Comments received on poems by Neville
In The Beginning
Suresh said:
I profess my ignorance of \"cathedral afternoon\". Couldn\'t find on google Please enlighten
May 2nd, 2019 11:17
Suresh said:
I profess my ignorance of \"cathedral afternoon\". Couldn\'t find on google Please enlighten
May 2nd, 2019 11:17
In The Beginning
MendedFences27 said:
Funny how the difference between \"here\" and \"gone\" can change our totality of existence, our perception of happiness.
Loved this remorseful recollection, so melancholy. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2019 08:14
MendedFences27 said:
Funny how the difference between \"here\" and \"gone\" can change our totality of existence, our perception of happiness.
Loved this remorseful recollection, so melancholy. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2019 08:14
In The Beginning
SerenWise said:
Nicely written, agreed that cathedral afternoons is a beautiful metaphor!
May 2nd, 2019 06:19
SerenWise said:
Nicely written, agreed that cathedral afternoons is a beautiful metaphor!
May 2nd, 2019 06:19
In The Beginning
Fay Slimm. said:
Looking back with regret brings no closer those innocent Cathedral afternoons - lost but never forgotten eh Nev ?.......... another great read.
May 2nd, 2019 04:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Looking back with regret brings no closer those innocent Cathedral afternoons - lost but never forgotten eh Nev ?.......... another great read.
May 2nd, 2019 04:51
In The Beginning
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I might have swooned if she had stayed!
May 2nd, 2019 03:10
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I might have swooned if she had stayed!
May 2nd, 2019 03:10
In The Beginning
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Cathedral afternoons a heaven sent metaphor 1-0 Neville
There it is
BRAVO! Now that would have been ymy title
Hats off Neville
May 2nd, 2019 02:49
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Cathedral afternoons a heaven sent metaphor 1-0 Neville
There it is
BRAVO! Now that would have been ymy title
Hats off Neville
May 2nd, 2019 02:49
In The Beginning
Michael Edwards said:
Oh I hope not - lets think she was just a tad shy - she\'ll come back - sequel please.
May 2nd, 2019 02:45
Michael Edwards said:
Oh I hope not - lets think she was just a tad shy - she\'ll come back - sequel please.
May 2nd, 2019 02:45
Between Mountains
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Neville those places that we see in our lives are so meaningful and some are never forgotten.
May 2nd, 2019 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Neville those places that we see in our lives are so meaningful and some are never forgotten.
May 2nd, 2019 00:11
Between Mountains
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE for a very descriptive Poem ! It revived many memories of our recent tour of SOUTH ISLAND ~ NZ.
V 1. The Glories of Mount Cook
V 2. Up close & personal @ night in our VW Camper !
V 3. The Alpine Forests in AUTUMN
V 4. Arthurs Pass where we said GOODBYE to the Southern Alps ~ NZ
BUT ~ never ever to each other ~ AMEN
Blessings & thanks for sharing
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡 🧡
May 1st, 2019 16:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE for a very descriptive Poem ! It revived many memories of our recent tour of SOUTH ISLAND ~ NZ.
V 1. The Glories of Mount Cook
V 2. Up close & personal @ night in our VW Camper !
V 3. The Alpine Forests in AUTUMN
V 4. Arthurs Pass where we said GOODBYE to the Southern Alps ~ NZ
BUT ~ never ever to each other ~ AMEN
Blessings & thanks for sharing
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡 🧡
May 1st, 2019 16:43
Crumbs of Comfort
Poetic Dan said:
Captured well his place we dwell, said to say it have feel like....
May 1st, 2019 16:09
Poetic Dan said:
Captured well his place we dwell, said to say it have feel like....
May 1st, 2019 16:09
Between Mountains
Suresh said:
Beautiful vision of what was and could be.
Thnx Nev.
May 1st, 2019 11:03
Suresh said:
Beautiful vision of what was and could be.
Thnx Nev.
May 1st, 2019 11:03
Between Mountains
dusk arising said:
Wonderful atmospheric blend of mystery and romance.
May 1st, 2019 06:25
dusk arising said:
Wonderful atmospheric blend of mystery and romance.
May 1st, 2019 06:25
Between Mountains
Fay Slimm. said:
You warm and romantic pen writing of \"might- have -beens\" - and so appealingly..... felt I was there beating those passes and cresting the clouds. A great read again Nev......... x
May 1st, 2019 04:02
Fay Slimm. said:
You warm and romantic pen writing of \"might- have -beens\" - and so appealingly..... felt I was there beating those passes and cresting the clouds. A great read again Nev......... x
May 1st, 2019 04:02
Between Mountains
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Neville
well captured mans affinity with the world and how its changes impact on us in life and death
WELL DONE
May 1st, 2019 02:54
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Neville
well captured mans affinity with the world and how its changes impact on us in life and death
WELL DONE
May 1st, 2019 02:54
Colours Without Names
Goldfinch60 said:
Many look but only some see the colours that can brighten our lives.
April 30th, 2019 15:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Many look but only some see the colours that can brighten our lives.
April 30th, 2019 15:07
Colours Without Names
MendedFences27 said:
Just as there are sounds the human ear cannot hear, there are colors and other things the human eye cannot perceive. Change the frequency, change the color. Change the time, change the frequency. Welcome to the other-world.
I want to have a color named \"Sanguine.\" Any other ideas?
Very much a thought inducing write. Loved it.- Phil A.
April 30th, 2019 14:13
MendedFences27 said:
Just as there are sounds the human ear cannot hear, there are colors and other things the human eye cannot perceive. Change the frequency, change the color. Change the time, change the frequency. Welcome to the other-world.
I want to have a color named \"Sanguine.\" Any other ideas?
Very much a thought inducing write. Loved it.- Phil A.
April 30th, 2019 14:13
Colours Without Names
Michael Edwards said:
Love the idea of colours without names - fine work Neville
April 30th, 2019 13:35
Michael Edwards said:
Love the idea of colours without names - fine work Neville
April 30th, 2019 13:35
Colours Without Names
dusk arising said:
Like the colours of the places which frequent my dreams..... unable to grasp with a conscious mind.
April 30th, 2019 12:34
dusk arising said:
Like the colours of the places which frequent my dreams..... unable to grasp with a conscious mind.
April 30th, 2019 12:34
Colours Without Names
Suresh said:
Time-slip, I googled it.
A nice tease piece
April 30th, 2019 10:23
Suresh said:
Time-slip, I googled it.
A nice tease piece
April 30th, 2019 10:23
Colours Without Names
Fay Slimm. said:
New things learnt today by reading this news about nameless colours - am waiting now Nev. for their call to be noticed in my first time-slip.
April 30th, 2019 03:13
Fay Slimm. said:
New things learnt today by reading this news about nameless colours - am waiting now Nev. for their call to be noticed in my first time-slip.
April 30th, 2019 03:13
Colours Without Names
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Exellent Neville
Great pictures thank you for showing them to us... I love those games
April 30th, 2019 02:50
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Exellent Neville
Great pictures thank you for showing them to us... I love those games
April 30th, 2019 02:50
Crumbs of Comfort
Goldfinch60 said:
Unfortunately this is still true today and if it weren\'t for the crumbs of comfort given by Mums to their children it could be a whole lot worse.
Good write Neville.
April 30th, 2019 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Unfortunately this is still true today and if it weren\'t for the crumbs of comfort given by Mums to their children it could be a whole lot worse.
Good write Neville.
April 30th, 2019 00:14
Crumbs of Comfort
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Touching Neville very touching
Well written
April 29th, 2019 17:14
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Touching Neville very touching
Well written
April 29th, 2019 17:14
Students
Fay Slimm. said:
The beauty of poetry is in its seduction whatever the subject and this read allures - -- missed it first time around but am sure of wanting to view it again - mirrored and saved to live the dream.
April 29th, 2019 17:13
Fay Slimm. said:
The beauty of poetry is in its seduction whatever the subject and this read allures - -- missed it first time around but am sure of wanting to view it again - mirrored and saved to live the dream.
April 29th, 2019 17:13
Crumbs of Comfort
MendedFences27 said:
Food for thought (no pun intended). We often forget the plight of others.
Growing up in a neighborhood in a poorer section of town, neighbors always seemed to know who was struggling, and a dinner invite would be proposed and generally accepted. There was no shame attached, and reciprocation was expected., just neighborly \"crumbs.\" A great and moving poem. A Mother\'s tender care during trying times. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 29th, 2019 11:30
MendedFences27 said:
Food for thought (no pun intended). We often forget the plight of others.
Growing up in a neighborhood in a poorer section of town, neighbors always seemed to know who was struggling, and a dinner invite would be proposed and generally accepted. There was no shame attached, and reciprocation was expected., just neighborly \"crumbs.\" A great and moving poem. A Mother\'s tender care during trying times. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 29th, 2019 11:30
Crumbs of Comfort
Suresh said:
More than half the world population still lives hand to mouth, if the harvest does come in, or the boat is still out or any of the human made disasters, the struggling go hungry.
You have captured their plight well with your words here.
April 29th, 2019 09:08
Suresh said:
More than half the world population still lives hand to mouth, if the harvest does come in, or the boat is still out or any of the human made disasters, the struggling go hungry.
You have captured their plight well with your words here.
April 29th, 2019 09:08
Crumbs of Comfort
dusk arising said:
ee-bah-gum lad. Thou reminds me of yon Hovis advert here. Always runnin oot a bread me mam was.
Ye shall have a fishy on a little dishy, when the boat comes in... dance to yer daddy \'wor little laddie.
You are definately in those veins today with this great evocative story. A real treat to read.
April 29th, 2019 06:44
dusk arising said:
ee-bah-gum lad. Thou reminds me of yon Hovis advert here. Always runnin oot a bread me mam was.
Ye shall have a fishy on a little dishy, when the boat comes in... dance to yer daddy \'wor little laddie.
You are definately in those veins today with this great evocative story. A real treat to read.
April 29th, 2019 06:44
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