Comments received on poems by Neville
Slaves of Eros
dusk arising said:
Well my excuse is that, as a devout follower or Eros\' ethos, I bcame knackered!
May 26th, 2022 01:55
dusk arising said:
Well my excuse is that, as a devout follower or Eros\' ethos, I bcame knackered!
May 26th, 2022 01:55
Slaves of Eros
Fay Slimm. said:
Yup - that Eros has been a tough master and you pen his hold over our hearts so well Nev............. we remain in his romantic but painful grip too whatever becomes of our lives methinks...........x
May 26th, 2022 01:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Yup - that Eros has been a tough master and you pen his hold over our hearts so well Nev............. we remain in his romantic but painful grip too whatever becomes of our lives methinks...........x
May 26th, 2022 01:38
Slaves of Eros
orchidee said:
Eros? We\'ll all be swooning. It\'ll be too much for us. For me, anyway! heehee.
May 26th, 2022 01:33
orchidee said:
Eros? We\'ll all be swooning. It\'ll be too much for us. For me, anyway! heehee.
May 26th, 2022 01:33
Remember Me She Said
L. B. Mek said:
a central, beautiful metaphor
anchoring
that alluring pace and poise
in your choice, wording
and drip-down, distilled wisdom
effect
in our reading of your poem, by design..
a comfort in a read, thank you!
you, at your subtle Best
dear Poet
May 23rd, 2022 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
a central, beautiful metaphor
anchoring
that alluring pace and poise
in your choice, wording
and drip-down, distilled wisdom
effect
in our reading of your poem, by design..
a comfort in a read, thank you!
you, at your subtle Best
dear Poet
May 23rd, 2022 04:05
For Ever Aint Never That Far Away
L. B. Mek said:
a thread of fate, separating
between, those
being born in a war zone
and those
being born in peaceful, moments..
Personally, I think the latter
is the crueller, fate
as we get to glimpse, a perhaps
of peace
that can never be sustained..
so from the beginning
of humanity\'s, fantastic Tales
and Cain and Abel\'s
inability to cohabitate, war
has ever
and I fear, will ever
exist, to remind us:
\'that here, now and forever
are not far away,\'
So we too, go-on
celebrating those heroes
who gifted us, a chance
and doing our Best
then simply let, Fate
judge the rest...
(just a such a poignant read
when you think
that so many, are living this reality
in the now, we lucky few
take for granted...)
Brilliant!
dear Poet, supreme
thank you!
May 23rd, 2022 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
a thread of fate, separating
between, those
being born in a war zone
and those
being born in peaceful, moments..
Personally, I think the latter
is the crueller, fate
as we get to glimpse, a perhaps
of peace
that can never be sustained..
so from the beginning
of humanity\'s, fantastic Tales
and Cain and Abel\'s
inability to cohabitate, war
has ever
and I fear, will ever
exist, to remind us:
\'that here, now and forever
are not far away,\'
So we too, go-on
celebrating those heroes
who gifted us, a chance
and doing our Best
then simply let, Fate
judge the rest...
(just a such a poignant read
when you think
that so many, are living this reality
in the now, we lucky few
take for granted...)
Brilliant!
dear Poet, supreme
thank you!
May 23rd, 2022 04:00
Fingers Crossed
L. B. Mek said:
a good luck charm, in a poem
never occurred to me
to imbue something tangible
in my scribbles
(an \'omamori\' in a poem)
as-ever
I read and learn, Hyung
thank you!
May 23rd, 2022 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
a good luck charm, in a poem
never occurred to me
to imbue something tangible
in my scribbles
(an \'omamori\' in a poem)
as-ever
I read and learn, Hyung
thank you!
May 23rd, 2022 03:46
Remember Me She Said
Fay Slimm. said:
May Queen or no she certainly drew my attention to what she maybe - one lovely sunflower in a mess of tumbleweed needs to be remembered methinks mon ami...... another intriguing read and loved it.
May 21st, 2022 03:52
Fay Slimm. said:
May Queen or no she certainly drew my attention to what she maybe - one lovely sunflower in a mess of tumbleweed needs to be remembered methinks mon ami...... another intriguing read and loved it.
May 21st, 2022 03:52
Every Now and Then Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
That sip once taken makes lovely memories that last a lifetime - - I know the feel of your lines here mon ami ..........................x
May 20th, 2022 01:38
Fay Slimm. said:
That sip once taken makes lovely memories that last a lifetime - - I know the feel of your lines here mon ami ..........................x
May 20th, 2022 01:38
Remember Me She Said
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yep, I remember her among the hundreds of lassies I\'ve met! lol.
May 19th, 2022 01:34
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Yep, I remember her among the hundreds of lassies I\'ve met! lol.
May 19th, 2022 01:34
Remember Me She Said
spilleronsheet said:
The happiness and glow
The sunflowers carry around
And the aura of positivity
So well penned dear Neville
May 18th, 2022 13:39
spilleronsheet said:
The happiness and glow
The sunflowers carry around
And the aura of positivity
So well penned dear Neville
May 18th, 2022 13:39
Remember Me She Said
Bella Shepard said:
Gentle and flowing as I read it aloud. Lovely imagery of the sunflower against the backdrop of tumbleweed, such a wonderful visual. Beautiful words, beautiful poem!
May 18th, 2022 13:33
Bella Shepard said:
Gentle and flowing as I read it aloud. Lovely imagery of the sunflower against the backdrop of tumbleweed, such a wonderful visual. Beautiful words, beautiful poem!
May 18th, 2022 13:33
For Ever Aint Never That Far Away
Accidental Poet said:
Forever is the past, present and future all rolled into one. 😉
May 17th, 2022 19:37
Accidental Poet said:
Forever is the past, present and future all rolled into one. 😉
May 17th, 2022 19:37
For Ever Aint Never That Far Away
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always do the best we can in life Neville and life will do its best for us.
Andy
May 17th, 2022 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always do the best we can in life Neville and life will do its best for us.
Andy
May 17th, 2022 00:33
For Ever Aint Never That Far Away
Rozina said:
This is true for life. Your sergeant major was spot on.
May 16th, 2022 23:54
Rozina said:
This is true for life. Your sergeant major was spot on.
May 16th, 2022 23:54
For Ever Aint Never That Far Away
Christina8 said:
Very good write Neville.......enjoyed the read!! I really liked the third stanza, so true it is!
May 16th, 2022 10:04
Christina8 said:
Very good write Neville.......enjoyed the read!! I really liked the third stanza, so true it is!
May 16th, 2022 10:04
Fingers Crossed
Goldfinch60 said:
May that good luck be with us forever Neville.
Andy
May 16th, 2022 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
May that good luck be with us forever Neville.
Andy
May 16th, 2022 00:23
Fingers Crossed
Rozina said:
Thank you. And all the very best of luck to you too Neville.
Now there are local witch doctors here (called bomoh) some of whom also practise black magic....
May 15th, 2022 17:57
Rozina said:
Thank you. And all the very best of luck to you too Neville.
Now there are local witch doctors here (called bomoh) some of whom also practise black magic....
May 15th, 2022 17:57
Fingers Crossed
orchidee said:
But not one magpie on its own? \'One for sorrow, two for joy.....\'
Erm good wishes, maybe luck too, but I don\'t believe in it. lol.
You seen our black cat? Or the tabby one? We have two cats. Ahhh!
The black one said to me: \'Never mind if I cross your path or not for luck where\'s me grub?\' A talking cat now! lol
May 15th, 2022 09:41
orchidee said:
But not one magpie on its own? \'One for sorrow, two for joy.....\'
Erm good wishes, maybe luck too, but I don\'t believe in it. lol.
You seen our black cat? Or the tabby one? We have two cats. Ahhh!
The black one said to me: \'Never mind if I cross your path or not for luck where\'s me grub?\' A talking cat now! lol
May 15th, 2022 09:41
Fingers Crossed
Christina8 said:
very clever write, N. Hopefully it will bring me good luck today! C
May 15th, 2022 09:35
Christina8 said:
very clever write, N. Hopefully it will bring me good luck today! C
May 15th, 2022 09:35
Fingers Crossed
Accidental Poet said:
Here\'s hoping the cat and magpies survive the shaking. Best wishes to you too N. 😊
May 15th, 2022 07:19
Accidental Poet said:
Here\'s hoping the cat and magpies survive the shaking. Best wishes to you too N. 😊
May 15th, 2022 07:19
Fingers Crossed
Caring dove said:
Wishing you well too )
And lovely poem . Magpies in twos are supposed to be a sign of good luck .. I’ve seen them in twos several times . Some people say seeing a black cat is bad luck but I’m not sure I believe that ..
May 15th, 2022 02:23
Caring dove said:
Wishing you well too )
And lovely poem . Magpies in twos are supposed to be a sign of good luck .. I’ve seen them in twos several times . Some people say seeing a black cat is bad luck but I’m not sure I believe that ..
May 15th, 2022 02:23
Its All in the Way that She Eddies and Flows
L. B. Mek said:
\'look what you did
for the millionth time..
wrote down a few lines
and shared it, on-line
so now, you have me
going-off
surpassing my puny talents
limitations
making me dream
of that wannabe poet
I search for
with every coming, tide
of inspiration,
gifting me, a few more words
of scribbled, poesy\'s
presence, in my life..
thank you! Hyung
for reaffirming my status
as your loyal, Fan
what a corker of a write
dear Poet, supreme!\'
(wading
through our sea of despair
we realise
in that callous face of life\'s, strife
bravado
lacks meaningful spice
and so, all we\'re left with
is the veracity
of our yearning
and that despair
in our hopeless, reaching..
\'\'Lighthouse, shine
ever-bright
fend my journeys, path
to those arms of warmth
I dream of, between
every blink
and mourn for, in each
wishful, breath
of unrepented: surrender\'\')
May 13th, 2022 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
\'look what you did
for the millionth time..
wrote down a few lines
and shared it, on-line
so now, you have me
going-off
surpassing my puny talents
limitations
making me dream
of that wannabe poet
I search for
with every coming, tide
of inspiration,
gifting me, a few more words
of scribbled, poesy\'s
presence, in my life..
thank you! Hyung
for reaffirming my status
as your loyal, Fan
what a corker of a write
dear Poet, supreme!\'
(wading
through our sea of despair
we realise
in that callous face of life\'s, strife
bravado
lacks meaningful spice
and so, all we\'re left with
is the veracity
of our yearning
and that despair
in our hopeless, reaching..
\'\'Lighthouse, shine
ever-bright
fend my journeys, path
to those arms of warmth
I dream of, between
every blink
and mourn for, in each
wishful, breath
of unrepented: surrender\'\')
May 13th, 2022 05:33
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