Comments received on poems by Neville



Just a Kiss Goodbye
myself and me said:

They are not looking at the same sky, or are they?

July 16th, 2021 22:11

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Neville.
We seem to be better at hellos and good buys, than that space in-between.

July 16th, 2021 15:13

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Poetic Dan said:

Can you say that\'s a beautiful rhyme to many times, not if each one can bring a tear to your eye!

Always a pleasure to fly in your sky, keep floating my friend



July 16th, 2021 14:41

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Saxon Crow said:

Very nicely played Nev. Great poem

July 16th, 2021 14:20

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m a lover of the short verse and this is yop notch.

July 16th, 2021 13:36

Just a Kiss Goodbye
SureshG said:

Brilliant!

July 16th, 2021 13:01

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Trenz Pruca said:

Wow!

July 16th, 2021 12:05

Just a Kiss Goodbye
L. B. Mek said:

this is deep, nudges forgotten bruises
on a lot of levels...
such a thought provoking read, my friend
(hope you have a clear sky - weekend) 😎

July 16th, 2021 06:07

Just a Kiss Goodbye
dusk arising said:

That kiss of goodbye is always lurking over us when emotionally coupled to another.
I\'m not letting near me. Living in isolation. BT,DT, got the T-shirt.

July 16th, 2021 05:12

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Fay Slimm. said:

Very emotive these few words can apply to so many losses that rip families apart. A skillful write again Nev...............x

July 16th, 2021 03:06

Just a Kiss Goodbye
Goldfinch60 said:

So few words, so full of emotion.

Andy

July 16th, 2021 02:29

Mark these Words
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

You’ve aptly scribed
“Two sides to every argument and story”…
and then there’s the truth.
It is worthwhile to have an honest conversation.

Laura🌻


July 16th, 2021 01:22

Mark these Words
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, we can all help each other in this world.

Andy

July 16th, 2021 00:03

Mark these Words
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Neville.
If she won\'t, her loss, but I will.
Love you dearly.

July 15th, 2021 12:36

Mark these Words
SureshG said:

I’ve heard this argument before, and can tell with surety, that it is right…

July 15th, 2021 10:37

Mark these Words
L. B. Mek said:

ok so we need this printed, as car bumper stickers
as doorbell signage and everything else...
how many disagreements, fallouts
have we all experienced in life, caused by someone
misunderstanding us/our actions
then doubling-down on that and getting all defensive
and refusing to \'see reason\'...!
(this felt like a long awaited: exhale
of a read, somewhat cathartic I must admit) lol
thank you for wording it: so accessible, dear poet

July 15th, 2021 06:00

Mark these Words
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh who are you kidding, Neville? - everyone does - look above, and below and sideways if you must......
I certainly do and will - you will have to try harder to get rid of me 😊

July 15th, 2021 05:19

Mark these Words
Accidental Poet said:

Mark these words as so true N. ; )

July 15th, 2021 05:12

Mark these Words
Fay Slimm. said:

A gentle poetic plea for reason when love sinks into trouble and your heart fills every line with true expertise. Brilliant writing again amigo..........x

July 15th, 2021 03:16

Mark these Words
dusk arising said:

Why not indeed, for the oils of hindsight poured across the waters of yesterday can indeed bring understanding and forgiveness.

July 15th, 2021 02:22

Upon a Small White Feather
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

White feathers are a sign of angels . Nice poem 🙂

July 15th, 2021 02:02

Upon a Small White Feather
Goldfinch60 said:

He certainly is Neville.

Andy

July 15th, 2021 00:36

Upon a Small White Feather
myself and me said:

You must be in a very delightful mood recently. Everything is floating. The leaf, now the feather. I am standing on the ground watching all these happening. Just brilliant.

July 14th, 2021 19:39

Upon a Small White Feather
Accidental Poet said:

Yes N, smiles for everyone. ; )

July 14th, 2021 05:23

Upon a Small White Feather
Doggerel Dave said:

Do you wish to rehabilitate the white feather, Neville?
Can\'t avoid the image of ladies presenting white feathers to \'cowards\' during WW1.
Angels perhaps? I\'ll settle for that.....

July 14th, 2021 04:28

Upon a Small White Feather
Fay Slimm. said:

A comforting read and no doubt about it my luverly friend........x

July 14th, 2021 04:04

Upon a Small White Feather
dusk arising said:

Ah those little white feathers, the tell tale evidence of a missed loved one looking down on us.
Nicely worded joyful reminder of a missed person.

July 14th, 2021 03:34

Magnificently Different
myself and me said:

Wow, you must have a magnificent pen.

July 13th, 2021 21:29

Magnificently Different
MendedFences27 said:

Stopped and fell into this trove of memories, though without the mandolin. I must say I loved the metaphor, though. And as always a dream come true. - Phil A.

July 13th, 2021 16:24

Magnificently Different
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a very long time ago but I remember them so well.

Andy

July 13th, 2021 14:41



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