Comments received on poems by Neville
Aithō
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Mount Etna is a wondrous site
as are those blood orange groves!
A great nostalgic read!
It brought me back to Sicily...
for a moment!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
May 31st, 2019 06:21
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Mount Etna is a wondrous site
as are those blood orange groves!
A great nostalgic read!
It brought me back to Sicily...
for a moment!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
May 31st, 2019 06:21
Aithō
Fay Slimm. said:
Sunset (or rise) seen from a mountain comes to my mind after viewing these few haunting lines. A dream of a read................... Fay
May 31st, 2019 04:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Sunset (or rise) seen from a mountain comes to my mind after viewing these few haunting lines. A dream of a read................... Fay
May 31st, 2019 04:12
Aithō
orchidee said:
A fine write N. How do you do that \'o\' with dash on top? I must know these things! lol
May 31st, 2019 03:56
orchidee said:
A fine write N. How do you do that \'o\' with dash on top? I must know these things! lol
May 31st, 2019 03:56
The NHS Alarm Call
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
Thank you for this powerful and good write on the NHS. I worked for the NHS for a time in the area of mental health and there was a lot of good will there in this area but sadly a lack of funding as with the NHS at most times.
Sorry for the way your father was treated. Years of Tory government has not helped the NHS especially under the champion cost cutters Mr Cameron and Mr Osborne.
Keep writing
FineB
May 31st, 2019 03:49
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
Thank you for this powerful and good write on the NHS. I worked for the NHS for a time in the area of mental health and there was a lot of good will there in this area but sadly a lack of funding as with the NHS at most times.
Sorry for the way your father was treated. Years of Tory government has not helped the NHS especially under the champion cost cutters Mr Cameron and Mr Osborne.
Keep writing
FineB
May 31st, 2019 03:49
No Cage for Thee
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is there for you as it is for all of us.
Wonderful words Neville.
May 31st, 2019 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is there for you as it is for all of us.
Wonderful words Neville.
May 31st, 2019 01:31
Sans Sustenance
Fay Slimm. said:
When in need turn to imagery - - that describes me........... a telling one Nev................ x
May 30th, 2019 15:20
Fay Slimm. said:
When in need turn to imagery - - that describes me........... a telling one Nev................ x
May 30th, 2019 15:20
No Cage for Thee
Suresh said:
Love cannot be possessed, no matter how eloquently we may proclaim it, as done here
May 30th, 2019 11:57
Suresh said:
Love cannot be possessed, no matter how eloquently we may proclaim it, as done here
May 30th, 2019 11:57
No Cage for Thee
dusk arising said:
Beautiful separation of possessive romantic love from unconditional love.
If you love the Tiger, then let it be where it can be the tiger you love for within a cage it will not \'Tiger\'.
On several re-reads i really do like this and its a definite for my favourites.
May 30th, 2019 09:52
dusk arising said:
Beautiful separation of possessive romantic love from unconditional love.
If you love the Tiger, then let it be where it can be the tiger you love for within a cage it will not \'Tiger\'.
On several re-reads i really do like this and its a definite for my favourites.
May 30th, 2019 09:52
No Cage for Thee
SerenWise said:
Beautiful write, you can never lose what is truly yours, it will always return somehow
May 30th, 2019 08:34
SerenWise said:
Beautiful write, you can never lose what is truly yours, it will always return somehow
May 30th, 2019 08:34
No Cage for Thee
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a tender release would melt the need to fly free methinks - this gem of good reasons to stay in love\'s chains has love that shines from each line. This one is a fave. to read again. ........ Fay
May 30th, 2019 04:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a tender release would melt the need to fly free methinks - this gem of good reasons to stay in love\'s chains has love that shines from each line. This one is a fave. to read again. ........ Fay
May 30th, 2019 04:21
No Cage for Thee
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Neville
Such emotion in this \"I cannot have you if I own you\" wonderful poetry
Bravo!
May 30th, 2019 03:43
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Neville
Such emotion in this \"I cannot have you if I own you\" wonderful poetry
Bravo!
May 30th, 2019 03:43
The NHS Alarm Call
Goldfinch60 said:
Over the years I and my wife have had superb treatment by the NHS but as has been said sometimes it goes wrong. In the case of your father if nobody came there is no excuse.
It appears that \'some people\' not in the medical business want the NHS to fail, this we MUST stop as the NHS is such a worthy cause to save.
May 30th, 2019 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Over the years I and my wife have had superb treatment by the NHS but as has been said sometimes it goes wrong. In the case of your father if nobody came there is no excuse.
It appears that \'some people\' not in the medical business want the NHS to fail, this we MUST stop as the NHS is such a worthy cause to save.
May 30th, 2019 00:19
The NHS Alarm Call
Michael Edwards said:
I get really uptight when I hear about criticism of the NHS having spent many years defending it from unmeritorious claims. But sometimes things do go wrong or it doesn\'t get it right as seems the case here. Sorry to hear about your Father but it is uplifting to think that he was not alone and had so much love.
May 29th, 2019 14:06
Michael Edwards said:
I get really uptight when I hear about criticism of the NHS having spent many years defending it from unmeritorious claims. But sometimes things do go wrong or it doesn\'t get it right as seems the case here. Sorry to hear about your Father but it is uplifting to think that he was not alone and had so much love.
May 29th, 2019 14:06
The NHS Alarm Call
orchidee said:
Yes, mostly excellent - there was I (there am I at present too) watching super treatments from Ambulance staff on telly.
May 29th, 2019 11:13
orchidee said:
Yes, mostly excellent - there was I (there am I at present too) watching super treatments from Ambulance staff on telly.
May 29th, 2019 11:13
The NHS Alarm Call
Suresh said:
Though this was in UK, the experience is the same all over the world, and it truly doesn\'t improve with more elite or expensive locations.
If one could get the correct treatment, home is a more conducive place.
Thnx for sharing
May 29th, 2019 10:12
Suresh said:
Though this was in UK, the experience is the same all over the world, and it truly doesn\'t improve with more elite or expensive locations.
If one could get the correct treatment, home is a more conducive place.
Thnx for sharing
May 29th, 2019 10:12
The NHS Alarm Call
dusk arising said:
A bit of a lottery is NHS nursing care today. Whilst mostly excellent, when its fails, the failure is felt like a hammer blow.
May 29th, 2019 05:47
dusk arising said:
A bit of a lottery is NHS nursing care today. Whilst mostly excellent, when its fails, the failure is felt like a hammer blow.
May 29th, 2019 05:47
The NHS Alarm Call
Fay Slimm. said:
The disgraceful facts given right airing in this telling verse Neville. Hoping your father got better treatment as needed and thanks for sharing what has become a real problem --- Fay
May 29th, 2019 05:10
Fay Slimm. said:
The disgraceful facts given right airing in this telling verse Neville. Hoping your father got better treatment as needed and thanks for sharing what has become a real problem --- Fay
May 29th, 2019 05:10
Havana Skies
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sights to behold come from your words straight to my mind.
May 28th, 2019 16:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sights to behold come from your words straight to my mind.
May 28th, 2019 16:27
Havana Skies
Suresh said:
There are certain moments, the one you so poetically recalled, that are etched in memory forever, to be revisited fine and time again.
May 28th, 2019 10:35
Suresh said:
There are certain moments, the one you so poetically recalled, that are etched in memory forever, to be revisited fine and time again.
May 28th, 2019 10:35
Havana Skies
kevin browne said:
Nicely expressed, Neville, and the birds up in the sky where I live display their stunts for hunting prey with such majestic flight mobility it\'s actually amazing watching different types of birds swoop down and glide back up with the wind blowing hard it\'s difficult to land underneath your Havana skies. A super tribute to the dynamic skills both of the swallows and the swift must surely be. A beautiful, intrinsic look into bird life.
May 28th, 2019 04:10
kevin browne said:
Nicely expressed, Neville, and the birds up in the sky where I live display their stunts for hunting prey with such majestic flight mobility it\'s actually amazing watching different types of birds swoop down and glide back up with the wind blowing hard it\'s difficult to land underneath your Havana skies. A super tribute to the dynamic skills both of the swallows and the swift must surely be. A beautiful, intrinsic look into bird life.
May 28th, 2019 04:10
Havana Skies
Fay Slimm. said:
Am packing my bags as I write to experience that flight into fancy under Havana skies. Great read Neville.
May 28th, 2019 03:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Am packing my bags as I write to experience that flight into fancy under Havana skies. Great read Neville.
May 28th, 2019 03:54
Havana Skies
dusk arising said:
I slipped on my Havanna Skiis, lowered my goggles and was off down the...what... wait... this isn\'t piste, i\'m pissed.
Frig-it bird, wake up!
Methinks there are missing (politely withheld in the interest of decency) verses here Neville for there are more birds to espy than those you mention when relaxing beside a cooling pool.
However, i get the relaxing picture you create.
May 28th, 2019 03:53
dusk arising said:
I slipped on my Havanna Skiis, lowered my goggles and was off down the...what... wait... this isn\'t piste, i\'m pissed.
Frig-it bird, wake up!
Methinks there are missing (politely withheld in the interest of decency) verses here Neville for there are more birds to espy than those you mention when relaxing beside a cooling pool.
However, i get the relaxing picture you create.
May 28th, 2019 03:53
Havana Skies
orchidee said:
An eloquent write N. I\'m on me way to Havana. At least you won\'t hear me sing then. Or you in Havana already?!
May 28th, 2019 03:36
orchidee said:
An eloquent write N. I\'m on me way to Havana. At least you won\'t hear me sing then. Or you in Havana already?!
May 28th, 2019 03:36
Freedom
Goldfinch60 said:
That takes me back to the times that I used to have the occasional Disque Bleu.
May 28th, 2019 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
That takes me back to the times that I used to have the occasional Disque Bleu.
May 28th, 2019 01:00
Freedom
Michael Edwards said:
Just words - that\'s all that poetry is - but it\'s the way that you assemble them that makes a real poet - super little piece.l
May 27th, 2019 13:02
Michael Edwards said:
Just words - that\'s all that poetry is - but it\'s the way that you assemble them that makes a real poet - super little piece.l
May 27th, 2019 13:02
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