Comments received on poems by Neville
Upon the Morrow
Goldfinch60 said:
May those words left be left in your wonderful words as well Neville.
Andy
May 28th, 2020 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
May those words left be left in your wonderful words as well Neville.
Andy
May 28th, 2020 00:59
Upon the Morrow
Shij said:
After viewing your work I feel so honoured to have been left feedback from yourself on one of my poems (I appreciate all feedback). Wow, what a talent you have! Just simply beautiful!
May 27th, 2020 15:43
Shij said:
After viewing your work I feel so honoured to have been left feedback from yourself on one of my poems (I appreciate all feedback). Wow, what a talent you have! Just simply beautiful!
May 27th, 2020 15:43
Upon the Morrow
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. You seen any \'e\'ermores\' lately!?
May 27th, 2020 11:43
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. You seen any \'e\'ermores\' lately!?
May 27th, 2020 11:43
Upon the Morrow
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah Nev -the tense and linguistic simplicity of this tender ballad displays your indisputable talent for closing in on emotion with the use of Olde English at its veritable best....... another fave to add to my list for sure...........x
May 27th, 2020 10:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah Nev -the tense and linguistic simplicity of this tender ballad displays your indisputable talent for closing in on emotion with the use of Olde English at its veritable best....... another fave to add to my list for sure...........x
May 27th, 2020 10:20
Second Best
Goldfinch60 said:
That second best allowed her offspring to come to the fore in the future.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
That second best allowed her offspring to come to the fore in the future.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 01:27
Second Best
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Aww, I thought I would be second best in singing competition - only two of us in it. But I won second prize - last as usual. lol.
May 23rd, 2020 11:24
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Aww, I thought I would be second best in singing competition - only two of us in it. But I won second prize - last as usual. lol.
May 23rd, 2020 11:24
Second Best
Fay Slimm. said:
That beauty was prettily doing what comes naturally - - - but your wrap it together so well mon ami ............... x
May 23rd, 2020 06:02
Fay Slimm. said:
That beauty was prettily doing what comes naturally - - - but your wrap it together so well mon ami ............... x
May 23rd, 2020 06:02
Second Best
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
When there’s nothing left,
second best...
IS THE BEST!
A wonderful read.
Thank you for sharing
your thoughts!
Laura
May 23rd, 2020 05:14
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
When there’s nothing left,
second best...
IS THE BEST!
A wonderful read.
Thank you for sharing
your thoughts!
Laura
May 23rd, 2020 05:14
Lockdown
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, we miss our loved ones in this time of lockdown, hopefully soon we can be with each other once more.
Andy
May 23rd, 2020 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, we miss our loved ones in this time of lockdown, hopefully soon we can be with each other once more.
Andy
May 23rd, 2020 00:30
Lockdown
Neville said:
Thank you for stopping by my dear friend... I am fine, hope you are too
Neville
May 22nd, 2020 14:20
Neville said:
Thank you for stopping by my dear friend... I am fine, hope you are too
Neville
May 22nd, 2020 14:20
Lockdown
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A fine write to read during this ‘Lockdown’.
It has certainly imprisoned us.
Let’s hope this prison sentence imposed upon us won’t be for long.
Hope you’re feeling better.
Laura
May 22nd, 2020 14:08
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A fine write to read during this ‘Lockdown’.
It has certainly imprisoned us.
Let’s hope this prison sentence imposed upon us won’t be for long.
Hope you’re feeling better.
Laura
May 22nd, 2020 14:08
Lockdown
Michael Edwards said:
Confined to barracks
waiting for a vaccine
sitting on my buttocks
cut off, alone, unseen.
May 22nd, 2020 06:52
Michael Edwards said:
Confined to barracks
waiting for a vaccine
sitting on my buttocks
cut off, alone, unseen.
May 22nd, 2020 06:52
Lockdown
mystic flower said:
Beautiful piece and May this isolation days end soon
Mystic
May 22nd, 2020 06:11
mystic flower said:
Beautiful piece and May this isolation days end soon
Mystic
May 22nd, 2020 06:11
Lockdown
Fay Slimm. said:
Dotted with love-names this view of lockdown sounds like the perfect romantic answer to boredom of isolation - -- applause for the love- name-assonance my gentle amigo.
May 22nd, 2020 04:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Dotted with love-names this view of lockdown sounds like the perfect romantic answer to boredom of isolation - -- applause for the love- name-assonance my gentle amigo.
May 22nd, 2020 04:44
The Duck Billed Platypus
Neville said:
Ya got me laughing and cussin all the way to the breakfastsicus table, which is andycus that’s where I was aiming for...
Cheers my friend,
Neville
May 22nd, 2020 02:43
Neville said:
Ya got me laughing and cussin all the way to the breakfastsicus table, which is andycus that’s where I was aiming for...
Cheers my friend,
Neville
May 22nd, 2020 02:43
The Duck Billed Platypus
Goldfinch60 said:
Into the shadowicus
went the platipus
hiding from othersicus
tile he was fedicus.
Andycus
May 21st, 2020 23:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Into the shadowicus
went the platipus
hiding from othersicus
tile he was fedicus.
Andycus
May 21st, 2020 23:56
The Duck Billed Platypus
Michael Edwards said:
Why did the duck bill the platypus?
couldn\'t he pay
has he gone away
do you miss him quite a loticus?
May 21st, 2020 16:33
Michael Edwards said:
Why did the duck bill the platypus?
couldn\'t he pay
has he gone away
do you miss him quite a loticus?
May 21st, 2020 16:33
The Duck Billed Platypus
Fay Slimm. said:
Am searching round now-a-cus for your missing platypus and should I access it will send it of courseicus by that fabulous quick-as-a-flashy
Red-Crossicus for to stem your unhappicus......stay in to rest and hoping you soon get well- - cos I wantaknow yu is smilin\' agen my funnypus friend..................x
May 21st, 2020 07:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Am searching round now-a-cus for your missing platypus and should I access it will send it of courseicus by that fabulous quick-as-a-flashy
Red-Crossicus for to stem your unhappicus......stay in to rest and hoping you soon get well- - cos I wantaknow yu is smilin\' agen my funnypus friend..................x
May 21st, 2020 07:13
More Words
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write and so very true, words can abound within you but as soon as the pen comes out they seem to disappear.
Andy
May 21st, 2020 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write and so very true, words can abound within you but as soon as the pen comes out they seem to disappear.
Andy
May 21st, 2020 00:27
More Words
orchidee said:
These words ain\'t stinging me, not hurting me. Well they would be, if they was in a wasp\'s nest, and I reached in to fetch them - as I do, of course!
May 20th, 2020 06:45
orchidee said:
These words ain\'t stinging me, not hurting me. Well they would be, if they was in a wasp\'s nest, and I reached in to fetch them - as I do, of course!
May 20th, 2020 06:45
More Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love the measured rhyme in these seductive lines describing the Muse who flippantly uses our minds -- a piece of introspection from your pen always takes me to another plane - great stuff again Nev.
May 20th, 2020 05:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love the measured rhyme in these seductive lines describing the Muse who flippantly uses our minds -- a piece of introspection from your pen always takes me to another plane - great stuff again Nev.
May 20th, 2020 05:04
Too Late in the Day
orchidee said:
Is it too late for me to sing? It\'s the next day now, after my first comment!
What\'s that you say? \'It\'s not too late; just don\'t let me hear it!\'
May 19th, 2020 01:52
orchidee said:
Is it too late for me to sing? It\'s the next day now, after my first comment!
What\'s that you say? \'It\'s not too late; just don\'t let me hear it!\'
May 19th, 2020 01:52
Too Late in the Day
Goldfinch60 said:
There is so much gratitude in our lives that was forgotten during the time of existence of some loved ones.
Andy
May 19th, 2020 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
There is so much gratitude in our lives that was forgotten during the time of existence of some loved ones.
Andy
May 19th, 2020 00:15
Too Late in the Day
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. It was not too late in the day for me to read this, cos I read it in the morning! Did I? lol.
May 18th, 2020 13:59
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. It was not too late in the day for me to read this, cos I read it in the morning! Did I? lol.
May 18th, 2020 13:59
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