Comments received on poems by Neville
Problem
Fay Slimm. said:
Attempting this barrier would be a problem so it seems you have a long-time closure on your romantic efforts mine Sire - -- unless I have the wrong end of the stick !!! .................x
September 2nd, 2020 03:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Attempting this barrier would be a problem so it seems you have a long-time closure on your romantic efforts mine Sire - -- unless I have the wrong end of the stick !!! .................x
September 2nd, 2020 03:26
Tease
orchidee said:
Should I keep meeting these lasses? Will it do me any good? lol.
September 2nd, 2020 01:55
orchidee said:
Should I keep meeting these lasses? Will it do me any good? lol.
September 2nd, 2020 01:55
Tease
Neville said:
as a psychiatrist working within the adult & adolescent mental health arena for many years I have had many ladies of all ages share tales about how when and where they came to be deflowered .. never though until now has any of my poetic peers felt inclined to emphasise the longevity of their virtue ... so thank you for being my first Angela ..
Blessings back at ya and regards to both your internal organs and soul .... :)
September 1st, 2020 16:07
Neville said:
as a psychiatrist working within the adult & adolescent mental health arena for many years I have had many ladies of all ages share tales about how when and where they came to be deflowered .. never though until now has any of my poetic peers felt inclined to emphasise the longevity of their virtue ... so thank you for being my first Angela ..
Blessings back at ya and regards to both your internal organs and soul .... :)
September 1st, 2020 16:07
Tease
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Neville - Thanks for a cute Poem regarding the *X Factor* in us Lady Members. I was 28 when I met Brian and really really fell in True Love for the first time ! To several of My *Xs* in the 12 years (16 - 28) of TEASING (not intentionally ! ) before I met BRIAN I was considered by some Men to be an enigma. On the one hand I was considered very TACTILE especially when I qualified as a PHYSIO & (MEDICAL) MASSEUSE I was attractive (as All Spanish Girls are) so my BEAUS had *Great Expectations* ! On the other hand I was a Devout Catholic *Daughter of Mary* and I had a Spanish Father who would have castrated (fate worse than death !) any Caballero who deflowered Me out of Wedlock. So because of my Religion & PAPA - I did not *DELIVER* in my 20s and was branded *A **** Teaser !* Brian was different more interested in My Soul than my Body - He was a Deacon & A Youth Leader (A role I now share with HIM) in an Evangelical Church and (by Gods Grace) I was stiil a *VIRGIN* when we married in March of this YEAR. Oddly enough BRIAN never saw me as a TEASE just as *A Pearl of Great Value* and He still does - AMEN !
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat 🧡💙🤎
September 1st, 2020 13:32
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Neville - Thanks for a cute Poem regarding the *X Factor* in us Lady Members. I was 28 when I met Brian and really really fell in True Love for the first time ! To several of My *Xs* in the 12 years (16 - 28) of TEASING (not intentionally ! ) before I met BRIAN I was considered by some Men to be an enigma. On the one hand I was considered very TACTILE especially when I qualified as a PHYSIO & (MEDICAL) MASSEUSE I was attractive (as All Spanish Girls are) so my BEAUS had *Great Expectations* ! On the other hand I was a Devout Catholic *Daughter of Mary* and I had a Spanish Father who would have castrated (fate worse than death !) any Caballero who deflowered Me out of Wedlock. So because of my Religion & PAPA - I did not *DELIVER* in my 20s and was branded *A **** Teaser !* Brian was different more interested in My Soul than my Body - He was a Deacon & A Youth Leader (A role I now share with HIM) in an Evangelical Church and (by Gods Grace) I was stiil a *VIRGIN* when we married in March of this YEAR. Oddly enough BRIAN never saw me as a TEASE just as *A Pearl of Great Value* and He still does - AMEN !
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat 🧡💙🤎
September 1st, 2020 13:32
Tease
Michael Edwards said:
Between Z and C - 24 letters apart in the tebahpla. Simples. intriguing write Neville.
September 1st, 2020 11:10
Michael Edwards said:
Between Z and C - 24 letters apart in the tebahpla. Simples. intriguing write Neville.
September 1st, 2020 11:10
Tease
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, there is usually deep turmoil of self-loathing masked by the teasing of the fairer sex,
though at face value we all cant help but share your witty observations,
\'for the key tucked neatly
between Z and C\'
what exactly does Z and C refer to (I think I can guess at the \'key\'... maybe) 😁
September 1st, 2020 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, there is usually deep turmoil of self-loathing masked by the teasing of the fairer sex,
though at face value we all cant help but share your witty observations,
\'for the key tucked neatly
between Z and C\'
what exactly does Z and C refer to (I think I can guess at the \'key\'... maybe) 😁
September 1st, 2020 03:48
Tease
Fay Slimm. said:
Genteel teasing having long been a part of the feminine nature needs attention when exes dominate -- real or no I agree she should limit the number allotted so she can hit more spots off male ego...... ha ha.
September 1st, 2020 02:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Genteel teasing having long been a part of the feminine nature needs attention when exes dominate -- real or no I agree she should limit the number allotted so she can hit more spots off male ego...... ha ha.
September 1st, 2020 02:32
Tease
orchidee said:
Yep, I think I\'ve met her, among the hundreds(?) of lasses I\'ve met! heehee.
September 1st, 2020 01:37
orchidee said:
Yep, I think I\'ve met her, among the hundreds(?) of lasses I\'ve met! heehee.
September 1st, 2020 01:37
Over The Hill
MendedFences27 said:
Time to break new ground. Nothing grows on plowed land, except wild things. Proper care must be given to grow the intended crop.
Short and very allegorical. I love the breadth of meaning/s: Land and desire, aging and desire, growth and status-quo, work and idleness, etc. Let\'s all take the time to nurture our relationships. - Phil A.
August 31st, 2020 16:56
MendedFences27 said:
Time to break new ground. Nothing grows on plowed land, except wild things. Proper care must be given to grow the intended crop.
Short and very allegorical. I love the breadth of meaning/s: Land and desire, aging and desire, growth and status-quo, work and idleness, etc. Let\'s all take the time to nurture our relationships. - Phil A.
August 31st, 2020 16:56
Simple as That
Fay Slimm. said:
Absolutely agree with your thoughts on this matter of falling in love and with every word of this simply expressed but laudable write dear Nev. (p.s. sorry I missed out a word before so thought I would rectify and post it agen ) ...............x
August 31st, 2020 11:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Absolutely agree with your thoughts on this matter of falling in love and with every word of this simply expressed but laudable write dear Nev. (p.s. sorry I missed out a word before so thought I would rectify and post it agen ) ...............x
August 31st, 2020 11:40
Simple as That
MendedFences27 said:
Straight forward truth. Can\'t be said any better. - Phil A.
August 31st, 2020 08:58
MendedFences27 said:
Straight forward truth. Can\'t be said any better. - Phil A.
August 31st, 2020 08:58
Simple as That
L. B. Mek said:
Such delightful poems are unassuming treasures, that reside long: in readers thoughts,
wonderful
August 31st, 2020 03:19
L. B. Mek said:
Such delightful poems are unassuming treasures, that reside long: in readers thoughts,
wonderful
August 31st, 2020 03:19
Simple as That
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I espouse your powerful sentiments you’ve expressed in
“Simple as That”.
I enjoyed the read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 31st, 2020 03:06
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I espouse your powerful sentiments you’ve expressed in
“Simple as That”.
I enjoyed the read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 31st, 2020 03:06
Simple as That
dusk arising said:
The indisputable truth of it ! How many times have i been there at the most wonderful events in my life.... well i\'m not saying but i\'m smiling.
Another great piece from you Neville and a pleasure to read.
August 31st, 2020 02:58
dusk arising said:
The indisputable truth of it ! How many times have i been there at the most wonderful events in my life.... well i\'m not saying but i\'m smiling.
Another great piece from you Neville and a pleasure to read.
August 31st, 2020 02:58
Endsong
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, hope is there for us all and when our hopes are granted we all end up into a better place.
Andy
August 31st, 2020 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, hope is there for us all and when our hopes are granted we all end up into a better place.
Andy
August 31st, 2020 01:01
Endsong
MendedFences27 said:
Time just keeps on rolling. Fate, if one chooses to believe in predestination. is a product of time. Your poem is a product of your skills as a writer. And writing is never a result of destiny, only of hard work and skill. I guess I\'m stuck with the \"pauper\'s fate.\" - Phil A.
August 30th, 2020 22:09
MendedFences27 said:
Time just keeps on rolling. Fate, if one chooses to believe in predestination. is a product of time. Your poem is a product of your skills as a writer. And writing is never a result of destiny, only of hard work and skill. I guess I\'m stuck with the \"pauper\'s fate.\" - Phil A.
August 30th, 2020 22:09
Endsong
dusk arising said:
It\'s all there Neville. Superb! I aspire to write such apposite truths.
Into my fav\'s
August 30th, 2020 15:47
dusk arising said:
It\'s all there Neville. Superb! I aspire to write such apposite truths.
Into my fav\'s
August 30th, 2020 15:47
Endsong
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
\'Tomorrow will be a better day - if I don\'t sing!\' lol.
August 30th, 2020 14:15
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
\'Tomorrow will be a better day - if I don\'t sing!\' lol.
August 30th, 2020 14:15
Endsong
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise words and penned with inventive rhyming your Endsong is a reminder dear Nev. that any time left must be used to dream, wish and to hope................ x
August 30th, 2020 13:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise words and penned with inventive rhyming your Endsong is a reminder dear Nev. that any time left must be used to dream, wish and to hope................ x
August 30th, 2020 13:38
Endsong
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Evening Neville - I live on HOPE - what else is there to live for other than to hope that *Tomorrow will be a Better Day - AMEN !* Faith - Hope - Love - Now abides these three things to keep one OPTIMISTIC about the (post COVID 19) FUTURE! In my brief experience (32 Years) they are all EQUAL!
FAITH - That there will be a Future
HOPE - That the Future will be Brighter
LOVE - To keep you going if it isnt!
Please check our site THANKS A & B
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA - BRIAN - SMOKEY CAT ! ! !
August 30th, 2020 13:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Evening Neville - I live on HOPE - what else is there to live for other than to hope that *Tomorrow will be a Better Day - AMEN !* Faith - Hope - Love - Now abides these three things to keep one OPTIMISTIC about the (post COVID 19) FUTURE! In my brief experience (32 Years) they are all EQUAL!
FAITH - That there will be a Future
HOPE - That the Future will be Brighter
LOVE - To keep you going if it isnt!
Please check our site THANKS A & B
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA - BRIAN - SMOKEY CAT ! ! !
August 30th, 2020 13:22
When I Find You
Fay Slimm. said:
Love making with someone not even met is so specially tied in with inevitability in this intriguing and previously unread oldie mon ami - - glad to have caught the gentle erotica in that second stanza which warmed all my cockles.......................... x
August 30th, 2020 04:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Love making with someone not even met is so specially tied in with inevitability in this intriguing and previously unread oldie mon ami - - glad to have caught the gentle erotica in that second stanza which warmed all my cockles.......................... x
August 30th, 2020 04:39
Modern Love
Neville said:
You are most kind L. B. and I am most grateful to ya.....
nah’ even more than that even .....😎. 👍
August 30th, 2020 01:37
Neville said:
You are most kind L. B. and I am most grateful to ya.....
nah’ even more than that even .....😎. 👍
August 30th, 2020 01:37
Modern Love
L. B. Mek said:
timely, glad I visited and didn\'t miss out on this rib tickler 😁
liked the authentic author\'s comments:
\'...but then I thought, nah …………….\'
August 29th, 2020 02:54
L. B. Mek said:
timely, glad I visited and didn\'t miss out on this rib tickler 😁
liked the authentic author\'s comments:
\'...but then I thought, nah …………….\'
August 29th, 2020 02:54
Modern Love
MendedFences27 said:
Much better title, it adds to the surprise. Here\'s a take on this with nothing to do with Covid.
The \"hand wash \" confirmed he was indeed a doctor, and the \"designer mask\" nearly matched one of her own she kept in her bedside dresser. - Modern Love -
A year ago this would have been the premise of such lines, but now you have modernized love to fit the appropriate consequences of our time. It\'s light enough to bring laughter, and yet dark enough to cause concern. In all, thanks for some comic relief. - Phil A.
August 27th, 2020 10:56
MendedFences27 said:
Much better title, it adds to the surprise. Here\'s a take on this with nothing to do with Covid.
The \"hand wash \" confirmed he was indeed a doctor, and the \"designer mask\" nearly matched one of her own she kept in her bedside dresser. - Modern Love -
A year ago this would have been the premise of such lines, but now you have modernized love to fit the appropriate consequences of our time. It\'s light enough to bring laughter, and yet dark enough to cause concern. In all, thanks for some comic relief. - Phil A.
August 27th, 2020 10:56
Modern Love
dusk arising said:
I have decided that i am better looking behind a full face plastic visor rather than partially covered.
I asked a pal what he thought passed through his dogs mind when he saw somebody in a mask. - He\'s probably thinking I wonder who he\'s bitten to get himself muzzled.
August 27th, 2020 04:34
dusk arising said:
I have decided that i am better looking behind a full face plastic visor rather than partially covered.
I asked a pal what he thought passed through his dogs mind when he saw somebody in a mask. - He\'s probably thinking I wonder who he\'s bitten to get himself muzzled.
August 27th, 2020 04:34
Modern Love
Michael Edwards said:
\'When I grow old I shall wear purple\'
Well I\'ve got two designer face covers in manly purple - does that make me desirable I wonder - I doubt it.
Great fun write Neville.
August 27th, 2020 04:03
Michael Edwards said:
\'When I grow old I shall wear purple\'
Well I\'ve got two designer face covers in manly purple - does that make me desirable I wonder - I doubt it.
Great fun write Neville.
August 27th, 2020 04:03
Summer’s End
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my rudeness my friend, my mind read you words and got stuck - with your lines rearranged like this:
\'My walks in the park are now laboured
There is a chill in the air, I once savoured
The dapples, more darker now too
Saying goodbye to summer, simply: without you\'
wonderful write! (whatever way its read)
August 27th, 2020 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my rudeness my friend, my mind read you words and got stuck - with your lines rearranged like this:
\'My walks in the park are now laboured
There is a chill in the air, I once savoured
The dapples, more darker now too
Saying goodbye to summer, simply: without you\'
wonderful write! (whatever way its read)
August 27th, 2020 03:46
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