Comments received on poems by Neville



Five Beatles and a Groupie
Fay Slimm. said:

Grinning at this bit of bringing back \"those-were-the-days\" Nev - I love the fact that I was there back then with all that loud groupie laughter.......... gos on wid ya my luverly rouser of mem\'ries.......... xx

February 21st, 2022 03:39

A Long Pretence
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Neville but there will be some one out there.

Andy

February 21st, 2022 01:53

A Long Pretence
Doggerel Dave said:

Happens to us all sometime, I think Nev. Remember the fleeting, oh so very fleeting good moments and enjoy that walk with your hound. Best wishes.

February 20th, 2022 20:25

A Long Pretence
Poetic Dan said:

Keep sailing on the only difference is how each of us brave the storms.

I always admire your open heart

Thanks for sharing my friend

February 20th, 2022 13:53

A Long Pretence
Dove said:

Oh another way of saying you were living a lie... Sometimes we live in a fairy tale made for one... Excellent Writing

February 20th, 2022 07:56

A Long Pretence
orchidee said:

If you\'re not meeting her now - should I?! lol.

February 20th, 2022 06:44

A Long Pretence
Fay Slimm. said:

Sad thought but time to call it a day when there is not even a trace of the feeling of Us - -- pretence starts to hurt when playing dead roles. Marvelous use of few -worded lines again mi clever amigo........ x and x

February 20th, 2022 06:26

A Long Pretence
Rozina said:

Sad when this happens. All the best to you. X X X

February 20th, 2022 05:15

A Long Pretence
Paul Bell said:

Sadly, some women judge a guy on the last guy, and so it goes on.
At some point in time, the penny drops, and you\'ll be off with Sally.

February 20th, 2022 04:43

A Single X  
Goldfinch60 said:

That first kiss is always remembered Neville.

Andy

February 20th, 2022 01:49

A Single X  
Rozina said:

You’ve got me thinking - why is X used for a kiss? As Neil said X was given for mistakes. It’s still romantic.

February 19th, 2022 18:29

A Single X  
orchidee said:

Good write N.

February 19th, 2022 09:29

A Single X  
Fay Slimm. said:

So good to have you back today Nev. and to read your welcome intriguingly worded verses again - - - the fortunate She will love this romantic appeal for more kisses and will surely agree - -- - - - but in the meanwhile I will leave more than my usual one hoping that these will suffice as a substitute \'til you get increases from your special lady - - - - - I love that final line by the way........ x...x

February 19th, 2022 07:42

A Single X  
Paul Bell said:

I suppose you need to start with one kiss, and hopefully it will build up to more. In saying that, I\'m thinking one kiss here is maybe one too many.

February 19th, 2022 05:59

Yankee Jack
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Woah a super fab poem on a fine soldiery statue, it made the statue personality seem more invincible. Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Happy valentines day, poets.

February 14th, 2022 05:20

Marcella
L. B. Mek said:

you started as you meant to continue, didn\'t you?
simply Brilliant! dear Poet supreme

February 10th, 2022 06:07

To Fade Without Warning
Dove said:

Beautiful! Hope you enjoy Mexico!
Be safe!

February 8th, 2022 14:30

A Collection of Slumbers
Caring dove said:

Great poem . Like your words )

February 2nd, 2022 02:25

Yankee Jack
Goldfinch60 said:

Some one else in music of whom I had never heard, thank you for the information.

Andy

February 2nd, 2022 01:54

Yankee Jack
Rozina said:

I have not heard of this character. Another piece of knowledge gained. Thank you.

February 1st, 2022 22:41

Yankee Jack
Doggerel Dave said:

Seems One never stops learning - unavoidable when such information is made so easily available, as here. Many thanks.

Could not this be an introduction to further history lessons please, Nev.

February 1st, 2022 18:37

Yankee Jack
orchidee said:

It\'s better that he sings than me! lol.

February 1st, 2022 08:57

Yankee Jack
spilleronsheet said:

A lovely read
Thanks for bringing Mr Jack to the notice of my eyes dear Neville….

February 1st, 2022 07:33

Yankee Jack
L. B. Mek said:

how informative
sorry my uncultured existence
but had no idea about Jack..
(and I quickly looked-up his statue
really like the pose, the artist chose
it may add to your words
if you felt like adding a picture to your page, just a thought)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet

February 1st, 2022 06:49

Yankee Jack
Fay Slimm. said:

Well I confess I didn\'t know Jack before your first class information and now can comment on your four liner with a wry smile \'cos I didn\'t know either that \"crack\" went that far back. - - - -- such an engaging read Nev......................x

February 1st, 2022 06:40

To Fade Without Warning
Goldfinch60 said:

Those sudden ends can be so disturbing but at the same time sometimes mesmerising.

Andy

February 1st, 2022 02:08

To Fade Without Warning
Rozina said:

Compelling. Puzzling at first. Then realisation. Simply wonderful.

January 31st, 2022 22:36

To Fade Without Warning
Solar Impulse_1912 said:

Dear Neville (I keep thinking ‘Neville the Deville’ and know that I should not mention the weird ruminations of my brain to an almost stranger, not knowing what his reaction or his sense humour might be... In any case it is thought kindly!) ... anyway, what I wanted to say is: You really are a truly great poet! Not too many words but so precise and directly piercing into the heart. Thank you for letting us in! Bettina

January 31st, 2022 15:36

To Fade Without Warning
spilleronsheet said:

Woah
You threw a palate of emotions on canvas
There was yearning
There was missing
There was grief
There was a sudden realise
There was astonishment as well as disappointment
And lastly there was a message that i imbibed
Live In the moment or it may fade
Those around as well us in frame
We may fade
Beautiful dear Neville

January 31st, 2022 13:32

To Fade Without Warning
Michael Edwards said:

Fay\'s right - a unique style, and a read to make you think.

January 31st, 2022 10:11



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