Comments received on poems by Neville
In a Moment Gone
Suresh said:
MOMENT gives you hope
ETERNALLY never happens
Thnx Nev
P.S. Goes well with my response to your comment on my poem \'Let\'s take a Walk\'
April 26th, 2019 10:33
Suresh said:
MOMENT gives you hope
ETERNALLY never happens
Thnx Nev
P.S. Goes well with my response to your comment on my poem \'Let\'s take a Walk\'
April 26th, 2019 10:33
In a Moment Gone
dusk arising said:
Thats just what the mother-in-law said to me in bed last nite
(she was only bringing me a nice cup of cocoa to help me sleep).
April 26th, 2019 10:27
dusk arising said:
Thats just what the mother-in-law said to me in bed last nite
(she was only bringing me a nice cup of cocoa to help me sleep).
April 26th, 2019 10:27
In a Moment Gone
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how true and so poetically put .....good to have you back posting again Nev.
April 26th, 2019 10:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how true and so poetically put .....good to have you back posting again Nev.
April 26th, 2019 10:23
Ten Dead Chickens
Suresh said:
You can take such subject and so poetically write about it, that\'s a gift.
And yes, the Dust Devil/Dust Storm/ Dust Spout probably is the culprit.
April 25th, 2019 12:01
Suresh said:
You can take such subject and so poetically write about it, that\'s a gift.
And yes, the Dust Devil/Dust Storm/ Dust Spout probably is the culprit.
April 25th, 2019 12:01
The Pyramid of Longing
Fay Slimm. said:
A triangle of romantic angles built on tender reflections of the journey love takes to all hidden places.....I am real glad I caught up with this sizzling read........... x
April 25th, 2019 06:45
Fay Slimm. said:
A triangle of romantic angles built on tender reflections of the journey love takes to all hidden places.....I am real glad I caught up with this sizzling read........... x
April 25th, 2019 06:45
Ten Dead Chickens
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done from lifes mysterious mysteries.
April 25th, 2019 04:20
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done from lifes mysterious mysteries.
April 25th, 2019 04:20
Ten Dead Chickens
dusk arising said:
There\'s more goes on than that which we can perceive.
April 24th, 2019 08:52
dusk arising said:
There\'s more goes on than that which we can perceive.
April 24th, 2019 08:52
Head Rest
dusk arising said:
Oh dear, that last verse doth tell of lifes experiences.
However planting of seeds - wilderness or scented garden - tells of a life of a sower.
(Odd that to sow seeds should be spelled sew, therefore i should have referred to the \'life of a sewer\' which seemed a tad unkind).
April 24th, 2019 08:10
dusk arising said:
Oh dear, that last verse doth tell of lifes experiences.
However planting of seeds - wilderness or scented garden - tells of a life of a sower.
(Odd that to sow seeds should be spelled sew, therefore i should have referred to the \'life of a sewer\' which seemed a tad unkind).
April 24th, 2019 08:10
Ten Dead Chickens
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe that Shaman was right, some deaths can be inexplicable in other ways. Enjoyed the tale.
April 24th, 2019 03:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe that Shaman was right, some deaths can be inexplicable in other ways. Enjoyed the tale.
April 24th, 2019 03:15
Ten Dead Chickens
orchidee said:
Spookiness,N! Fido would be a guard-dog to them.
April 24th, 2019 02:08
orchidee said:
Spookiness,N! Fido would be a guard-dog to them.
April 24th, 2019 02:08
Ten Dead Chickens
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - just read your comment at the top - so had to adjust my own in -put a bit........ Wow- - what a sad mystery and told with your flair it had my attention from the first line Nev..........spirits or no those chicks will stay with me all day - - poor things.......... Fay x
April 24th, 2019 02:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - just read your comment at the top - so had to adjust my own in -put a bit........ Wow- - what a sad mystery and told with your flair it had my attention from the first line Nev..........spirits or no those chicks will stay with me all day - - poor things.......... Fay x
April 24th, 2019 02:06
Autumn
Fay Slimm. said:
A summary of passing life-seasons and written with deep reflection on stages we all have to face - - love the metaphor of
Mourning summer
Contemplating winter
Anticipating spring - -
yet stuck in the autumn years --
I for one take you just as you are my luverly friend.
Glad I caught up with this read today.............. x
April 23rd, 2019 13:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A summary of passing life-seasons and written with deep reflection on stages we all have to face - - love the metaphor of
Mourning summer
Contemplating winter
Anticipating spring - -
yet stuck in the autumn years --
I for one take you just as you are my luverly friend.
Glad I caught up with this read today.............. x
April 23rd, 2019 13:39
Head Rest
Fay Slimm. said:
A well and truly smitten confession of undying love resting its case... a most tender read my friend.
April 23rd, 2019 03:46
Fay Slimm. said:
A well and truly smitten confession of undying love resting its case... a most tender read my friend.
April 23rd, 2019 03:46
Head Rest
Poetic Dan said:
You be a man chocolate bar then, unwrapped enjoyed and then discarded!
Sounds a good way to go to me!
Nice one
April 23rd, 2019 03:16
Poetic Dan said:
You be a man chocolate bar then, unwrapped enjoyed and then discarded!
Sounds a good way to go to me!
Nice one
April 23rd, 2019 03:16
Head Rest
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna plant some flower seeds - or I might swoon! Or Fido won\'t let me have \'excitement\'. lol.
April 23rd, 2019 02:19
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna plant some flower seeds - or I might swoon! Or Fido won\'t let me have \'excitement\'. lol.
April 23rd, 2019 02:19
The Company of Angels
Fay Slimm. said:
First time of viewing this piece of work Nev. Scene set at attempts to deny the Reaper his quota of souls by salacine burning and prayers etc.- - futile maybe but how bent those knees of love pleading for the one with broken wings. Your friend must have cherished this spiritual tribute.
April 22nd, 2019 13:50
Fay Slimm. said:
First time of viewing this piece of work Nev. Scene set at attempts to deny the Reaper his quota of souls by salacine burning and prayers etc.- - futile maybe but how bent those knees of love pleading for the one with broken wings. Your friend must have cherished this spiritual tribute.
April 22nd, 2019 13:50
When Duty Calls
SerenWise said:
A beautiful sentiment wrapped in a lovely rhyme
April 22nd, 2019 12:37
SerenWise said:
A beautiful sentiment wrapped in a lovely rhyme
April 22nd, 2019 12:37
When Duty Calls
Michael Edwards said:
A special message which you have captured with such elegance.
April 22nd, 2019 10:25
Michael Edwards said:
A special message which you have captured with such elegance.
April 22nd, 2019 10:25
When Duty Calls
dusk arising said:
I really like this, especially the last line which in fact validates the whole.
Not only am i going to save this as a favourite but i shall also print it, frame it and hang it in my hallway.
For the wisdom it contains.
April 22nd, 2019 06:22
dusk arising said:
I really like this, especially the last line which in fact validates the whole.
Not only am i going to save this as a favourite but i shall also print it, frame it and hang it in my hallway.
For the wisdom it contains.
April 22nd, 2019 06:22
When Duty Calls
Fay Slimm. said:
A pleasure to read this tempting invitation my friend.
April 22nd, 2019 05:38
Fay Slimm. said:
A pleasure to read this tempting invitation my friend.
April 22nd, 2019 05:38
Feral Girls
Michael Edwards said:
Got to get some of that margarine - is it easily available. Enjoyed!
April 21st, 2019 09:55
Michael Edwards said:
Got to get some of that margarine - is it easily available. Enjoyed!
April 21st, 2019 09:55
Feral Girls
orchidee said:
Did they know the \'Carry on\' town of Fircombe? Woof! Enough, Fido says. lol.
April 21st, 2019 07:42
orchidee said:
Did they know the \'Carry on\' town of Fircombe? Woof! Enough, Fido says. lol.
April 21st, 2019 07:42
Feral Girls
dusk arising said:
My wide grin at foo-kin-ya soon faded for the plight of so many unfortunates whom our \'civilisation\' has preyed upon.
Confused by your strange finale, I was enticed to re-read the whole several times.
Still scratching my head... come on... you\'ve gotta explain \'a mercury and a margarine fix\' ??
April 21st, 2019 04:12
dusk arising said:
My wide grin at foo-kin-ya soon faded for the plight of so many unfortunates whom our \'civilisation\' has preyed upon.
Confused by your strange finale, I was enticed to re-read the whole several times.
Still scratching my head... come on... you\'ve gotta explain \'a mercury and a margarine fix\' ??
April 21st, 2019 04:12
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