Comments received on poems by Neville
An Autumn Harvest
Suresh said:
I was transported to thy orchard, seeing the flurry of movement of lasses and lads, young at heart,
September 7th, 2019 13:27
Suresh said:
I was transported to thy orchard, seeing the flurry of movement of lasses and lads, young at heart,
September 7th, 2019 13:27
An Autumn Harvest
Christina8 said:
A refreshing read...reminds me of apple cider which I no doubt will enjoy soon...Loved your poem!!
September 7th, 2019 12:05
Christina8 said:
A refreshing read...reminds me of apple cider which I no doubt will enjoy soon...Loved your poem!!
September 7th, 2019 12:05
An Autumn Harvest
kevin browne said:
Then come hither and tarry is just a brilliant, flowing, at ease and collect throughout the fallen apples...
September 7th, 2019 08:36
kevin browne said:
Then come hither and tarry is just a brilliant, flowing, at ease and collect throughout the fallen apples...
September 7th, 2019 08:36
An Autumn Harvest
Michael Edwards said:
Such a vivid picture painted in the real gem of a write - into the favs.
September 7th, 2019 04:35
Michael Edwards said:
Such a vivid picture painted in the real gem of a write - into the favs.
September 7th, 2019 04:35
An Autumn Harvest
Clara said:
Oh this piece tells such a story. The imagery created by your words are strong. Wonderful piece.... Lovely tribute to autumn and apple picking. Enjoyed this one.
CLARA X
September 7th, 2019 02:37
Clara said:
Oh this piece tells such a story. The imagery created by your words are strong. Wonderful piece.... Lovely tribute to autumn and apple picking. Enjoyed this one.
CLARA X
September 7th, 2019 02:37
An Autumn Harvest
dusk arising said:
Reads like a traditional folk / workers song and has great rythmn.
On re-reading i\'m hearing the instruments, pipe/whistle, violin, accordian/squeeze box and drum.
I\'m also of a mind that soon i shall gather the black berries of autumn and yes those beloved Bramleys.
Really inspiring and a treat to read.
September 7th, 2019 01:34
dusk arising said:
Reads like a traditional folk / workers song and has great rythmn.
On re-reading i\'m hearing the instruments, pipe/whistle, violin, accordian/squeeze box and drum.
I\'m also of a mind that soon i shall gather the black berries of autumn and yes those beloved Bramleys.
Really inspiring and a treat to read.
September 7th, 2019 01:34
An Autumn Harvest
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there as will and had a wheel barrow in which I gently laid the apples ready to eat and convert into apple juice and cider.
Wonderful write Neville.
September 7th, 2019 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there as will and had a wheel barrow in which I gently laid the apples ready to eat and convert into apple juice and cider.
Wonderful write Neville.
September 7th, 2019 01:21
An Autumn Harvest
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Is she your servant? She\'s a busy gal there, picking all them apples!
September 7th, 2019 01:10
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Is she your servant? She\'s a busy gal there, picking all them apples!
September 7th, 2019 01:10
An Autumn Harvest
Fay Slimm. said:
I was there in that orchard so clear was your picture of autumn long past Nev. A fresh morning read of times when living was simple - - and I loved every line.
September 7th, 2019 00:58
Fay Slimm. said:
I was there in that orchard so clear was your picture of autumn long past Nev. A fresh morning read of times when living was simple - - and I loved every line.
September 7th, 2019 00:58
Infinity
Alta H Mabin said:
Beautifully respectful write. Extremely well written, Neville.
September 6th, 2019 11:55
Alta H Mabin said:
Beautifully respectful write. Extremely well written, Neville.
September 6th, 2019 11:55
Infinity
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
“When you go Home, tell them of us and say,
For your Tomorrow, we gave our Today”
John Maxwell Edmunds
1916
Perfect Neville just perfect you bloody poet
September 6th, 2019 07:34
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
“When you go Home, tell them of us and say,
For your Tomorrow, we gave our Today”
John Maxwell Edmunds
1916
Perfect Neville just perfect you bloody poet
September 6th, 2019 07:34
Infinity
Christina8 said:
Excellently penned poem---I too believe this is one of your best poems! wonderful tribute to the fallen.
September 6th, 2019 06:43
Christina8 said:
Excellently penned poem---I too believe this is one of your best poems! wonderful tribute to the fallen.
September 6th, 2019 06:43
Infinity
dusk arising said:
Outstanding tribute to the fallen and the futility of warfare.
I have never been to such a place as you describe but even photos of them resound with a spiritual reverence which also pours from your words today.
Finely crafted piece which im honoured to place amongst my favourites.
September 6th, 2019 01:51
dusk arising said:
Outstanding tribute to the fallen and the futility of warfare.
I have never been to such a place as you describe but even photos of them resound with a spiritual reverence which also pours from your words today.
Finely crafted piece which im honoured to place amongst my favourites.
September 6th, 2019 01:51
Infinity
Clara said:
Wow. A fine write Neville.
Even reading this, everything was still for me. Almost as if your words commanded respect and attention. Beautiful worded yet haunting as Fay mentioned above.
CLARA X
September 6th, 2019 00:37
Clara said:
Wow. A fine write Neville.
Even reading this, everything was still for me. Almost as if your words commanded respect and attention. Beautiful worded yet haunting as Fay mentioned above.
CLARA X
September 6th, 2019 00:37
Infinity
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfectly poemed these sacred places of fallen heroes - - time stands to attention where blood has been spilled and you capture that silence in this haunt of a read. One of your best again Nev.
September 6th, 2019 00:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfectly poemed these sacred places of fallen heroes - - time stands to attention where blood has been spilled and you capture that silence in this haunt of a read. One of your best again Nev.
September 6th, 2019 00:17
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Seek said:
Poignancy coming to life as inspired words fall on deaf ears answered with silence. A fine write, Neville!
September 5th, 2019 08:42
Seek said:
Poignancy coming to life as inspired words fall on deaf ears answered with silence. A fine write, Neville!
September 5th, 2019 08:42
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write dear Nev! A read much enjoyed.
September 5th, 2019 06:25
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write dear Nev! A read much enjoyed.
September 5th, 2019 06:25
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A wonderful and poignant write.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:09
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A wonderful and poignant write.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:09
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Michael Edwards said:
Broken words that fall on arid lands
will no more grow again
nor will the words you sow on unreceptive minds.
Just had a little poetic moment inspired by your fine write N.
September 5th, 2019 03:08
Michael Edwards said:
Broken words that fall on arid lands
will no more grow again
nor will the words you sow on unreceptive minds.
Just had a little poetic moment inspired by your fine write N.
September 5th, 2019 03:08
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
dusk arising said:
Reads like wishful thinking. The desire to forget that which haunts ones mind.
Last verse is a nice twist.
September 5th, 2019 02:18
dusk arising said:
Reads like wishful thinking. The desire to forget that which haunts ones mind.
Last verse is a nice twist.
September 5th, 2019 02:18
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Fay Slimm. said:
Words that break needed silence are but as this strong poem relates - a sin of sorts........... behind the eyes is where memory stores hurts....... An engaging read again Nev.
September 5th, 2019 02:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Words that break needed silence are but as this strong poem relates - a sin of sorts........... behind the eyes is where memory stores hurts....... An engaging read again Nev.
September 5th, 2019 02:15
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I won\'t punish ya with silence - rather with sound - of me singing! heehee.
I\'m cruel - I must punish everyone then! lol.
September 5th, 2019 01:29
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I won\'t punish ya with silence - rather with sound - of me singing! heehee.
I\'m cruel - I must punish everyone then! lol.
September 5th, 2019 01:29
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will forever be within you and within others as we read them on the page.
September 5th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will forever be within you and within others as we read them on the page.
September 5th, 2019 00:48
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