Comments received on poems by Neville
To Fade Without Warning
L. B. Mek said:
applicable:
to those mirage, dreams
logic defining, romances
and self-betraying, mirror reflections...
(oh and I just loved your title, dear Poet
plus that moody reverie, you imbued
into your lines ever-so, subtly)
thanks for sharing,
this is A read I\'ll be revisiting
in the future, I\'m sure
January 31st, 2022 07:47
L. B. Mek said:
applicable:
to those mirage, dreams
logic defining, romances
and self-betraying, mirror reflections...
(oh and I just loved your title, dear Poet
plus that moody reverie, you imbued
into your lines ever-so, subtly)
thanks for sharing,
this is A read I\'ll be revisiting
in the future, I\'m sure
January 31st, 2022 07:47
To Fade Without Warning
orchidee said:
Was she gone like a puff of smoke? How would I meet her if she\'s gone?! lol
January 31st, 2022 06:07
orchidee said:
Was she gone like a puff of smoke? How would I meet her if she\'s gone?! lol
January 31st, 2022 06:07
To Fade Without Warning
Fay Slimm. said:
The sudden end of what was once seen and felt comes over so aptly in these lines of surprise and astonishment - - another jewel that can mean what readers wish - clever as always your unique style my dear friend..............x
January 31st, 2022 05:52
Fay Slimm. said:
The sudden end of what was once seen and felt comes over so aptly in these lines of surprise and astonishment - - another jewel that can mean what readers wish - clever as always your unique style my dear friend..............x
January 31st, 2022 05:52
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
Goldfinch60 said:
I feel exactly the same Neville.
Andy
January 31st, 2022 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
I feel exactly the same Neville.
Andy
January 31st, 2022 01:47
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
Rozina said:
Oh so beautiful to read this. Your lines of love to your wife.
January 30th, 2022 22:30
Rozina said:
Oh so beautiful to read this. Your lines of love to your wife.
January 30th, 2022 22:30
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
MendedFences27 said:
A \"shining brightly\" star becomes a fond remembrance of a loved one. The love seeps through your words and remains intact with the hope of \"tomorrow.\" A difficult write I would imagine. - Phil A.
January 30th, 2022 20:25
MendedFences27 said:
A \"shining brightly\" star becomes a fond remembrance of a loved one. The love seeps through your words and remains intact with the hope of \"tomorrow.\" A difficult write I would imagine. - Phil A.
January 30th, 2022 20:25
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
spilleronsheet said:
This is so beautiful
A swan in sky
Flying high
While I fascinate upon her flight
Who knew that swan that I see in sky
Lighting the sky at night
One day she shall descend upon heavenly earth
Soo…..beautiful dear Neville
Such unique comparison
It’s a jewel
January 30th, 2022 13:01
spilleronsheet said:
This is so beautiful
A swan in sky
Flying high
While I fascinate upon her flight
Who knew that swan that I see in sky
Lighting the sky at night
One day she shall descend upon heavenly earth
Soo…..beautiful dear Neville
Such unique comparison
It’s a jewel
January 30th, 2022 13:01
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Stunningly beautiful Neville,..just so stunningly gorgeous🕊 I love the ending,..it really drives it home🍻
January 30th, 2022 12:01
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Stunningly beautiful Neville,..just so stunningly gorgeous🕊 I love the ending,..it really drives it home🍻
January 30th, 2022 12:01
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
orchidee said:
Good write N. Bit of algebra too?!l
January 30th, 2022 04:49
orchidee said:
Good write N. Bit of algebra too?!l
January 30th, 2022 04:49
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring write Nev. with such a unique title - -- Cygnus the bringer of balance can fill grieving hearts with peace for spirit lives on to gladden assurance of future reunions. Love needs no form, it is timeless and truly perpetual. Deep and powerful these positive lines today mon ami................x
January 30th, 2022 04:34
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring write Nev. with such a unique title - -- Cygnus the bringer of balance can fill grieving hearts with peace for spirit lives on to gladden assurance of future reunions. Love needs no form, it is timeless and truly perpetual. Deep and powerful these positive lines today mon ami................x
January 30th, 2022 04:34
What it All Boils Down To
Rozina said:
Your description is masterful. Such a pleasure to read. I am trying to do better by reading more poems; perhaps join a course too. Thank you.
January 29th, 2022 06:25
Rozina said:
Your description is masterful. Such a pleasure to read. I am trying to do better by reading more poems; perhaps join a course too. Thank you.
January 29th, 2022 06:25
What it All Boils Down To
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, those etchings will always be there.
Andy
January 29th, 2022 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, those etchings will always be there.
Andy
January 29th, 2022 01:25
What it All Boils Down To
MendedFences27 said:
If poetry is a sin, we are all going to burn in hell. Probably worth it though. Since I\'m just getting back onto this hellbent wagon your poem struck a chord.
You may have explained the attraction this writing uses to possess us all. It may truly be the letters and words upon the white paper. For what other common denominator is there since the ideas are so varied and unique. So rom one \"Shackled king\" to another, Keep It Up. - Phil A.
January 28th, 2022 21:10
MendedFences27 said:
If poetry is a sin, we are all going to burn in hell. Probably worth it though. Since I\'m just getting back onto this hellbent wagon your poem struck a chord.
You may have explained the attraction this writing uses to possess us all. It may truly be the letters and words upon the white paper. For what other common denominator is there since the ideas are so varied and unique. So rom one \"Shackled king\" to another, Keep It Up. - Phil A.
January 28th, 2022 21:10
What it All Boils Down To
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Neville.
As the book says. I sin seven times a day. Or is that pee overnight? I can\'t keep up
January 28th, 2022 16:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Neville.
As the book says. I sin seven times a day. Or is that pee overnight? I can\'t keep up
January 28th, 2022 16:12
Double Jeopardy
Draven said:
Haha, wow, so much spoken in such few words. I love poems like these. Well done.
January 28th, 2022 14:54
Draven said:
Haha, wow, so much spoken in such few words. I love poems like these. Well done.
January 28th, 2022 14:54
What it All Boils Down To
Draven said:
Nicely written and well formatted. :)
January 28th, 2022 14:52
Draven said:
Nicely written and well formatted. :)
January 28th, 2022 14:52
What it All Boils Down To
orchidee said:
A fine poetic piece. I will like it e\'ermore. I\'ve run out of \'v\'s on me keyboard, you will notice. lol.
January 28th, 2022 08:04
orchidee said:
A fine poetic piece. I will like it e\'ermore. I\'ve run out of \'v\'s on me keyboard, you will notice. lol.
January 28th, 2022 08:04
What it All Boils Down To
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Depicting
as it does, exquisite
yet still
inexcusable guilt
and yes, sublimely ..
Now etched
upon the minds of those
free wretches\'
(I can\'t help but wonder
how many thousands of write\'s
were binned, by impassioned obstinacy
in your strive, to accumulate
such wordsmith skill
for flawless, flow
and seamless, rhyming dexterity
in your, irresistible: Poetry!)
I simply bow, to your inking Mastery, my friend
January 28th, 2022 06:58
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Depicting
as it does, exquisite
yet still
inexcusable guilt
and yes, sublimely ..
Now etched
upon the minds of those
free wretches\'
(I can\'t help but wonder
how many thousands of write\'s
were binned, by impassioned obstinacy
in your strive, to accumulate
such wordsmith skill
for flawless, flow
and seamless, rhyming dexterity
in your, irresistible: Poetry!)
I simply bow, to your inking Mastery, my friend
January 28th, 2022 06:58
What it All Boils Down To
spilleronsheet said:
The intense sin….the darkest crime…the love of ink stabbing the paper beside…spilling all over as the ink flows….such a grave crime but words so well stringed pleading the poet’s guilt….very skilfully crafted piece dear Neville….a thousands applaud
January 28th, 2022 06:11
spilleronsheet said:
The intense sin….the darkest crime…the love of ink stabbing the paper beside…spilling all over as the ink flows….such a grave crime but words so well stringed pleading the poet’s guilt….very skilfully crafted piece dear Neville….a thousands applaud
January 28th, 2022 06:11
What it All Boils Down To
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - you express so well the writing addition Nev. and I for one am guilty as charged. Poets world over love virgin pages for their sinful urge to leave unique marks. One for my faves as a witty reminder that I too have long needed that same daily fix.............x
January 28th, 2022 05:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - you express so well the writing addition Nev. and I for one am guilty as charged. Poets world over love virgin pages for their sinful urge to leave unique marks. One for my faves as a witty reminder that I too have long needed that same daily fix.............x
January 28th, 2022 05:15
Double Jeopardy
Rozina said:
Do unto others …..
So much said in so few words. Wonderful.
January 27th, 2022 08:39
Rozina said:
Do unto others …..
So much said in so few words. Wonderful.
January 27th, 2022 08:39
Double Jeopardy
dusk arising said:
Don\'t beat yourself up over this, she said, I\'ll gladly do that for you.
January 27th, 2022 08:25
dusk arising said:
Don\'t beat yourself up over this, she said, I\'ll gladly do that for you.
January 27th, 2022 08:25
Double Jeopardy
Buzz Bray said:
Wonderful use of language. Each word impactful. Wow!
January 27th, 2022 08:05
Buzz Bray said:
Wonderful use of language. Each word impactful. Wow!
January 27th, 2022 08:05
Double Jeopardy
L. B. Mek said:
I always feel sorry for those
that hate me
for they begin, so belatedly
or maybe, its just that
I began, so despairingly early..
(a great write!
you lead, I will strive
to follow, dear Masterful Poet)
January 27th, 2022 07:07
L. B. Mek said:
I always feel sorry for those
that hate me
for they begin, so belatedly
or maybe, its just that
I began, so despairingly early..
(a great write!
you lead, I will strive
to follow, dear Masterful Poet)
January 27th, 2022 07:07
Double Jeopardy
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, spread the beating around, and who knows, when the beating finally ends, just restart it.
January 27th, 2022 07:07
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, spread the beating around, and who knows, when the beating finally ends, just restart it.
January 27th, 2022 07:07
Conveniently Forgot
spilleronsheet said:
So true
It’s better to realise even though late
I breathed for myself
And it wasn’t granted by you
Loving thyself before than others
Thanks dear Neville for reminding these words in such gentle way
January 27th, 2022 05:51
spilleronsheet said:
So true
It’s better to realise even though late
I breathed for myself
And it wasn’t granted by you
Loving thyself before than others
Thanks dear Neville for reminding these words in such gentle way
January 27th, 2022 05:51
Double Jeopardy
spilleronsheet said:
The loose black coats and the enormous courts told a tale of the prisoner locked up twice in jail for the same mistake of waking late
Another great write dear Neville
A witty poetry you laced
A satire at the pen’s mistake
January 27th, 2022 05:49
spilleronsheet said:
The loose black coats and the enormous courts told a tale of the prisoner locked up twice in jail for the same mistake of waking late
Another great write dear Neville
A witty poetry you laced
A satire at the pen’s mistake
January 27th, 2022 05:49
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