Comments received on poems by Neville
Summer’s End
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my rudeness my friend, my mind read you words and got stuck - with your lines rearranged like this:
\'My walks in the park are now laboured
There is a chill in the air, I once savoured
The dapples, more darker now too
Saying goodbye to summer, simply: without you\'
wonderful write! (whatever way its read)
August 27th, 2020 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my rudeness my friend, my mind read you words and got stuck - with your lines rearranged like this:
\'My walks in the park are now laboured
There is a chill in the air, I once savoured
The dapples, more darker now too
Saying goodbye to summer, simply: without you\'
wonderful write! (whatever way its read)
August 27th, 2020 03:46
Modern Love
Fay Slimm. said:
Smilin\' big here at your worthy depiction of Modern Love Nev.
- -Falling for masks brings nothing but a collection of failures as this pert poem infers - - methinks better to seek the face of togetherness that only the cut of honest exchange can design .................x
August 27th, 2020 02:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Smilin\' big here at your worthy depiction of Modern Love Nev.
- -Falling for masks brings nothing but a collection of failures as this pert poem infers - - methinks better to seek the face of togetherness that only the cut of honest exchange can design .................x
August 27th, 2020 02:39
Modern Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Neville, my first laugh of the day.
Andy
August 27th, 2020 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Neville, my first laugh of the day.
Andy
August 27th, 2020 02:23
Summer’s End
MendedFences27 said:
The end of summer, isolated and alone, with only darkening days to look forward to, can take the fun out of life. But, there\'s nothing like a good love song being created, to fill the time. Go for it.
You know what they say , \" when you play Country Music backwards/\"
You get your girl back, your dog back, your truck back, etc.\"
Keep smiling, it\'ll soon be Spring. - Phil A.
August 26th, 2020 16:01
MendedFences27 said:
The end of summer, isolated and alone, with only darkening days to look forward to, can take the fun out of life. But, there\'s nothing like a good love song being created, to fill the time. Go for it.
You know what they say , \" when you play Country Music backwards/\"
You get your girl back, your dog back, your truck back, etc.\"
Keep smiling, it\'ll soon be Spring. - Phil A.
August 26th, 2020 16:01
Summer’s End
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thnaks for sharing Neville - Any SEASON is DREARY - Even SPRING! When you*re not with the one you LOVE ~ AMEN!
Love - Joy - Peace
Angela & Brian 🧡💙
August 26th, 2020 11:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thnaks for sharing Neville - Any SEASON is DREARY - Even SPRING! When you*re not with the one you LOVE ~ AMEN!
Love - Joy - Peace
Angela & Brian 🧡💙
August 26th, 2020 11:23
Summer’s End
dusk arising said:
When your heart is closing down and feeling like turning in on itself, it\'s not a good time to see the world\'s plantlife closing down too. Roll on spring and recovery.
August 26th, 2020 03:37
dusk arising said:
When your heart is closing down and feeling like turning in on itself, it\'s not a good time to see the world\'s plantlife closing down too. Roll on spring and recovery.
August 26th, 2020 03:37
Summer’s End
Fay Slimm. said:
A moving read Nev. - -Tender pathos follows your goodbye-to-summer aloneness in words only love could compose....................x
August 26th, 2020 02:03
Fay Slimm. said:
A moving read Nev. - -Tender pathos follows your goodbye-to-summer aloneness in words only love could compose....................x
August 26th, 2020 02:03
Summer’s End
orchidee said:
A nice write Neville. Oops, not yet - me diary says Summer ends about Sept 22nd! I\'m gonna think of it that way anyway.
August 26th, 2020 01:46
orchidee said:
A nice write Neville. Oops, not yet - me diary says Summer ends about Sept 22nd! I\'m gonna think of it that way anyway.
August 26th, 2020 01:46
Summer’s End
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A definite full stop to summer meteor-logically yesterday Neville bu wonderfully captured emotionally here for very different reasons, we have all pined this moment
I keep the sunglasses on that way no-one sees the tears
Thanks for todays... stay safe
August 26th, 2020 01:17
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A definite full stop to summer meteor-logically yesterday Neville bu wonderfully captured emotionally here for very different reasons, we have all pined this moment
I keep the sunglasses on that way no-one sees the tears
Thanks for todays... stay safe
August 26th, 2020 01:17
Summer’s End
jarcher54 said:
Well you\'ve gone and done it... you made me feel emotions. Damn you.
August 26th, 2020 00:32
jarcher54 said:
Well you\'ve gone and done it... you made me feel emotions. Damn you.
August 26th, 2020 00:32
Sun Shy
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening NEVILLE - Love the Poem ! Seems like although SHE was Shy of the Sun - the Lady liked *A Wee Drappy !* In my experience when a man is *LOADED* He doesnt need to be handsome too ! He had had a *Wee Drop too* Alcohol which *Maketh GLAD the Heart of Man* & *Available the Heart of Woman* ! So - It only took a wave & a smile & a nod & a wink ~ BINGO ~ C*est la Vie ! Thanks for Sharing
Love - Joy - Peace to You & Yours
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat 🧡💙🤎
August 25th, 2020 15:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening NEVILLE - Love the Poem ! Seems like although SHE was Shy of the Sun - the Lady liked *A Wee Drappy !* In my experience when a man is *LOADED* He doesnt need to be handsome too ! He had had a *Wee Drop too* Alcohol which *Maketh GLAD the Heart of Man* & *Available the Heart of Woman* ! So - It only took a wave & a smile & a nod & a wink ~ BINGO ~ C*est la Vie ! Thanks for Sharing
Love - Joy - Peace to You & Yours
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat 🧡💙🤎
August 25th, 2020 15:11
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, what happened to my youth?
Andy
August 25th, 2020 15:09
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, what happened to my youth?
Andy
August 25th, 2020 15:09
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
MendedFences27 said:
The Bus driver says Destiny stops for no man. Growing old means you have a seat closer to the exit.
A few words that explain my life, thanks. - Phil A.
August 25th, 2020 10:06
MendedFences27 said:
The Bus driver says Destiny stops for no man. Growing old means you have a seat closer to the exit.
A few words that explain my life, thanks. - Phil A.
August 25th, 2020 10:06
Why Do I Love Thee
L. B. Mek said:
so glad I skulked about long enough in your catalogue to find this gem,
for me my friend you are at your best, when the playful side makes way for the raw truths you have to share: words full of reality\'s warmth, a hot blooded existence - inked timeless for all to appreciate,
brilliant!
August 25th, 2020 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
so glad I skulked about long enough in your catalogue to find this gem,
for me my friend you are at your best, when the playful side makes way for the raw truths you have to share: words full of reality\'s warmth, a hot blooded existence - inked timeless for all to appreciate,
brilliant!
August 25th, 2020 03:38
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
Michael Edwards said:
Perfect little shorty - the sort of poem that says so little in so few words - but then I\'m a minimalist.
August 25th, 2020 03:31
Michael Edwards said:
Perfect little shorty - the sort of poem that says so little in so few words - but then I\'m a minimalist.
August 25th, 2020 03:31
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
dusk arising said:
OH BRILL! short and sweet... hits the spot BULLSEYE.
into my favs
August 25th, 2020 03:13
dusk arising said:
OH BRILL! short and sweet... hits the spot BULLSEYE.
into my favs
August 25th, 2020 03:13
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts grow not old though skin starts to wrinkle and hope keeps the love-spots alive -- that is my offer to these three solemn lines...............x
August 25th, 2020 03:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearts grow not old though skin starts to wrinkle and hope keeps the love-spots alive -- that is my offer to these three solemn lines...............x
August 25th, 2020 03:09
Drop Me off @ the Next Stop
L. B. Mek said:
like the play between the title and the poem itself,
sobering truths you penned
August 25th, 2020 02:57
L. B. Mek said:
like the play between the title and the poem itself,
sobering truths you penned
August 25th, 2020 02:57
Sun Shy
MendedFences27 said:
I wonder if she wandered and was tickled by the fella,
when he wondrously presented a baton that outstretched her umbrella.
Okay, I quit. There\'s no humor like the original. Yes, your rhyme had me laughing. Thanks for that. - Phil A.
August 24th, 2020 12:31
MendedFences27 said:
I wonder if she wandered and was tickled by the fella,
when he wondrously presented a baton that outstretched her umbrella.
Okay, I quit. There\'s no humor like the original. Yes, your rhyme had me laughing. Thanks for that. - Phil A.
August 24th, 2020 12:31
Sun Shy
dusk arising said:
Must have been drunk to tickle her **** in a matter of a moment.
Nicely put together with easy flow and a big smiling finale.
August 24th, 2020 06:48
dusk arising said:
Must have been drunk to tickle her **** in a matter of a moment.
Nicely put together with easy flow and a big smiling finale.
August 24th, 2020 06:48
Sun Shy
orchidee said:
That\'s me and her then. Notices subtle ending - I got me tickling-stick! Swoon! lol.
August 24th, 2020 05:27
orchidee said:
That\'s me and her then. Notices subtle ending - I got me tickling-stick! Swoon! lol.
August 24th, 2020 05:27
Bridges
L. B. Mek said:
oh my talented friend how deftly you capture those wishful winds of young lover\'s, vehemently clinging to the all or nothing, of the now
that often fails us and sails-on-by, till we are left wondering at what we purpled ourselves: grasping, as if our very breaths, were fuelled by it
brilliant!
August 24th, 2020 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
oh my talented friend how deftly you capture those wishful winds of young lover\'s, vehemently clinging to the all or nothing, of the now
that often fails us and sails-on-by, till we are left wondering at what we purpled ourselves: grasping, as if our very breaths, were fuelled by it
brilliant!
August 24th, 2020 05:18
Sun Shy
L. B. Mek said:
entertainingly witty,
a skip - back to days
of eager pulses, with naught - but hunting season\'s blinkered vision
for banishing, lonesome evenings
August 24th, 2020 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
entertainingly witty,
a skip - back to days
of eager pulses, with naught - but hunting season\'s blinkered vision
for banishing, lonesome evenings
August 24th, 2020 04:35
Sun Shy
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow the speed of that beautifully rhymed romantic happening leaves me quite wordless Nev - - your pen paints such on-going scenes with a finesse that makes me naughtily wanting more....................x
August 24th, 2020 03:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow the speed of that beautifully rhymed romantic happening leaves me quite wordless Nev - - your pen paints such on-going scenes with a finesse that makes me naughtily wanting more....................x
August 24th, 2020 03:58
Bridges
dusk arising said:
A bridge - a way to overcome a problem/where two purposes meet.
Life and death to some but easy life for others.
A bridge, a beginning, a step into the unknown for lifers.
So much to read into your piece today. Pictures, opportunities, failures and sadness are but a few. Though sadness prevails.
August 23rd, 2020 13:17
dusk arising said:
A bridge - a way to overcome a problem/where two purposes meet.
Life and death to some but easy life for others.
A bridge, a beginning, a step into the unknown for lifers.
So much to read into your piece today. Pictures, opportunities, failures and sadness are but a few. Though sadness prevails.
August 23rd, 2020 13:17
Bridges
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure if it\'s intentional or not but I can read into this. great bit of penmanship .
August 23rd, 2020 03:27
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure if it\'s intentional or not but I can read into this. great bit of penmanship .
August 23rd, 2020 03:27
Bridges
Fay Slimm. said:
The lure of bridges worldwide must provide a sad how for the unbalanced to say their goodbyes and your words lock this fact clearly into a shock-of-a-read Nev. with final lines sounding down so well the hopeless whys of such tragic endings to young lives.......
August 23rd, 2020 02:32
Fay Slimm. said:
The lure of bridges worldwide must provide a sad how for the unbalanced to say their goodbyes and your words lock this fact clearly into a shock-of-a-read Nev. with final lines sounding down so well the hopeless whys of such tragic endings to young lives.......
August 23rd, 2020 02:32
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