Comments received on poems by Neville
Skien
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing write Neville, that purpose is within you though, just keep looking.
Andy
May 31st, 2020 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing write Neville, that purpose is within you though, just keep looking.
Andy
May 31st, 2020 00:30
Skien
Neville said:
You just put a smile on this face of mine, thank you DA...
Stay safe & well my friend,
Neville
May 30th, 2020 14:45
Neville said:
You just put a smile on this face of mine, thank you DA...
Stay safe & well my friend,
Neville
May 30th, 2020 14:45
Skien
dusk arising said:
They shall come again and winter descend upon these lands.
But a motherly dose of syrup of figs shall clear the way for more of the same old and we shall persevere.
Love the drama and mystery within your work today. Worthy of the several re-reads before i glibly placed a comment.
May 30th, 2020 14:39
dusk arising said:
They shall come again and winter descend upon these lands.
But a motherly dose of syrup of figs shall clear the way for more of the same old and we shall persevere.
Love the drama and mystery within your work today. Worthy of the several re-reads before i glibly placed a comment.
May 30th, 2020 14:39
Skien
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Erm, wishing the year away too quickly? Autumn?!
May 30th, 2020 11:50
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Erm, wishing the year away too quickly? Autumn?!
May 30th, 2020 11:50
Badgers
Neville said:
Aye, no grey areas except for on my head.... Thank you Andy
Neville
May 30th, 2020 01:21
Neville said:
Aye, no grey areas except for on my head.... Thank you Andy
Neville
May 30th, 2020 01:21
Badgers
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville, there is so much between in our world so badgers are only seen in two ways.
Andy
May 30th, 2020 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville, there is so much between in our world so badgers are only seen in two ways.
Andy
May 30th, 2020 00:55
Badgers
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Seen any hares? If not, seen any \'e\'er\'s? Will I shut up? lol.
May 29th, 2020 09:12
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Seen any hares? If not, seen any \'e\'er\'s? Will I shut up? lol.
May 29th, 2020 09:12
Badgers
Fay Slimm. said:
Agreed my friend - Badgers see life as a simple black-and-white way of expressing their being and therefore need nothing betwixt or between . - What wisdom they have methinks..................
May 29th, 2020 07:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Agreed my friend - Badgers see life as a simple black-and-white way of expressing their being and therefore need nothing betwixt or between . - What wisdom they have methinks..................
May 29th, 2020 07:05
Upon the Morrow
Goldfinch60 said:
May those words left be left in your wonderful words as well Neville.
Andy
May 28th, 2020 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
May those words left be left in your wonderful words as well Neville.
Andy
May 28th, 2020 00:59
Upon the Morrow
Shij said:
After viewing your work I feel so honoured to have been left feedback from yourself on one of my poems (I appreciate all feedback). Wow, what a talent you have! Just simply beautiful!
May 27th, 2020 15:43
Shij said:
After viewing your work I feel so honoured to have been left feedback from yourself on one of my poems (I appreciate all feedback). Wow, what a talent you have! Just simply beautiful!
May 27th, 2020 15:43
Upon the Morrow
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. You seen any \'e\'ermores\' lately!?
May 27th, 2020 11:43
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. You seen any \'e\'ermores\' lately!?
May 27th, 2020 11:43
Upon the Morrow
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah Nev -the tense and linguistic simplicity of this tender ballad displays your indisputable talent for closing in on emotion with the use of Olde English at its veritable best....... another fave to add to my list for sure...........x
May 27th, 2020 10:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah Nev -the tense and linguistic simplicity of this tender ballad displays your indisputable talent for closing in on emotion with the use of Olde English at its veritable best....... another fave to add to my list for sure...........x
May 27th, 2020 10:20
Second Best
Goldfinch60 said:
That second best allowed her offspring to come to the fore in the future.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
That second best allowed her offspring to come to the fore in the future.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 01:27
Second Best
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Aww, I thought I would be second best in singing competition - only two of us in it. But I won second prize - last as usual. lol.
May 23rd, 2020 11:24
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Aww, I thought I would be second best in singing competition - only two of us in it. But I won second prize - last as usual. lol.
May 23rd, 2020 11:24
Second Best
Fay Slimm. said:
That beauty was prettily doing what comes naturally - - - but your wrap it together so well mon ami ............... x
May 23rd, 2020 06:02
Fay Slimm. said:
That beauty was prettily doing what comes naturally - - - but your wrap it together so well mon ami ............... x
May 23rd, 2020 06:02
Second Best
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
When there’s nothing left,
second best...
IS THE BEST!
A wonderful read.
Thank you for sharing
your thoughts!
Laura
May 23rd, 2020 05:14
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
When there’s nothing left,
second best...
IS THE BEST!
A wonderful read.
Thank you for sharing
your thoughts!
Laura
May 23rd, 2020 05:14
Lockdown
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, we miss our loved ones in this time of lockdown, hopefully soon we can be with each other once more.
Andy
May 23rd, 2020 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, we miss our loved ones in this time of lockdown, hopefully soon we can be with each other once more.
Andy
May 23rd, 2020 00:30
Lockdown
Neville said:
Thank you for stopping by my dear friend... I am fine, hope you are too
Neville
May 22nd, 2020 14:20
Neville said:
Thank you for stopping by my dear friend... I am fine, hope you are too
Neville
May 22nd, 2020 14:20
Lockdown
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A fine write to read during this ‘Lockdown’.
It has certainly imprisoned us.
Let’s hope this prison sentence imposed upon us won’t be for long.
Hope you’re feeling better.
Laura
May 22nd, 2020 14:08
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A fine write to read during this ‘Lockdown’.
It has certainly imprisoned us.
Let’s hope this prison sentence imposed upon us won’t be for long.
Hope you’re feeling better.
Laura
May 22nd, 2020 14:08
Lockdown
Michael Edwards said:
Confined to barracks
waiting for a vaccine
sitting on my buttocks
cut off, alone, unseen.
May 22nd, 2020 06:52
Michael Edwards said:
Confined to barracks
waiting for a vaccine
sitting on my buttocks
cut off, alone, unseen.
May 22nd, 2020 06:52
Lockdown
mystic flower said:
Beautiful piece and May this isolation days end soon
Mystic
May 22nd, 2020 06:11
mystic flower said:
Beautiful piece and May this isolation days end soon
Mystic
May 22nd, 2020 06:11
Lockdown
Fay Slimm. said:
Dotted with love-names this view of lockdown sounds like the perfect romantic answer to boredom of isolation - -- applause for the love- name-assonance my gentle amigo.
May 22nd, 2020 04:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Dotted with love-names this view of lockdown sounds like the perfect romantic answer to boredom of isolation - -- applause for the love- name-assonance my gentle amigo.
May 22nd, 2020 04:44
The Duck Billed Platypus
Neville said:
Ya got me laughing and cussin all the way to the breakfastsicus table, which is andycus that’s where I was aiming for...
Cheers my friend,
Neville
May 22nd, 2020 02:43
Neville said:
Ya got me laughing and cussin all the way to the breakfastsicus table, which is andycus that’s where I was aiming for...
Cheers my friend,
Neville
May 22nd, 2020 02:43
The Duck Billed Platypus
Goldfinch60 said:
Into the shadowicus
went the platipus
hiding from othersicus
tile he was fedicus.
Andycus
May 21st, 2020 23:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Into the shadowicus
went the platipus
hiding from othersicus
tile he was fedicus.
Andycus
May 21st, 2020 23:56
The Duck Billed Platypus
Michael Edwards said:
Why did the duck bill the platypus?
couldn\'t he pay
has he gone away
do you miss him quite a loticus?
May 21st, 2020 16:33
Michael Edwards said:
Why did the duck bill the platypus?
couldn\'t he pay
has he gone away
do you miss him quite a loticus?
May 21st, 2020 16:33
The Duck Billed Platypus
Fay Slimm. said:
Am searching round now-a-cus for your missing platypus and should I access it will send it of courseicus by that fabulous quick-as-a-flashy
Red-Crossicus for to stem your unhappicus......stay in to rest and hoping you soon get well- - cos I wantaknow yu is smilin\' agen my funnypus friend..................x
May 21st, 2020 07:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Am searching round now-a-cus for your missing platypus and should I access it will send it of courseicus by that fabulous quick-as-a-flashy
Red-Crossicus for to stem your unhappicus......stay in to rest and hoping you soon get well- - cos I wantaknow yu is smilin\' agen my funnypus friend..................x
May 21st, 2020 07:13
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