -- nuff said at present Nev. on the subject about which I feel most strongly ........x
July 28th, 2022 03:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh the questions such victims of cruel land-rape must ask and penned here with raw and powerful lines the proud history of many indigenous peoples that now only know second-hand about old times of living with and not off their land -- shameful the displacements to concentration camps that breed only vague smiles - -- nuff said at present Nev. on the subject about which I feel most strongly ........x
July 28th, 2022 03:42
Behind That Navajo Smile
dusk arising said:
Ah, the great dispossessed of the country that would have us believe it celebrates democracy (so long as we are prepared to forget that some are a bit more equal than others).
All those mentions of celebration and defeat subjects viewed from... well that\'s the point really isn\'t it, where one is standing on the privileged or non privileged scale/balance does somewhat influence our view. Or the cold distant observers eye, my eye, soured enough to see, stupid enough to say, wise enough to know i matter not one jot.
July 28th, 2022 03:30
dusk arising said:
Ah, the great dispossessed of the country that would have us believe it celebrates democracy (so long as we are prepared to forget that some are a bit more equal than others).
All those mentions of celebration and defeat subjects viewed from... well that\'s the point really isn\'t it, where one is standing on the privileged or non privileged scale/balance does somewhat influence our view. Or the cold distant observers eye, my eye, soured enough to see, stupid enough to say, wise enough to know i matter not one jot.
July 28th, 2022 03:30
Behind That Navajo Smile
Neville said:
.................................. true
July 28th, 2022 03:15
Neville said:
.................................. true
July 28th, 2022 03:15
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