Comments received on poems by Neville
Assessing the Blues
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Neville, there is so much we can do with words.
October 2nd, 2019 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Neville, there is so much we can do with words.
October 2nd, 2019 00:52
Assessing the Blues
Michael Edwards said:
Purples, mauves etc but true blue is the rarest colour in flowers - another rare write N.
October 1st, 2019 13:01
Michael Edwards said:
Purples, mauves etc but true blue is the rarest colour in flowers - another rare write N.
October 1st, 2019 13:01
Assessing the Blues
dusk arising said:
HaHa great play with words and brings a big grin to my face.
Not just a simple play though is it. There\'s a meaningful \"I\'ve got your game weighed up\" message loud and clear here telling \"you ain\'t fooling me hun\".
Clever and shrewd.
October 1st, 2019 10:02
dusk arising said:
HaHa great play with words and brings a big grin to my face.
Not just a simple play though is it. There\'s a meaningful \"I\'ve got your game weighed up\" message loud and clear here telling \"you ain\'t fooling me hun\".
Clever and shrewd.
October 1st, 2019 10:02
Assessing the Blues
Clara said:
Such skill... I look forward to reading your poems each day N. Great play on words.
October 1st, 2019 06:49
Clara said:
Such skill... I look forward to reading your poems each day N. Great play on words.
October 1st, 2019 06:49
Assessing the Blues
Christina8 said:
This is a great play on words....a very intelligent read for the first one of the morning...Thanks for that! :)
October 1st, 2019 06:14
Christina8 said:
This is a great play on words....a very intelligent read for the first one of the morning...Thanks for that! :)
October 1st, 2019 06:14
Assessing the Blues
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Words in context...
Nice play on words!
I don’t consider myself blue most of the time...nor red/read all of the time!
I enjoyed reading this play on words!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
October 1st, 2019 06:07
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Words in context...
Nice play on words!
I don’t consider myself blue most of the time...nor red/read all of the time!
I enjoyed reading this play on words!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
October 1st, 2019 06:07
Assessing the Blues
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A newspaper is read and thatch blank and white,,, I am confused are you.
Great inquisitive piece Neville
October 1st, 2019 05:07
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A newspaper is read and thatch blank and white,,, I am confused are you.
Great inquisitive piece Neville
October 1st, 2019 05:07
Assessing the Blues
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - a round of applause after reading this poetic play on words my clever friend. If I ever get blue I will read this one again .......... thanking you muchly for my big smile.
October 1st, 2019 05:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - a round of applause after reading this poetic play on words my clever friend. If I ever get blue I will read this one again .......... thanking you muchly for my big smile.
October 1st, 2019 05:00
Wishes
Goldfinch60 said:
Wish we had.... , so many things that we could have done but at least some of those wishes happened otherwise you would not be wishing for more. Wonderful emotive write Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2019 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Wish we had.... , so many things that we could have done but at least some of those wishes happened otherwise you would not be wishing for more. Wonderful emotive write Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2019 00:46
Wishes
Bragee said:
Enjoy life because time is the only thing we can never get back.
September 30th, 2019 15:39
Bragee said:
Enjoy life because time is the only thing we can never get back.
September 30th, 2019 15:39
Wishes
dusk arising said:
My old ma used to say quite often \"If wishes were horses, then beggars would ride\".
Born in 1909 what a different world she lived thru her 98 years.
Your piece gave me great reflection. Wishes eh?
September 30th, 2019 14:09
dusk arising said:
My old ma used to say quite often \"If wishes were horses, then beggars would ride\".
Born in 1909 what a different world she lived thru her 98 years.
Your piece gave me great reflection. Wishes eh?
September 30th, 2019 14:09
Wishes
Clara said:
Oh this is truly a reminder to not be trapped in the building of a life but to actually live it and enjoy it with the ones you love. Lovely wishful poem N. Made me smile yet feel sad at the same time.
September 30th, 2019 11:44
Clara said:
Oh this is truly a reminder to not be trapped in the building of a life but to actually live it and enjoy it with the ones you love. Lovely wishful poem N. Made me smile yet feel sad at the same time.
September 30th, 2019 11:44
Wishes
orchidee said:
Pop round then - there\'s a pond with ducks not too far from us! We\'ll go and feed them. Good write N.
September 30th, 2019 10:53
orchidee said:
Pop round then - there\'s a pond with ducks not too far from us! We\'ll go and feed them. Good write N.
September 30th, 2019 10:53
Wishes
Michael Edwards said:
That goes for all of us - so busy building a career and so little time to spend - if only....!
September 30th, 2019 08:53
Michael Edwards said:
That goes for all of us - so busy building a career and so little time to spend - if only....!
September 30th, 2019 08:53
Wishes
Christina8 said:
A very touching write! I think we all share a few of these poignant wishes....time passes all too soon.
September 30th, 2019 06:32
Christina8 said:
A very touching write! I think we all share a few of these poignant wishes....time passes all too soon.
September 30th, 2019 06:32
Wishes
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh those wishes when time has had its results -- a poem touching the hearts of all who wished the same things my friend.............. such a poignancy should be shared and thank you for posting these words.............. Fay
September 30th, 2019 04:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh those wishes when time has had its results -- a poem touching the hearts of all who wished the same things my friend.............. such a poignancy should be shared and thank you for posting these words.............. Fay
September 30th, 2019 04:54
Childish Smiles
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but do I detect further machinations to come.
September 30th, 2019 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but do I detect further machinations to come.
September 30th, 2019 00:47
Childish Smiles
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It\'s a kinda magic
Well captured Neville
September 29th, 2019 15:41
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It\'s a kinda magic
Well captured Neville
September 29th, 2019 15:41
Childish Smiles
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
“Childish Smiles”
Endearing...
to say the least!
A wonderful write!
~Laura~
September 29th, 2019 08:20
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
“Childish Smiles”
Endearing...
to say the least!
A wonderful write!
~Laura~
September 29th, 2019 08:20
Childish Smiles
Fay Slimm. said:
Sweet memories run through these few lines giving a most appealing read. I can relate to the stealing of minds with short-lasting dreams my friend............................ Fay
September 29th, 2019 04:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Sweet memories run through these few lines giving a most appealing read. I can relate to the stealing of minds with short-lasting dreams my friend............................ Fay
September 29th, 2019 04:42
Yellow River
Goldfinch60 said:
A very sad emotive write, it is so sad that so many were killed in this way.
September 29th, 2019 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
A very sad emotive write, it is so sad that so many were killed in this way.
September 29th, 2019 01:49
Yellow River
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
This is a powerful sad write! Thank you for sharing and reminding us that there is cruelty in this world...unfortunately!
~Laura~
September 28th, 2019 15:33
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
This is a powerful sad write! Thank you for sharing and reminding us that there is cruelty in this world...unfortunately!
~Laura~
September 28th, 2019 15:33
Yellow River
Clara said:
Wow. I read this through a couple of times. I must admit and I don\'t know much about it but I am definitely going to look into this. Really well written and expressed considering the subject matter at hand. Greatly impressed N.
September 28th, 2019 13:45
Clara said:
Wow. I read this through a couple of times. I must admit and I don\'t know much about it but I am definitely going to look into this. Really well written and expressed considering the subject matter at hand. Greatly impressed N.
September 28th, 2019 13:45
Yellow River
kevin browne said:
I see you evolving with greatness everytime I get to read your work. This is a good fine and understandable piece...
September 28th, 2019 12:09
kevin browne said:
I see you evolving with greatness everytime I get to read your work. This is a good fine and understandable piece...
September 28th, 2019 12:09
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