Comments received on poems by Neville
Nob Hill Hotel Ca
Suresh said:
I too have enjoyed the Fairmont several times, and the regality and pageantry is once represented.
Thanks for the memories.
June 13th, 2020 21:13
Suresh said:
I too have enjoyed the Fairmont several times, and the regality and pageantry is once represented.
Thanks for the memories.
June 13th, 2020 21:13
Kanreki
Suresh said:
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your words, but I also wanted to understand the depth behind them. I looked up the meaning behind all the Japanese words and symbolisims, and that only made the poem that much more interesting.
June 11th, 2020 18:50
Suresh said:
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your words, but I also wanted to understand the depth behind them. I looked up the meaning behind all the Japanese words and symbolisims, and that only made the poem that much more interesting.
June 11th, 2020 18:50
Climax
Suresh said:
See how all that smoking has aged me...
I forget what came before that....
AHHHH!!!! YES, lighting of the match.
June 10th, 2020 15:51
Suresh said:
See how all that smoking has aged me...
I forget what came before that....
AHHHH!!!! YES, lighting of the match.
June 10th, 2020 15:51
Climax
MendedFences27 said:
This kind of behavior will kill you! You also know it\'s habit forming or addictive. There will be life-altering consequences, not to mention the cost. So if you have to chose which to lose, just keep on smoking.
A great big chuckle from me. - Phil A.
June 9th, 2020 22:10
MendedFences27 said:
This kind of behavior will kill you! You also know it\'s habit forming or addictive. There will be life-altering consequences, not to mention the cost. So if you have to chose which to lose, just keep on smoking.
A great big chuckle from me. - Phil A.
June 9th, 2020 22:10
Climax
peto said:
Yep
Just how it usually works for me
And over as quickly
Good fun
June 9th, 2020 09:46
peto said:
Yep
Just how it usually works for me
And over as quickly
Good fun
June 9th, 2020 09:46
Climax
orchidee said:
If I read more into this, it will bring on a hefty swoon. Fido will chuck buckets of cold water on me! lol.
Did ya know Mary (Hopkin)? Not personally of course - you know her songs?! \'Twas about the time I stopped watching \'Top of the Pops\' I reckon.
June 9th, 2020 01:49
orchidee said:
If I read more into this, it will bring on a hefty swoon. Fido will chuck buckets of cold water on me! lol.
Did ya know Mary (Hopkin)? Not personally of course - you know her songs?! \'Twas about the time I stopped watching \'Top of the Pops\' I reckon.
June 9th, 2020 01:49
Falling for Icarus
SerenWise said:
I like the abstraction in this poem, well done
June 8th, 2020 20:37
SerenWise said:
I like the abstraction in this poem, well done
June 8th, 2020 20:37
Climax
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - what a striking description of reaching the climax before lighting up.......smilin\' big here ..........x
June 8th, 2020 16:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - what a striking description of reaching the climax before lighting up.......smilin\' big here ..........x
June 8th, 2020 16:01
Climax
Neville said:
I am more than honoured by your late evening visit sir... thank you for stopping by...... 🍷. cheers
Neville
June 8th, 2020 15:28
Neville said:
I am more than honoured by your late evening visit sir... thank you for stopping by...... 🍷. cheers
Neville
June 8th, 2020 15:28
Climax
dusk arising said:
A wonderful description of striking a match on a well worn matchbox\'s sandpaper strip.
It takes such insight to see the poetry such a mundane task, now another fragment of the past. Similar to my sex life really.
June 8th, 2020 15:19
dusk arising said:
A wonderful description of striking a match on a well worn matchbox\'s sandpaper strip.
It takes such insight to see the poetry such a mundane task, now another fragment of the past. Similar to my sex life really.
June 8th, 2020 15:19
Kanreki
orchidee said:
I not seen many Kanrekis about. I dunno what I\'m talking about today. No change there then?!
June 7th, 2020 05:55
orchidee said:
I not seen many Kanrekis about. I dunno what I\'m talking about today. No change there then?!
June 7th, 2020 05:55
Kanreki
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, when I hit sixty I did start over again in a newer life where my work was arranged so that I only worked two days per week, so yes sixty is a special age, (64 was better when I retired completely!)
May you brother live his new life to the full.
Andy
June 7th, 2020 04:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, when I hit sixty I did start over again in a newer life where my work was arranged so that I only worked two days per week, so yes sixty is a special age, (64 was better when I retired completely!)
May you brother live his new life to the full.
Andy
June 7th, 2020 04:19
Kanreki
dusk arising said:
ohayou gozaimasu
And the crowd wandered off looking for McDonalds.
June 7th, 2020 03:54
dusk arising said:
ohayou gozaimasu
And the crowd wandered off looking for McDonalds.
June 7th, 2020 03:54
Kanreki
Fay Slimm. said:
Amid happy feasting and celebration your write provided yet one further learning curve for this humble reader -- Japanese custom when reaching 60 means lots of ritual before yummy rice cake so I believe - - words learnt add to the intrigue penned into the rest of the interesting verse - - DOMO ARIGATOU to you mi amigo...... x
June 7th, 2020 03:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Amid happy feasting and celebration your write provided yet one further learning curve for this humble reader -- Japanese custom when reaching 60 means lots of ritual before yummy rice cake so I believe - - words learnt add to the intrigue penned into the rest of the interesting verse - - DOMO ARIGATOU to you mi amigo...... x
June 7th, 2020 03:31
Falling for Icarus
Goldfinch60 said:
May you fly together in love and happiness Neville.
Andy
June 7th, 2020 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
May you fly together in love and happiness Neville.
Andy
June 7th, 2020 00:40
Upon the Morrow
MendedFences27 said:
Though subtle, I find this sad, but with a sense of hope. If that hope is for an afterlife reunion. \"Bunting \" makes me think of a wartime loss . Perhaps they will be together in some spiritual way.
I enjoyed this poem and the way you\'ve subtly described the passing and the sorrow felt by those left behind. Very descriptive and yet not ponderous. I liked it.- Phil A.
June 6th, 2020 17:21
MendedFences27 said:
Though subtle, I find this sad, but with a sense of hope. If that hope is for an afterlife reunion. \"Bunting \" makes me think of a wartime loss . Perhaps they will be together in some spiritual way.
I enjoyed this poem and the way you\'ve subtly described the passing and the sorrow felt by those left behind. Very descriptive and yet not ponderous. I liked it.- Phil A.
June 6th, 2020 17:21
Falling for Icarus
orchidee said:
I told him to stay about 93 million miles away from that sun (distance Earth to Sun) but he never listened! lol.
June 6th, 2020 07:07
orchidee said:
I told him to stay about 93 million miles away from that sun (distance Earth to Sun) but he never listened! lol.
June 6th, 2020 07:07
Falling for Icarus
Fay Slimm. said:
Flying too near the sun whatever the reason results in melt-down where love drowns -- a comforting last line shows someone has reached out with understanding. This write touches the heart Nev.
June 6th, 2020 05:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Flying too near the sun whatever the reason results in melt-down where love drowns -- a comforting last line shows someone has reached out with understanding. This write touches the heart Nev.
June 6th, 2020 05:15
Falling for Icarus
dusk arising said:
Like the racing driver who swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed i sense someone flying too close to a son here.
June 6th, 2020 04:09
dusk arising said:
Like the racing driver who swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed i sense someone flying too close to a son here.
June 6th, 2020 04:09
Free Fall
Goldfinch60 said:
Reaching for the stars is the way to go Neville, friends and family are there ready to reach down for us.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Reaching for the stars is the way to go Neville, friends and family are there ready to reach down for us.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 00:50
Free Fall
Saxon Crow said:
Because the stars are really hot. So not only am i going to crush my body to death when i land i will also have a burnt hand!
June 5th, 2020 09:53
Saxon Crow said:
Because the stars are really hot. So not only am i going to crush my body to death when i land i will also have a burnt hand!
June 5th, 2020 09:53
Free Fall
Fay Slimm. said:
Why not indeed - - reaching for light can divert the fall. Good advice in these lined my friend.
June 5th, 2020 04:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Why not indeed - - reaching for light can divert the fall. Good advice in these lined my friend.
June 5th, 2020 04:32
Free Fall
orchidee said:
Oohh, I know, I clutched at a tree branch. It was rotten. It did not break my faaaaalllllll! Good acting there, innit?! lol.
June 5th, 2020 03:59
orchidee said:
Oohh, I know, I clutched at a tree branch. It was rotten. It did not break my faaaaalllllll! Good acting there, innit?! lol.
June 5th, 2020 03:59
The Sorriest of Words
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be such a sad word when more should be said and done.
Andy
June 5th, 2020 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be such a sad word when more should be said and done.
Andy
June 5th, 2020 01:03
The Sorriest of Words
MendedFences27 said:
\"Sorry\" is just another word, but so are \"sincere\" and \"disingenuous.\" Sometimes your \"sorriest of words\" falls off lips like a lead balloon, and less frequently it delivers at least some solace. It\'s when nothing is said that causes the greatest concern.
A self-written poem with the weight of empathy clinging to its intent. Perhaps your words will cause many to pause and consider.
Well done, Neville - Phil A.
June 4th, 2020 18:58
MendedFences27 said:
\"Sorry\" is just another word, but so are \"sincere\" and \"disingenuous.\" Sometimes your \"sorriest of words\" falls off lips like a lead balloon, and less frequently it delivers at least some solace. It\'s when nothing is said that causes the greatest concern.
A self-written poem with the weight of empathy clinging to its intent. Perhaps your words will cause many to pause and consider.
Well done, Neville - Phil A.
June 4th, 2020 18:58
The Sorriest of Words
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
\'E\'ermore\' is another sorry word - well, a \'sad\' word in the sense of boring! lol.
June 4th, 2020 09:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
\'E\'ermore\' is another sorry word - well, a \'sad\' word in the sense of boring! lol.
June 4th, 2020 09:02
The Sorriest of Words
Poetic Dan said:
Bam and ain\'t that the truth when we forget that action speak louder that words! Our Internet feels like a burden of a curse, when they can\'t cope force remains the first...
Great work my friend!
Much peace and respect
June 4th, 2020 08:11
Poetic Dan said:
Bam and ain\'t that the truth when we forget that action speak louder that words! Our Internet feels like a burden of a curse, when they can\'t cope force remains the first...
Great work my friend!
Much peace and respect
June 4th, 2020 08:11
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