Comments received on poems by Neville
No Looking Back Again
Dove said:
Young love, leaves the door open , mature love doesn’t care. True love embraces the closure,
Excellent poem
May 7th, 2022 10:25
Dove said:
Young love, leaves the door open , mature love doesn’t care. True love embraces the closure,
Excellent poem
May 7th, 2022 10:25
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
Dove said:
A Whisper, a scream muffled no doubt by tears, “Frankly Scarlet, I don’t give a damn”
Oh Rhett, please don’t leave me, lol
May 7th, 2022 10:20
Dove said:
A Whisper, a scream muffled no doubt by tears, “Frankly Scarlet, I don’t give a damn”
Oh Rhett, please don’t leave me, lol
May 7th, 2022 10:20
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville.
Andy
May 7th, 2022 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville.
Andy
May 7th, 2022 00:53
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
Rozina said:
Wonder what she was going to say? What could she have said that would make you stay? Just curious as usual! A great write.
May 6th, 2022 18:12
Rozina said:
Wonder what she was going to say? What could she have said that would make you stay? Just curious as usual! A great write.
May 6th, 2022 18:12
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
MendedFences27 said:
Funny how one small moment in time, when actions speak louder than words, can change the trajectory of a developing relationship. When heartfelt sentiment shows the truth, words unheard must remain thus.
Human nature is one of poetry\'s greatest subjects and carries with it the danger for the poet offending readers. Such is the fallibility of mankind.
Your poem is direct in painting the scene, with the reader judging on their own the value of its portrayal. I personally felt you hit the nail on the head. The un-described characters in your poem are there only to bring out the message. The scene is humanity at its nadir and ends as it should with exposure of his failings. A very intense and forthright portrayal of humankind. Loved it - Phil A.
May 6th, 2022 14:45
MendedFences27 said:
Funny how one small moment in time, when actions speak louder than words, can change the trajectory of a developing relationship. When heartfelt sentiment shows the truth, words unheard must remain thus.
Human nature is one of poetry\'s greatest subjects and carries with it the danger for the poet offending readers. Such is the fallibility of mankind.
Your poem is direct in painting the scene, with the reader judging on their own the value of its portrayal. I personally felt you hit the nail on the head. The un-described characters in your poem are there only to bring out the message. The scene is humanity at its nadir and ends as it should with exposure of his failings. A very intense and forthright portrayal of humankind. Loved it - Phil A.
May 6th, 2022 14:45
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
Accidental Poet said:
She was just about to say, \"I love you\", but he was too afraid that those would not be the words she would say.
May 6th, 2022 12:12
Accidental Poet said:
She was just about to say, \"I love you\", but he was too afraid that those would not be the words she would say.
May 6th, 2022 12:12
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
Christina8 said:
Haunting, which leaves me to wonder, what did she say? Well, Bullet, you\'ve gone and done it again----excellent write!!!
May 6th, 2022 08:27
Christina8 said:
Haunting, which leaves me to wonder, what did she say? Well, Bullet, you\'ve gone and done it again----excellent write!!!
May 6th, 2022 08:27
Dun a Runna
Rocky Lagou said:
Hehe! This actually made me laugh then made me think, \"gosh, c\'mon can\'t we just go at least one day without heartbreak?\" I see you wrote this a while ago though, we\'re all immature during our younger years.
May 6th, 2022 08:15
Rocky Lagou said:
Hehe! This actually made me laugh then made me think, \"gosh, c\'mon can\'t we just go at least one day without heartbreak?\" I see you wrote this a while ago though, we\'re all immature during our younger years.
May 6th, 2022 08:15
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
L. B. Mek said:
ha! that\'s crazy
how our offerings sync-up
in theme, so often
Hyung..
\'our callous indifference
in the choices we make\'...
plus
this subtly, inconsequential
(at initial appearance)
poem
is one of your deepest write\'s
\'in my humble opinion\'..
(when we leave
and they\'re left, to choke
on the unsaid
we left in place, untouched
when at a fingertips
distance, choosing to ignore
that opportunity
to salvage their shattered, hopes
from evolving, in-to
a decimated heart\'s, irreversible
scar
are we, selfish perpetrators
or merely: survivors
escaping from that inevitable
tertiary blast
of a broken romance\'s, consequences...?)
sorry
if I read your poetry differently
than your intent, dear Poet
May 6th, 2022 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
ha! that\'s crazy
how our offerings sync-up
in theme, so often
Hyung..
\'our callous indifference
in the choices we make\'...
plus
this subtly, inconsequential
(at initial appearance)
poem
is one of your deepest write\'s
\'in my humble opinion\'..
(when we leave
and they\'re left, to choke
on the unsaid
we left in place, untouched
when at a fingertips
distance, choosing to ignore
that opportunity
to salvage their shattered, hopes
from evolving, in-to
a decimated heart\'s, irreversible
scar
are we, selfish perpetrators
or merely: survivors
escaping from that inevitable
tertiary blast
of a broken romance\'s, consequences...?)
sorry
if I read your poetry differently
than your intent, dear Poet
May 6th, 2022 05:57
All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a read which describes so aptly a runaway guy blind to his actions..............x
May 6th, 2022 03:12
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a read which describes so aptly a runaway guy blind to his actions..............x
May 6th, 2022 03:12
Dun a Runna
Christina8 said:
This is really funny, Bullet! A naughty boy indeed!! This is a great little write!! C
May 5th, 2022 08:24
Christina8 said:
This is really funny, Bullet! A naughty boy indeed!! This is a great little write!! C
May 5th, 2022 08:24
Dun a Runna
L. B. Mek said:
lol
everything in life, needs
practise
to gain, endurance
when we learn that
we have a chance
at establishing relationships
that exist, in our blink-n-miss
reality..
than linger, longer
in our regret\'s, rear
view, warped-by-Time
reverie mirrors..
(btw Hyung
how\'s the book coming along?)
May 5th, 2022 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
lol
everything in life, needs
practise
to gain, endurance
when we learn that
we have a chance
at establishing relationships
that exist, in our blink-n-miss
reality..
than linger, longer
in our regret\'s, rear
view, warped-by-Time
reverie mirrors..
(btw Hyung
how\'s the book coming along?)
May 5th, 2022 06:14
Dun a Runna
orchidee said:
I wouldn\'t know - Bullet? - swoon!
Shall I meet her now then, if you\'ve dashed off?! lol.
I loves \'em and leaves \'em - well, I leaves KP anyway. lol.
May 5th, 2022 06:03
orchidee said:
I wouldn\'t know - Bullet? - swoon!
Shall I meet her now then, if you\'ve dashed off?! lol.
I loves \'em and leaves \'em - well, I leaves KP anyway. lol.
May 5th, 2022 06:03
Dun a Runna
dusk arising said:
Bullet? Maybe because you had six in the clip and one in the chamber.
Half an hour can see much crammed in. Life changing things happen in seconds. Discarding the replaceable is often done on the trot.
Opportunity taken is like the sweephand of life, catch it or... gone.
May 5th, 2022 03:53
dusk arising said:
Bullet? Maybe because you had six in the clip and one in the chamber.
Half an hour can see much crammed in. Life changing things happen in seconds. Discarding the replaceable is often done on the trot.
Opportunity taken is like the sweephand of life, catch it or... gone.
May 5th, 2022 03:53
Dun a Runna
Fay Slimm. said:
Guess this is why - runnin\' and not carin\' where or whom he hit for that half hour he deserved the label Bullet. - -- a swift getaway makes that a wery norty boy methinks.......... x
May 5th, 2022 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Guess this is why - runnin\' and not carin\' where or whom he hit for that half hour he deserved the label Bullet. - -- a swift getaway makes that a wery norty boy methinks.......... x
May 5th, 2022 03:47
No Looking Back Again
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Neville, we are back to \'If only.....\' once more.
Andy
May 5th, 2022 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Neville, we are back to \'If only.....\' once more.
Andy
May 5th, 2022 00:34
No Looking Back Again
Rozina said:
Memories good or bad
Memories happy or sad
When they hit you........
Beautiful lines.
May 4th, 2022 17:40
Rozina said:
Memories good or bad
Memories happy or sad
When they hit you........
Beautiful lines.
May 4th, 2022 17:40
No Looking Back Again
SureshG said:
Dean Martin,s song -
Take one fresh and tender kiss
Add one stolen night of bliss
One girl, one boy
Some grief, some joy
Memories are made of this
best describes my feeling about your post today.
May 4th, 2022 12:46
SureshG said:
Dean Martin,s song -
Take one fresh and tender kiss
Add one stolen night of bliss
One girl, one boy
Some grief, some joy
Memories are made of this
best describes my feeling about your post today.
May 4th, 2022 12:46
No Looking Back Again
SureshG said:
Dean Martin,s song -
Take one fresh and tender kiss
Add one stolen night of bliss
One girl, one boy
Some grief, some joy
Memories are made of this
best describes my feeling about your post today.
May 4th, 2022 12:46
SureshG said:
Dean Martin,s song -
Take one fresh and tender kiss
Add one stolen night of bliss
One girl, one boy
Some grief, some joy
Memories are made of this
best describes my feeling about your post today.
May 4th, 2022 12:46
No Looking Back Again
Christina8 said:
Love this write! It is really mindful, staying in the present while looking in the past. Sounds like you had wonderful moments...wonderful write dear nev.....C
May 4th, 2022 08:47
Christina8 said:
Love this write! It is really mindful, staying in the present while looking in the past. Sounds like you had wonderful moments...wonderful write dear nev.....C
May 4th, 2022 08:47
No Looking Back Again
Distant View said:
\"Don\'t look back!\" they tell us, yet we always do! How can we not? Bitter-sweet memories still have their pull on our hearts and minds! A poignant poem, with universal appeal, I believe, Neville! Beautifully expressed!
May 4th, 2022 07:12
Distant View said:
\"Don\'t look back!\" they tell us, yet we always do! How can we not? Bitter-sweet memories still have their pull on our hearts and minds! A poignant poem, with universal appeal, I believe, Neville! Beautifully expressed!
May 4th, 2022 07:12
No Looking Back Again
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s almost like a sinful succulence, isn\'t it? Memory. For its sake men die every day. It\'s cruel, so very sweet, sour, and always ready to grab you by the neck. I wonder which one this is for the Author. A splendid read, Sir Neville. Thank you for the kick in the head. (A jumpstart really)
May 4th, 2022 04:38
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s almost like a sinful succulence, isn\'t it? Memory. For its sake men die every day. It\'s cruel, so very sweet, sour, and always ready to grab you by the neck. I wonder which one this is for the Author. A splendid read, Sir Neville. Thank you for the kick in the head. (A jumpstart really)
May 4th, 2022 04:38
No Looking Back Again
Fay Slimm. said:
The pathos of losing what way back was hoped for of \"old here and theres\" comes over so touchingkly in these lines of memory dear friend.
A read to remember so tucked into my favourites...........x
May 4th, 2022 04:34
Fay Slimm. said:
The pathos of losing what way back was hoped for of \"old here and theres\" comes over so touchingkly in these lines of memory dear friend.
A read to remember so tucked into my favourites...........x
May 4th, 2022 04:34
No Looking Back Again
Caring dove said:
Good writing Neville ))
I especially like these lines
‘far away
eyes of hers, like flashing
blue lights’
mysteriously lingering
like some
tasteful, eternal eclipse ..
May 4th, 2022 04:01
Caring dove said:
Good writing Neville ))
I especially like these lines
‘far away
eyes of hers, like flashing
blue lights’
mysteriously lingering
like some
tasteful, eternal eclipse ..
May 4th, 2022 04:01
Fish Supper
SureshG said:
Teach a man to fish and he’ll have FISH SUPPER. No better title, but even more so, no better poem to hook one’s worm on.
May 3rd, 2022 07:38
SureshG said:
Teach a man to fish and he’ll have FISH SUPPER. No better title, but even more so, no better poem to hook one’s worm on.
May 3rd, 2022 07:38
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