Comments received on poems by Neville
Two Harbours
Suresh said:
Very invoking of times past, eternal beauty and now broken promises.
November 18th, 2019 11:38
Suresh said:
Very invoking of times past, eternal beauty and now broken promises.
November 18th, 2019 11:38
Two Harbours
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful poem, and may I say well written!
November 18th, 2019 11:22
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful poem, and may I say well written!
November 18th, 2019 11:22
Two Harbours
Fay Slimm. said:
Two harbours could never be more achingly remembered than in this romantically tender ode - - the tale of promises made then broken wrings with regret in that final line Nev........ a heart-wrench of a read.
November 18th, 2019 09:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Two harbours could never be more achingly remembered than in this romantically tender ode - - the tale of promises made then broken wrings with regret in that final line Nev........ a heart-wrench of a read.
November 18th, 2019 09:37
War is Not for Lovers
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Neville, those that died were all loved by somebody.
November 10th, 2019 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Neville, those that died were all loved by somebody.
November 10th, 2019 00:53
War is Not for Lovers
dusk arising said:
Brilliant evocative writing. Hard hitting reality. Each of the thousands who died was a loving soul of hopes, wishes, and desires..... destined to become a number history records.
Very moving.
November 9th, 2019 15:45
dusk arising said:
Brilliant evocative writing. Hard hitting reality. Each of the thousands who died was a loving soul of hopes, wishes, and desires..... destined to become a number history records.
Very moving.
November 9th, 2019 15:45
War is Not for Lovers
Suresh said:
War is for lovers, otherwise how else would one pen such poetry
November 9th, 2019 12:08
Suresh said:
War is for lovers, otherwise how else would one pen such poetry
November 9th, 2019 12:08
War is Not for Lovers
Poetic Dan said:
War is not for lovers, although lovers do fight best
As the fire that burns within our chest, would only take arms to defend the nest
I\'ve never forgotten the first time I heard the lines, the first casualty of war, is the truth!
Beautifully written of the wars that we are still yet to learn from.
Much peace and respect
November 9th, 2019 11:40
Poetic Dan said:
War is not for lovers, although lovers do fight best
As the fire that burns within our chest, would only take arms to defend the nest
I\'ve never forgotten the first time I heard the lines, the first casualty of war, is the truth!
Beautifully written of the wars that we are still yet to learn from.
Much peace and respect
November 9th, 2019 11:40
War is Not for Lovers
Fay Slimm. said:
The appropriate picture your emotive pen paints wrings tears from my eyes - - war most certainly is not for lovers my friend........... Fay
November 9th, 2019 11:01
Fay Slimm. said:
The appropriate picture your emotive pen paints wrings tears from my eyes - - war most certainly is not for lovers my friend........... Fay
November 9th, 2019 11:01
Take Me Somewhere
Goldfinch60 said:
She obviously wants you all the time and anywhere. (It is uncomfortable on the stairs though).
November 6th, 2019 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
She obviously wants you all the time and anywhere. (It is uncomfortable on the stairs though).
November 6th, 2019 02:00
Take Me Somewhere
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
She sounds a bit needy Nev tell her to take the bus
November 5th, 2019 16:26
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
She sounds a bit needy Nev tell her to take the bus
November 5th, 2019 16:26
Take Me Somewhere
Christina8 said:
Fantastic write Neville...so playfully written! Well done!
November 5th, 2019 16:21
Christina8 said:
Fantastic write Neville...so playfully written! Well done!
November 5th, 2019 16:21
Take Me Somewhere
PoeticBiscuit said:
Sounds like someone’s enjoying themselves,
Great write!
November 5th, 2019 15:06
PoeticBiscuit said:
Sounds like someone’s enjoying themselves,
Great write!
November 5th, 2019 15:06
Take Me Somewhere
Aislinn Wilson said:
How delightfully playful. Great write.
November 5th, 2019 14:11
Aislinn Wilson said:
How delightfully playful. Great write.
November 5th, 2019 14:11
Take Me Somewhere
orchidee said:
She\'s a saucy lass - or mare! heehee. I\'m gonna dash to meet her! lol.
November 5th, 2019 12:34
orchidee said:
She\'s a saucy lass - or mare! heehee. I\'m gonna dash to meet her! lol.
November 5th, 2019 12:34
Take Me Somewhere
Fay Slimm. said:
A request by a smitten She which put so plainly cannot, in any event, be denied by a He ....... surely a lesson not to miss is to make oneself clear in all matters of hanky-panky methinks !
November 5th, 2019 11:03
Fay Slimm. said:
A request by a smitten She which put so plainly cannot, in any event, be denied by a He ....... surely a lesson not to miss is to make oneself clear in all matters of hanky-panky methinks !
November 5th, 2019 11:03
Yellow River
Suresh said:
It\'s so sad that something pure can be used for impure causes, like female abandonment - the most vile reason of all, that your words have so significantly highlighted
November 1st, 2019 23:15
Suresh said:
It\'s so sad that something pure can be used for impure causes, like female abandonment - the most vile reason of all, that your words have so significantly highlighted
November 1st, 2019 23:15
Four Letter Words
Goldfinch60 said:
So many words are used in this day and age that are totally meaningless in many situations. That fecundity should be spread to all so that the correct meaningful words are used in the right situation.
October 31st, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
So many words are used in this day and age that are totally meaningless in many situations. That fecundity should be spread to all so that the correct meaningful words are used in the right situation.
October 31st, 2019 01:42
Four Letter Words
kevin browne said:
I always thought love and hate are oppsed to each other. However, you have given me a new perspective outlook on four lettered words. There are enough and sit well deep within us all wheter its either both or either of each one in a sentence. An intriuging speculation to be gazed upon more clearly within our language and mouths..
October 30th, 2019 18:28
kevin browne said:
I always thought love and hate are oppsed to each other. However, you have given me a new perspective outlook on four lettered words. There are enough and sit well deep within us all wheter its either both or either of each one in a sentence. An intriuging speculation to be gazed upon more clearly within our language and mouths..
October 30th, 2019 18:28
Four Letter Words
dusk arising said:
Having proved my fecundity i no longer have much use for the word unless it is hoping my grandkids are fecund when the time comes.
Hate is a word i rarely use but love on the other hand i use freely and often. There are many kinds of love. Generally we learn of romantic love firstly probably because of it\'s strength. But as we age we become aware of many other forms of love.
Maybe i use the word too often, but i\'m content to continue doing as I do.
Amusing, disturbing and for me controversial.
October 30th, 2019 16:09
dusk arising said:
Having proved my fecundity i no longer have much use for the word unless it is hoping my grandkids are fecund when the time comes.
Hate is a word i rarely use but love on the other hand i use freely and often. There are many kinds of love. Generally we learn of romantic love firstly probably because of it\'s strength. But as we age we become aware of many other forms of love.
Maybe i use the word too often, but i\'m content to continue doing as I do.
Amusing, disturbing and for me controversial.
October 30th, 2019 16:09
Four Letter Words
orchidee said:
Fido was ready to bark at the four letter word, but he will settle for the nine letter one!
October 30th, 2019 11:34
orchidee said:
Fido was ready to bark at the four letter word, but he will settle for the nine letter one!
October 30th, 2019 11:34
Good and Proper
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An interesting and good write.
LOVE - a wonderful emotion but complex at times.
.
Keep writing FineB
October 30th, 2019 11:07
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An interesting and good write.
LOVE - a wonderful emotion but complex at times.
.
Keep writing FineB
October 30th, 2019 11:07
Four Letter Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - Fecundity - yes tis an appropriate eight-letter word that could out-date the offensive four..... to fecundate is to fertilize hence it could be less risky to ask if fecundation might take place instead of the usual cum-to-bed dictatorial - - ha - if that is what was meant by this intriguing appeal for more genteel ways toward giving lust a nicer expression. - great little write Nev........................ Fay.
October 30th, 2019 05:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - Fecundity - yes tis an appropriate eight-letter word that could out-date the offensive four..... to fecundate is to fertilize hence it could be less risky to ask if fecundation might take place instead of the usual cum-to-bed dictatorial - - ha - if that is what was meant by this intriguing appeal for more genteel ways toward giving lust a nicer expression. - great little write Nev........................ Fay.
October 30th, 2019 05:38
Good and Proper
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another intriguing write Neville, so much to think about.
October 29th, 2019 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another intriguing write Neville, so much to think about.
October 29th, 2019 01:22
Good and Proper
Poetic Dan said:
Talk the talk and walk the walk, let no shore be under your foot but don\'t before time runs away from you!
Loved this!
Good & proper guv!
October 28th, 2019 14:10
Poetic Dan said:
Talk the talk and walk the walk, let no shore be under your foot but don\'t before time runs away from you!
Loved this!
Good & proper guv!
October 28th, 2019 14:10
Good and Proper
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent write dear Nev., absolutely wonderful! How could a lady resist?
October 28th, 2019 12:37
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent write dear Nev., absolutely wonderful! How could a lady resist?
October 28th, 2019 12:37
Good and Proper
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh with that kind of want and need how could a lady refuse - hope she loved him good and yes proper for a happy-ever-after end to this alluring tale of real desire............. another intriguing read my friend.
October 28th, 2019 10:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh with that kind of want and need how could a lady refuse - hope she loved him good and yes proper for a happy-ever-after end to this alluring tale of real desire............. another intriguing read my friend.
October 28th, 2019 10:31
Good and Proper
dusk arising said:
Hmmm maybe she loved him more than he knew..... and saved him from another heartbreak.
I love the way you create such open verse for your reader to lose themself in. I lost myself into a creative problem solving daydream here. Poetry can be so many things to marvel at.
October 28th, 2019 10:18
dusk arising said:
Hmmm maybe she loved him more than he knew..... and saved him from another heartbreak.
I love the way you create such open verse for your reader to lose themself in. I lost myself into a creative problem solving daydream here. Poetry can be so many things to marvel at.
October 28th, 2019 10:18
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