Comments received on poems by Neville



Old Sea Walls
Suresh said:

Did drive through Sofia on my Eastern European trip in mid \'60s. My favorite memories are of Odessa, St. Petersburg and Budapest.
I\'m sure they have all become the global cookie cutters by now.
Great visual in your poem thou.

June 21st, 2019 10:50

Old Sea Walls
orchidee said:

A fine write Neville. I got as far as Bognor or Clacton. Are they near Bulgaria?

June 21st, 2019 02:13

Old Sea Walls
Michael Edwards said:

A super write about a country you are making me want to visit more and more. I do have an on-line artist friend in Bulgaria - which rouses my interest even more.

June 21st, 2019 01:44

Old Sea Walls
Fay Slimm. said:

Days of yore peeping again from time\'s saline jaw - and you saw it momentarily for the beauty it was - a potent story which I saw too in your admirable wording Nev.

June 21st, 2019 01:02

Life Before Bar-codes
Goldfinch60 said:

I can still remember life before adding machines, let alone computers. Slower happier days.

June 21st, 2019 00:13

Life Before Bar-codes
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes - before time sped into the confusion of what to press where and when and of course how - - on yes Nev -- - I remember it well.

June 20th, 2019 16:12

Erigeron
Fay Slimm. said:

An endearing tribute to a gem from the daisy family that graces every crack and crevice - - a lovely read Nev.

June 20th, 2019 16:06

Life Before Bar-codes
Michael Edwards said:

Ah days of steam pud and chips in newspaper - I remember what it was like.

June 20th, 2019 11:10

Life Before Bar-codes
Suresh said:

You mean when people actually had to think for themselves and remember things ....AHHHHH!!Well my memory cells were never that good... what to do

Thnx for taking me back then

June 20th, 2019 10:03

Life Before Bar-codes
dusk arising said:

Before double yellow lines, before we got old, before cashpoints and self service checkouts.... look what you\'ve started !! Actually, well done, a quick trip down a light hearted memory lane.

June 20th, 2019 08:06

Life Before Bar-codes
orchidee said:

Good write Neville. Yes, I was in a supermarket then. We had price-label \'guns\'. We were like children hiding our toys, as there were not enough guns to go round. Ridiculous! I hid mine the night before in the pet food section of the store\'s basement.
And yes - was there life before my singing?!

June 20th, 2019 02:59

Erigeron
Suresh said:

I am sure I just saw a painting from Michael that\'s well described by your poetic words.

June 19th, 2019 16:29

Erigeron
dusk arising said:

Hardy little bloomers - it still feels like winter here.

June 19th, 2019 14:13

Erigeron
Michael Edwards said:

In bloom in my garden too - fine write Neville


June 19th, 2019 08:20

Erigeron
Goldfinch60 said:

That love can fill all the cracks that come with nature and the natural world.

June 19th, 2019 03:04

Erigeron
orchidee said:

I thought you meant Fleabag! heehee. A fine write Neville.

June 19th, 2019 02:07

Let’s Call That Day a Week
Crystal Hope said:

greatly done poem.

June 18th, 2019 13:10

Let’s Call That Day a Week
dusk arising said:

All those things we\'ve talked about in our lives with so many. The more we talked, the more we learned. Do we have to be young to talk about them. Or do we need to be wise and listen to the reason people talk about the things they say. But... oh to be young and talking them through, and doing, and loving, and living... oh forget about learning and wisdom.... lets get laid!

June 18th, 2019 12:40

Let’s Call That Day a Week
Suresh said:

What\'s the point!!!!!!!!

Let\'s just enjoy each other\'s company... no taking please

June 18th, 2019 10:55

Let’s Call That Day a Week
orchidee said:

If you\'re gonna talk about those things, I\'m gonna swoon! heehee.

June 18th, 2019 01:49

Let’s Call That Day a Week
Goldfinch60 said:

May that one more day be willed with wonder joy and love.

June 18th, 2019 01:28

Let’s Call That Day a Week
Michael Edwards said:

Just keep talking - if only our politicians would just do that - better still if only they only would set aside all self-denial. Keep talking but more importantly keep listening.

June 18th, 2019 01:05

Out of Sight
Goldfinch60 said:

Those thought will be forever with you though.

June 18th, 2019 00:14

Out of Sight
Suresh said:

Those words composed are out of sight
Those words composed are true delight

You have been doing this for quite some time.

June 17th, 2019 14:44

Out of Sight
Michael Edwards said:

Another original write Neville - good work.

June 17th, 2019 10:32

Out of Sight
dusk arising said:

Were we all able to read each others thoughts then your writing would be other worldly.
Sadly your words carry the truth.

Oh the joys of springtime.

June 17th, 2019 05:50

Out of Sight
orchidee said:

You can write to me! I\'ll even pay for the stamp. You can think of me too. Just don\'t think of my singing! lol.

June 17th, 2019 05:02

Out of the Blue
Goldfinch60 said:

In life you need to let go of that which has hurt you as the good in life will always outweigh the bad.

June 17th, 2019 00:07

Out of the Blue
SerenWise said:

Very elegantly written

June 16th, 2019 23:46

Out of the Blue
dusk arising said:

I\'ll quote some famous words to respond to your fine sweet and sour words today:-
“When you are joyous, look deep into your heart and you shall find it is only that which has given you sorrow that is giving you joy.”
― Kahlil Gibran, The Prophet

June 16th, 2019 08:59



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