Comments received on poems by Neville
Correction
Michael Edwards said:
Correct me if I\'m wrong but this is very right
September 12th, 2019 01:37
Michael Edwards said:
Correct me if I\'m wrong but this is very right
September 12th, 2019 01:37
Correction
Goldfinch60 said:
If you are wrong take 100 lines and write:
\"In my life I am more often right than wrong so do not need any correction!\"
September 12th, 2019 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
If you are wrong take 100 lines and write:
\"In my life I am more often right than wrong so do not need any correction!\"
September 12th, 2019 01:23
Never Not Once
Christina8 said:
This is a really great write, Neville! Sad write but so well done!
September 11th, 2019 06:20
Christina8 said:
This is a really great write, Neville! Sad write but so well done!
September 11th, 2019 06:20
Never Not Once
dusk arising said:
That\'s why the lady is a ......
So it looks like we met some of the same girls along the way..... The last one of this ilk taught me to feel insignificant.
Great piece telling of male stupidity in falling for unattainable self appointed madonnas. Long live madonnas.
September 11th, 2019 05:25
dusk arising said:
That\'s why the lady is a ......
So it looks like we met some of the same girls along the way..... The last one of this ilk taught me to feel insignificant.
Great piece telling of male stupidity in falling for unattainable self appointed madonnas. Long live madonnas.
September 11th, 2019 05:25
Never Not Once
Fay Slimm. said:
Good morn to you Nev. The sadness in these lines shows how self-pity can destroy the reality love brings to a close relationship -- you have nailed it again and true my friend.......................
September 11th, 2019 02:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Good morn to you Nev. The sadness in these lines shows how self-pity can destroy the reality love brings to a close relationship -- you have nailed it again and true my friend.......................
September 11th, 2019 02:31
Never Not Once
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Neville. Sometimes we just cannot see into the real soul of people, some do not even try.
Andy.
September 11th, 2019 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Neville. Sometimes we just cannot see into the real soul of people, some do not even try.
Andy.
September 11th, 2019 02:15
Never Not Once
sylviasearcher said:
Did he taste salty or bitter?
It’s funny isn’t it that idea if what we sense from another?
Do we ever really really see another person and understand and know them?
I wonder if it is even possible?
What we see or hear or taste or touch ... our perception will always have a bias ... no matter how hard we try to deny it?
September 11th, 2019 02:12
sylviasearcher said:
Did he taste salty or bitter?
It’s funny isn’t it that idea if what we sense from another?
Do we ever really really see another person and understand and know them?
I wonder if it is even possible?
What we see or hear or taste or touch ... our perception will always have a bias ... no matter how hard we try to deny it?
September 11th, 2019 02:12
Never Not Once
orchidee said:
He wasn\'t called a blue-eyed boy for nothing, ya know! (as the saying goes). Now sadly she has lost it all. A fine write N.
September 11th, 2019 01:54
orchidee said:
He wasn\'t called a blue-eyed boy for nothing, ya know! (as the saying goes). Now sadly she has lost it all. A fine write N.
September 11th, 2019 01:54
Best Friends
Goldfinch60 said:
A best friend is someone who is always there for you in both the goo and bad times, they are worth there weight in Saffron. (saffron is more valuable than gold).
September 10th, 2019 14:52
Goldfinch60 said:
A best friend is someone who is always there for you in both the goo and bad times, they are worth there weight in Saffron. (saffron is more valuable than gold).
September 10th, 2019 14:52
Best Friends
dusk arising said:
I\'m such a recluse these days i hardly know what friendship is any more. Oh yes i remember, they\'re the ones who showed their true colours. Not to be sneezed at when in need.
Bless your little bird.
September 10th, 2019 11:30
dusk arising said:
I\'m such a recluse these days i hardly know what friendship is any more. Oh yes i remember, they\'re the ones who showed their true colours. Not to be sneezed at when in need.
Bless your little bird.
September 10th, 2019 11:30
Best Friends
Fay Slimm. said:
Best friends to the bitter end said the crows in Jungledbook and I took that as my mantra - so if you\'re ever in a jam - here I am........ ha - - - yet another ol\' \'quote....... but I really believe in the message between your lines mi amigo.
September 10th, 2019 10:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Best friends to the bitter end said the crows in Jungledbook and I took that as my mantra - so if you\'re ever in a jam - here I am........ ha - - - yet another ol\' \'quote....... but I really believe in the message between your lines mi amigo.
September 10th, 2019 10:20
Best Friends
Christina8 said:
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem!....intrigued by some of your replies to it though I may say!
September 10th, 2019 10:19
Christina8 said:
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem!....intrigued by some of your replies to it though I may say!
September 10th, 2019 10:19
Best Friends
orchidee said:
Was the time you lost me related to me running out of purple pills? Just askin\'. lol.
September 10th, 2019 08:04
orchidee said:
Was the time you lost me related to me running out of purple pills? Just askin\'. lol.
September 10th, 2019 08:04
Best Friends
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Would you say \'fore\'er\' and \'eva\'? I would say the former, cos I lost the \'v\' on me laptop. What rubbish will I talk next?! lol.
September 10th, 2019 07:53
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Would you say \'fore\'er\' and \'eva\'? I would say the former, cos I lost the \'v\' on me laptop. What rubbish will I talk next?! lol.
September 10th, 2019 07:53
Best Friends
sylviasearcher said:
I always like the Plath quote about friendship, you know the one about vomiting?
I guess a best friend is a safe place to lie your head when you have a cold, or a wobble, or a catastrophe?
It’s safe because they still see you and love you and they don’t just see the cold or the wobble or the catastrophe.
I gave my protagonist a best friend because I so wanted one myself... and then...
September 10th, 2019 07:50
sylviasearcher said:
I always like the Plath quote about friendship, you know the one about vomiting?
I guess a best friend is a safe place to lie your head when you have a cold, or a wobble, or a catastrophe?
It’s safe because they still see you and love you and they don’t just see the cold or the wobble or the catastrophe.
I gave my protagonist a best friend because I so wanted one myself... and then...
September 10th, 2019 07:50
Best Friends
Neville said:
Thank you Kevin.. that is very odd... I will send another and look into that...
September 10th, 2019 07:35
Neville said:
Thank you Kevin.. that is very odd... I will send another and look into that...
September 10th, 2019 07:35
Best Friends
kevin browne said:
Bless your little poem about friendship adn friendship on means that we can message each other which brings me to thinking why I haven\'t I receieved your PM to me and why you haven\'t replied to the 3 Private messages I\'ve sent you. Can you try againg so I know what your innital messge id about. Thank you...Mr Neville...
September 10th, 2019 07:29
kevin browne said:
Bless your little poem about friendship adn friendship on means that we can message each other which brings me to thinking why I haven\'t I receieved your PM to me and why you haven\'t replied to the 3 Private messages I\'ve sent you. Can you try againg so I know what your innital messge id about. Thank you...Mr Neville...
September 10th, 2019 07:29
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sensual write in a great understated way.
September 10th, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sensual write in a great understated way.
September 10th, 2019 00:16
Love and Warm Toast
Alta H Mabin said:
Absolutely beautiful. Big hugs and may you find great comfort in all the things, beautiful things about mum that will stay with you forever. Embracing you with love and care, my lovely friend.
September 9th, 2019 13:31
Alta H Mabin said:
Absolutely beautiful. Big hugs and may you find great comfort in all the things, beautiful things about mum that will stay with you forever. Embracing you with love and care, my lovely friend.
September 9th, 2019 13:31
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
kevin browne said:
I\'ve sent you a message, Neville, because yours hasn\'t come through to me. Try to message me again...
September 9th, 2019 12:08
kevin browne said:
I\'ve sent you a message, Neville, because yours hasn\'t come through to me. Try to message me again...
September 9th, 2019 12:08
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
kevin browne said:
You can\'t get even with this aching pain so don\'t dare stop writing trying to express it. You captured this moment from your pen and therefore you have reached for the need to be on point. Graet stuff, Neville....
September 9th, 2019 09:26
kevin browne said:
You can\'t get even with this aching pain so don\'t dare stop writing trying to express it. You captured this moment from your pen and therefore you have reached for the need to be on point. Graet stuff, Neville....
September 9th, 2019 09:26
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
Alta H Mabin said:
Exquisite write, just enough detail to almost \"feel\" that ache.
September 9th, 2019 08:15
Alta H Mabin said:
Exquisite write, just enough detail to almost \"feel\" that ache.
September 9th, 2019 08:15
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write.....an ache so poetically described!
September 9th, 2019 06:14
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write.....an ache so poetically described!
September 9th, 2019 06:14
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
dusk arising said:
Well at first i had a picture of you two riding a tandem up a hill, she at the front, looking forward to freewheeling down the other side with you the powerhouse peddler resting your head on her arched back.... but, somehow i cant quite see u on a tandem.
Then theres the story of the dog who saw a couple on a tandem and threw a bucket of water over them.
This really is a fine piece Neville, it speaks of that unwritten tryst where lovers truly meet.
September 9th, 2019 03:29
dusk arising said:
Well at first i had a picture of you two riding a tandem up a hill, she at the front, looking forward to freewheeling down the other side with you the powerhouse peddler resting your head on her arched back.... but, somehow i cant quite see u on a tandem.
Then theres the story of the dog who saw a couple on a tandem and threw a bucket of water over them.
This really is a fine piece Neville, it speaks of that unwritten tryst where lovers truly meet.
September 9th, 2019 03:29
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha -- Big Little Fay - - hhhmmm that\'s a new name - -- I\'m not very big but I know what you mean dear amigo ............. an smilin\' big here though.
September 9th, 2019 02:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha -- Big Little Fay - - hhhmmm that\'s a new name - -- I\'m not very big but I know what you mean dear amigo ............. an smilin\' big here though.
September 9th, 2019 02:57
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
orchidee said:
Fido would have barked if not marked 18+. He\'s a watchdog, but a pest at times!
Glad some ones are having fun. lol.
September 9th, 2019 02:51
orchidee said:
Fido would have barked if not marked 18+. He\'s a watchdog, but a pest at times!
Glad some ones are having fun. lol.
September 9th, 2019 02:51
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - this write reaches its climax so poetically perfect - - - - - - a sigh of a read...........................
September 9th, 2019 02:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - this write reaches its climax so poetically perfect - - - - - - a sigh of a read...........................
September 9th, 2019 02:04
Double Jeopardy
Fay Slimm. said:
Returned for a second helping of this punchy 7-5 -7 and still find it bloomin tres bon............................ x
September 8th, 2019 23:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Returned for a second helping of this punchy 7-5 -7 and still find it bloomin tres bon............................ x
September 8th, 2019 23:57
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