Comments received on poems by Neville
Inside Her Pants
dusk arising said:
I\'ve taken your challenge
and hoping theres a chance
i can find a rhyming word
as i enter a trance
i hope its quite suitable and worth
perhaps a second glance
or i\'ll look quite ridiculous
for taking this stance.
He he he, thanks for this opportunity of being more silly than usual.
September 15th, 2019 06:07
dusk arising said:
I\'ve taken your challenge
and hoping theres a chance
i can find a rhyming word
as i enter a trance
i hope its quite suitable and worth
perhaps a second glance
or i\'ll look quite ridiculous
for taking this stance.
He he he, thanks for this opportunity of being more silly than usual.
September 15th, 2019 06:07
Inside Her Pants
Michael Edwards said:
They found romance
inside her pants
whilst only stickers rhymes with knickers.
September 15th, 2019 04:59
Michael Edwards said:
They found romance
inside her pants
whilst only stickers rhymes with knickers.
September 15th, 2019 04:59
A Blue Toothbrush
Fay Slimm. said:
I knew this ruse at one time and fell for it hook line and sinker - - your telling never loses its magic my friend........... grand master plans can sometimes work and then can also back-fire......... but morning \"nooky\" to quote Michael can heal much need for those daring to
try the blue toothbrush allure ........................ Fay
September 14th, 2019 13:47
Fay Slimm. said:
I knew this ruse at one time and fell for it hook line and sinker - - your telling never loses its magic my friend........... grand master plans can sometimes work and then can also back-fire......... but morning \"nooky\" to quote Michael can heal much need for those daring to
try the blue toothbrush allure ........................ Fay
September 14th, 2019 13:47
Food for Thought
dusk arising said:
Sounds absolutely edible mate. Get fat!
September 14th, 2019 13:03
dusk arising said:
Sounds absolutely edible mate. Get fat!
September 14th, 2019 13:03
Food for Thought
Christina8 said:
A yummy write Nev.! Very well done. Have a wonderful weekend!
September 14th, 2019 11:28
Christina8 said:
A yummy write Nev.! Very well done. Have a wonderful weekend!
September 14th, 2019 11:28
Food for Thought
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An enchanting write
.Superb!
Keep writing FineB
September 14th, 2019 09:32
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An enchanting write
.Superb!
Keep writing FineB
September 14th, 2019 09:32
Food for Thought
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Edible Neville
Simply edible
September 14th, 2019 03:32
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Edible Neville
Simply edible
September 14th, 2019 03:32
Food for Thought
Michael Edwards said:
Inspired - a melt in your mouth kind of poem - great work.
September 14th, 2019 03:07
Michael Edwards said:
Inspired - a melt in your mouth kind of poem - great work.
September 14th, 2019 03:07
Food for Thought
Fay Slimm. said:
There for the eating was Love - - covered in rice paper no less - your lines are always wrapped in much food for thought my poet-friend - - have a good weekend........... Fay
September 14th, 2019 01:48
Fay Slimm. said:
There for the eating was Love - - covered in rice paper no less - your lines are always wrapped in much food for thought my poet-friend - - have a good weekend........... Fay
September 14th, 2019 01:48
Food for Thought
orchidee said:
I shall swoon if you eat that negligee! lol.
September 14th, 2019 01:42
orchidee said:
I shall swoon if you eat that negligee! lol.
September 14th, 2019 01:42
Disinterested
kevin browne said:
As they say he who draws first from the hip then the bullet will win the day. Your succedding in the seach for attention and the intrest now bit leaves one to tick the box which says yes...
September 13th, 2019 10:55
kevin browne said:
As they say he who draws first from the hip then the bullet will win the day. Your succedding in the seach for attention and the intrest now bit leaves one to tick the box which says yes...
September 13th, 2019 10:55
Disinterested
Bragee said:
Guns and poetry.
Poetry and a pistol.
Sounds like the title of a book I might like!
Good Writing here!
September 13th, 2019 09:32
Bragee said:
Guns and poetry.
Poetry and a pistol.
Sounds like the title of a book I might like!
Good Writing here!
September 13th, 2019 09:32
Disinterested
Christina8 said:
Awesome write Neville! Yes, I think we are all paying attention now! lol
September 13th, 2019 06:25
Christina8 said:
Awesome write Neville! Yes, I think we are all paying attention now! lol
September 13th, 2019 06:25
Disinterested
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Yes we\'re certainly listening NOW!
Grat write Nev
Great for by the way
Was the HIS and HERS underwear pattern intentional or have I been staring at this damn screen too long?
Nice one
September 13th, 2019 04:31
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Yes we\'re certainly listening NOW!
Grat write Nev
Great for by the way
Was the HIS and HERS underwear pattern intentional or have I been staring at this damn screen too long?
Nice one
September 13th, 2019 04:31
Disinterested
Neville said:
candles and josh sticks are okay tho, surely...
September 13th, 2019 03:24
Neville said:
candles and josh sticks are okay tho, surely...
September 13th, 2019 03:24
Disinterested
sylviasearcher said:
Neville, you know you should keep away from the dark web...
Guns and sex for sale, you could get taken for a ride...
September 13th, 2019 03:03
sylviasearcher said:
Neville, you know you should keep away from the dark web...
Guns and sex for sale, you could get taken for a ride...
September 13th, 2019 03:03
Disinterested
orchidee said:
Aww, why everyone disinterested when I am about to sing? Why they all run away?!
September 13th, 2019 01:38
orchidee said:
Aww, why everyone disinterested when I am about to sing? Why they all run away?!
September 13th, 2019 01:38
Disinterested
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh - what a poor love-sick swain you poem for us today Nev. The lady should have but one word of answer to your final question-line and that is a resounding - - -- - YES.
September 13th, 2019 01:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh - what a poor love-sick swain you poem for us today Nev. The lady should have but one word of answer to your final question-line and that is a resounding - - -- - YES.
September 13th, 2019 01:20
Disinterested
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes you can have a moment, but not a moment more.
September 13th, 2019 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes you can have a moment, but not a moment more.
September 13th, 2019 01:16
Disinterested
dusk arising said:
OOOpppss you could well be the silhouette in my piece today.
Your first verse is such an entertainment, but i never wanted to actually shoot anyone who broke my heart/emptied my bank account (yet, but the day is young).
Verse two is deffo her attention grabber.
September 13th, 2019 00:57
dusk arising said:
OOOpppss you could well be the silhouette in my piece today.
Your first verse is such an entertainment, but i never wanted to actually shoot anyone who broke my heart/emptied my bank account (yet, but the day is young).
Verse two is deffo her attention grabber.
September 13th, 2019 00:57
Correction
Suresh said:
At first I read the last word as \"erect\", and you can imagine where my mind went......
I stand corrected...
September 12th, 2019 10:01
Suresh said:
At first I read the last word as \"erect\", and you can imagine where my mind went......
I stand corrected...
September 12th, 2019 10:01
Correction
Christina8 said:
This is a fun little ditty though well written I may add! :)
September 12th, 2019 06:16
Christina8 said:
This is a fun little ditty though well written I may add! :)
September 12th, 2019 06:16
Correction
dusk arising said:
Lots to be read into this little ditty. Creative poetic minds will run wild with this today. My own thoughts are of course disgraceful but hey-ho.
Love the sun burnt knees touch.
September 12th, 2019 04:05
dusk arising said:
Lots to be read into this little ditty. Creative poetic minds will run wild with this today. My own thoughts are of course disgraceful but hey-ho.
Love the sun burnt knees touch.
September 12th, 2019 04:05
Correction
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The phrased damned if you do etc etc comes to mind
Tongue in check of a write Neville BRAVO!
September 12th, 2019 02:35
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The phrased damned if you do etc etc comes to mind
Tongue in check of a write Neville BRAVO!
September 12th, 2019 02:35
Correction
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - your talent for making me smile with your play on words is always so right my and never fails to please - - -
September 12th, 2019 01:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - your talent for making me smile with your play on words is always so right my and never fails to please - - -
September 12th, 2019 01:59
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