Comments received on poems by Neville
Double Jeopardy
Caring dove said:
We treat others a certain way , then get angry when they do the same to us . So why treat others a certain way , if we hate it so much ?
January 27th, 2022 05:30
Caring dove said:
We treat others a certain way , then get angry when they do the same to us . So why treat others a certain way , if we hate it so much ?
January 27th, 2022 05:30
Double Jeopardy
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - -such a fun interpretation of that fashionable clause among some U.S.law-breakers - - - - am still chuckling at the scene your pen paints today Nev. - - and well if that takes your fancy am handing you the wooden spoon now................x
January 27th, 2022 05:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - -such a fun interpretation of that fashionable clause among some U.S.law-breakers - - - - am still chuckling at the scene your pen paints today Nev. - - and well if that takes your fancy am handing you the wooden spoon now................x
January 27th, 2022 05:12
Conveniently Forgot
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a well composed lament to one who may not yet get it and a belated back-hander to boot Nev. - love can be painful if it\'s one-sided - or that\'s how I see this fine piece of poemed confession............ x
January 26th, 2022 06:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a well composed lament to one who may not yet get it and a belated back-hander to boot Nev. - love can be painful if it\'s one-sided - or that\'s how I see this fine piece of poemed confession............ x
January 26th, 2022 06:21
Conveniently Forgot
Rozina said:
Partially alive until gradually building up self as a whole person again. I think the person who leaves does not \'see\' this nor care?
January 26th, 2022 04:25
Rozina said:
Partially alive until gradually building up self as a whole person again. I think the person who leaves does not \'see\' this nor care?
January 26th, 2022 04:25
Conveniently Forgot
dusk arising said:
Cor, this can be read several ways, either with a relationship or after one has split up. The last one of mine to split up gave me a huge sense of freedom to my own existence and lifestyle back.
Re-read your words a couple of times (im sure you do this ambiguous trick on purpose) and now i\'m thinking it\'s aimed at a self centred selfish lady.
Well, certainly a head scratcher of a post, which is a good thing for a dunce like me.
January 26th, 2022 04:11
dusk arising said:
Cor, this can be read several ways, either with a relationship or after one has split up. The last one of mine to split up gave me a huge sense of freedom to my own existence and lifestyle back.
Re-read your words a couple of times (im sure you do this ambiguous trick on purpose) and now i\'m thinking it\'s aimed at a self centred selfish lady.
Well, certainly a head scratcher of a post, which is a good thing for a dunce like me.
January 26th, 2022 04:11
Conveniently Forgot
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, we will always exist.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 04:03
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, we will always exist.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 04:03
Conveniently Forgot
orchidee said:
I did not \'forget\' to say good write N.
January 26th, 2022 03:58
orchidee said:
I did not \'forget\' to say good write N.
January 26th, 2022 03:58
Conveniently Forgot
Caring dove said:
It’s painful to be apart from someone you love .
A good expression , of how much sadness you can feel
January 26th, 2022 03:53
Caring dove said:
It’s painful to be apart from someone you love .
A good expression , of how much sadness you can feel
January 26th, 2022 03:53
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
Doggerel Dave said:
Got \'em all going there, Nev...... (including Yrs Truly)...... Me? - Who? What? Why? How? - I have no answers to any of it. Doesn\'t hurt to ask though - just don\'t expect any of those answers.
Your \'maybe(s)\' say it all....😊 Your favorite word?
PS: Enjoyed the piece v. much.
January 26th, 2022 00:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Got \'em all going there, Nev...... (including Yrs Truly)...... Me? - Who? What? Why? How? - I have no answers to any of it. Doesn\'t hurt to ask though - just don\'t expect any of those answers.
Your \'maybe(s)\' say it all....😊 Your favorite word?
PS: Enjoyed the piece v. much.
January 26th, 2022 00:13
Now Pinned to the Sky
Dove said:
Heartfelt & Sad! The cruelty of war, and the hearts with holes within!
Awe, dear one you made me sigh
January 25th, 2022 10:52
Dove said:
Heartfelt & Sad! The cruelty of war, and the hearts with holes within!
Awe, dear one you made me sigh
January 25th, 2022 10:52
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
Rozina said:
Powerful lines. Really good write.
January 21st, 2022 22:43
Rozina said:
Powerful lines. Really good write.
January 21st, 2022 22:43
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
spilleronsheet said:
So very true
A true religion in spirits is one which talks about enlightenment and rationality rather than bigotry
Good one dear Neville
January 21st, 2022 17:55
spilleronsheet said:
So very true
A true religion in spirits is one which talks about enlightenment and rationality rather than bigotry
Good one dear Neville
January 21st, 2022 17:55
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
Paul Bell said:
I\'m all for religion, and if it gets you through the day, great, just don\'t inflict it on me. In saying that, that hot chick who did try to convert me. The little devil in me nearly let you.
January 21st, 2022 08:28
Paul Bell said:
I\'m all for religion, and if it gets you through the day, great, just don\'t inflict it on me. In saying that, that hot chick who did try to convert me. The little devil in me nearly let you.
January 21st, 2022 08:28
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
L. B. Mek said:
(once again, after finishing my selfish scribble
I must come back to the top
and insure I thank you, dear Poet
for these words you shared
and the inspiration they gifted me
to ink these feeble thoughts below.
Humbly, sincerely I thank you
what a gift to receive!)
that oh so
conveniently, contagious
\'religion\' of warped victimhood\'s:
\'Nihilism\'...
(tell them, to believe in anything
including themselves
and they cringe;
ask them what they choose, instead
they scream: \'renunciation\' of everything and anything;
ask them, why
and watch them sleep, without reply
through
their endless hangovers
as if life\'s too easy, to put in
any effort
\'simply let it be\' they whizz out
between that puff-puff - pass
cyclical routine of their lives...)
and how did we get here
because we let amateur \'Gardner\'s\'
rule over our life\'s petals of opportunity, changing
their names every few elections
in our aesthetic of a democracy..
and allowed
their incompetent green finger (of greed):
to Yank-out
all of our Integrity and Morality
when they rid us
of that theological, fog
of fear oppressed, mentality...
so now we\'re left swimming in all that:
\'darkness
the fear of it
and
what once
was hid within\'
now, free to seep-in, a little deeper
with every lethargic breath
of sans
they delude themselves
as being
the only things, sincere and free
in their
anxiety oppressed lives...
January 21st, 2022 07:44
L. B. Mek said:
(once again, after finishing my selfish scribble
I must come back to the top
and insure I thank you, dear Poet
for these words you shared
and the inspiration they gifted me
to ink these feeble thoughts below.
Humbly, sincerely I thank you
what a gift to receive!)
that oh so
conveniently, contagious
\'religion\' of warped victimhood\'s:
\'Nihilism\'...
(tell them, to believe in anything
including themselves
and they cringe;
ask them what they choose, instead
they scream: \'renunciation\' of everything and anything;
ask them, why
and watch them sleep, without reply
through
their endless hangovers
as if life\'s too easy, to put in
any effort
\'simply let it be\' they whizz out
between that puff-puff - pass
cyclical routine of their lives...)
and how did we get here
because we let amateur \'Gardner\'s\'
rule over our life\'s petals of opportunity, changing
their names every few elections
in our aesthetic of a democracy..
and allowed
their incompetent green finger (of greed):
to Yank-out
all of our Integrity and Morality
when they rid us
of that theological, fog
of fear oppressed, mentality...
so now we\'re left swimming in all that:
\'darkness
the fear of it
and
what once
was hid within\'
now, free to seep-in, a little deeper
with every lethargic breath
of sans
they delude themselves
as being
the only things, sincere and free
in their
anxiety oppressed lives...
January 21st, 2022 07:44
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
Poetic Dan said:
Yep, we are all in the dark but most are afraid to admit and find more sensible ideas between those crazy lines!
The dance of life is now and each of us has a beautiful one to unfold before we get to old.
Cheers for that my friend, keep up the write
January 21st, 2022 07:43
Poetic Dan said:
Yep, we are all in the dark but most are afraid to admit and find more sensible ideas between those crazy lines!
The dance of life is now and each of us has a beautiful one to unfold before we get to old.
Cheers for that my friend, keep up the write
January 21st, 2022 07:43
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
Reading between exposes bigotry and is vital when lines are mainly religious -- am liking your take on a sticky subject that tends to separate - yet truth will out so they say................great piece for some deep pondering ..........x
January 21st, 2022 06:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Reading between exposes bigotry and is vital when lines are mainly religious -- am liking your take on a sticky subject that tends to separate - yet truth will out so they say................great piece for some deep pondering ..........x
January 21st, 2022 06:46
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
orchidee said:
It\'s surely want some people have made \'religion\'.
Put a cat among the pigeons - some say Roman Catholic Church is the Antichrist, the \'abomination\'. It\'s not hard to disagree with folk who say that.
Baaa - I\'m still a sheep! lol.
January 21st, 2022 05:18
orchidee said:
It\'s surely want some people have made \'religion\'.
Put a cat among the pigeons - some say Roman Catholic Church is the Antichrist, the \'abomination\'. It\'s not hard to disagree with folk who say that.
Baaa - I\'m still a sheep! lol.
January 21st, 2022 05:18
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
dusk arising said:
I like what Goldfinch wrote and fully support it.
Each of the organised religions seems full of ambiguity and each display the disgusting practice of childhood indoctrination by use of fear.
We are quite naturally spiritual beings. This spiritual side of us has been traditionally hijacked by the organised religions.
A really thought provoking post today Neville though I doubt it will even register with the few \'devout\' sheep who regularly spout religious rubbish on MPS.
January 21st, 2022 04:09
dusk arising said:
I like what Goldfinch wrote and fully support it.
Each of the organised religions seems full of ambiguity and each display the disgusting practice of childhood indoctrination by use of fear.
We are quite naturally spiritual beings. This spiritual side of us has been traditionally hijacked by the organised religions.
A really thought provoking post today Neville though I doubt it will even register with the few \'devout\' sheep who regularly spout religious rubbish on MPS.
January 21st, 2022 04:09
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:
I have read between the lines and found that organised religion just leads people into a life where only one thing is believed and the truth is never told.
Andy
January 21st, 2022 04:02
Goldfinch60 said:
I have read between the lines and found that organised religion just leads people into a life where only one thing is believed and the truth is never told.
Andy
January 21st, 2022 04:02
Like a Lark on the Rise
dusk arising said:
Your words today are a lesson in dignity for us all. No finer and more respectful way could there be for a parting of two who once trod the finest path but now should part.
The emotion carries such elegance.
Into my favourites for sure
January 19th, 2022 11:21
dusk arising said:
Your words today are a lesson in dignity for us all. No finer and more respectful way could there be for a parting of two who once trod the finest path but now should part.
The emotion carries such elegance.
Into my favourites for sure
January 19th, 2022 11:21
Like a Lark on the Rise
Fay Slimm. said:
Endings could never be sweeter that this - - yu\'ve dun it agen for me with that fab title and final line...........x.
January 19th, 2022 04:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Endings could never be sweeter that this - - yu\'ve dun it agen for me with that fab title and final line...........x.
January 19th, 2022 04:50
Like a Lark on the Rise
spilleronsheet said:
It’s the forbidden love in my eyes
When in complexity facing the dire
The lovers had to choose separate over time
Very endearing poetry
January 19th, 2022 03:30
spilleronsheet said:
It’s the forbidden love in my eyes
When in complexity facing the dire
The lovers had to choose separate over time
Very endearing poetry
January 19th, 2022 03:30
Checking the Night Sky
Goldfinch60 said:
The night sky is so wonderful and the moon overseeing our lives is so special within them.
Did you howl at the wolf moon this week? LOL
Andy
January 19th, 2022 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
The night sky is so wonderful and the moon overseeing our lives is so special within them.
Did you howl at the wolf moon this week? LOL
Andy
January 19th, 2022 01:39
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