Comments received on poems by Neville
Come-a-Day
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I truly enjoyed reading this well written poem...
a poem with a wealth of imagery. If a painter were to paint your scripted words, it would be a painting to behold.
An Excellent Piece.
Thank you for sharing your inimitable poetic pen !
All the best
Laura🌻
September 29th, 2020 00:57
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I truly enjoyed reading this well written poem...
a poem with a wealth of imagery. If a painter were to paint your scripted words, it would be a painting to behold.
An Excellent Piece.
Thank you for sharing your inimitable poetic pen !
All the best
Laura🌻
September 29th, 2020 00:57
Come-a-Day
Goldfinch60 said:
That day will come but hopefully not yet as there is so much life to live but you will always know that person will be there for you - as I do.
Andy
September 29th, 2020 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
That day will come but hopefully not yet as there is so much life to live but you will always know that person will be there for you - as I do.
Andy
September 29th, 2020 00:41
Making His Way Home
Goldfinch60 said:
Those answers will be there once your beliefs have been fulfilled.
Andy
September 29th, 2020 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Those answers will be there once your beliefs have been fulfilled.
Andy
September 29th, 2020 00:15
Making His Way Home
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes familiarity becomes the dominant desire. Aging brings a comfort when familiar things are nearby. A return to an an older love can be enhanced by memories and the accustomed approach. As to \"challenging his beliefs,\" the past love now seems a selfish indulgence. \"Truth,\" is the only answer. The \"love song\" will be finished once the harmony is complete. Terrific poem. - Phil A.
September 28th, 2020 16:12
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes familiarity becomes the dominant desire. Aging brings a comfort when familiar things are nearby. A return to an an older love can be enhanced by memories and the accustomed approach. As to \"challenging his beliefs,\" the past love now seems a selfish indulgence. \"Truth,\" is the only answer. The \"love song\" will be finished once the harmony is complete. Terrific poem. - Phil A.
September 28th, 2020 16:12
Making His Way Home
Fay Slimm. said:
Love songs need a finish and home seems the place in which they like to end - - a sensitive story of losing direction before finding the right door again......... loved the lilt and the flow of this little gem Nev..........x
September 28th, 2020 08:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Love songs need a finish and home seems the place in which they like to end - - a sensitive story of losing direction before finding the right door again......... loved the lilt and the flow of this little gem Nev..........x
September 28th, 2020 08:17
Sleeper
L. B. Mek said:
I can re-read this ten times and find ten new elements to rave about, I admit there is an element to your writing that makes it impossible for me to be impartial in judging its merits, but who cares anyway - I\'m just a simple fan my friend,
brilliant!
September 28th, 2020 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
I can re-read this ten times and find ten new elements to rave about, I admit there is an element to your writing that makes it impossible for me to be impartial in judging its merits, but who cares anyway - I\'m just a simple fan my friend,
brilliant!
September 28th, 2020 05:01
Discarded 2
L. B. Mek said:
I am a fan of your writes, voicing those stripped back and raw wandering thought\'s - simplified for your readers consumable ease,
Value: must be questioned within each afforded avenue, what is worth without comparison or that dwindling timer in the corner of our eyes...
brilliant, just my cup of tea of inevitably distorted: self-introspection musings
September 28th, 2020 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
I am a fan of your writes, voicing those stripped back and raw wandering thought\'s - simplified for your readers consumable ease,
Value: must be questioned within each afforded avenue, what is worth without comparison or that dwindling timer in the corner of our eyes...
brilliant, just my cup of tea of inevitably distorted: self-introspection musings
September 28th, 2020 04:24
Discarded 2
MendedFences27 said:
What happens to all the thoughts that have been? Some are memorialized in printed form, but what happens to those when paper and ink give way to E-books etc.. Someday in the future there will be no memory of Shakespere etc .. Is there somewhere in the Universe where all the thoughts of Mankind reside?
Enough, all this means is that your poem causes us all to stop and think. Thus, there must be truth within it. Other than that, I\'m feeling like a \"discarded cup\" = Phil A.
September 27th, 2020 18:41
MendedFences27 said:
What happens to all the thoughts that have been? Some are memorialized in printed form, but what happens to those when paper and ink give way to E-books etc.. Someday in the future there will be no memory of Shakespere etc .. Is there somewhere in the Universe where all the thoughts of Mankind reside?
Enough, all this means is that your poem causes us all to stop and think. Thus, there must be truth within it. Other than that, I\'m feeling like a \"discarded cup\" = Phil A.
September 27th, 2020 18:41
Discarded 2
Dove said:
N ever shall you be forgotten
E very penned poem
V iewed and
I nscribed upon these walls, shall
L ive in our memories
L ong shall they comfort Us, for
E ternity and beyond
September 27th, 2020 06:55
Dove said:
N ever shall you be forgotten
E very penned poem
V iewed and
I nscribed upon these walls, shall
L ive in our memories
L ong shall they comfort Us, for
E ternity and beyond
September 27th, 2020 06:55
Discarded 2
orchidee said:
You knows I won\'t forget ya! lol.
Pity I shall be remembered for my singing, but that can\'t be helped! hehee.
September 27th, 2020 05:17
orchidee said:
You knows I won\'t forget ya! lol.
Pity I shall be remembered for my singing, but that can\'t be helped! hehee.
September 27th, 2020 05:17
Discarded 2
Michael Edwards said:
Even with family once we are no longer within living memory we are no longer but interesting information. I guess at least some of my art and poetry will outlive me. Sombre thoughts for a Sunday. All this aside a great write N.
September 27th, 2020 03:59
Michael Edwards said:
Even with family once we are no longer within living memory we are no longer but interesting information. I guess at least some of my art and poetry will outlive me. Sombre thoughts for a Sunday. All this aside a great write N.
September 27th, 2020 03:59
Discarded 2
Fay Slimm. said:
The love and care shown will be remembered by those who received when distressed our needed help whatever means used will last forever in hearts and minds if love was behind any action - - a priceless reminder from your insightful pen Nev that naught is discarded that matters to at least one someone somewhere...........x
September 27th, 2020 03:54
Fay Slimm. said:
The love and care shown will be remembered by those who received when distressed our needed help whatever means used will last forever in hearts and minds if love was behind any action - - a priceless reminder from your insightful pen Nev that naught is discarded that matters to at least one someone somewhere...........x
September 27th, 2020 03:54
Discarded 2
Goldfinch60 said:
We may not be known by all but will be known and loved by those who knew us - that is what is important.
Good one Neville.
Andy
September 27th, 2020 03:29
Goldfinch60 said:
We may not be known by all but will be known and loved by those who knew us - that is what is important.
Good one Neville.
Andy
September 27th, 2020 03:29
Sleeper
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive write Neville, she loved them \'til the end though.
Andy
September 27th, 2020 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive write Neville, she loved them \'til the end though.
Andy
September 27th, 2020 00:48
Sleeper
MendedFences27 said:
Self sacrifice for what? A blatant waste of human life. A sad story indeed and I feel one regretted by all concerned.
You have given this incident a sense of meaning and of love although both are lost in the finale.
\"We called it slaughter\" is closer to the truth. Giving this a clear enlightenment may save a life or two. Heavy poetry to be sure. It takes courage to write of such things.- Phil A.
September 26th, 2020 13:58
MendedFences27 said:
Self sacrifice for what? A blatant waste of human life. A sad story indeed and I feel one regretted by all concerned.
You have given this incident a sense of meaning and of love although both are lost in the finale.
\"We called it slaughter\" is closer to the truth. Giving this a clear enlightenment may save a life or two. Heavy poetry to be sure. It takes courage to write of such things.- Phil A.
September 26th, 2020 13:58
Sleeper
Dove said:
Interesting there! Deep and profound! You sure weave some supreme tales!
A hint of mystery always, love it though a bit sad
September 26th, 2020 10:43
Dove said:
Interesting there! Deep and profound! You sure weave some supreme tales!
A hint of mystery always, love it though a bit sad
September 26th, 2020 10:43
All the Ends of Me
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerful imagery makes this write outstanding with its poetic appeal that bruises from dying relationships can be more than painful and those who \"savour\" such aches need plain reminders of who holds most blame. A read to view over again in my faves ........x
September 26th, 2020 03:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerful imagery makes this write outstanding with its poetic appeal that bruises from dying relationships can be more than painful and those who \"savour\" such aches need plain reminders of who holds most blame. A read to view over again in my faves ........x
September 26th, 2020 03:01
All the Ends of Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words have so much depth in them Neville, only a poet can write with such emotion.
Andy
September 26th, 2020 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words have so much depth in them Neville, only a poet can write with such emotion.
Andy
September 26th, 2020 01:34
All the Ends of Me
MendedFences27 said:
\"Bruised\" it seems by a shameless lady of \"sailors and serfs n by lords\" and other indiscretions. Don\'t we all encounter such as her in life and end up a sea of \"contusions\" or worse yet \"a poet.\"
At least the \"poet\" spoke in artistic terms and never mentioned names. A \"poet\" speaks truth and uses words like brush strokes. I will be hanging this one in my gallery. - Phil A.
September 25th, 2020 19:09
MendedFences27 said:
\"Bruised\" it seems by a shameless lady of \"sailors and serfs n by lords\" and other indiscretions. Don\'t we all encounter such as her in life and end up a sea of \"contusions\" or worse yet \"a poet.\"
At least the \"poet\" spoke in artistic terms and never mentioned names. A \"poet\" speaks truth and uses words like brush strokes. I will be hanging this one in my gallery. - Phil A.
September 25th, 2020 19:09
Just Supposing
Dove said:
Well Bambi taught me! “If you can’t say anything nice don’t say anything at all”
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September 24th, 2020 14:00
Dove said:
Well Bambi taught me! “If you can’t say anything nice don’t say anything at all”
🤐
September 24th, 2020 14:00
Just Supposing
L. B. Mek said:
I feel USA has lost 8 years to a devolving political system of underhanded smearing campaigns: 4 wasted by reds blocking anything blues tried to do in Obama\'s last term and this last four focused mainly on strategically divisive appointments and misdirection tricks: that \'just suppose\' we\'re all gona fall for their archaic ways,
good write
September 24th, 2020 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
I feel USA has lost 8 years to a devolving political system of underhanded smearing campaigns: 4 wasted by reds blocking anything blues tried to do in Obama\'s last term and this last four focused mainly on strategically divisive appointments and misdirection tricks: that \'just suppose\' we\'re all gona fall for their archaic ways,
good write
September 24th, 2020 04:15
Just Supposing
orchidee said:
Well, I don\'t know. It don\'t seem apt to say \'A fine write/good write\'.
Who to trust? Who to believe?
Well, as I said - can we trust one with such a dodgy barnet?!
In a comedy, one said \'Oh, I dunno if I could work for someone who wears red trousers!\' lol.
Looking on the outward appearance - not a good idea in real life.
September 24th, 2020 01:55
orchidee said:
Well, I don\'t know. It don\'t seem apt to say \'A fine write/good write\'.
Who to trust? Who to believe?
Well, as I said - can we trust one with such a dodgy barnet?!
In a comedy, one said \'Oh, I dunno if I could work for someone who wears red trousers!\' lol.
Looking on the outward appearance - not a good idea in real life.
September 24th, 2020 01:55
Just Supposing
Fay Slimm. said:
Too true that I can think of one who I seem to see right through the more he proposes new control - - he has a mop of blond wig and he talks total gibberish........x
September 23rd, 2020 13:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Too true that I can think of one who I seem to see right through the more he proposes new control - - he has a mop of blond wig and he talks total gibberish........x
September 23rd, 2020 13:11
Bruises
MendedFences27 said:
Wow, such deviant love, or abuse, but here seems a mutual endeavor, yet there appears to be no permanence in any of her relationships. \"Sincere and the most considerate of lovers,\" surely are hard to find. (maybe not.) A shaded poem from the darker side of love were we all fear to tread. Such desire for pain, to me, spells a twisted mentality, and yet for sure it exists. You have gently brought it out into the open. A terrific write on a most dark subject. - Phil A.
September 20th, 2020 11:13
MendedFences27 said:
Wow, such deviant love, or abuse, but here seems a mutual endeavor, yet there appears to be no permanence in any of her relationships. \"Sincere and the most considerate of lovers,\" surely are hard to find. (maybe not.) A shaded poem from the darker side of love were we all fear to tread. Such desire for pain, to me, spells a twisted mentality, and yet for sure it exists. You have gently brought it out into the open. A terrific write on a most dark subject. - Phil A.
September 20th, 2020 11:13
Bruises
Dove said:
Well written! Harsh realities laced with a bit
Of femininity and hopes!
Tis really sad, women have to endure
Red Black and Blue marks!
September 20th, 2020 09:00
Dove said:
Well written! Harsh realities laced with a bit
Of femininity and hopes!
Tis really sad, women have to endure
Red Black and Blue marks!
September 20th, 2020 09:00
Bruises
jarcher54 said:
Covered in them eh? That explains the sunglasses and folded arms! Some of the worst bruises don\'t show on the skin of course. But they still get covered up don\'t they.
September 20th, 2020 07:23
jarcher54 said:
Covered in them eh? That explains the sunglasses and folded arms! Some of the worst bruises don\'t show on the skin of course. But they still get covered up don\'t they.
September 20th, 2020 07:23
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