Comments received on poems by Neville
Upon the Morrow
MendedFences27 said:
Though subtle, I find this sad, but with a sense of hope. If that hope is for an afterlife reunion. \"Bunting \" makes me think of a wartime loss . Perhaps they will be together in some spiritual way.
I enjoyed this poem and the way you\'ve subtly described the passing and the sorrow felt by those left behind. Very descriptive and yet not ponderous. I liked it.- Phil A.
June 6th, 2020 17:21
MendedFences27 said:
Though subtle, I find this sad, but with a sense of hope. If that hope is for an afterlife reunion. \"Bunting \" makes me think of a wartime loss . Perhaps they will be together in some spiritual way.
I enjoyed this poem and the way you\'ve subtly described the passing and the sorrow felt by those left behind. Very descriptive and yet not ponderous. I liked it.- Phil A.
June 6th, 2020 17:21
Falling for Icarus
orchidee said:
I told him to stay about 93 million miles away from that sun (distance Earth to Sun) but he never listened! lol.
June 6th, 2020 07:07
orchidee said:
I told him to stay about 93 million miles away from that sun (distance Earth to Sun) but he never listened! lol.
June 6th, 2020 07:07
Falling for Icarus
Fay Slimm. said:
Flying too near the sun whatever the reason results in melt-down where love drowns -- a comforting last line shows someone has reached out with understanding. This write touches the heart Nev.
June 6th, 2020 05:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Flying too near the sun whatever the reason results in melt-down where love drowns -- a comforting last line shows someone has reached out with understanding. This write touches the heart Nev.
June 6th, 2020 05:15
Falling for Icarus
dusk arising said:
Like the racing driver who swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed i sense someone flying too close to a son here.
June 6th, 2020 04:09
dusk arising said:
Like the racing driver who swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed i sense someone flying too close to a son here.
June 6th, 2020 04:09
Free Fall
Goldfinch60 said:
Reaching for the stars is the way to go Neville, friends and family are there ready to reach down for us.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Reaching for the stars is the way to go Neville, friends and family are there ready to reach down for us.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 00:50
Free Fall
Saxon Crow said:
Because the stars are really hot. So not only am i going to crush my body to death when i land i will also have a burnt hand!
June 5th, 2020 09:53
Saxon Crow said:
Because the stars are really hot. So not only am i going to crush my body to death when i land i will also have a burnt hand!
June 5th, 2020 09:53
Free Fall
Fay Slimm. said:
Why not indeed - - reaching for light can divert the fall. Good advice in these lined my friend.
June 5th, 2020 04:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Why not indeed - - reaching for light can divert the fall. Good advice in these lined my friend.
June 5th, 2020 04:32
Free Fall
orchidee said:
Oohh, I know, I clutched at a tree branch. It was rotten. It did not break my faaaaalllllll! Good acting there, innit?! lol.
June 5th, 2020 03:59
orchidee said:
Oohh, I know, I clutched at a tree branch. It was rotten. It did not break my faaaaalllllll! Good acting there, innit?! lol.
June 5th, 2020 03:59
The Sorriest of Words
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be such a sad word when more should be said and done.
Andy
June 5th, 2020 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be such a sad word when more should be said and done.
Andy
June 5th, 2020 01:03
The Sorriest of Words
MendedFences27 said:
\"Sorry\" is just another word, but so are \"sincere\" and \"disingenuous.\" Sometimes your \"sorriest of words\" falls off lips like a lead balloon, and less frequently it delivers at least some solace. It\'s when nothing is said that causes the greatest concern.
A self-written poem with the weight of empathy clinging to its intent. Perhaps your words will cause many to pause and consider.
Well done, Neville - Phil A.
June 4th, 2020 18:58
MendedFences27 said:
\"Sorry\" is just another word, but so are \"sincere\" and \"disingenuous.\" Sometimes your \"sorriest of words\" falls off lips like a lead balloon, and less frequently it delivers at least some solace. It\'s when nothing is said that causes the greatest concern.
A self-written poem with the weight of empathy clinging to its intent. Perhaps your words will cause many to pause and consider.
Well done, Neville - Phil A.
June 4th, 2020 18:58
The Sorriest of Words
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
\'E\'ermore\' is another sorry word - well, a \'sad\' word in the sense of boring! lol.
June 4th, 2020 09:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
\'E\'ermore\' is another sorry word - well, a \'sad\' word in the sense of boring! lol.
June 4th, 2020 09:02
The Sorriest of Words
Poetic Dan said:
Bam and ain\'t that the truth when we forget that action speak louder that words! Our Internet feels like a burden of a curse, when they can\'t cope force remains the first...
Great work my friend!
Much peace and respect
June 4th, 2020 08:11
Poetic Dan said:
Bam and ain\'t that the truth when we forget that action speak louder that words! Our Internet feels like a burden of a curse, when they can\'t cope force remains the first...
Great work my friend!
Much peace and respect
June 4th, 2020 08:11
The Sorriest of Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Times like you so aptly describe are etched in the heart and mind where sorry seems so inadequate. A haunt of a read...............x
June 4th, 2020 08:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Times like you so aptly describe are etched in the heart and mind where sorry seems so inadequate. A haunt of a read...............x
June 4th, 2020 08:07
Remote
Goldfinch60 said:
Let it be indeed, that chapter in your life is over and the new one will be wonderful.
Good Senryu.
Andy
June 4th, 2020 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Let it be indeed, that chapter in your life is over and the new one will be wonderful.
Good Senryu.
Andy
June 4th, 2020 00:23
Remote
dusk arising said:
Life is so awkward and those television controls so distant and clumsy when you lose the remote.
I agree with the light hearted attitude though. For both ebay and amazon offer a calmer tomorrow.
June 3rd, 2020 13:44
dusk arising said:
Life is so awkward and those television controls so distant and clumsy when you lose the remote.
I agree with the light hearted attitude though. For both ebay and amazon offer a calmer tomorrow.
June 3rd, 2020 13:44
Remote
Fay Slimm. said:
A sensible way to end a fading affair - - letting it be and enjoying the memories is the better conclusion - a well honed three liner mi amigo.
June 3rd, 2020 07:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A sensible way to end a fading affair - - letting it be and enjoying the memories is the better conclusion - a well honed three liner mi amigo.
June 3rd, 2020 07:05
Just Another Murmeration
Goldfinch60 said:
Those murmerations can be so swift that sometimes you have to wonder if your flying in your love but they suddenly disappear as you fall to the ground - spent for the day.
Andy
June 3rd, 2020 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Those murmerations can be so swift that sometimes you have to wonder if your flying in your love but they suddenly disappear as you fall to the ground - spent for the day.
Andy
June 3rd, 2020 00:35
Just Another Murmeration
dusk arising said:
I wasn\'t sure what to make of your piece today so i decided i would regard it as an overtly sexual romance with the english ...erm languish.
Those feet never touching the ground, the flurry of ups and downs ... i\'m beginning to feel a little feint now as i reminisce .... ha! no smiles.... it\'s definitely marriage ooopss i mean love...
Fantasy takes to the wing and a wonderful pattern emerges and is GONE!
June 2nd, 2020 06:26
dusk arising said:
I wasn\'t sure what to make of your piece today so i decided i would regard it as an overtly sexual romance with the english ...erm languish.
Those feet never touching the ground, the flurry of ups and downs ... i\'m beginning to feel a little feint now as i reminisce .... ha! no smiles.... it\'s definitely marriage ooopss i mean love...
Fantasy takes to the wing and a wonderful pattern emerges and is GONE!
June 2nd, 2020 06:26
Just Another Murmeration
Fay Slimm. said:
Flying high and surrounded with feelings of love must be a kind of murmeration and couched in your words is very inviting my dear friend.
June 2nd, 2020 06:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Flying high and surrounded with feelings of love must be a kind of murmeration and couched in your words is very inviting my dear friend.
June 2nd, 2020 06:07
Just Another Murmeration
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some folk, having murmerations! I\'m looking for the Lesser-Spotted E\'ermore. I wish I would shut up! lol.
June 2nd, 2020 05:40
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some folk, having murmerations! I\'m looking for the Lesser-Spotted E\'ermore. I wish I would shut up! lol.
June 2nd, 2020 05:40
Nob Hill Hotel Ca
Goldfinch60 said:
Some places will never change as some people cannot afford to get to them.
Andy
June 2nd, 2020 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Some places will never change as some people cannot afford to get to them.
Andy
June 2nd, 2020 00:34
Nob Hill Hotel Ca
dusk arising said:
Memories of standing room only on a street car named disgusting. Drawn alongside chauffer driven Mrs Drippen-Gold. It must be sunday, the conductors gum languishes by the bell push.
Atmospheric stuff revealing your pampered past luxury hotel living? Or a stark contrast to reality?
June 1st, 2020 06:23
dusk arising said:
Memories of standing room only on a street car named disgusting. Drawn alongside chauffer driven Mrs Drippen-Gold. It must be sunday, the conductors gum languishes by the bell push.
Atmospheric stuff revealing your pampered past luxury hotel living? Or a stark contrast to reality?
June 1st, 2020 06:23
Nob Hill Hotel Ca
Fay Slimm. said:
Book me a ticket on the first plane then - Nob Hill eh ? - ah - this I must see............ I love the disguised wit in these few lines Nev.
June 1st, 2020 05:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Book me a ticket on the first plane then - Nob Hill eh ? - ah - this I must see............ I love the disguised wit in these few lines Nev.
June 1st, 2020 05:30
Skien
MendedFences27 said:
Well, technically it\'s still Spring, or maybe for some unknown reason they had to change locales.
You paint a vivid picture here, and the metaphor of scarring works well. And for sure it can disorient the observer, but please I hope you forecast is incorrect. Seeing them when their wings flap in unison can be inspiring. This piece of poetry is for sure a Fav. - Phil A.
May 31st, 2020 18:01
MendedFences27 said:
Well, technically it\'s still Spring, or maybe for some unknown reason they had to change locales.
You paint a vivid picture here, and the metaphor of scarring works well. And for sure it can disorient the observer, but please I hope you forecast is incorrect. Seeing them when their wings flap in unison can be inspiring. This piece of poetry is for sure a Fav. - Phil A.
May 31st, 2020 18:01
Skien
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes coming or going has often foxed me -- but just to recall that murmur of perfect formation is enough to light up the strings of my heart..... have just posted a heart-warming oldie - just cos I felt like it this sunny Sunday. Keep staying safe my friend.
May 31st, 2020 04:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes coming or going has often foxed me -- but just to recall that murmur of perfect formation is enough to light up the strings of my heart..... have just posted a heart-warming oldie - just cos I felt like it this sunny Sunday. Keep staying safe my friend.
May 31st, 2020 04:22
Skien
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh I too love to stand and watch this special performance - -Introspective and intriguing these migratory lines describing the perfect formation of skeining birds and the \"scar\" left in their wake.
A mystery we shall never unravel is the sight of such co-ordination in the wild........ glad I caught this piece of keen observation Nev and thank you for reminding us readers to look forward for more of such awesome signatures in our skies.
May 31st, 2020 03:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh I too love to stand and watch this special performance - -Introspective and intriguing these migratory lines describing the perfect formation of skeining birds and the \"scar\" left in their wake.
A mystery we shall never unravel is the sight of such co-ordination in the wild........ glad I caught this piece of keen observation Nev and thank you for reminding us readers to look forward for more of such awesome signatures in our skies.
May 31st, 2020 03:35
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