Comments received on poems by Neville
Feral Girls
Fay Slimm. said:
A woeful tale of female downfall - feral girls who often through no fault of their own lose all hope of dreams - Expertly told this tragedy of Foo Kin Ya..... saved in my favourites and thanks Nev for the sad but needed reminder.
April 21st, 2019 03:55
Fay Slimm. said:
A woeful tale of female downfall - feral girls who often through no fault of their own lose all hope of dreams - Expertly told this tragedy of Foo Kin Ya..... saved in my favourites and thanks Nev for the sad but needed reminder.
April 21st, 2019 03:55
Feral Girls
Poetic Dan said:
That sounds like they have one hell of a kick!
Really Enjoyed a bit strange read
April 21st, 2019 03:41
Poetic Dan said:
That sounds like they have one hell of a kick!
Really Enjoyed a bit strange read
April 21st, 2019 03:41
Fine Young Disciples
Suresh said:
There are some social norms that humans have placed on themselves, either knowing or should have known are doomed to fail. One of these is coupling of two people for life.
Similarly, expecting two people to love each other for life.
Your ending lines, EACH AND EVERY ONE OF US FINE YOUNG DECIPLES has thrown me off for it implies multiple people.
Maybe I\'m just reading it wrong,
Relationships are hard.
April 20th, 2019 11:01
Suresh said:
There are some social norms that humans have placed on themselves, either knowing or should have known are doomed to fail. One of these is coupling of two people for life.
Similarly, expecting two people to love each other for life.
Your ending lines, EACH AND EVERY ONE OF US FINE YOUNG DECIPLES has thrown me off for it implies multiple people.
Maybe I\'m just reading it wrong,
Relationships are hard.
April 20th, 2019 11:01
Fine Young Disciples
Fay Slimm. said:
A sound and caring piece of advice Nev. -- life is no fairytale and as disciples we learn about love as we discover its faces in risks taken. A deep and engaging read.
April 20th, 2019 10:33
Fay Slimm. said:
A sound and caring piece of advice Nev. -- life is no fairytale and as disciples we learn about love as we discover its faces in risks taken. A deep and engaging read.
April 20th, 2019 10:33
Fine Young Disciples
dusk arising said:
Well that\'s life isn\'t it and aptly described by you. The risk we all take when getting involved with someone and the repercussions that partnership can have on the others in our lives.
I suspect an aura of concern surrounds the said relationship to prompt this writing.
Words for the recipient of such a piece to dwell upon.
April 20th, 2019 10:22
dusk arising said:
Well that\'s life isn\'t it and aptly described by you. The risk we all take when getting involved with someone and the repercussions that partnership can have on the others in our lives.
I suspect an aura of concern surrounds the said relationship to prompt this writing.
Words for the recipient of such a piece to dwell upon.
April 20th, 2019 10:22
Beware of Mirrors
Goldfinch60 said:
Mirrors do not show us who we are, they only show the reflection of ourselves turned through 180 degrees. We know who we are inside of ourselves.
April 20th, 2019 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Mirrors do not show us who we are, they only show the reflection of ourselves turned through 180 degrees. We know who we are inside of ourselves.
April 20th, 2019 00:22
Beware of Mirrors
Suresh said:
At least let me blame my follies on my reflections
April 19th, 2019 11:45
Suresh said:
At least let me blame my follies on my reflections
April 19th, 2019 11:45
Beware of Mirrors
Poetic Dan said:
Oooo really like this!
Very fluid my friend
April 19th, 2019 11:13
Poetic Dan said:
Oooo really like this!
Very fluid my friend
April 19th, 2019 11:13
Beware of Mirrors
orchidee said:
I met her - or so I thought! But I couldn\'t see her in the mirror. She must be a vampire. Arrggh!
April 19th, 2019 09:51
orchidee said:
I met her - or so I thought! But I couldn\'t see her in the mirror. She must be a vampire. Arrggh!
April 19th, 2019 09:51
Beware of Mirrors
dusk arising said:
A reflection is a prize for it allows us to see from another viewpoint. Poison to the narrow minded.
Knowledge begat wisdom.
April 19th, 2019 04:45
dusk arising said:
A reflection is a prize for it allows us to see from another viewpoint. Poison to the narrow minded.
Knowledge begat wisdom.
April 19th, 2019 04:45
Beware of Mirrors
Fay Slimm. said:
Much food for thought in this verse Nev. - -- an image of self reflects reality if we dare look and insight does not go away...... deep truths hide in these clever lines my dear friend.
April 19th, 2019 02:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Much food for thought in this verse Nev. - -- an image of self reflects reality if we dare look and insight does not go away...... deep truths hide in these clever lines my dear friend.
April 19th, 2019 02:59
Beware of Mirrors
orchidee said:
Oohh I must meet her! Fido won\'t find out. heehee.
April 19th, 2019 02:01
orchidee said:
Oohh I must meet her! Fido won\'t find out. heehee.
April 19th, 2019 02:01
Beware of Mirrors
Neville said:
and there are plenty...
cheers Michael.. have a great weekend.. N
April 19th, 2019 01:58
Neville said:
and there are plenty...
cheers Michael.. have a great weekend.. N
April 19th, 2019 01:58
Beware of Mirrors
Michael Edwards said:
In life please spare us
illusions in mirrors
reflections of errors.
Nice one Neville.
April 19th, 2019 01:56
Michael Edwards said:
In life please spare us
illusions in mirrors
reflections of errors.
Nice one Neville.
April 19th, 2019 01:56
Harbour Side
SerenWise said:
Beautifully sensual and personal imagery, nicely done
April 18th, 2019 14:37
SerenWise said:
Beautifully sensual and personal imagery, nicely done
April 18th, 2019 14:37
Harbour Side
dusk arising said:
Therein is love, adventure and devotion. The stuff of classic poetry and a must for my fav\'s.
Thank you Neville, a joy to read.
April 18th, 2019 05:33
dusk arising said:
Therein is love, adventure and devotion. The stuff of classic poetry and a must for my fav\'s.
Thank you Neville, a joy to read.
April 18th, 2019 05:33
Harbour Side
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. I will bring Fido along to bark at them voyeurs.
I would said shuperb shensous etc too, but I been on the sherry, as you see!
April 18th, 2019 01:59
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. I will bring Fido along to bark at them voyeurs.
I would said shuperb shensous etc too, but I been on the sherry, as you see!
April 18th, 2019 01:59
Harbour Side
Fay Slimm. said:
This invitation will move to the core that special friend - of that I am sure Nev ---- with all its assertions I do assure you it leaves this reader breathless........... saved into faves.
April 18th, 2019 01:34
Fay Slimm. said:
This invitation will move to the core that special friend - of that I am sure Nev ---- with all its assertions I do assure you it leaves this reader breathless........... saved into faves.
April 18th, 2019 01:34
Turn Toward the Window
Michael Edwards said:
You\'d better search that shed for some more gems.
April 17th, 2019 13:00
Michael Edwards said:
You\'d better search that shed for some more gems.
April 17th, 2019 13:00
Turn Toward the Window
SerenWise said:
Very emotional and elegantly written, well done
April 17th, 2019 12:35
SerenWise said:
Very emotional and elegantly written, well done
April 17th, 2019 12:35
Turn Toward the Window
Suresh said:
So did I, but left them scribbled, unpublished... untitled....unfinished
All I needed to know
Is how could you let me go
All I knew
Is that I loved you so
You strayed, you betrayed
Your heart was never in it
You knew it, you blew it
I hope it was worth it
Being free of all that frost
How come I feel so lost
Ever since then I confess
I\'m a mess
Ever since then n now
All we know, love is blind
Yet, I must move forward
Alone, my place, I must find
My words show simplicity of youth and immaturity of composition
April 17th, 2019 11:05
Suresh said:
So did I, but left them scribbled, unpublished... untitled....unfinished
All I needed to know
Is how could you let me go
All I knew
Is that I loved you so
You strayed, you betrayed
Your heart was never in it
You knew it, you blew it
I hope it was worth it
Being free of all that frost
How come I feel so lost
Ever since then I confess
I\'m a mess
Ever since then n now
All we know, love is blind
Yet, I must move forward
Alone, my place, I must find
My words show simplicity of youth and immaturity of composition
April 17th, 2019 11:05
Turn Toward the Window
dusk arising said:
A good \'loves epitaph\' written with the feeling of the moment which really comes through. Definitely an \'I\'ve had enough of you\' air about this.
Did it bring the moment back vividly. I expect so. (Mine do for me).
April 17th, 2019 06:38
dusk arising said:
A good \'loves epitaph\' written with the feeling of the moment which really comes through. Definitely an \'I\'ve had enough of you\' air about this.
Did it bring the moment back vividly. I expect so. (Mine do for me).
April 17th, 2019 06:38
Another New Day
orchidee said:
Oohh 40 views of this poem you have had. Prob cos I kept commenting, about 36 of those times. I\'m a pest! lol.
Erm, another day is here now. That\'s \'Today\'s Useless (or Obvious) Information\' for ya. So don\'t say I don\'t ya anything (i.e.info).
April 17th, 2019 04:24
orchidee said:
Oohh 40 views of this poem you have had. Prob cos I kept commenting, about 36 of those times. I\'m a pest! lol.
Erm, another day is here now. That\'s \'Today\'s Useless (or Obvious) Information\' for ya. So don\'t say I don\'t ya anything (i.e.info).
April 17th, 2019 04:24
Turn Toward the Window
Fay Slimm. said:
Telling it then as it once was - love soured reads as a powerful piece of well-written insistence - - good that you found it to share here Nev.
April 17th, 2019 03:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Telling it then as it once was - love soured reads as a powerful piece of well-written insistence - - good that you found it to share here Nev.
April 17th, 2019 03:08
Turn Toward the Window
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. I tried writing in my shed. The light bulb went out. Couldn\'t see a thing. So I wrote a poem: \'A black cat in a coal cellar at midnight\'. lol.
April 17th, 2019 03:04
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. I tried writing in my shed. The light bulb went out. Couldn\'t see a thing. So I wrote a poem: \'A black cat in a coal cellar at midnight\'. lol.
April 17th, 2019 03:04
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