Comments received on poems by Neville
When I Find You
FineB said:
Wow Neville,
That is a good write.
Very passionate.
Keep writing FineB
October 27th, 2019 14:18
FineB said:
Wow Neville,
That is a good write.
Very passionate.
Keep writing FineB
October 27th, 2019 14:18
When I Find You
Suresh said:
No matter how I say it, there\'s no way to avoid eroticism - AAAHHHH!!!
what a wetdream, sorry, I meant daydream.
October 27th, 2019 09:59
Suresh said:
No matter how I say it, there\'s no way to avoid eroticism - AAAHHHH!!!
what a wetdream, sorry, I meant daydream.
October 27th, 2019 09:59
When I Find You
orchidee said:
Coooee, look no futher. I\'m here! Then again, I always am here - like a bad......smell, no, bad penny! lol.
October 27th, 2019 02:21
orchidee said:
Coooee, look no futher. I\'m here! Then again, I always am here - like a bad......smell, no, bad penny! lol.
October 27th, 2019 02:21
When I Find You
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see so many meanings in this write Neville - clever write.
October 27th, 2019 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see so many meanings in this write Neville - clever write.
October 27th, 2019 01:55
When I Find You
kevin browne said:
Is this an innuendo or are you just flirting with your pen...???
October 27th, 2019 00:47
kevin browne said:
Is this an innuendo or are you just flirting with your pen...???
October 27th, 2019 00:47
Indecently Yours
Christina8 said:
Oh my! Glad you ticked the box, lol! A clever write, so agree with Fay on this one. An absolutely wonderful job, Nev!
October 26th, 2019 14:13
Christina8 said:
Oh my! Glad you ticked the box, lol! A clever write, so agree with Fay on this one. An absolutely wonderful job, Nev!
October 26th, 2019 14:13
Indecently Yours
Suresh said:
Poet choose words to express minds ensemble of intrigue- leaving readers salavating
October 26th, 2019 14:08
Suresh said:
Poet choose words to express minds ensemble of intrigue- leaving readers salavating
October 26th, 2019 14:08
Indecently Yours
Neville said:
Thank you Fay.... always appreciated no end... N
October 23rd, 2019 04:42
Neville said:
Thank you Fay.... always appreciated no end... N
October 23rd, 2019 04:42
Indecently Yours
Fay Slimm. said:
Have to agree my dear Nev. that bound and tethered together these poetic lines reveal no way out for those indecently glued.....fantastic the turning of chosen words into creation of different ideas in this clever write.
October 23rd, 2019 03:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Have to agree my dear Nev. that bound and tethered together these poetic lines reveal no way out for those indecently glued.....fantastic the turning of chosen words into creation of different ideas in this clever write.
October 23rd, 2019 03:44
Always Yours
Suresh said:
doubt not a single word or line,
for this love stood the test of time
October 23rd, 2019 02:27
Suresh said:
doubt not a single word or line,
for this love stood the test of time
October 23rd, 2019 02:27
Always Yours
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a very superbly expressed poem and it\'s awesome how you convey the unfettered nature of your love. It\'s a fine artsy free verse in superb meter. Kudos.
Nice to read from your fab inking again,
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
October 22nd, 2019 07:41
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a very superbly expressed poem and it\'s awesome how you convey the unfettered nature of your love. It\'s a fine artsy free verse in superb meter. Kudos.
Nice to read from your fab inking again,
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
October 22nd, 2019 07:41
Always Yours
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A wonderful lovely write about the joys of love.
Keep writing FineB
October 21st, 2019 14:58
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A wonderful lovely write about the joys of love.
Keep writing FineB
October 21st, 2019 14:58
Always Yours
Goldfinch60 said:
A very fortunate person in your life Neville.
October 20th, 2019 10:26
Goldfinch60 said:
A very fortunate person in your life Neville.
October 20th, 2019 10:26
Always Yours
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh is a letter for a fortunate lady to keep forever -- unconditional love is rare and must be infinitely treasured when given - you describe it so well in this telling verse Nev.
October 20th, 2019 06:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh is a letter for a fortunate lady to keep forever -- unconditional love is rare and must be infinitely treasured when given - you describe it so well in this telling verse Nev.
October 20th, 2019 06:45
Time Past
Suresh said:
-never lost, only forgotten, but then if everything is recalled, maybe we all go mad!
October 20th, 2019 00:34
Suresh said:
-never lost, only forgotten, but then if everything is recalled, maybe we all go mad!
October 20th, 2019 00:34
Time Past
orchidee said:
I\'ll dig up the past for ya- going back millions of years probably. I remember when...…. oh no, not another lecture for hours! lol.
You can tell if you\'re about to be bored to death sometimes, when ya hear those fateful words.
October 19th, 2019 11:27
orchidee said:
I\'ll dig up the past for ya- going back millions of years probably. I remember when...…. oh no, not another lecture for hours! lol.
You can tell if you\'re about to be bored to death sometimes, when ya hear those fateful words.
October 19th, 2019 11:27
Time Past
Fay Slimm. said:
True my friend that time past is never past to those sort of folks - -- - good flow to these few words. .......... Fay
October 19th, 2019 07:53
Fay Slimm. said:
True my friend that time past is never past to those sort of folks - -- - good flow to these few words. .......... Fay
October 19th, 2019 07:53
Breaking Bread
Goldfinch60 said:
Breaking bread with friends or strangers is so rewarding in that you are sharing something in common with people who have trod a different path.
October 18th, 2019 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Breaking bread with friends or strangers is so rewarding in that you are sharing something in common with people who have trod a different path.
October 18th, 2019 00:30
Breaking Bread
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A loaf of Bread
A Glass of Wine
And YOU beside my side !
BRIAN HERE NEVILLE - Thanks for caring & sharing
There is something very Cathartic (& Spiritual even ?)
about *Breaking Bread* with a FRIEND or a STRANGER !
ANGELA & I met at a Dance - BUT - It wasnt the SLOW
DANCES that sparked our ROMANCE - But when we
*Broke Bread Together* and swapped experiences
@ Buffet Time ! We also shared a glass of RIOJA
(which is Her Dads Business) and conversed in
Spanish which is both our Second Language. BUT
something special happend when I broke a CRUSTY
COB (with my hands) buttered it and gave her half
to eat with her SOUP (and I with mine) when something
special passed between us. We still do it when SOUP &
CRUSTY COBS are on the MENU - AMEN !
BLESSINGS & PEACE & JOY
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Please check our POEMS - Thanks !
October 17th, 2019 17:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A loaf of Bread
A Glass of Wine
And YOU beside my side !
BRIAN HERE NEVILLE - Thanks for caring & sharing
There is something very Cathartic (& Spiritual even ?)
about *Breaking Bread* with a FRIEND or a STRANGER !
ANGELA & I met at a Dance - BUT - It wasnt the SLOW
DANCES that sparked our ROMANCE - But when we
*Broke Bread Together* and swapped experiences
@ Buffet Time ! We also shared a glass of RIOJA
(which is Her Dads Business) and conversed in
Spanish which is both our Second Language. BUT
something special happend when I broke a CRUSTY
COB (with my hands) buttered it and gave her half
to eat with her SOUP (and I with mine) when something
special passed between us. We still do it when SOUP &
CRUSTY COBS are on the MENU - AMEN !
BLESSINGS & PEACE & JOY
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Please check our POEMS - Thanks !
October 17th, 2019 17:05
Breaking Bread
Michael Edwards said:
Well expressed
well written
well red.
Now let\'s break that bread
October 17th, 2019 11:22
Michael Edwards said:
Well expressed
well written
well red.
Now let\'s break that bread
October 17th, 2019 11:22
Breaking Bread
Fay Slimm. said:
Pathos runs through these lines of invitation and what a mantra to chose is the breaking of bread together for lasting friendship - an really emotive read Nev............
October 17th, 2019 05:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Pathos runs through these lines of invitation and what a mantra to chose is the breaking of bread together for lasting friendship - an really emotive read Nev............
October 17th, 2019 05:41
Breaking Bread
orchidee said:
I thought you was having Communion there - bread and wine?!
At one church I was flummoxed. They asked \'Are you receiving?\' Am I a radio signal? But they meant do I intend to receive the bread and wine today?
October 17th, 2019 05:40
orchidee said:
I thought you was having Communion there - bread and wine?!
At one church I was flummoxed. They asked \'Are you receiving?\' Am I a radio signal? But they meant do I intend to receive the bread and wine today?
October 17th, 2019 05:40
Breaking Bread
dusk arising said:
A message of companionship offered to a traveller upon their own journey to destiny.
Somehow this is a very comforting read.
Reflecting upon my thoughts I realise that I actually do regard all life forms in this way. But i guess that\'s just a part of faith in reincarnation.
What a marvel it could be to be reincarnated, with a conscience, as a tree or a coral.
October 17th, 2019 04:35
dusk arising said:
A message of companionship offered to a traveller upon their own journey to destiny.
Somehow this is a very comforting read.
Reflecting upon my thoughts I realise that I actually do regard all life forms in this way. But i guess that\'s just a part of faith in reincarnation.
What a marvel it could be to be reincarnated, with a conscience, as a tree or a coral.
October 17th, 2019 04:35
« Return to the profile of Neville
