Comments received on poems by Neville
Good Time Girl
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes we do not real people inside, it is unfortunate that she had to go down that path but sometimes it is the only way to live.
My son works in Social Services in the prisons and he says how great some of the inmates are in ordinary ways, they just went wrong in one particular way.
Great write Neville.
September 18th, 2019 04:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes we do not real people inside, it is unfortunate that she had to go down that path but sometimes it is the only way to live.
My son works in Social Services in the prisons and he says how great some of the inmates are in ordinary ways, they just went wrong in one particular way.
Great write Neville.
September 18th, 2019 04:43
Good Time Girl
orchidee said:
I understand - some folk fall on bad times, their lives go downhill for whatever reason.
Meanwhile - Oh, I dunno, I will go mad and meet her, for a bit of a \'good time\'! lol. Fido says can he come along too?! Has the \'girl\' got a lady dog he could meet?! Ooh!
September 18th, 2019 03:30
orchidee said:
I understand - some folk fall on bad times, their lives go downhill for whatever reason.
Meanwhile - Oh, I dunno, I will go mad and meet her, for a bit of a \'good time\'! lol. Fido says can he come along too?! Has the \'girl\' got a lady dog he could meet?! Ooh!
September 18th, 2019 03:30
Good Time Girl
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a pitiable yet in some ways quite memorable time to be in is the picture you pen of a once-pretty girl - - giving many relief and receiving far more than lucre has a very strong warning for those beginning the game.
September 18th, 2019 02:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a pitiable yet in some ways quite memorable time to be in is the picture you pen of a once-pretty girl - - giving many relief and receiving far more than lucre has a very strong warning for those beginning the game.
September 18th, 2019 02:47
Good Time Girl
dusk arising said:
Those Lib Dems have a lot to answer for!
Truly sad portrait of an ageing hooker probably wondering if the path which led to \'now\' was ever worth it\'s cost upon her.
September 18th, 2019 02:41
dusk arising said:
Those Lib Dems have a lot to answer for!
Truly sad portrait of an ageing hooker probably wondering if the path which led to \'now\' was ever worth it\'s cost upon her.
September 18th, 2019 02:41
Good Time Girl
orchidee said:
Oohh, I best not meet her then! Woof, No says Fido.
September 18th, 2019 02:37
orchidee said:
Oohh, I best not meet her then! Woof, No says Fido.
September 18th, 2019 02:37
Fondly and Truly
Michael Edwards said:
Now if I was a woman - fine write N
September 17th, 2019 15:26
Michael Edwards said:
Now if I was a woman - fine write N
September 17th, 2019 15:26
Fondly and Truly
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville, those thoughts of love from the past are always there.
September 17th, 2019 13:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville, those thoughts of love from the past are always there.
September 17th, 2019 13:19
Fondly and Truly
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
“Fondly and Truly” indeed!
An enjoyable read that resonates...
Wonderful memories never to be forgotten if we’re lucky enough to have experienced them!
~Laura~🌻
September 17th, 2019 12:09
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
“Fondly and Truly” indeed!
An enjoyable read that resonates...
Wonderful memories never to be forgotten if we’re lucky enough to have experienced them!
~Laura~🌻
September 17th, 2019 12:09
Fondly and Truly
sylviasearcher said:
I am not sure I have or will ever fondly and truly
September 17th, 2019 08:12
sylviasearcher said:
I am not sure I have or will ever fondly and truly
September 17th, 2019 08:12
Fondly and Truly
dusk arising said:
Beautifully phrased the unspoken desire with us all to be remembered affectionately by past \'nearly right\' lovers.
I know i look back with positive thoughts, as can be seen in my poetry.
Memories my life would be all the sadder without.
September 17th, 2019 07:46
dusk arising said:
Beautifully phrased the unspoken desire with us all to be remembered affectionately by past \'nearly right\' lovers.
I know i look back with positive thoughts, as can be seen in my poetry.
Memories my life would be all the sadder without.
September 17th, 2019 07:46
Fondly and Truly
Christina8 said:
Oh wow this is truly beautiful Nev....Fay is correct when she says it will set female hearts asighing!!
September 17th, 2019 06:24
Christina8 said:
Oh wow this is truly beautiful Nev....Fay is correct when she says it will set female hearts asighing!!
September 17th, 2019 06:24
Fondly and Truly
Fay Slimm. said:
An appeal to set female hearts asighing - you win again Nev with your gently expressed fondly and truly romantic reminders. Great stuff.
September 17th, 2019 04:58
Fay Slimm. said:
An appeal to set female hearts asighing - you win again Nev with your gently expressed fondly and truly romantic reminders. Great stuff.
September 17th, 2019 04:58
Client
Goldfinch60 said:
Captivating write Neville, it needs several reads as so much can be seen in it. Thank you for waking my brain this morning.
September 17th, 2019 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Captivating write Neville, it needs several reads as so much can be seen in it. Thank you for waking my brain this morning.
September 17th, 2019 00:27
Client
kevin browne said:
The captivating saying of judge and jury, but there\'s no mention of the executionist in this well crafted crafty, watch out below the Judges seat before she\'d be paid for some under the desk work. As for as the executionare well he landed a pretty blow on his rent arrears...
September 16th, 2019 16:45
kevin browne said:
The captivating saying of judge and jury, but there\'s no mention of the executionist in this well crafted crafty, watch out below the Judges seat before she\'d be paid for some under the desk work. As for as the executionare well he landed a pretty blow on his rent arrears...
September 16th, 2019 16:45
Client
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m still pondericating but I guess dusk sums it up best. an intriguing write.
September 16th, 2019 12:27
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m still pondericating but I guess dusk sums it up best. an intriguing write.
September 16th, 2019 12:27
Client
orchidee said:
I of course didn\'t see the hidden single universal truth! lol.
September 16th, 2019 09:32
orchidee said:
I of course didn\'t see the hidden single universal truth! lol.
September 16th, 2019 09:32
Client
Christina8 said:
Interesting twist on words on these clever lines....alot can be read into them
September 16th, 2019 06:57
Christina8 said:
Interesting twist on words on these clever lines....alot can be read into them
September 16th, 2019 06:57
Client
dusk arising said:
An accessory to the crime of..... mmmm.... nay she was the prize for ten bob and a half hour of fun.
She knew how to find justice in his old bailey once she had his wig off and doing her jury service was a sunday regular......
...... it\'s all there as my perverse mind grapples with the opportunities presented by you today.
Some said \'let her dangle\' others had community service in mind.
September 16th, 2019 05:06
dusk arising said:
An accessory to the crime of..... mmmm.... nay she was the prize for ten bob and a half hour of fun.
She knew how to find justice in his old bailey once she had his wig off and doing her jury service was a sunday regular......
...... it\'s all there as my perverse mind grapples with the opportunities presented by you today.
Some said \'let her dangle\' others had community service in mind.
September 16th, 2019 05:06
Client
Fay Slimm. said:
Letting that be so is wisest methinks......... clients are clients of all sorts of people.......... another to ponder on Nev.............
September 16th, 2019 04:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Letting that be so is wisest methinks......... clients are clients of all sorts of people.......... another to ponder on Nev.............
September 16th, 2019 04:21
Client
sylviasearcher said:
Well I read quite a lot into these clever lines...
September 16th, 2019 03:52
sylviasearcher said:
Well I read quite a lot into these clever lines...
September 16th, 2019 03:52
Inside Her Pants
sylviasearcher said:
Inside her pants
There was a chance
But with rhymes like pussy
He learned, unlike he, she was fussy
September 16th, 2019 02:37
sylviasearcher said:
Inside her pants
There was a chance
But with rhymes like pussy
He learned, unlike he, she was fussy
September 16th, 2019 02:37
Inside Her Pants
Goldfinch60 said:
Has romance left your world Neville,
Perhaps you never gave it a chance,
When you picked that lance,
To make your advance,
Through the fields of France.
September 16th, 2019 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Has romance left your world Neville,
Perhaps you never gave it a chance,
When you picked that lance,
To make your advance,
Through the fields of France.
September 16th, 2019 00:27
Inside Her Pants
Suresh said:
Try as hard, as I may, focus on my daily chants
Thoughts uncontrolled, veer off, to inside her pants
Fight as I might, sexual urge is too strong
No matter how it\'s sung, it\'s a great song
September 15th, 2019 15:15
Suresh said:
Try as hard, as I may, focus on my daily chants
Thoughts uncontrolled, veer off, to inside her pants
Fight as I might, sexual urge is too strong
No matter how it\'s sung, it\'s a great song
September 15th, 2019 15:15
Inside Her Pants
Fay Slimm. said:
I like a dare specially a double but can only think of these two .........
Inside her pants
Hides sweet Nancy - - - -- OR
Inside her pants
cheeky Nancy.
Howz that then !! - -- bum bum !! ............. from Fay
September 15th, 2019 08:57
Fay Slimm. said:
I like a dare specially a double but can only think of these two .........
Inside her pants
Hides sweet Nancy - - - -- OR
Inside her pants
cheeky Nancy.
Howz that then !! - -- bum bum !! ............. from Fay
September 15th, 2019 08:57
Inside Her Pants
orchidee said:
Ants in ya pants - and even that\'s enough to make me swoon! It would be! Pass me the purple tablets.
September 15th, 2019 07:26
orchidee said:
Ants in ya pants - and even that\'s enough to make me swoon! It would be! Pass me the purple tablets.
September 15th, 2019 07:26
Inside Her Pants
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Remnants of Rembrandt implant their confidants
While Durant decants the sycophant plant
DO NOT get me started on Knickers! Michael
September 15th, 2019 07:04
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Remnants of Rembrandt implant their confidants
While Durant decants the sycophant plant
DO NOT get me started on Knickers! Michael
September 15th, 2019 07:04
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