Comments received on poems by Neville



Barely Semi Touched
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah the unquenchable miss of those who loved are now barely available ........ only semi-touched but still remembered. -- A heart-tugging read Nev.

January 3rd, 2022 11:29

Barely Semi Touched
orchidee said:

Should I meet her?!

January 3rd, 2022 11:03

Sated
Dove said:

Beautiful! Has a frisky ending, or is that my naughty imagination! Lol Happy New Year

January 3rd, 2022 08:13

It Don’t Help to Forget None
Draven said:

That is so beautiful.

January 2nd, 2022 10:21

Sated
Draven said:

Nicely written! Cheeky poem. :)

January 2nd, 2022 10:18

Sated
Goldfinch60 said:

Keep on wondering Neville and your thoughts will come to fruition.

Andy

January 1st, 2022 02:06

Sated
Rozina said:

All the best! Happy New Year.

December 31st, 2021 22:02

Sated
orchidee said:

Good write N.

December 31st, 2021 11:17

Sated
Paul Bell said:

Never used that as a chat up line.
Fancy exchanging, DNA.
No, Paul, I dumped you.
She never liked green fields, that girl.

December 31st, 2021 11:01

Sated
SureshG said:

Exceptionally deposited, may it flourish and blossom, and thanks for the tease

December 31st, 2021 10:13

Sated
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha - leaving D.A. eh ? well that\'s a most novel way to put it - -- the title did it for me - - but what could be better than to wonder whether the wet walk will deliver a dry patch to lie and maybe exchange more than pleasantries - - am smiling big at this bit of your gift for teasingly inventive intrigue .............x

December 31st, 2021 06:09

Sated
dusk arising said:

Gone are those hankerchief days of youth eh?

You could always scratch/cut yourself on a hawthorn bush or barbed wire escaping from mischievous bovines...... deposits made.

There\'s a delightful mischievous note in your poetry today.... is that a sign of a new years twinkle in your eye?.... I hope so.

December 31st, 2021 05:52

It Don’t Help to Forget None
Goldfinch60 said:

Such important words to give to your lady, as I did to mine.

Andy

December 31st, 2021 01:36

It Don’t Help to Forget None
Rozina said:

Even once in a blue moon is better than never! 3 powerful words.

December 30th, 2021 23:34

It Don’t Help to Forget None
orchidee said:

Which gal was this?
One I cannot meet, for she is yours!
Not KP though. Things went downhill since the day I married her! lol.

December 30th, 2021 14:44

It Don’t Help to Forget None
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

Beautiful sentiments for your beautiful lady. What truly counts is that you’ve remembered what you forgot.

Laura 🌻

December 30th, 2021 11:41

It Don’t Help to Forget None
Fay Slimm. said:

Words mean a lot to a lady when they come from a purely romantic heart - and who could wish for a better \"forgetter\" than thee mon ami - -- - a lovely warm read.............. x

December 30th, 2021 11:26

Chasing Light
SureshG said:

You are full of romance that your pen lovingly exposes, letting us dream a little

December 30th, 2021 10:24

Chasing Light
Draven said:

Very nicely written.

December 30th, 2021 09:38

Chasing Light
orchidee said:

Should I meet her? Can I meet her?! heehee.

December 30th, 2021 03:03

Chasing Light
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words Neville, may she always be with you.

Andy

December 30th, 2021 01:46

Chasing Light
Fay Slimm. said:

Your tender expressions put romantic poetry on a whole different level and to say I enjoyed this would be putting it mildly - -- a sigh of a read Nev........x

December 30th, 2021 01:41

Chasing Light
Rozina said:

Romantic beautiful lines.

December 29th, 2021 18:30

Chasing Light
dusk arising said:

(swoons)..... hold that thought.... I think I just fell in love too.

December 29th, 2021 16:09

Chasing Light
Caring dove said:

Lovely words Neville ))

December 29th, 2021 15:16

Chasing Light
Michael Edwards said:

And so may she blossom. Enjoyed the read.

December 29th, 2021 15:13

On Being But a Poet
Rozina said:

A good one.

December 29th, 2021 01:26

On Being But a Poet
Goldfinch60 said:

We will all leave this earth at some time but hopefully we will leave some fond memories Neville.

Andy

December 28th, 2021 14:39

On Being But a Poet
orchidee said:

The didn\'t kill me off, or martyr me, like a poem of recent days, but they chucked me in a hole, and shovelled in a pile of stones, or proverbial \'ton of bricks\'. Why? Cos I began to sing! lol.

December 28th, 2021 11:56

On Being But a Poet
spilleronsheet said:

A poet the most sensitive being, noticing even minute details….a tale or two from his recount never leaves the heart….maybe he isn’t a king with green but a king with words
Well penned dear Neville

December 28th, 2021 09:21



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