Comments received on poems by Neville
A Peck Above the Brow
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - just the place a romantic lip-shaped peck should aim for........ liking the mint-fresh idea too and love the concept of this tender write..... ...
May 5th, 2019 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - just the place a romantic lip-shaped peck should aim for........ liking the mint-fresh idea too and love the concept of this tender write..... ...
May 5th, 2019 03:48
A Peck Above the Brow
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sensitive tender write N
Well done
May 5th, 2019 03:28
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sensitive tender write N
Well done
May 5th, 2019 03:28
I Am What I Am
Poetic Dan said:
I don\'t believe much
But I believe you
A man I admire
I feel the truth
As a mountain you stand
Perfectly imperfect
I\'m honestly honoured
To know your spirit
May 5th, 2019 03:04
Poetic Dan said:
I don\'t believe much
But I believe you
A man I admire
I feel the truth
As a mountain you stand
Perfectly imperfect
I\'m honestly honoured
To know your spirit
May 5th, 2019 03:04
I Am What I Am
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write.
I too am me and agree with all your nots.
May 5th, 2019 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write.
I too am me and agree with all your nots.
May 5th, 2019 00:33
Versal Law
Fay Slimm. said:
You create gentle erotica so easily Nev. - -- and after an extra busy day I shall read this again and take the feel of that Versal Law with me to bed..... and so to dream.......... x
May 4th, 2019 16:08
Fay Slimm. said:
You create gentle erotica so easily Nev. - -- and after an extra busy day I shall read this again and take the feel of that Versal Law with me to bed..... and so to dream.......... x
May 4th, 2019 16:08
I Am What I Am
MendedFences27 said:
\"I am Me,\" and you are you, no two the same. Billions of people in the world and none exactly alike. There may be similarities, but also glaring differences. So what is it that brings two together forever. What intangible thing we call love holds the two in bondage? It seems there will never be an answer to that question.
Your poem is a statement, factual, and truthful. It asks someone for many things to avoid. Finding such a person is Man\'s eternal quest. Your statement though brings thoughts to one\'s mind and causes a self search for answers. Very insightful and illuminating piece. Loved it - Phil A.
May 4th, 2019 13:21
MendedFences27 said:
\"I am Me,\" and you are you, no two the same. Billions of people in the world and none exactly alike. There may be similarities, but also glaring differences. So what is it that brings two together forever. What intangible thing we call love holds the two in bondage? It seems there will never be an answer to that question.
Your poem is a statement, factual, and truthful. It asks someone for many things to avoid. Finding such a person is Man\'s eternal quest. Your statement though brings thoughts to one\'s mind and causes a self search for answers. Very insightful and illuminating piece. Loved it - Phil A.
May 4th, 2019 13:21
I Am What I Am
Brycycle said:
We are who we are and we should all be proud of that
- lovely write
May 4th, 2019 12:48
Brycycle said:
We are who we are and we should all be proud of that
- lovely write
May 4th, 2019 12:48
I Am What I Am
SerenWise said:
This is fantastic, I love how the structure presents different ways of reading and interpreting, nice work!
May 4th, 2019 11:53
SerenWise said:
This is fantastic, I love how the structure presents different ways of reading and interpreting, nice work!
May 4th, 2019 11:53
I Am What I Am
Michael Edwards said:
A super and inspired construct - so what is me?
May 4th, 2019 10:42
Michael Edwards said:
A super and inspired construct - so what is me?
May 4th, 2019 10:42
I Am What I Am
moordykspot2 said:
Good enjoyable Poem NevilleNow I know something of what you are not.Perhaps a sequel of what you are.
\"I am my friend\"
thank you
May 4th, 2019 08:01
moordykspot2 said:
Good enjoyable Poem NevilleNow I know something of what you are not.Perhaps a sequel of what you are.
\"I am my friend\"
thank you
May 4th, 2019 08:01
I Am What I Am
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Oooooo NEVILLE such a big list of *Wot you are Not !*
Fish - Trophy - Priest - Prophet - Prize - Target - Memory
Moment or Liar - BUT - Thank GOD - YOU are YOU &
I am ME & BRIAN is BRIAN (11,500 miles away soon !)
YES it is our individuality that makes the WORLD go ROUND
and makes MPS such a special & precious SITE - AMEN !
Thanks for sharing - Blessings & JOY
Love through Odd Odes ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 4th, 2019 04:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Oooooo NEVILLE such a big list of *Wot you are Not !*
Fish - Trophy - Priest - Prophet - Prize - Target - Memory
Moment or Liar - BUT - Thank GOD - YOU are YOU &
I am ME & BRIAN is BRIAN (11,500 miles away soon !)
YES it is our individuality that makes the WORLD go ROUND
and makes MPS such a special & precious SITE - AMEN !
Thanks for sharing - Blessings & JOY
Love through Odd Odes ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 4th, 2019 04:11
I Am What I Am
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a rhythmic and multi-textured assessment of a few nots - but what you really are does nicely for me mon ami. Pleased I caught this insightful read...............
May 4th, 2019 02:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a rhythmic and multi-textured assessment of a few nots - but what you really are does nicely for me mon ami. Pleased I caught this insightful read...............
May 4th, 2019 02:56
Babies Don’t Bounce
Poetic Dan said:
But....
They do in a door swing
Or a special chair
They do on my knee
Or on my sofa
We can bounce with love
But not anger
I was going to write something else but then changed it to the above.
As you I read the comments I thought of being a young parent, that till was not easy and I could understand how easy it must be to loose control when a scream child won\'t stop!
May have to try and write this one out now..
Cheers for the inspiration
Much peace and respect
May 4th, 2019 02:38
Poetic Dan said:
But....
They do in a door swing
Or a special chair
They do on my knee
Or on my sofa
We can bounce with love
But not anger
I was going to write something else but then changed it to the above.
As you I read the comments I thought of being a young parent, that till was not easy and I could understand how easy it must be to loose control when a scream child won\'t stop!
May have to try and write this one out now..
Cheers for the inspiration
Much peace and respect
May 4th, 2019 02:38
Babies Don’t Bounce
Goldfinch60 said:
I just cannot understand why people mistreat children, it is the one thing that I could not reconcile with the ideal of Christian forgiveness.
Unfortunately it seems to be happening more and more in this world of ours.
May 4th, 2019 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
I just cannot understand why people mistreat children, it is the one thing that I could not reconcile with the ideal of Christian forgiveness.
Unfortunately it seems to be happening more and more in this world of ours.
May 4th, 2019 00:25
Babies Don’t Bounce
SerenWise said:
This is very powerful, I had an almost physical reaction...
May 3rd, 2019 14:23
SerenWise said:
This is very powerful, I had an almost physical reaction...
May 3rd, 2019 14:23
Babies Don’t Bounce
Michael Edwards said:
When it comes to babies and children I melt - how can anyone act in this way - this packs a message with the strongest of punches.
May 3rd, 2019 13:02
Michael Edwards said:
When it comes to babies and children I melt - how can anyone act in this way - this packs a message with the strongest of punches.
May 3rd, 2019 13:02
Babies Don’t Bounce
moordykspot2 said:
Consise True in every line. A neccessary Message in todays world. Thank you
May 3rd, 2019 05:13
moordykspot2 said:
Consise True in every line. A neccessary Message in todays world. Thank you
May 3rd, 2019 05:13
Babies Don’t Bounce
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I was dropped on my head as a baby
Never did me any HaRGBMKJNBVCSDHIGG
Sorry where was I?
Great write N
May 3rd, 2019 04:34
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I was dropped on my head as a baby
Never did me any HaRGBMKJNBVCSDHIGG
Sorry where was I?
Great write N
May 3rd, 2019 04:34
Babies Don’t Bounce
Neville said:
Unfortunately and far too often there are folk that try to test the theory out... bless ya Fay .... Neville
May 3rd, 2019 03:20
Neville said:
Unfortunately and far too often there are folk that try to test the theory out... bless ya Fay .... Neville
May 3rd, 2019 03:20
Babies Don’t Bounce
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow this write amazes me Nev. - Full of powerful imagery (as is my posting today) - - means what readers think - and I see a strong message on how not to treat offspring -- - or is it ?
May 3rd, 2019 03:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow this write amazes me Nev. - Full of powerful imagery (as is my posting today) - - means what readers think - and I see a strong message on how not to treat offspring -- - or is it ?
May 3rd, 2019 03:17
In The Beginning
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write of innocent afternoons of youth, it was all a learning curve and those experiences we have had cannot be taught.
May 3rd, 2019 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write of innocent afternoons of youth, it was all a learning curve and those experiences we have had cannot be taught.
May 3rd, 2019 00:40
Enlightenment
Suresh said:
Two people
Same event
Different perspective
One gave the other received
May 2nd, 2019 16:17
Suresh said:
Two people
Same event
Different perspective
One gave the other received
May 2nd, 2019 16:17
The Width of a Table
Suresh said:
When exposed to receiving affection
Heart throbs at the slightest acceptance
Another light hearted poem indeed
May 2nd, 2019 16:09
Suresh said:
When exposed to receiving affection
Heart throbs at the slightest acceptance
Another light hearted poem indeed
May 2nd, 2019 16:09
Victims of Indifference
Suresh said:
From my poem \"FANATICISM\"
Liberals want it tamed
But that only sends it underground
Emotions cannot be framed
And voices cannot be drowned
I am a staunch believer of Freedom of Speech, and as you stated, so far as it is not violating another.
The way hatred can be diluted is not by labeling it \'politically incorrect\', but by letting all express themselves, so that they can be intelligently approached. By shutting them down, it festers underneath and finally explode with devastating results.
I so enjoy these subjects
May 2nd, 2019 15:58
Suresh said:
From my poem \"FANATICISM\"
Liberals want it tamed
But that only sends it underground
Emotions cannot be framed
And voices cannot be drowned
I am a staunch believer of Freedom of Speech, and as you stated, so far as it is not violating another.
The way hatred can be diluted is not by labeling it \'politically incorrect\', but by letting all express themselves, so that they can be intelligently approached. By shutting them down, it festers underneath and finally explode with devastating results.
I so enjoy these subjects
May 2nd, 2019 15:58
In The Beginning
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEVILLE ! A salutary tale for us Men about the Art of Courtship ! In my experience ~ over the last 20 years ~ every Lady is unique in terms of her past experience and pace & level of LIBIDO ! One has to rely on ones own experience and judgement ! If one makes a difinitive move too soon or too abrubtly (V 3) we pay the price of *rejection* which is painful ! I wish I knew @ 15 what I now know @ 35 I would have been spared some embarassment. Angela is 31 and we have an exceallent understanding of each others feelings ~ AMEN !
Blessing & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
May 2nd, 2019 14:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEVILLE ! A salutary tale for us Men about the Art of Courtship ! In my experience ~ over the last 20 years ~ every Lady is unique in terms of her past experience and pace & level of LIBIDO ! One has to rely on ones own experience and judgement ! If one makes a difinitive move too soon or too abrubtly (V 3) we pay the price of *rejection* which is painful ! I wish I knew @ 15 what I now know @ 35 I would have been spared some embarassment. Angela is 31 and we have an exceallent understanding of each others feelings ~ AMEN !
Blessing & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
May 2nd, 2019 14:04
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