Comments received on poems by Neville
Over and Out
dusk arising said:
Your words speak to me of a man who knows and values himself sufficiently to follow his right to a relationship where he will shine within the light of a star he holds above all others.
June 8th, 2022 05:26
dusk arising said:
Your words speak to me of a man who knows and values himself sufficiently to follow his right to a relationship where he will shine within the light of a star he holds above all others.
June 8th, 2022 05:26
Over and Out
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but true incompatibility is hard to deal with in a relationship where blame if felt must be a shared thing methinks..... at least firm decision in your final lines meant a complete break. My parents were in the same hard space for as long as I can remember - - an honestly written haunt of a read Nev...................x
June 8th, 2022 04:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but true incompatibility is hard to deal with in a relationship where blame if felt must be a shared thing methinks..... at least firm decision in your final lines meant a complete break. My parents were in the same hard space for as long as I can remember - - an honestly written haunt of a read Nev...................x
June 8th, 2022 04:00
It’s All in The Seeing
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville, there are so many who only look but never see.
Andy
June 8th, 2022 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville, there are so many who only look but never see.
Andy
June 8th, 2022 00:18
It’s All in The Seeing
MendedFences27 said:
\"looking at\" something is just that, looking. Seeing is having a sense of its reason for existence. Some look at art, others see it, know why it exists. Your little 3 liner contains much wisdom. - Phil A.
June 7th, 2022 08:02
MendedFences27 said:
\"looking at\" something is just that, looking. Seeing is having a sense of its reason for existence. Some look at art, others see it, know why it exists. Your little 3 liner contains much wisdom. - Phil A.
June 7th, 2022 08:02
It’s All in The Seeing
orchidee said:
I\'ve seen some of them gals. Should I see more of them?!
June 7th, 2022 08:00
orchidee said:
I\'ve seen some of them gals. Should I see more of them?!
June 7th, 2022 08:00
It’s All in The Seeing
L. B. Mek said:
indeed!
there is no limit
to the depths of Truth
imbued in these words..
dear Poet supreme
(from those blurry mirrors
to those blinkers, on eyes
genuine: Poetic brevity!)
June 7th, 2022 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
indeed!
there is no limit
to the depths of Truth
imbued in these words..
dear Poet supreme
(from those blurry mirrors
to those blinkers, on eyes
genuine: Poetic brevity!)
June 7th, 2022 05:06
It’s All in The Seeing
dusk arising said:
Oh so true. Perception is controlled by ones egotistical state of mind.
Short and sweet from you today, a burst of wisdom.
June 7th, 2022 03:33
dusk arising said:
Oh so true. Perception is controlled by ones egotistical state of mind.
Short and sweet from you today, a burst of wisdom.
June 7th, 2022 03:33
It’s All in The Seeing
Fay Slimm. said:
Sight is unique and understanding is even more so -- - - many more side shoots come from the viewing. How true indeed mon cher ami.................x
June 7th, 2022 03:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Sight is unique and understanding is even more so -- - - many more side shoots come from the viewing. How true indeed mon cher ami.................x
June 7th, 2022 03:24
Semi-Precious Summers
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville and such a shame that that sanctuary is now redundant.
Andy
June 6th, 2022 23:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville and such a shame that that sanctuary is now redundant.
Andy
June 6th, 2022 23:36
Semi-Precious Summers
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an emotive verse Nev. The pathos of petalled togetherness when love had beginnings is perfectly poemed in this heart-tugging look back on days of lost summer. Never redundant your heartfelt sentiments always get this reader\'s top marks ............ x
June 6th, 2022 08:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an emotive verse Nev. The pathos of petalled togetherness when love had beginnings is perfectly poemed in this heart-tugging look back on days of lost summer. Never redundant your heartfelt sentiments always get this reader\'s top marks ............ x
June 6th, 2022 08:25
Semi-Precious Summers
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just look,
where they lay now ..
And in such pretty little heaps ..
There, beneath
what was once
our bedroom window ..
Yes there, where we made love,
caught laughter,
and even wrote half decent poetry ..\'
(I love that poise, metaphor
of breath
inhaling and exhaling
from line to line
emoting, just how much
it took, from your
to out these Truths..)
what a brave write! dear Poet supreme
and in your words
my own, windowsills
adorned
by those churned, blossoms
of love
come back, as such vivid
memories
and so I too, reminisce
and write
and write
hoping, a day will come again
when I can make Poetry
out of life...
(ever grateful I read
and heed
and hope, someday
to learn
my cherished friend)
thank you!
June 6th, 2022 06:17
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just look,
where they lay now ..
And in such pretty little heaps ..
There, beneath
what was once
our bedroom window ..
Yes there, where we made love,
caught laughter,
and even wrote half decent poetry ..\'
(I love that poise, metaphor
of breath
inhaling and exhaling
from line to line
emoting, just how much
it took, from your
to out these Truths..)
what a brave write! dear Poet supreme
and in your words
my own, windowsills
adorned
by those churned, blossoms
of love
come back, as such vivid
memories
and so I too, reminisce
and write
and write
hoping, a day will come again
when I can make Poetry
out of life...
(ever grateful I read
and heed
and hope, someday
to learn
my cherished friend)
thank you!
June 6th, 2022 06:17
Semi-Precious Summers
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I recovered after that petit mort thingy. Fido don\'t let me have anything \'exciting\'. He\'s kept me in this sheltered life. lol.
So today - half decent poetry..... as long as it\'s not ropey, grotty, rubbishy! lol.
June 6th, 2022 03:15
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
I recovered after that petit mort thingy. Fido don\'t let me have anything \'exciting\'. He\'s kept me in this sheltered life. lol.
So today - half decent poetry..... as long as it\'s not ropey, grotty, rubbishy! lol.
June 6th, 2022 03:15
Petite Mort #2
MendedFences27 said:
Somehow, I sense a passage of time and \" those exquisite little deaths of hers\" become the real thing, a \"near died again, held safe in his arms\" event.
If so, it\'s a sad poem, if not a joyous one. In any event it\'s a well-structured, intriguing, and sensual poem. - Phil A.
June 5th, 2022 18:53
MendedFences27 said:
Somehow, I sense a passage of time and \" those exquisite little deaths of hers\" become the real thing, a \"near died again, held safe in his arms\" event.
If so, it\'s a sad poem, if not a joyous one. In any event it\'s a well-structured, intriguing, and sensual poem. - Phil A.
June 5th, 2022 18:53
Petite Mort #2
Bella Shepard said:
What could be better, love reminisced? All those moments that make us smile. Makes you wonder about those people who have a perpetual one on their face. And French to boot, well done!
June 5th, 2022 13:20
Bella Shepard said:
What could be better, love reminisced? All those moments that make us smile. Makes you wonder about those people who have a perpetual one on their face. And French to boot, well done!
June 5th, 2022 13:20
Petite Mort #2
Fay Slimm. said:
A fresh look at recalling small deaths in this well crafted verse mon ami. We seem in tune with French phrases today Nev. - - just how do you it - -maybe telepathy ?............x
June 5th, 2022 03:01
Fay Slimm. said:
A fresh look at recalling small deaths in this well crafted verse mon ami. We seem in tune with French phrases today Nev. - - just how do you it - -maybe telepathy ?............x
June 5th, 2022 03:01
Petite Mort #2
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? I\'ve swooned now. That\'ll teach me to translate stuff! lol.
June 5th, 2022 02:10
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? I\'ve swooned now. That\'ll teach me to translate stuff! lol.
June 5th, 2022 02:10
Petite Mort #2
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? I\'ve swooned now. That\'ll teach me to translate stuff! lol.
June 5th, 2022 02:10
orchidee said:
Bit of French there? I\'ve swooned now. That\'ll teach me to translate stuff! lol.
June 5th, 2022 02:10
Petite Mort #2
dusk arising said:
Ah, in this new wave of gender confusion will we come to recognise the confirmation of gender by the demonstrable capcity to experience la petite mort.
Who are we to interfere when the old ways are the... well they served us well enough i believe.
June 5th, 2022 01:53
dusk arising said:
Ah, in this new wave of gender confusion will we come to recognise the confirmation of gender by the demonstrable capcity to experience la petite mort.
Who are we to interfere when the old ways are the... well they served us well enough i believe.
June 5th, 2022 01:53
Reed Song
MendedFences27 said:
Well, that\'s a unique comparison. I guess the \"wind\" can do a lot of damage, but it cannot take your freedom. A short but deep poem. - Phil A.
June 4th, 2022 16:20
MendedFences27 said:
Well, that\'s a unique comparison. I guess the \"wind\" can do a lot of damage, but it cannot take your freedom. A short but deep poem. - Phil A.
June 4th, 2022 16:20
Reed Song
Fay Slimm. said:
Soulful and needy is this poemed appeal and so winsomely scripted I can feel thee leaning................x
June 4th, 2022 04:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Soulful and needy is this poemed appeal and so winsomely scripted I can feel thee leaning................x
June 4th, 2022 04:46
Reed Song
dusk arising said:
When I get the urge, bullrushes I call them, i begin perfect and fee just as you describe but alas fall to being bruised and bent double... we are talking about gardening aren\'t we?
June 4th, 2022 01:48
dusk arising said:
When I get the urge, bullrushes I call them, i begin perfect and fee just as you describe but alas fall to being bruised and bent double... we are talking about gardening aren\'t we?
June 4th, 2022 01:48
Reed Song
Caring dove said:
A reed in the wind is just the way it’s meant to be .. tho it’s not perfect .
A good writing ))
June 4th, 2022 01:13
Caring dove said:
A reed in the wind is just the way it’s meant to be .. tho it’s not perfect .
A good writing ))
June 4th, 2022 01:13
Where Recollections Reside
SureshG said:
You take us on a journey of exoticism and eroticism- I don’t dare say where my memories reside
June 3rd, 2022 09:30
SureshG said:
You take us on a journey of exoticism and eroticism- I don’t dare say where my memories reside
June 3rd, 2022 09:30
Where Recollections Reside
Goldfinch60 said:
Those places that have created memories will always be in our minds and hearts Neville.
Andy
June 3rd, 2022 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Those places that have created memories will always be in our minds and hearts Neville.
Andy
June 3rd, 2022 00:39
Where Recollections Reside
MendedFences27 said:
Memories, both fond and fondled, where do they reside? People will say in the heart, but we all know they are in the brain. Tucked away safe and sound and only recalled when sparked by a stimulation.
A sweet recollection poetically recalled and spicing the life of all who read it. - Phil A.
June 2nd, 2022 12:24
MendedFences27 said:
Memories, both fond and fondled, where do they reside? People will say in the heart, but we all know they are in the brain. Tucked away safe and sound and only recalled when sparked by a stimulation.
A sweet recollection poetically recalled and spicing the life of all who read it. - Phil A.
June 2nd, 2022 12:24
Where Recollections Reside
Rocky Lagou said:
I can feel this vivid journey of recollection just playing out before me. I swear memories have a power so beyond and wonderful. I love this Neville!
June 2nd, 2022 09:51
Rocky Lagou said:
I can feel this vivid journey of recollection just playing out before me. I swear memories have a power so beyond and wonderful. I love this Neville!
June 2nd, 2022 09:51
Where Recollections Reside
Fay Slimm. said:
Your recollections so aptly poemed bring to mind the special attachment your pen has for detail mon ami -- -such a treat of a read ...............x
June 2nd, 2022 05:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Your recollections so aptly poemed bring to mind the special attachment your pen has for detail mon ami -- -such a treat of a read ...............x
June 2nd, 2022 05:15
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