Comments received on poems by Neville
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
Fay Slimm. said:
A familiar enquiry at a very sad time whether from sons or from daughters and pathos colours the core of this question with palest sad....... a most moving read Nev............. x
March 26th, 2020 11:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A familiar enquiry at a very sad time whether from sons or from daughters and pathos colours the core of this question with palest sad....... a most moving read Nev............. x
March 26th, 2020 11:19
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
orchidee said:
Erm, well you still are your fathers son, I would say. We (male) may also be a father ourselves; brother, uncle, grandad; nephew; etc.
I never knew we could be so may things!
March 26th, 2020 04:30
orchidee said:
Erm, well you still are your fathers son, I would say. We (male) may also be a father ourselves; brother, uncle, grandad; nephew; etc.
I never knew we could be so may things!
March 26th, 2020 04:30
My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions
dusk arising said:
A young man\'s question is asked here i believe. For a matured man is already fitting into places, hearts and minds where he is irreplaceable.
I think you penned this to tease us into a wonderful train of though about life and living. Full marks sir!
March 26th, 2020 04:23
dusk arising said:
A young man\'s question is asked here i believe. For a matured man is already fitting into places, hearts and minds where he is irreplaceable.
I think you penned this to tease us into a wonderful train of though about life and living. Full marks sir!
March 26th, 2020 04:23
Job Lot of Biro’s
Goldfinch60 said:
We all do that and in my case I need bottles of ink for my quill.
Andy
March 25th, 2020 03:07
Goldfinch60 said:
We all do that and in my case I need bottles of ink for my quill.
Andy
March 25th, 2020 03:07
Job Lot of Biro’s
PoeticBiscuit said:
A very touching write Neville. Time takes all except for the memories that we hold close.
March 24th, 2020 14:19
PoeticBiscuit said:
A very touching write Neville. Time takes all except for the memories that we hold close.
March 24th, 2020 14:19
Job Lot of Biro’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes hearin\'ya loud and clear mon ami and am keeping to schedule on what where and when and with whom --- yes this is a serious health hazard my friend and same back at-ya - you betta tek care and stay well too....... x
March 24th, 2020 14:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes hearin\'ya loud and clear mon ami and am keeping to schedule on what where and when and with whom --- yes this is a serious health hazard my friend and same back at-ya - you betta tek care and stay well too....... x
March 24th, 2020 14:04
Job Lot of Biro’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Love is so hard to shelve when time was it glittered with golden dreams --- another tear-jerking read Nev and so clearly revealed that need to note down every nuance to keep and read over again - - it surely takes lots of biros does the sight of a one-time love ........... x
March 24th, 2020 13:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Love is so hard to shelve when time was it glittered with golden dreams --- another tear-jerking read Nev and so clearly revealed that need to note down every nuance to keep and read over again - - it surely takes lots of biros does the sight of a one-time love ........... x
March 24th, 2020 13:23
Job Lot of Biro’s
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Love the title and the message of your poem.
The first time I saw the word ‘Biro’ was in high school in a required reading assignment.
Very interesting.
Stay safe.
~Laura~🌻
March 24th, 2020 13:23
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Love the title and the message of your poem.
The first time I saw the word ‘Biro’ was in high school in a required reading assignment.
Very interesting.
Stay safe.
~Laura~🌻
March 24th, 2020 13:23
Job Lot of Biro’s
dusk arising said:
Well penned (groan)... Well constable Neville, it\'s all done on video tape/memory chip in the interview room now.
Why does modern technology rob life of romance.... or is it just me?
March 24th, 2020 13:17
dusk arising said:
Well penned (groan)... Well constable Neville, it\'s all done on video tape/memory chip in the interview room now.
Why does modern technology rob life of romance.... or is it just me?
March 24th, 2020 13:17
Job Lot of Biro’s
Neville said:
I hope so too, but I am quite sure there will be many more casualties and that this monster should not be underestimated.... Neville :)
March 24th, 2020 13:14
Neville said:
I hope so too, but I am quite sure there will be many more casualties and that this monster should not be underestimated.... Neville :)
March 24th, 2020 13:14
Job Lot of Biro’s
orchidee said:
Ooohh you\'ve not offended me. Are ya still writing to me?! heehee. It need not be goodbye, just au revoir - bit of Spanish there. I\'m good at languages, don\'t ya know!
March 24th, 2020 11:02
orchidee said:
Ooohh you\'ve not offended me. Are ya still writing to me?! heehee. It need not be goodbye, just au revoir - bit of Spanish there. I\'m good at languages, don\'t ya know!
March 24th, 2020 11:02
Insidious
Fay Slimm. said:
Impressive imagery used in the doleful unfinishment of this reflective poem - - love has a habit of ending this way my friend.................
March 22nd, 2020 06:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Impressive imagery used in the doleful unfinishment of this reflective poem - - love has a habit of ending this way my friend.................
March 22nd, 2020 06:58
Insidious
Goldfinch60 said:
The fragility of love can be so unreal and so misunderstood Neville.
Andy
March 22nd, 2020 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
The fragility of love can be so unreal and so misunderstood Neville.
Andy
March 22nd, 2020 02:19
Insidious
orchidee said:
A good write N. Based on fiction or non-fiction?
If fiction - should I meet her?! lol.
March 21st, 2020 14:44
orchidee said:
A good write N. Based on fiction or non-fiction?
If fiction - should I meet her?! lol.
March 21st, 2020 14:44
Insidious
Neville said:
Hello DA my fine literary friend.. Many thanks for visiting these words.. I kind off like the fact you felt suspended, I just hope you were not left feeling too frustrated by them, in the absence of a definitive answer, or conclusion.... I like enigmas......Take care and stay well..... Neville
March 21st, 2020 14:37
Neville said:
Hello DA my fine literary friend.. Many thanks for visiting these words.. I kind off like the fact you felt suspended, I just hope you were not left feeling too frustrated by them, in the absence of a definitive answer, or conclusion.... I like enigmas......Take care and stay well..... Neville
March 21st, 2020 14:37
Insidious
dusk arising said:
I doubt she will answer you with honesty. They like to come across as enigmatic... so be prepared to hear that she doesn\'t like your after-shave any longer.
Interesting read to play with ones mind. I felt left suspended in mid air.... will we see a resolving piece from you?
You\'re being enigmatic now though.
March 21st, 2020 13:50
dusk arising said:
I doubt she will answer you with honesty. They like to come across as enigmatic... so be prepared to hear that she doesn\'t like your after-shave any longer.
Interesting read to play with ones mind. I felt left suspended in mid air.... will we see a resolving piece from you?
You\'re being enigmatic now though.
March 21st, 2020 13:50
Hesitation
Poetic Dan said:
I followed the jumped, realised those buggers never actually went! They say it\'s never to late but sometimes I wish that maybe I\'d wait!
Who am I kidding I do not like to hesitate!
Fantastic stuff my friend!
Much peace and respect
March 11th, 2020 08:59
Poetic Dan said:
I followed the jumped, realised those buggers never actually went! They say it\'s never to late but sometimes I wish that maybe I\'d wait!
Who am I kidding I do not like to hesitate!
Fantastic stuff my friend!
Much peace and respect
March 11th, 2020 08:59
Hesitation
orchidee said:
You hesitated yourself N? \'He/she who hesitates is lost?!\' True always?
You hesitated listening to me sing? Well, millions do! heehee.
March 9th, 2020 03:44
orchidee said:
You hesitated yourself N? \'He/she who hesitates is lost?!\' True always?
You hesitated listening to me sing? Well, millions do! heehee.
March 9th, 2020 03:44
Hesitation
Goldfinch60 said:
I have always found that I wandering (jumping) into a new path can be good and takes you along a way that adds to your life. Moving on is good.
Andy
March 9th, 2020 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
I have always found that I wandering (jumping) into a new path can be good and takes you along a way that adds to your life. Moving on is good.
Andy
March 9th, 2020 01:37
Hesitation
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m game for that freworking of old ones specially my hip
As for diving in without first knowing what lies beneath the surface. No, not me. I guess that means I speak in bleats.
You\'ve drawn a clever comparison between the \"willing sheep\" who a\'wait and weep\' and the :heroes\" who \"wander free.\" Lots to like here. _ Phil A.
March 8th, 2020 20:45
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m game for that freworking of old ones specially my hip
As for diving in without first knowing what lies beneath the surface. No, not me. I guess that means I speak in bleats.
You\'ve drawn a clever comparison between the \"willing sheep\" who a\'wait and weep\' and the :heroes\" who \"wander free.\" Lots to like here. _ Phil A.
March 8th, 2020 20:45
Hesitation
Clara said:
This is truly a universal stuggle I think. Definitely leaves a lot to ponder this Sunday Morning, thanks for sharing!
March 8th, 2020 09:46
Clara said:
This is truly a universal stuggle I think. Definitely leaves a lot to ponder this Sunday Morning, thanks for sharing!
March 8th, 2020 09:46
Hesitation
Fay Slimm. said:
An impressive telling of what happens to he or ( she) who hesitates when once decisions are made --- as for me - I wish to be among those who wander freely - -- my thanks to you Nev. most kindly for thoughts to ponder in these few Sunday- lines.
March 8th, 2020 09:38
Fay Slimm. said:
An impressive telling of what happens to he or ( she) who hesitates when once decisions are made --- as for me - I wish to be among those who wander freely - -- my thanks to you Nev. most kindly for thoughts to ponder in these few Sunday- lines.
March 8th, 2020 09:38
Hesitation
orchidee said:
I\'m baa-ing! it\'s never too long at church before we hear of the Good Shepherd and His sheep! :)
March 8th, 2020 08:23
orchidee said:
I\'m baa-ing! it\'s never too long at church before we hear of the Good Shepherd and His sheep! :)
March 8th, 2020 08:23
Hesitation
dusk arising said:
Baaaaaaa! Is this a question of when you say \"jump\", I say.... \'after you mate\'.
There are non so blind as those who fell off the 10.000ft cliff two years ago.
Nicely put together and i can see you have set out to confuse those who never bother to read our poetry anyhow.
March 8th, 2020 07:29
dusk arising said:
Baaaaaaa! Is this a question of when you say \"jump\", I say.... \'after you mate\'.
There are non so blind as those who fell off the 10.000ft cliff two years ago.
Nicely put together and i can see you have set out to confuse those who never bother to read our poetry anyhow.
March 8th, 2020 07:29
Forsaken
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville. There are people out there who do feel like this, it is a shame that some cannot see it and pull them from the brink.
Andy
March 8th, 2020 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville. There are people out there who do feel like this, it is a shame that some cannot see it and pull them from the brink.
Andy
March 8th, 2020 02:26
Forsaken
dusk arising said:
One senses the nobility of aging here. The jewel of memories set against uncertainty and challenged frailty of faith in a hereafter.
Deeply sensitive writing from you which will reach the spot with all beyond their middle years.
March 8th, 2020 00:32
dusk arising said:
One senses the nobility of aging here. The jewel of memories set against uncertainty and challenged frailty of faith in a hereafter.
Deeply sensitive writing from you which will reach the spot with all beyond their middle years.
March 8th, 2020 00:32
Forsaken
MendedFences27 said:
Whether \"Forsaken \" in love or in life, she has reached the breaking point of suffering and sees death as a viable alternative. This is dark and moving.
Particularly enjoyed \"like old reptile skin\" and :Disenchanted fantasies\".- Phil A.
March 7th, 2020 21:04
MendedFences27 said:
Whether \"Forsaken \" in love or in life, she has reached the breaking point of suffering and sees death as a viable alternative. This is dark and moving.
Particularly enjoyed \"like old reptile skin\" and :Disenchanted fantasies\".- Phil A.
March 7th, 2020 21:04
Forsaken
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Shall I ruin the atmosphere of the poem by saying \'Should I meet her?\' (heehee).
March 7th, 2020 12:26
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Shall I ruin the atmosphere of the poem by saying \'Should I meet her?\' (heehee).
March 7th, 2020 12:26
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