Comments received on poems by Neville
Dear Capricorn
Poetic Dan said:
Had to take a deep breath after this....
Thank you
May 9th, 2019 10:40
Poetic Dan said:
Had to take a deep breath after this....
Thank you
May 9th, 2019 10:40
Fire-Crest
dusk arising said:
Beauty, love, lust and abuse cleverly compacted into six lines whilst read through the light of a flickering flame.
Love the way your stuff romances the mind..... always there is mystery.
May 8th, 2019 05:43
dusk arising said:
Beauty, love, lust and abuse cleverly compacted into six lines whilst read through the light of a flickering flame.
Love the way your stuff romances the mind..... always there is mystery.
May 8th, 2019 05:43
Fire-Crest
dusk arising said:
Beauty, love, lust and abuse cleverly compacted into six lines whilst read through the light of a flickering flame.
Love the way your stuff romances the mind..... always there is mystery.
May 8th, 2019 05:25
dusk arising said:
Beauty, love, lust and abuse cleverly compacted into six lines whilst read through the light of a flickering flame.
Love the way your stuff romances the mind..... always there is mystery.
May 8th, 2019 05:25
Fire-Crest
Fay Slimm. said:
A scene when enacted brings out raw feelings in females like me....... abuse leads to behaviour where lust replaces true love and girls as described get drug-hooked ........ your forceful verse Nev, though disturbing outlines the treatment young unfortunates receive who see no other way out.
May 8th, 2019 04:44
Fay Slimm. said:
A scene when enacted brings out raw feelings in females like me....... abuse leads to behaviour where lust replaces true love and girls as described get drug-hooked ........ your forceful verse Nev, though disturbing outlines the treatment young unfortunates receive who see no other way out.
May 8th, 2019 04:44
Fire-Crest
orchidee said:
You only marked it 18+ cos of fear of Fido\'s bark?! He won\'t bite ya though, but he barks terrible. He saw \'naked\'. That started him off. heehee. You met any dogs that can read?!
Much more of this and we\'ll all go potty! lol.
May 8th, 2019 04:35
orchidee said:
You only marked it 18+ cos of fear of Fido\'s bark?! He won\'t bite ya though, but he barks terrible. He saw \'naked\'. That started him off. heehee. You met any dogs that can read?!
Much more of this and we\'ll all go potty! lol.
May 8th, 2019 04:35
Ghosts & Shells
dusk arising said:
I knew a lady recently who\'s memories were erased within a fortnight just like your analogy. I know i will not be remembered there (messed up by serious prescribed drugs and therapies).
Strangers on a landing is an amazing phrase. Though i think we are all barnacled children. Were my mirror on the landing then sure... there would be a stranger there. Intriguing read.
May 7th, 2019 16:44
dusk arising said:
I knew a lady recently who\'s memories were erased within a fortnight just like your analogy. I know i will not be remembered there (messed up by serious prescribed drugs and therapies).
Strangers on a landing is an amazing phrase. Though i think we are all barnacled children. Were my mirror on the landing then sure... there would be a stranger there. Intriguing read.
May 7th, 2019 16:44
Hark
Fay Slimm. said:
Even on Holy Days the earth\'s sighs, if heard, can reverberate in still hearts and blow tears over all celebrations. Such a telling read from the pen of a committed carer.... I love this one Nev ......... x
May 7th, 2019 16:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Even on Holy Days the earth\'s sighs, if heard, can reverberate in still hearts and blow tears over all celebrations. Such a telling read from the pen of a committed carer.... I love this one Nev ......... x
May 7th, 2019 16:33
Paper Cuts
Suresh said:
I had one yesterday, but not as painful as those you penned
Intense
May 7th, 2019 10:31
Suresh said:
I had one yesterday, but not as painful as those you penned
Intense
May 7th, 2019 10:31
Ghosts & Shells
Suresh said:
Words of the Poets mature with age, like all fine things in life.
Once penned, the world to read for eternity.
Ghosts and Shells - in the caldron of numbers, but not you.
May 7th, 2019 10:15
Suresh said:
Words of the Poets mature with age, like all fine things in life.
Once penned, the world to read for eternity.
Ghosts and Shells - in the caldron of numbers, but not you.
May 7th, 2019 10:15
Ghosts & Shells
moordykspot2 said:
Poetry is a wonderful avenue of expression as you my friend superbly illustrate thank you
May 7th, 2019 09:36
moordykspot2 said:
Poetry is a wonderful avenue of expression as you my friend superbly illustrate thank you
May 7th, 2019 09:36
Ghosts & Shells
orchidee said:
Real poets need no admiration (Fay just said that), so.... this is a load of rubbish! lol.
I must be in a mood. I forgot me Horlicks last night!
Woof! Fido said I\'ve not quite got the hang of comments. heehee.
You can descend on my poems like a ton of bricks. I got me umbrella for when the bricks fall on me.
May 7th, 2019 08:08
orchidee said:
Real poets need no admiration (Fay just said that), so.... this is a load of rubbish! lol.
I must be in a mood. I forgot me Horlicks last night!
Woof! Fido said I\'ve not quite got the hang of comments. heehee.
You can descend on my poems like a ton of bricks. I got me umbrella for when the bricks fall on me.
May 7th, 2019 08:08
Ghosts & Shells
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic last lines my friend, brilliantly done but what else would we expect ;)
May 7th, 2019 04:08
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic last lines my friend, brilliantly done but what else would we expect ;)
May 7th, 2019 04:08
Ghosts & Shells
Fay Slimm. said:
Real poets need no admiration but feed on word-mindfulness which is a gift........... former selves fade when the Muse takes central stage. Such a good first read of my day - - thanks Nev............ x
May 7th, 2019 03:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Real poets need no admiration but feed on word-mindfulness which is a gift........... former selves fade when the Muse takes central stage. Such a good first read of my day - - thanks Nev............ x
May 7th, 2019 03:58
Dear Capricorn
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written, I particularly love the first verse and the metaphor used there.
May 7th, 2019 01:30
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written, I particularly love the first verse and the metaphor used there.
May 7th, 2019 01:30
A Handful of Nightingales
Fay Slimm. said:
How did I miss this one ? - - ha - I love double dares and I like the idea of nightingales in my garden....... a good read to contemplate - - - ooooh - is that my phone ringing ? ......... x
May 6th, 2019 16:44
Fay Slimm. said:
How did I miss this one ? - - ha - I love double dares and I like the idea of nightingales in my garden....... a good read to contemplate - - - ooooh - is that my phone ringing ? ......... x
May 6th, 2019 16:44
Dear Capricorn
moordykspot2 said:
Heartfelt It strikes at emotive feeling my friend Another string to your talented bow. Thankyou
May 6th, 2019 15:43
moordykspot2 said:
Heartfelt It strikes at emotive feeling my friend Another string to your talented bow. Thankyou
May 6th, 2019 15:43
Dear Capricorn
Suresh said:
A snippet of mine, best describes my feeling on your well composed words here
Those physical scars, for world to see,
Those etched in mind, are only for me
May 6th, 2019 11:43
Suresh said:
A snippet of mine, best describes my feeling on your well composed words here
Those physical scars, for world to see,
Those etched in mind, are only for me
May 6th, 2019 11:43
Dear Capricorn
Michael Edwards said:
I interpreted this in the same way as Fay before I read her comment - a poignant write - cheers Neville.
May 6th, 2019 07:59
Michael Edwards said:
I interpreted this in the same way as Fay before I read her comment - a poignant write - cheers Neville.
May 6th, 2019 07:59
A Peck Above the Brow
moordykspot2 said:
some great thinking to be done in expectation after reading thissuper write. thank you
May 6th, 2019 06:35
moordykspot2 said:
some great thinking to be done in expectation after reading thissuper write. thank you
May 6th, 2019 06:35
Dear Capricorn
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender and understanding verse on the effect an abused childhood leaves behind - -- - though a loving finalé to end this poignant reminder . Thank you for sharing it Nev.
May 6th, 2019 04:37
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender and understanding verse on the effect an abused childhood leaves behind - -- - though a loving finalé to end this poignant reminder . Thank you for sharing it Nev.
May 6th, 2019 04:37
A Peck Above the Brow
Goldfinch60 said:
The tenderness flows through you words in wonder.
May 6th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
The tenderness flows through you words in wonder.
May 6th, 2019 00:48
War is Not for Lovers
Suresh said:
My god, the entwining of the two wars so eloquently expressed.
One day I\'ll catch up
May 5th, 2019 10:59
Suresh said:
My god, the entwining of the two wars so eloquently expressed.
One day I\'ll catch up
May 5th, 2019 10:59
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