Comments received on poems by Neville
Fallen Leaves Behind
dusk arising said:
As will we all be once our day is passed and no longer out on a limb... the gutter awaits!
Pinned to the school wall for a lessons interest.... to fade and fall once again.... desecrated..... move along...... it\'s worms and caterpillars next week.
August 10th, 2020 08:32
dusk arising said:
As will we all be once our day is passed and no longer out on a limb... the gutter awaits!
Pinned to the school wall for a lessons interest.... to fade and fall once again.... desecrated..... move along...... it\'s worms and caterpillars next week.
August 10th, 2020 08:32
Freckles
dusk arising said:
There is something light hearted and youthful about frekkles regardless of a ladies age. The contrast of tanned and untanned borderline so arousing on intimate revelation.
Well..... works for me anyway!
Love the instant familiarity you place in your reader with these insightful snatches of what is so easily taken for granted. It\'s as if you pluck the fruit from the tree and say \"hey, actually look at this will you\".
August 10th, 2020 05:20
dusk arising said:
There is something light hearted and youthful about frekkles regardless of a ladies age. The contrast of tanned and untanned borderline so arousing on intimate revelation.
Well..... works for me anyway!
Love the instant familiarity you place in your reader with these insightful snatches of what is so easily taken for granted. It\'s as if you pluck the fruit from the tree and say \"hey, actually look at this will you\".
August 10th, 2020 05:20
Freckles
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, the last two stanzas are some of my favourite I have read on MPS,
quirky, full of jest and winking phrases, but also a respectful tone which adds a classy touch
August 10th, 2020 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, the last two stanzas are some of my favourite I have read on MPS,
quirky, full of jest and winking phrases, but also a respectful tone which adds a classy touch
August 10th, 2020 04:59
Freckles
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - big smiles for resurrecting those intimate freedoms of sunny yesterdays Nev. - your verse neatly freckled with memories allures and stretches this reader\'s momentary blush of such recollections too..............
August 10th, 2020 04:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - big smiles for resurrecting those intimate freedoms of sunny yesterdays Nev. - your verse neatly freckled with memories allures and stretches this reader\'s momentary blush of such recollections too..............
August 10th, 2020 04:24
Freckles
orchidee said:
Oops, she had freckles where the sun don\'t shine. Well, not quite that place.
If I met her, would I discover she had freckles? Ya never know! lol. And am I talking out of that place where the sun don\'t shine?!
August 10th, 2020 04:01
orchidee said:
Oops, she had freckles where the sun don\'t shine. Well, not quite that place.
If I met her, would I discover she had freckles? Ya never know! lol. And am I talking out of that place where the sun don\'t shine?!
August 10th, 2020 04:01
Fallen Leaves Behind
MendedFences27 said:
They say you pay a price for beauty, but I doubt they had leaves in mind. As gorgeous as they are, once fallen, they become an ugly nuisance. Maybe those are human traits as well? A clever treatment on leaves. - Phil A.
August 9th, 2020 19:13
MendedFences27 said:
They say you pay a price for beauty, but I doubt they had leaves in mind. As gorgeous as they are, once fallen, they become an ugly nuisance. Maybe those are human traits as well? A clever treatment on leaves. - Phil A.
August 9th, 2020 19:13
Fallen Leaves Behind
Fay Slimm. said:
I truly admire the metaphor you use in this solemn verse Nev. - grieving the wayside fallen is human and needed but facing the whys and wherefores is yet again intriguingly left to the reader - - another treat for my favourite list...............
August 9th, 2020 02:24
Fay Slimm. said:
I truly admire the metaphor you use in this solemn verse Nev. - grieving the wayside fallen is human and needed but facing the whys and wherefores is yet again intriguingly left to the reader - - another treat for my favourite list...............
August 9th, 2020 02:24
Fallen Leaves Behind
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. Arggh, let\'s hope Autumn is not here TOO soon, picturesque as it is.
You writing about my middle name - Fossil?! lol.
August 9th, 2020 02:09
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. Arggh, let\'s hope Autumn is not here TOO soon, picturesque as it is.
You writing about my middle name - Fossil?! lol.
August 9th, 2020 02:09
Fallen Leaves Behind
Goldfinch60 said:
Ye autumn may well be around the corner but it is my favourite time of the year when you see Natures Artwork in its true and magnificent glory.
Andy
August 9th, 2020 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Ye autumn may well be around the corner but it is my favourite time of the year when you see Natures Artwork in its true and magnificent glory.
Andy
August 9th, 2020 01:49
Sun Drops
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Neville, two wonderful beings of light that give us so much happiness.
Andy
August 9th, 2020 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Neville, two wonderful beings of light that give us so much happiness.
Andy
August 9th, 2020 00:42
Sun Drops
Michael Edwards said:
Can I echo Fay\'s comments - this a real pearl of a write - much enjoyed.
August 8th, 2020 15:43
Michael Edwards said:
Can I echo Fay\'s comments - this a real pearl of a write - much enjoyed.
August 8th, 2020 15:43
Sun Drops
MendedFences27 said:
All Moonshine truly is , is reflected Sunshine, but the folklore it\'s charged with is so much more. From lunacy, to control over, fertility, luck, the wind. illnesses, and business, when all it really controls are tides. Your personifications of both the Sun and Moon bring new light to the changing of the day. - Great One - Phil A.
August 8th, 2020 11:39
MendedFences27 said:
All Moonshine truly is , is reflected Sunshine, but the folklore it\'s charged with is so much more. From lunacy, to control over, fertility, luck, the wind. illnesses, and business, when all it really controls are tides. Your personifications of both the Sun and Moon bring new light to the changing of the day. - Great One - Phil A.
August 8th, 2020 11:39
Sun Drops
orchidee said:
Is this the same gal you meet, or different gals?! lol.
August 8th, 2020 10:36
orchidee said:
Is this the same gal you meet, or different gals?! lol.
August 8th, 2020 10:36
Sun Drops
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh for the ability write short-line gems such as this one my friend. Full of engaging personification and loaded with need for the read to last longer I sit amazed at your talent for showing that less is more. Thanking you muchly Nev. for another example from which to learn.
August 8th, 2020 05:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh for the ability write short-line gems such as this one my friend. Full of engaging personification and loaded with need for the read to last longer I sit amazed at your talent for showing that less is more. Thanking you muchly Nev. for another example from which to learn.
August 8th, 2020 05:11
Something in the Air
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Neville, and such a good descrotion of some lives in these Strange Times.
Andy
August 8th, 2020 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Neville, and such a good descrotion of some lives in these Strange Times.
Andy
August 8th, 2020 00:17
Something in the Air
orchidee said:
You got another gal I should possibly meet?! heehee.
August 7th, 2020 13:02
orchidee said:
You got another gal I should possibly meet?! heehee.
August 7th, 2020 13:02
Something in the Air
MendedFences27 said:
Nicely spoken Nev. No matter where you go these days, you see the effects. As for doilies, they serve no useful purpose. They\'re terrible as a coaster, awful as a place mat, and totally dangerous as a pot holder. Well, truly enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
August 7th, 2020 10:54
MendedFences27 said:
Nicely spoken Nev. No matter where you go these days, you see the effects. As for doilies, they serve no useful purpose. They\'re terrible as a coaster, awful as a place mat, and totally dangerous as a pot holder. Well, truly enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
August 7th, 2020 10:54
Something in the Air
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen a sad picture of today\'s strange state my literary friend. Another piece to ponder on what has overtaken our once fearless race.
August 7th, 2020 04:33
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen a sad picture of today\'s strange state my literary friend. Another piece to ponder on what has overtaken our once fearless race.
August 7th, 2020 04:33
Something in the Air
L. B. Mek said:
the only other poem I recall using the word doilies (or doily to be precise), is a poem by Elizabeth Bishop titled \'Filling Station\':
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-2931
that your writing continuously reminds me of some of my favourite poems and Poet\'s, is a testament to the relatable quality and insight you write with
August 7th, 2020 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
the only other poem I recall using the word doilies (or doily to be precise), is a poem by Elizabeth Bishop titled \'Filling Station\':
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-2931
that your writing continuously reminds me of some of my favourite poems and Poet\'s, is a testament to the relatable quality and insight you write with
August 7th, 2020 04:30
Now looking Back
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant demonstration of how to instil effortless flow without using the usual poetic tools of form, rhyme etc
this reminds me of a poem by John Brehm, titled \'at the poetry reading\'
August 7th, 2020 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant demonstration of how to instil effortless flow without using the usual poetic tools of form, rhyme etc
this reminds me of a poem by John Brehm, titled \'at the poetry reading\'
August 7th, 2020 03:35
Now looking Back
Goldfinch60 said:
True love either past or present can be so meaningful to us all and more than anything else in our lives.
Andy
August 6th, 2020 04:24
Goldfinch60 said:
True love either past or present can be so meaningful to us all and more than anything else in our lives.
Andy
August 6th, 2020 04:24
Now looking Back
Fay Slimm. said:
Heart-warming words which recall love once held higher even than poetry has to be given extra respect when coming from your memory laden mind my friend. Another helping of tenderly held thoughts on romance.......... hope all is going to plan for you in that fantastic Greek paradise................x
August 6th, 2020 03:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Heart-warming words which recall love once held higher even than poetry has to be given extra respect when coming from your memory laden mind my friend. Another helping of tenderly held thoughts on romance.......... hope all is going to plan for you in that fantastic Greek paradise................x
August 6th, 2020 03:51
Beyond Giving
Neville said:
Thank you for pausing to consider my scribble my friend, much and always appreciated 😎👍
Neville
July 29th, 2020 11:40
Neville said:
Thank you for pausing to consider my scribble my friend, much and always appreciated 😎👍
Neville
July 29th, 2020 11:40
Beyond Giving
dusk arising said:
No, you cannot gift life\'s experiences and the school of hard knocks. Indeed it would be painful to witness.
Such things are for the individual as if life were a clay pot in which they mature at their own pace, some in a sunnier spot than others.
You sure know how to exercise my grey cells which I find thoroughly enjoyable.
July 28th, 2020 04:37
dusk arising said:
No, you cannot gift life\'s experiences and the school of hard knocks. Indeed it would be painful to witness.
Such things are for the individual as if life were a clay pot in which they mature at their own pace, some in a sunnier spot than others.
You sure know how to exercise my grey cells which I find thoroughly enjoyable.
July 28th, 2020 04:37
Beyond Giving
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes easing an ego out of the way to find more maturity takes personal effort as this straight reminder shows --- exceptionally perceptive these few lines my friend.
July 28th, 2020 04:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes easing an ego out of the way to find more maturity takes personal effort as this straight reminder shows --- exceptionally perceptive these few lines my friend.
July 28th, 2020 04:23
Two Weeks in July
L. B. Mek said:
really appreciate your nuanced control throughout, unravelling your narrative with subtle lines of choice phrases
immersive, sensitive and layered with poignant imagery
July 28th, 2020 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
really appreciate your nuanced control throughout, unravelling your narrative with subtle lines of choice phrases
immersive, sensitive and layered with poignant imagery
July 28th, 2020 03:35
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