Comments received on poems by Neville
Another New Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment of each day is so very special, do not waste them.
April 17th, 2019 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment of each day is so very special, do not waste them.
April 17th, 2019 00:24
Another New Day
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written and full of hope, nicely done
April 16th, 2019 19:02
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written and full of hope, nicely done
April 16th, 2019 19:02
Another New Day
kevin browne said:
And when those grey clouds clear they will reveal a landscape of though so intricate and beautiful that you will almost declare yourself a God. Great work.
April 16th, 2019 13:54
kevin browne said:
And when those grey clouds clear they will reveal a landscape of though so intricate and beautiful that you will almost declare yourself a God. Great work.
April 16th, 2019 13:54
Another New Day
Suresh said:
How beautifully described the dawning of the day,
To open ones eyes (curtains) and move one butts and get going on their merry way
April 16th, 2019 11:26
Suresh said:
How beautifully described the dawning of the day,
To open ones eyes (curtains) and move one butts and get going on their merry way
April 16th, 2019 11:26
Another New Day
dusk arising said:
I want to stay under my quilt till at least mid-day.... and never.. i say never take the lid off my coffin till after dusk....
Nice writing N.... so that\'s what it\'s like at dawn...
...but what strange habits some folk must have wiping things on the curtains to leave them damp overnight..... surely the central heating would dry them out.
April 16th, 2019 05:09
dusk arising said:
I want to stay under my quilt till at least mid-day.... and never.. i say never take the lid off my coffin till after dusk....
Nice writing N.... so that\'s what it\'s like at dawn...
...but what strange habits some folk must have wiping things on the curtains to leave them damp overnight..... surely the central heating would dry them out.
April 16th, 2019 05:09
Another New Day
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Pity I have to ruin every day by coming along and singing! Fido tries to bark loud enough to drown it out. He has ear-plugs too.
April 16th, 2019 04:16
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Pity I have to ruin every day by coming along and singing! Fido tries to bark loud enough to drown it out. He has ear-plugs too.
April 16th, 2019 04:16
Another New Day
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes this is the way to see life dear Nev -- - to welcome another new day is to see all the shades of colour waiting behind greyness - -huge thank yous for this most inspirational read my friend .
April 16th, 2019 03:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes this is the way to see life dear Nev -- - to welcome another new day is to see all the shades of colour waiting behind greyness - -huge thank yous for this most inspirational read my friend .
April 16th, 2019 03:44
Plum Pencil Skirt
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ladies are never forgotten even if you cannot remember their names.
April 15th, 2019 15:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ladies are never forgotten even if you cannot remember their names.
April 15th, 2019 15:06
Old Sunlight
Fay Slimm. said:
Not yet locked away those sun-dappled moments that stand there in old houses amid dust and decay - so glad I caught this one mon amii - just love the slow flow of your pen on the canvas as it draws scenes of still life for those who love past things. First class writing again.
April 15th, 2019 12:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Not yet locked away those sun-dappled moments that stand there in old houses amid dust and decay - so glad I caught this one mon amii - just love the slow flow of your pen on the canvas as it draws scenes of still life for those who love past things. First class writing again.
April 15th, 2019 12:53
The Birth of Opals
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - - missed this one first time around - - tis a bouquet of poetic adjectives and comparisons which hide well the sweat after making naked-hot love on Somerset grass - -- or am I wrong ???
April 15th, 2019 05:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - - missed this one first time around - - tis a bouquet of poetic adjectives and comparisons which hide well the sweat after making naked-hot love on Somerset grass - -- or am I wrong ???
April 15th, 2019 05:57
Whale Whispering
Fay Slimm. said:
Had a second read of this saline saga and felt every whoosh and weave of those whales - if wishes were watches I was there viewing leviathan coupling and sharing their dappled delight along with you Nev.
April 15th, 2019 05:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Had a second read of this saline saga and felt every whoosh and weave of those whales - if wishes were watches I was there viewing leviathan coupling and sharing their dappled delight along with you Nev.
April 15th, 2019 05:14
Plum Pencil Skirt
dusk arising said:
Ha ha yes, the world is full of great looking but quite forgettable ladies.
April 15th, 2019 04:54
dusk arising said:
Ha ha yes, the world is full of great looking but quite forgettable ladies.
April 15th, 2019 04:54
Watching
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, I see why we fall for each others spells!
April 15th, 2019 04:45
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, I see why we fall for each others spells!
April 15th, 2019 04:45
Plum Pencil Skirt
Michael Edwards said:
A great observational write - it held me with every word.
April 15th, 2019 03:00
Michael Edwards said:
A great observational write - it held me with every word.
April 15th, 2019 03:00
Plum Pencil Skirt
Fay Slimm. said:
Old memories die hard Nev. and no wonder names are forgotten when shapes take centre stage !!...... I like the comparisons made in this little sketch of what school reunions can resurrect - good read.
April 15th, 2019 02:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Old memories die hard Nev. and no wonder names are forgotten when shapes take centre stage !!...... I like the comparisons made in this little sketch of what school reunions can resurrect - good read.
April 15th, 2019 02:38
Tis Only Angels Crying
dusk arising said:
Stay home indeed, for who would want to frolic in the tears of angels. Let us wait till we can dance to the joyous trill of angels laughter.
There will be days like that.....
April 15th, 2019 00:18
dusk arising said:
Stay home indeed, for who would want to frolic in the tears of angels. Let us wait till we can dance to the joyous trill of angels laughter.
There will be days like that.....
April 15th, 2019 00:18
Tis Only Angels Crying
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears of Angels are so wonderful to dance in.
April 15th, 2019 00:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears of Angels are so wonderful to dance in.
April 15th, 2019 00:00
Tis Only Angels Crying
Michael Edwards said:
Are you saying rain isn\'t angels tears - bang goes another childhood dream. lol
A beautiful shortie Neville.
April 14th, 2019 08:17
Michael Edwards said:
Are you saying rain isn\'t angels tears - bang goes another childhood dream. lol
A beautiful shortie Neville.
April 14th, 2019 08:17
Tis Only Angels Crying
Poetic Dan said:
Short and sweet
On this crisp
Sunday morning
Cheers captain!
April 14th, 2019 05:13
Poetic Dan said:
Short and sweet
On this crisp
Sunday morning
Cheers captain!
April 14th, 2019 05:13
Tis Only Angels Crying
orchidee said:
You got that brolly if ya are going out?!
April 14th, 2019 04:41
orchidee said:
You got that brolly if ya are going out?!
April 14th, 2019 04:41
Tis Only Angels Crying
Fay Slimm. said:
Two differing views and so well brought home to this reader -- a meaningful and loved first read of my day dear friend. Saved of course.
April 14th, 2019 04:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Two differing views and so well brought home to this reader -- a meaningful and loved first read of my day dear friend. Saved of course.
April 14th, 2019 04:22
Watching
Suresh said:
I\'ve always told a woman that she holds a power much stronger than an army of men. - foolish men, one whiff and we melt away like butter on a hot tin can
April 13th, 2019 19:26
Suresh said:
I\'ve always told a woman that she holds a power much stronger than an army of men. - foolish men, one whiff and we melt away like butter on a hot tin can
April 13th, 2019 19:26
Watching
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ladies are just teasers, you would not be able to get near them.
April 13th, 2019 15:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ladies are just teasers, you would not be able to get near them.
April 13th, 2019 15:12
Watching
Fay Slimm. said:
Obviously a sad little female who shame on her teases but never plays - - manipulation is the word she enjoys metninks.
April 13th, 2019 10:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Obviously a sad little female who shame on her teases but never plays - - manipulation is the word she enjoys metninks.
April 13th, 2019 10:48
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