Comments received on poems by Neville
Ma Hal Khe Te
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
An enchanting and vivid write.
Keep writing FineB
April 12th, 2020 11:37
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
An enchanting and vivid write.
Keep writing FineB
April 12th, 2020 11:37
Ma Hal Khe Te
dusk arising said:
May you find purpose anew in the time left/allotted to you before that event.
I\'m sure there is much poetry within you.... may you one day move the world one step on.
April 12th, 2020 11:21
dusk arising said:
May you find purpose anew in the time left/allotted to you before that event.
I\'m sure there is much poetry within you.... may you one day move the world one step on.
April 12th, 2020 11:21
Not Quite Out of the Blue
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Making it up as we go along?
Great write very well captured moment in time Neville
April 12th, 2020 06:16
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Making it up as we go along?
Great write very well captured moment in time Neville
April 12th, 2020 06:16
Not Quite Out of the Blue
Goldfinch60 said:
There is an opinion that this virus was created deliberately to remove the weak and the old codgers like me from the world so somebody planned this.
The one thing that seems to be coming out of this is that many people are becoming more helpful towards others, I hope this continue and the world will be come a much better and friendlier place to live in.
Andy
April 12th, 2020 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
There is an opinion that this virus was created deliberately to remove the weak and the old codgers like me from the world so somebody planned this.
The one thing that seems to be coming out of this is that many people are becoming more helpful towards others, I hope this continue and the world will be come a much better and friendlier place to live in.
Andy
April 12th, 2020 00:55
Not Quite Out of the Blue
SerenWise said:
Very relevant and truthful. Good work
April 11th, 2020 15:18
SerenWise said:
Very relevant and truthful. Good work
April 11th, 2020 15:18
Not Quite Out of the Blue
dusk arising said:
Strangely Dean Koontz in a 1980/90 novel predicted a virus eminating from wuhan in china would sweep the world with devastating effect in early 2020.... (google it)
I didnt see it coming but we have been tempting fate haven\'t we as the so called western educated world with our clever capitalist led ways of life. Each of us comfortably numb to certain realities.
Fear is now an everyday experience for us all... we do not know where we are going with this in our relaxed society. We can hardly look to a neat and tidy end to this as appears to be happening in china for we are far from comparable to their authoritarian regeime.
April 11th, 2020 13:07
dusk arising said:
Strangely Dean Koontz in a 1980/90 novel predicted a virus eminating from wuhan in china would sweep the world with devastating effect in early 2020.... (google it)
I didnt see it coming but we have been tempting fate haven\'t we as the so called western educated world with our clever capitalist led ways of life. Each of us comfortably numb to certain realities.
Fear is now an everyday experience for us all... we do not know where we are going with this in our relaxed society. We can hardly look to a neat and tidy end to this as appears to be happening in china for we are far from comparable to their authoritarian regeime.
April 11th, 2020 13:07
Not Quite Out of the Blue
orchidee said:
We (all of us?) are going to require even more of the PM and Co., when he recovers, I suspect - going through his own crisis at present.
I don\'t have much opinion of the political side.
Do your daughter and partner have \'temporary\' PPE? Thinking of you all.
April 11th, 2020 12:12
orchidee said:
We (all of us?) are going to require even more of the PM and Co., when he recovers, I suspect - going through his own crisis at present.
I don\'t have much opinion of the political side.
Do your daughter and partner have \'temporary\' PPE? Thinking of you all.
April 11th, 2020 12:12
Not Quite Out of the Blue
Michael Edwards said:
It sure wasn\'t out of the blue - all the signs were there. Much enjoyed this in as much as one can about this horrible issue.
April 11th, 2020 10:34
Michael Edwards said:
It sure wasn\'t out of the blue - all the signs were there. Much enjoyed this in as much as one can about this horrible issue.
April 11th, 2020 10:34
The Eleventh Hour
Fay Slimm. said:
Many eleventh hours make escapees quake with what appears next and you hit the nail firmly with the last couplet my friend. A beguiling read to be read again.......... hence into my list of faves this goes.
April 10th, 2020 07:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Many eleventh hours make escapees quake with what appears next and you hit the nail firmly with the last couplet my friend. A beguiling read to be read again.......... hence into my list of faves this goes.
April 10th, 2020 07:38
The Eleventh Hour
dusk arising said:
Now look here Noah, I told you that bloody boat would get stuck in the lock.
You sure know how to write intriguing pieces.... a sure recipe to get me re-reading several times.
I\'m left feeling i just skimmed the plot of six wonderful novels. I take my hat off to ya.
April 10th, 2020 07:28
dusk arising said:
Now look here Noah, I told you that bloody boat would get stuck in the lock.
You sure know how to write intriguing pieces.... a sure recipe to get me re-reading several times.
I\'m left feeling i just skimmed the plot of six wonderful novels. I take my hat off to ya.
April 10th, 2020 07:28
The Eleventh Hour
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
I was not rescued. It\'s my own fault. I thought it was the eleventh hour, but it was the day the clocks changed. lol.
April 10th, 2020 06:11
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
I was not rescued. It\'s my own fault. I thought it was the eleventh hour, but it was the day the clocks changed. lol.
April 10th, 2020 06:11
Birdsong
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, the violin section in Nature\'s Orchestra.
Andy
April 10th, 2020 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, the violin section in Nature\'s Orchestra.
Andy
April 10th, 2020 01:08
Birdsong
Michael Edwards said:
One of the aural joys of this world so simply expressed.
April 9th, 2020 16:14
Michael Edwards said:
One of the aural joys of this world so simply expressed.
April 9th, 2020 16:14
Birdsong
dusk arising said:
And then she bit me!
For me the blackbirds evening song takes some beating.
As i have said before, i\'m a sucker for the short punchy meaningful pieces. This one ticks all the boxes. Delightful.
April 9th, 2020 13:43
dusk arising said:
And then she bit me!
For me the blackbirds evening song takes some beating.
As i have said before, i\'m a sucker for the short punchy meaningful pieces. This one ticks all the boxes. Delightful.
April 9th, 2020 13:43
Birdsong
thisismyidentity said:
So simply brings joy and warmth to the heart. Thank you for sharing.
April 9th, 2020 08:07
thisismyidentity said:
So simply brings joy and warmth to the heart. Thank you for sharing.
April 9th, 2020 08:07
Birdsong
orchidee said:
A lovely write Neville.
My poem is: \'The Awful Horror - Orville The Duck!\' lol.
April 9th, 2020 07:29
orchidee said:
A lovely write Neville.
My poem is: \'The Awful Horror - Orville The Duck!\' lol.
April 9th, 2020 07:29
Birdsong
Fay Slimm. said:
Naturally simple but beautifully expressed in these few lines Nev. ...and this I relate to each time I am working outside.... .. what better I ask.
April 9th, 2020 07:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Naturally simple but beautifully expressed in these few lines Nev. ...and this I relate to each time I am working outside.... .. what better I ask.
April 9th, 2020 07:06
Dont Kid Yourself
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, just look at what Churchill did BEFORE WW2.
Andy
April 9th, 2020 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, just look at what Churchill did BEFORE WW2.
Andy
April 9th, 2020 01:36
Dont Kid Yourself
Fay Slimm. said:
These words have been true for many a century - - - - making moves on behalf of others whether lives may be lost or not - politics controls whatever the country - - the point well made Neville........
April 8th, 2020 13:58
Fay Slimm. said:
These words have been true for many a century - - - - making moves on behalf of others whether lives may be lost or not - politics controls whatever the country - - the point well made Neville........
April 8th, 2020 13:58
Dont Kid Yourself
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Touché my friend! Well stated.
Stay safe & healthy.
~Laura~🌻
April 8th, 2020 12:25
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Touché my friend! Well stated.
Stay safe & healthy.
~Laura~🌻
April 8th, 2020 12:25
Dont Kid Yourself
dusk arising said:
Most definitely agree. Dear Josef Stalin killed more than Adolf Hitler and neither would have got my vote. But there again many will be pointing a finger at today\'s government for their actions/lack of actions in this covid scenario.
April 8th, 2020 11:55
dusk arising said:
Most definitely agree. Dear Josef Stalin killed more than Adolf Hitler and neither would have got my vote. But there again many will be pointing a finger at today\'s government for their actions/lack of actions in this covid scenario.
April 8th, 2020 11:55
Is There Anyone There
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many out there who can hear and appreciate your words Neville and I am certainly one of them.
Andy
April 8th, 2020 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many out there who can hear and appreciate your words Neville and I am certainly one of them.
Andy
April 8th, 2020 00:55
Is There Anyone There
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
And \'Cooeee\' do ya hear me? Are ya there?!
April 7th, 2020 13:25
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
And \'Cooeee\' do ya hear me? Are ya there?!
April 7th, 2020 13:25
Is There Anyone There
dusk arising said:
So many out there paying lip-service in so many ways. A feature of today\'s society.
But when we see so many following wealthy organised religions (google how wealthy is the roman catholic church for example) who put such stead in a book which states \"it is easier for a camel to pass through the eye of a needle than for a rich man to enter the kingdom of heaven\" is it any wonder?
I really like the format as it builds in drama. Love the question contained.
April 7th, 2020 13:00
dusk arising said:
So many out there paying lip-service in so many ways. A feature of today\'s society.
But when we see so many following wealthy organised religions (google how wealthy is the roman catholic church for example) who put such stead in a book which states \"it is easier for a camel to pass through the eye of a needle than for a rich man to enter the kingdom of heaven\" is it any wonder?
I really like the format as it builds in drama. Love the question contained.
April 7th, 2020 13:00
Is There Anyone There
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever this lead-up to saying goodbye to a dying romance but trying to get in touch seems impossible at times like these - love those last lines Nev - - such an original take on how to go separate ways.
April 7th, 2020 12:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever this lead-up to saying goodbye to a dying romance but trying to get in touch seems impossible at times like these - love those last lines Nev - - such an original take on how to go separate ways.
April 7th, 2020 12:55
Is There Anyone There
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I can hear you...
Loud and clear!
~Laura~🌻
April 7th, 2020 12:07
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I can hear you...
Loud and clear!
~Laura~🌻
April 7th, 2020 12:07
Loose Leafed and Fancy Free
MendedFences27 said:
A story well spoken. The book of love is like a novel written in pain and sorrow. The main character... has none. Her foil is the fool who believes in reconciliation. Fool me once/fool me twice etc. sadly enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2020 19:45
MendedFences27 said:
A story well spoken. The book of love is like a novel written in pain and sorrow. The main character... has none. Her foil is the fool who believes in reconciliation. Fool me once/fool me twice etc. sadly enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2020 19:45
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