Comments received on poems by Neville



Upon Testing Positive
Fay Slimm. said:

You are too manly-strong to be under for long Nev. - - give that nasty covid a kick up the backside by resting a bit and methinks he will slink away before long - -- take care my dear friend.......x

October 15th, 2022 12:11

The Science of Passing the Buck
Paul Bell said:

A fall guy is always needed in every emergency, and the good thing with fall guy\'s is, they never realise till the handcuffs have clicked.

October 15th, 2022 11:00

The Science of Passing the Buck
orchidee said:

\"It wasn\'t me\'; \"I wasn\'t there, whatever it was!\" (heehee).

October 15th, 2022 09:08

The Science of Passing the Buck
Dove said:

Sorry, blame serves no purpose ! Get well, you be the one who protects others from the spread. Since it may be insidious, sometimes it’s too late

October 15th, 2022 08:52

Upon Testing Positive
Goldfinch60 said:

I sincerely hope that all gets better soon Neville.

Andy

October 15th, 2022 01:06

Upon Testing Positive
Lionel Mandrake said:

If you want to survive and get better, which I believe you will, detox and get no more boosters ....no matter what.

October 14th, 2022 20:18

Upon Testing Positive
MendedFences27 said:

Whoa. bad news that. Hope all goes well and you bounce back quick. - Phil A.

October 14th, 2022 16:53

Upon Testing Positive
orchidee said:

Yes, get well soon N.
If I had to have kissed a Manageress under Christmas mistletoe, I would never be well again! Doh! lol.

October 14th, 2022 12:09

Upon Testing Positive
Doggerel Dave said:

I ain’t no classical scholar Nev, so I had to resort to Prof G for a bit of a clue, an wot struck me woz wot dun her in woz in all probability childbirth.
I hope you don’t get too crook (Au inf),
Take care of yourself.

October 14th, 2022 05:38

Upon Testing Positive
arqios said:

Oh dear, get well soon Nev!

October 14th, 2022 04:01

Why Not Just Call It a Day
Goldfinch60 said:

I agree with what Fay has said.

Andy

October 14th, 2022 01:25

Why Not Just Call It a Day
orchidee said:

I never knew I betrayed ya! Or did I betray a certain gal?
OK, we\'ll call it a day - Goodnight! lol.

October 13th, 2022 08:35

A Few More Things Remembered
SureshG said:

ahhhh!!!!, that never fades from the memory glands with the passage of time.

October 13th, 2022 07:08

Why Not Just Call It a Day
Fay Slimm. said:

The she in this double would know where she stood right enough by these straightforward lines Nev. - -one betrayal can be coped with but twice - - well it needs the chop given - - -- honestly written and with such gentle reminders..........x

October 13th, 2022 05:30

Why Not Just Call It a Day
Doggerel Dave said:

Now there\'s plain speaki\'n for yer.
Like this one a lot, Nev.
Wouldn\'t care to share the content of that ultimatum, would you.....?
....Nah - a gentleman never tells, right?


October 13th, 2022 05:20

Why Not Just Call It a Day
Paul Bell said:

Yes, three good days is a honeymoon, after that it\'s all downhill.

October 13th, 2022 04:45

A Few More Things Remembered
Christina8 said:

A wonderful poem....so full of sensory images and smells. Spectacular!

October 12th, 2022 10:07

A Few More Things Remembered
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Your words have always had a life of their own, and their own personality, Neville. You speak not just through, but with your pieces as well. A beautiful work of art this is, like those rare flowers that just never lose their charm, sir. A definite favorite of mine.

October 12th, 2022 08:10

A Few More Things Remembered
Fay Slimm. said:

Your usage of word is simply stunning in this romantic memory of the way things were. - -- I love the final thought - that \"if love had a smell,
it would smell of my lady\" - -- -- such an appealing read Nev........................



October 11th, 2022 05:55

A Few More Things Remembered
Doggerel Dave said:

50i\'s did it for me, Nev - although never found any lady to attach embroidered flower patches to \'em... quite conceivably this could be seen in my circumstances as a positive.... where I worked...

October 11th, 2022 03:19

A Few More Things Remembered
orchidee said:

Good write N.

October 11th, 2022 01:58

A Few More Things Remembered
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving words Neville.

Andy

October 11th, 2022 01:31

Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
Goldfinch60 said:

Amazing words Neville, in this day and age it is happening more and more.
I have experienced close people trying to commit suicide but they spoke to me and all became better.

Andy

October 11th, 2022 01:05

Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
orchidee said:

Ahh, was the train on time that day? Doh!

October 10th, 2022 09:15

Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
arqios said:

Oh doubles. Sad it wasn\'t a tennis match or a café.

October 10th, 2022 07:52

Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
Doggerel Dave said:

Too much Nev. Not sure why. I pride myself in an awareness of the realities of people\'s lives, yet i find this disturbing....

October 10th, 2022 04:28

Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
Fay Slimm. said:

Nothing but experience could pen words that strike home so vividly this stark picture of very sudden and unexpected tragedy - -- a heart-wrenching read Nev. - -

October 10th, 2022 04:24

That Point Where We Each Begin
Goldfinch60 said:

True words Neville.

Andy

October 9th, 2022 01:45

That Point Where We Each Begin
Fay Slimm. said:

Strange that time when two never know where the \"me\" ends and the\"you\" begins - -- you scribe it briliantly in this piece of perception my dear friend and tis a fave with me for sure..............x

October 8th, 2022 09:00

That Point Where We Each Begin
Christina8 said:

I love this poem! So satisfying, laying \"like this\', isn\'t it? Wonderful visual. Excellent!!

October 8th, 2022 08:52



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