Comments received on poems by Neville
The Day Before the Day Before Today
L. B. Mek said:
\'I watched you drown
in monochrome reflections\'
love this wording Hyung..
how we obsess the minutia
details
while watching our opportunity\'s
dissipate, before our very eyes...
(oh youth, oh weary soul
woe to ye, who dares attempt
to feign, sincerity
damned, to be a blind witness
to all that ye see
and relinquish, needlessly)
January 23rd, 2023 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
\'I watched you drown
in monochrome reflections\'
love this wording Hyung..
how we obsess the minutia
details
while watching our opportunity\'s
dissipate, before our very eyes...
(oh youth, oh weary soul
woe to ye, who dares attempt
to feign, sincerity
damned, to be a blind witness
to all that ye see
and relinquish, needlessly)
January 23rd, 2023 04:07
A Single Truth For all Things Being Unequal
Doggerel Dave said:
Salutary reminder that compared to what is known there is so much unknown. A well of ignorance is the sum total of human knowledge.... couldn\'t agree more, Nev.
January 22nd, 2023 16:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Salutary reminder that compared to what is known there is so much unknown. A well of ignorance is the sum total of human knowledge.... couldn\'t agree more, Nev.
January 22nd, 2023 16:58
She Smelt Like 24 Carat Gold
Doggerel Dave said:
Precious few words there, Nev................................(departing or departed......?) 🙂
January 22nd, 2023 16:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Precious few words there, Nev................................(departing or departed......?) 🙂
January 22nd, 2023 16:25
A Single Truth For all Things Being Unequal
Christina8 said:
Great poem! Maybe we should all wear blindfolds for a day and discover the world that we don\'t savor as often. x
January 22nd, 2023 09:29
Christina8 said:
Great poem! Maybe we should all wear blindfolds for a day and discover the world that we don\'t savor as often. x
January 22nd, 2023 09:29
A Single Truth For all Things Being Unequal
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Every little thing - every big thing - that KP spends my money on. Mainly botox. Doh! She\'s a one.
January 22nd, 2023 07:10
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Every little thing - every big thing - that KP spends my money on. Mainly botox. Doh! She\'s a one.
January 22nd, 2023 07:10
A Single Truth For all Things Being Unequal
arqios said:
Here\'s to all them waiting to be founds. Perhaps we shall feel them as they come to us.
January 22nd, 2023 05:31
arqios said:
Here\'s to all them waiting to be founds. Perhaps we shall feel them as they come to us.
January 22nd, 2023 05:31
A Single Truth For all Things Being Unequal
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes wholly agree mon ami that exciting adventures of finding both seen and future seen senses are waiting to be savoured by those who look, listen or sniff. An inspiring truth indeed................x
January 22nd, 2023 05:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes wholly agree mon ami that exciting adventures of finding both seen and future seen senses are waiting to be savoured by those who look, listen or sniff. An inspiring truth indeed................x
January 22nd, 2023 05:02
The Day Before the Day Before Today
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville.
\"Today is the day that you worried about yesterday.\"
Andy
January 22nd, 2023 03:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville.
\"Today is the day that you worried about yesterday.\"
Andy
January 22nd, 2023 03:12
She Smelt Like 24 Carat Gold
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Is anyone else having the issue where you click on your public profile and it says a critical error is on the website?
January 21st, 2023 10:18
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Is anyone else having the issue where you click on your public profile and it says a critical error is on the website?
January 21st, 2023 10:18
She Smelt Like 24 Carat Gold
Christina8 said:
This is a really sensual, great piece! In those moments she must have been like a treasure, like gold! x
January 21st, 2023 09:14
Christina8 said:
This is a really sensual, great piece! In those moments she must have been like a treasure, like gold! x
January 21st, 2023 09:14
She Smelt Like 24 Carat Gold
orchidee said:
KP smelt like gold too - when it\'s heated and melted in smelting, that is.
That\'ll be her botox melting.
She wanted something 24 carat, so I bought her a bag of carrots! lol.
Now KP - don\'t say I never give you anything!
January 21st, 2023 08:34
orchidee said:
KP smelt like gold too - when it\'s heated and melted in smelting, that is.
That\'ll be her botox melting.
She wanted something 24 carat, so I bought her a bag of carrots! lol.
Now KP - don\'t say I never give you anything!
January 21st, 2023 08:34
She Smelt Like 24 Carat Gold
Fay Slimm. said:
Strangely I can relate to the smell of reputedly odourless minerals though never had chance to sniff gold at so high a carat ! - -- your intimate lines can create memories dear Sire with the comparison your romantic words made - -- moer please- ........... x
January 21st, 2023 05:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Strangely I can relate to the smell of reputedly odourless minerals though never had chance to sniff gold at so high a carat ! - -- your intimate lines can create memories dear Sire with the comparison your romantic words made - -- moer please- ........... x
January 21st, 2023 05:07
The Day Before the Day Before Today
Christina8 said:
Great introspective write! I like your reference to monochrome reflections......yes, this is quite good! x
January 20th, 2023 22:30
Christina8 said:
Great introspective write! I like your reference to monochrome reflections......yes, this is quite good! x
January 20th, 2023 22:30
The Day Before the Day Before Today
Bella Shepard said:
The mystery of time permeates your poem, and the last four lines are priceless. For some reason, memories for me are like a classic movie in black and white, preserved in time, where I may start the projector and enjoy them over and over again. This verse so lovely!
January 20th, 2023 17:08
Bella Shepard said:
The mystery of time permeates your poem, and the last four lines are priceless. For some reason, memories for me are like a classic movie in black and white, preserved in time, where I may start the projector and enjoy them over and over again. This verse so lovely!
January 20th, 2023 17:08
The Day Before the Day Before Today
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t help but unusually empathize with orchi above, Nev. However confusion can be very productive...
January 20th, 2023 16:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t help but unusually empathize with orchi above, Nev. However confusion can be very productive...
January 20th, 2023 16:38
The Day Before the Day Before Today
orchidee said:
Good write N, but what day is that - Christmas?! lol.
With this, I feel like I\'m going shopping and meeting myself coming back, while on the way there! lol. I\'m a confused laddie - today, tomorrow, etc.
January 20th, 2023 14:32
orchidee said:
Good write N, but what day is that - Christmas?! lol.
With this, I feel like I\'m going shopping and meeting myself coming back, while on the way there! lol. I\'m a confused laddie - today, tomorrow, etc.
January 20th, 2023 14:32
The Day Before the Day Before Today
Fay Slimm. said:
Your penchant for telling intimate incidents ought to make any todays more colourfully vivid than unlived tomorrows - great usage of word-play my friend and those clever repetitions make for reading your beguiling reflections all over again. Into my faves with this little tongue-twister.........x
January 20th, 2023 13:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Your penchant for telling intimate incidents ought to make any todays more colourfully vivid than unlived tomorrows - great usage of word-play my friend and those clever repetitions make for reading your beguiling reflections all over again. Into my faves with this little tongue-twister.........x
January 20th, 2023 13:30
A Handful of Random Thoughts and a Sunflower
Kinsey Peterson said:
Neville- once again a beautiful work of art. Distraction, while beautiful, is only that, a distraction. At what point do we face the music? To what song do we dance?
January 20th, 2023 09:55
Kinsey Peterson said:
Neville- once again a beautiful work of art. Distraction, while beautiful, is only that, a distraction. At what point do we face the music? To what song do we dance?
January 20th, 2023 09:55
Heartsure ..
L. B. Mek said:
yes, recently rambling on a comment
I mentioned, when making choices
it\'s ok for our mind to be unsure
but never our heart..
glad we think alike dear Poet
a nugget of wisdom
wrapped-up in relatable poetry
thank you!
January 20th, 2023 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
yes, recently rambling on a comment
I mentioned, when making choices
it\'s ok for our mind to be unsure
but never our heart..
glad we think alike dear Poet
a nugget of wisdom
wrapped-up in relatable poetry
thank you!
January 20th, 2023 04:18
A Handful of Random Thoughts and a Sunflower
L. B. Mek said:
we seldom realise
how much history, walks into our life
mesmerised by that wink and smile
2023 and society\'s, scarlet badges
await to embarrass, stigmatise
those who choose to love bravely
different wording
a lot less, eye rolling
yet that archaic mindset, still exists
...
so yes indeed, wise poet:
\'Don’t think about her lovers
think about patience, charity and sunflowers ..\'
(this that part of your poetry
which champions humanity\'s
capacity for humane, empathy)
I read and learn Hyung
January 20th, 2023 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
we seldom realise
how much history, walks into our life
mesmerised by that wink and smile
2023 and society\'s, scarlet badges
await to embarrass, stigmatise
those who choose to love bravely
different wording
a lot less, eye rolling
yet that archaic mindset, still exists
...
so yes indeed, wise poet:
\'Don’t think about her lovers
think about patience, charity and sunflowers ..\'
(this that part of your poetry
which champions humanity\'s
capacity for humane, empathy)
I read and learn Hyung
January 20th, 2023 04:11
Heartsure ..
Fay Slimm. said:
So clear the points caught here re.the heart Nev. - - listen to it and in due time it will reveal the truth............
January 19th, 2023 07:46
Fay Slimm. said:
So clear the points caught here re.the heart Nev. - - listen to it and in due time it will reveal the truth............
January 19th, 2023 07:46
Amelie
Christina8 said:
Oh she\'s such a beautiful child and I will certainly buy \'chasing light\' especially because you donate to charity! I hope she is doing better!!
January 19th, 2023 03:04
Christina8 said:
Oh she\'s such a beautiful child and I will certainly buy \'chasing light\' especially because you donate to charity! I hope she is doing better!!
January 19th, 2023 03:04
More Than Nearly Dearly Departed
Christina8 said:
That is the worst way to die that I can imagine! Evocative write but I see now it\'s a true story....well done! x
January 19th, 2023 02:59
Christina8 said:
That is the worst way to die that I can imagine! Evocative write but I see now it\'s a true story....well done! x
January 19th, 2023 02:59
Cause and Affect
Christina8 said:
Yes there is a lingering thought as we age about what will happen to us.....during our lives most of us loved and lusted a lot....and how that affected them. I hope we can say the world is better off because we were here. x
January 19th, 2023 02:55
Christina8 said:
Yes there is a lingering thought as we age about what will happen to us.....during our lives most of us loved and lusted a lot....and how that affected them. I hope we can say the world is better off because we were here. x
January 19th, 2023 02:55
A Handful of Random Thoughts and a Sunflower
Christina8 said:
I love this whimsical write! Tis better to think on the positive than the negative for sure. Love it! x
January 19th, 2023 02:49
Christina8 said:
I love this whimsical write! Tis better to think on the positive than the negative for sure. Love it! x
January 19th, 2023 02:49
A Handful of Random Thoughts and a Sunflower
Bella Shepard said:
Your words evoke images, emotions and a sunflower pressed between the pages of a book for safe keeping. Delightful, charming, a lovely,sentimental piece dear friend.
January 18th, 2023 13:32
Bella Shepard said:
Your words evoke images, emotions and a sunflower pressed between the pages of a book for safe keeping. Delightful, charming, a lovely,sentimental piece dear friend.
January 18th, 2023 13:32
A Handful of Random Thoughts and a Sunflower
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times of yore when love was so new and so compelling Neville.
Andy
January 18th, 2023 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times of yore when love was so new and so compelling Neville.
Andy
January 18th, 2023 02:45
A Handful of Random Thoughts and a Sunflower
Rocky Lagou said:
I think sometimes during tribulations and hardships one must search for the light despite the hard times.
\"Butterflies and poetry\" pretty much sums up how I do just that :)
January 17th, 2023 14:39
Rocky Lagou said:
I think sometimes during tribulations and hardships one must search for the light despite the hard times.
\"Butterflies and poetry\" pretty much sums up how I do just that :)
January 17th, 2023 14:39
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