Comments received on poems by Neville
Locked Out
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
When that key breaks in that lock, it is very difficult to restore that broken key!
A lot of meaning into this one!
~Laura~
February 15th, 2020 13:54
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
When that key breaks in that lock, it is very difficult to restore that broken key!
A lot of meaning into this one!
~Laura~
February 15th, 2020 13:54
Locked Out
dusk arising said:
When my key broke in her lock we knew that we would have to find something else to do the job. Things were different but she still smiles a lot.
You took me for a ride along my imagination\'s trail. A road less travelled? I\'m afraid not.
I like this because your reader can go so many places with the result.
February 15th, 2020 13:53
dusk arising said:
When my key broke in her lock we knew that we would have to find something else to do the job. Things were different but she still smiles a lot.
You took me for a ride along my imagination\'s trail. A road less travelled? I\'m afraid not.
I like this because your reader can go so many places with the result.
February 15th, 2020 13:53
Discarded
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. please excuse while I collect recycling bin items blown across garden in the wind!
Meanwhile - there may come some good out of it. They could banish me to that floating plastic island, where I could sing for ever! heehee.
February 15th, 2020 13:00
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. please excuse while I collect recycling bin items blown across garden in the wind!
Meanwhile - there may come some good out of it. They could banish me to that floating plastic island, where I could sing for ever! heehee.
February 15th, 2020 13:00
Discarded
Goldfinch60 said:
So true we are very much a use an throw away culture. There is no \'fixing things\' any more if it isn\'t working just throw it away and get a new one.
Andy
February 15th, 2020 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
So true we are very much a use an throw away culture. There is no \'fixing things\' any more if it isn\'t working just throw it away and get a new one.
Andy
February 15th, 2020 01:53
Waiting
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Neville, it took me back to those times when playing with friends was freedom from life into times of wonder.
Andy
February 15th, 2020 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Neville, it took me back to those times when playing with friends was freedom from life into times of wonder.
Andy
February 15th, 2020 01:11
Discarded
Neville said:
Hey my friend, other angles are always most welcome and much appreciated....thank you for sharing..... Neville
February 14th, 2020 17:08
Neville said:
Hey my friend, other angles are always most welcome and much appreciated....thank you for sharing..... Neville
February 14th, 2020 17:08
Discarded
MendedFences27 said:
Gee, this being V-day, I thought you were talking about \"Discarded\" hearts. Having been \"Discarded\' more than once I can recall their \"Finger pointing\" and \"mud slinging\" Perhaps. victims of a \"broken\" heart would read this differently. A great poem, I say, even from another angle. _ Phjil A.
February 14th, 2020 17:01
MendedFences27 said:
Gee, this being V-day, I thought you were talking about \"Discarded\" hearts. Having been \"Discarded\' more than once I can recall their \"Finger pointing\" and \"mud slinging\" Perhaps. victims of a \"broken\" heart would read this differently. A great poem, I say, even from another angle. _ Phjil A.
February 14th, 2020 17:01
Discarded
Fay Slimm. said:
This era has become addicted to temporary thinking and you verse that mentality so well with strong imagery on such \"throw-away-itis\" - - a needed pointer to think on from your talented pen my friend.
February 14th, 2020 09:46
Fay Slimm. said:
This era has become addicted to temporary thinking and you verse that mentality so well with strong imagery on such \"throw-away-itis\" - - a needed pointer to think on from your talented pen my friend.
February 14th, 2020 09:46
Discarded
dusk arising said:
Yes i had noticed this trend and don\'t care for it.... but the throw away world is changing because we just cant cope with all the stuff we are throwing away..... i.e. carrier bags oh and that floating island the size of france in the middle of the atlantic comprising floating plastics waste.
Why blame the french though? they could have said four times the size of england LOL .. I hope you reuse your carrier bags even if its just to pick up doggy poo.
February 14th, 2020 09:42
dusk arising said:
Yes i had noticed this trend and don\'t care for it.... but the throw away world is changing because we just cant cope with all the stuff we are throwing away..... i.e. carrier bags oh and that floating island the size of france in the middle of the atlantic comprising floating plastics waste.
Why blame the french though? they could have said four times the size of england LOL .. I hope you reuse your carrier bags even if its just to pick up doggy poo.
February 14th, 2020 09:42
Waiting
orchidee said:
A fine write N. With \'sound of sunlight\', it reminded me of Mr Bean in a restaurant. He got some odd food, and \'listened\' to it with his ear!
February 14th, 2020 03:35
orchidee said:
A fine write N. With \'sound of sunlight\', it reminded me of Mr Bean in a restaurant. He got some odd food, and \'listened\' to it with his ear!
February 14th, 2020 03:35
Waiting
dusk arising said:
Took me straight to the woods where we used to trek and play when i was a child. Just the sound of trees, insects and birds. But in my mind were the voices of Billy, Johnny, Rod And myself. Carefree and young..... discovering, inventing, playing.
Lovely emotive poetry from you that took me there.
February 13th, 2020 17:51
dusk arising said:
Took me straight to the woods where we used to trek and play when i was a child. Just the sound of trees, insects and birds. But in my mind were the voices of Billy, Johnny, Rod And myself. Carefree and young..... discovering, inventing, playing.
Lovely emotive poetry from you that took me there.
February 13th, 2020 17:51
Waiting
Fay Slimm. said:
A lyrically emotive piece of writing here Nev. The lilt of long-gone adventures remembered when visiting old places again shines through the flow of your lines and wistfully touches the heart. Trees with low branches in spinneys and hollows must be filled with the spirit of children wanting to be heroes by climbing higher than wise......... yes indeed now
\" tinged with sadness\" but golden were those growing-days my friend. ................x Fay
February 13th, 2020 16:54
Fay Slimm. said:
A lyrically emotive piece of writing here Nev. The lilt of long-gone adventures remembered when visiting old places again shines through the flow of your lines and wistfully touches the heart. Trees with low branches in spinneys and hollows must be filled with the spirit of children wanting to be heroes by climbing higher than wise......... yes indeed now
\" tinged with sadness\" but golden were those growing-days my friend. ................x Fay
February 13th, 2020 16:54
Until Spring
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful images of my favourite season of the year, the colour are so wonderful and profound in Autumn.
Andy
February 13th, 2020 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful images of my favourite season of the year, the colour are so wonderful and profound in Autumn.
Andy
February 13th, 2020 01:54
Until Spring
MendedFences27 said:
I think that leaves are the reason they call it \"Fall\".and maybe why we \"fall\" in love. I loved this description of dancing leaves brought to life in their annual \"leap.\" Those colorful :clouds\" that we tenderly rake into bags or barrels. Some may be followers and others die gloriously in the name of love. Very human-like. A great read/poem. - Phil A.
February 12th, 2020 23:32
MendedFences27 said:
I think that leaves are the reason they call it \"Fall\".and maybe why we \"fall\" in love. I loved this description of dancing leaves brought to life in their annual \"leap.\" Those colorful :clouds\" that we tenderly rake into bags or barrels. Some may be followers and others die gloriously in the name of love. Very human-like. A great read/poem. - Phil A.
February 12th, 2020 23:32
Until Spring
Fay Slimm. said:
The fall of leaves could never be given more appeal with better imagery than in this your tribute to their gentle departure - clouds of fluttering bring colour to ground and I was so intrigued by your final personified lines Nev - - so aptly describing
\"Those that take a dive
And those who
For love do leap\".......... great read.
February 12th, 2020 10:21
Fay Slimm. said:
The fall of leaves could never be given more appeal with better imagery than in this your tribute to their gentle departure - clouds of fluttering bring colour to ground and I was so intrigued by your final personified lines Nev - - so aptly describing
\"Those that take a dive
And those who
For love do leap\".......... great read.
February 12th, 2020 10:21
Until Spring
dusk arising said:
Your words today make me mindful of the current state of our trees. In my garden i planted a tulip tree 16 years ago. It hasn\'t shown a blossom yet which is a disappointment but its a lovely thing. Sad to see it\'s skeletal form as it survives winter. Hard to believe this same beauty is so full of life in spring through summer and has an outstanding display each autumn.
I\'m somewhat of an individual soul and like to think that as life\'s wind blows me around and gradually wrecks my once fine foliage, I do occasionally do a leap for the sake of love. A love of this life.
February 12th, 2020 06:05
dusk arising said:
Your words today make me mindful of the current state of our trees. In my garden i planted a tulip tree 16 years ago. It hasn\'t shown a blossom yet which is a disappointment but its a lovely thing. Sad to see it\'s skeletal form as it survives winter. Hard to believe this same beauty is so full of life in spring through summer and has an outstanding display each autumn.
I\'m somewhat of an individual soul and like to think that as life\'s wind blows me around and gradually wrecks my once fine foliage, I do occasionally do a leap for the sake of love. A love of this life.
February 12th, 2020 06:05
Remarkably Unfinished
dusk arising said:
Yep, you gotta let \'em go otherwise you\'re cage-ing them. \"If you love someone, set them free\" as Sting sung.
Great flow to this piece today and delightful surprise finale.
February 12th, 2020 03:26
dusk arising said:
Yep, you gotta let \'em go otherwise you\'re cage-ing them. \"If you love someone, set them free\" as Sting sung.
Great flow to this piece today and delightful surprise finale.
February 12th, 2020 03:26
Remarkably Unfinished
Clara said:
Oh I like this... Although the ending... Being unfinished... After fingertips and eyes and lips. Almost cruel. Great subtle erotica. Enjoyed this one.
February 11th, 2020 16:21
Clara said:
Oh I like this... Although the ending... Being unfinished... After fingertips and eyes and lips. Almost cruel. Great subtle erotica. Enjoyed this one.
February 11th, 2020 16:21
Remarkably Unfinished
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful thoughts come to mind from your words Neville.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 15:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful thoughts come to mind from your words Neville.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 15:25
Remarkably Unfinished
Poetic Dan said:
Lost for words... Its a nice feeling, thanks for giving some Poetic healing!
Always appreciated
Lol
February 11th, 2020 09:40
Poetic Dan said:
Lost for words... Its a nice feeling, thanks for giving some Poetic healing!
Always appreciated
Lol
February 11th, 2020 09:40
Remarkably Unfinished
orchidee said:
Should we (or I) meet her?! I might not be the same again, if I did - I may never recover from it.
February 11th, 2020 07:20
orchidee said:
Should we (or I) meet her?! I might not be the same again, if I did - I may never recover from it.
February 11th, 2020 07:20
Remarkably Unfinished
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - what normal female would want release after that intimate but unfinished discovery - yet another subtle example of gentle erotica Nev and which I, for one, most thoroughly enjoyed ...............
February 11th, 2020 06:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - what normal female would want release after that intimate but unfinished discovery - yet another subtle example of gentle erotica Nev and which I, for one, most thoroughly enjoyed ...............
February 11th, 2020 06:30
noitcelfeR
Goldfinch60 said:
That reflection does not show the real you that others see, and the one we see writes these clever words.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That reflection does not show the real you that others see, and the one we see writes these clever words.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 01:44
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