Comments received on poems by Neville
If the Cap Don\'t Fit .. & .. Glare
Dove said:
Silly me, here I am thinking pill caps, bottle caps, darn things hurt my hand twisting them off. Most definitely give the caps you wear away,
September 21st, 2024 11:11
Dove said:
Silly me, here I am thinking pill caps, bottle caps, darn things hurt my hand twisting them off. Most definitely give the caps you wear away,
September 21st, 2024 11:11
If the Cap Don\'t Fit .. & .. Glare
orchidee said:
You know old Orchi\'s trying to wear this cap that\'s too big for him. He can\'t see where he\'s going. Doh!
Well, he wears it so he won\'t see KP much. lol.
September 21st, 2024 05:52
orchidee said:
You know old Orchi\'s trying to wear this cap that\'s too big for him. He can\'t see where he\'s going. Doh!
Well, he wears it so he won\'t see KP much. lol.
September 21st, 2024 05:52
If the Cap Don\'t Fit .. & .. Glare
sorenbarrett said:
Almost got me Neville I think I have left visual field neglect. Almost missed the two for one special. Hats I have many and switch them all the time. I have to admit that some don\'t serve me well and I don\'t look good in others so I pass them off there are even some that I keep and don\'t wear. As for that whiskey sour I love em and hate when they are too bittersweet, Nicely done.
September 21st, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Almost got me Neville I think I have left visual field neglect. Almost missed the two for one special. Hats I have many and switch them all the time. I have to admit that some don\'t serve me well and I don\'t look good in others so I pass them off there are even some that I keep and don\'t wear. As for that whiskey sour I love em and hate when they are too bittersweet, Nicely done.
September 21st, 2024 05:27
If the Cap Don\'t Fit .. & .. Glare
Doggerel Dave said:
But if you is still \'ere, can\'t be nothing much wrong with your PC...
However, technical issues aside, your premium page entry here does highlight a common phenomenon, to whit promotion or elevation to a level above the proud wearer\'s level of competence..... Economic considerations sometimes complicate the issue......
Thanks for the freebee, Neville. 😊
September 21st, 2024 04:21
Doggerel Dave said:
But if you is still \'ere, can\'t be nothing much wrong with your PC...
However, technical issues aside, your premium page entry here does highlight a common phenomenon, to whit promotion or elevation to a level above the proud wearer\'s level of competence..... Economic considerations sometimes complicate the issue......
Thanks for the freebee, Neville. 😊
September 21st, 2024 04:21
The Full Five and Three Quarters .. & Gloat
Accidental Poet said:
Try using logic on your PC. PCs can be replaced. 😁
September 21st, 2024 02:07
Accidental Poet said:
Try using logic on your PC. PCs can be replaced. 😁
September 21st, 2024 02:07
The Full Five and Three Quarters .. & Gloat
Goldfinch60 said:
Two fine ones Neville, I hope yout can get your |PC sorted.
Andy
September 21st, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Two fine ones Neville, I hope yout can get your |PC sorted.
Andy
September 21st, 2024 01:52
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
Bobby O said:
I’m still sending to detachment from feeling the first piece presents. For me it is a perfect commentary that was brave enough and confident enough to stamp efficacy with the most powerful trump card in history , a mothers love
September 20th, 2024 23:49
Bobby O said:
I’m still sending to detachment from feeling the first piece presents. For me it is a perfect commentary that was brave enough and confident enough to stamp efficacy with the most powerful trump card in history , a mothers love
September 20th, 2024 23:49
The Full Five and Three Quarters .. & Gloat
orchidee said:
You can thank me five and three quarterly too! heehee.
September 20th, 2024 14:19
orchidee said:
You can thank me five and three quarterly too! heehee.
September 20th, 2024 14:19
They Lied About the Five Minute Warning
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of grammer school during the cold war when we had drills of hiding under our desks for a neuclear attack as if that would do any good.
September 20th, 2024 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of grammer school during the cold war when we had drills of hiding under our desks for a neuclear attack as if that would do any good.
September 20th, 2024 05:35
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
Tom Dylan said:
Some powerful pieces, Nevlle and like the two for one offer. Cheers, Tom
September 20th, 2024 05:18
Tom Dylan said:
Some powerful pieces, Nevlle and like the two for one offer. Cheers, Tom
September 20th, 2024 05:18
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good poems Neville, those Cryo babes to my mind are unthinkable.
Love could solve all in the second one.
Andy
September 20th, 2024 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good poems Neville, those Cryo babes to my mind are unthinkable.
Love could solve all in the second one.
Andy
September 20th, 2024 01:18
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
orchidee said:
I am not here - I am frozen in ice. That must be how I\'m millions of years old. Goldfinch is too. lol.
September 19th, 2024 13:01
orchidee said:
I am not here - I am frozen in ice. That must be how I\'m millions of years old. Goldfinch is too. lol.
September 19th, 2024 13:01
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
Accidental Poet said:
They may not be related, but they are equally well penned N. 😉👍
September 19th, 2024 08:55
Accidental Poet said:
They may not be related, but they are equally well penned N. 😉👍
September 19th, 2024 08:55
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
Cassie58 said:
I do like your two for the price of one days Neville. Nothing like a bargain.
Your Cryo Babes, makes me shiver. I really don’t approve of the meddling that is already going on, yet alone what is around the corner. I can only say, that I am happy, I am not going to be around to see it all. It is positively scary. It is totally unethical in my book.
As to The Hurting Game, this comes across as very competitive. I think it’s a good idea to call a truce and take a breather. I would imagine that this scenario is perfectly common place in some households. Not my ideal, but hey whatever works for some. Best kiss and makeup by bedtime:)
Have a happy Thursday.
September 19th, 2024 08:41
Cassie58 said:
I do like your two for the price of one days Neville. Nothing like a bargain.
Your Cryo Babes, makes me shiver. I really don’t approve of the meddling that is already going on, yet alone what is around the corner. I can only say, that I am happy, I am not going to be around to see it all. It is positively scary. It is totally unethical in my book.
As to The Hurting Game, this comes across as very competitive. I think it’s a good idea to call a truce and take a breather. I would imagine that this scenario is perfectly common place in some households. Not my ideal, but hey whatever works for some. Best kiss and makeup by bedtime:)
Have a happy Thursday.
September 19th, 2024 08:41
Now Out in The Open
Tom Dylan said:
A fascinating piece, Neville. You really paint the picture, convey the emotion, and the last line just nailed it, mate. A fine write.
September 19th, 2024 07:31
Tom Dylan said:
A fascinating piece, Neville. You really paint the picture, convey the emotion, and the last line just nailed it, mate. A fine write.
September 19th, 2024 07:31
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m sure glad you included that statement about the two being not related or I would have been all day scratching my head. The first is a most interesting thought that had not occured to me before. Maybe people won\'t believe in parenthood in those days. The second I can feel as if I had said it myself. Nicely worded
September 19th, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m sure glad you included that statement about the two being not related or I would have been all day scratching my head. The first is a most interesting thought that had not occured to me before. Maybe people won\'t believe in parenthood in those days. The second I can feel as if I had said it myself. Nicely worded
September 19th, 2024 05:27
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
Doggerel Dave said:
So two responses, Neville:
- I personally find all reproductive technology pretty repulsive. I am much in harmony with this one.
- A recognizable dynamic in some relationships I have observed…
I felt comfortable with those two – they felt real in their implied rebukes.
September 19th, 2024 02:42
Doggerel Dave said:
So two responses, Neville:
- I personally find all reproductive technology pretty repulsive. I am much in harmony with this one.
- A recognizable dynamic in some relationships I have observed…
I felt comfortable with those two – they felt real in their implied rebukes.
September 19th, 2024 02:42
Now Out in The Open
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville with a seemingly fulfilling finale.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville with a seemingly fulfilling finale.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 01:44
Now Out in The Open
Dan Williams said:
This is the coldness that can\'t be warmed by any blanket, and furnace. Bone chilling and determined to stay around. Good work, and good luck.
September 19th, 2024 01:04
Dan Williams said:
This is the coldness that can\'t be warmed by any blanket, and furnace. Bone chilling and determined to stay around. Good work, and good luck.
September 19th, 2024 01:04
Now Out in The Open
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. I felt the heartbreaking cold.
September 18th, 2024 20:39
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. I felt the heartbreaking cold.
September 18th, 2024 20:39
Now Out in The Open
Doggerel Dave said:
Not much of that around here right now, but I do have vivid but decently distant memories of cold - both physical and emotional and neither are much fun....
September 18th, 2024 08:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Not much of that around here right now, but I do have vivid but decently distant memories of cold - both physical and emotional and neither are much fun....
September 18th, 2024 08:46
Now Out in The Open
sorenbarrett said:
Hiding out in the open. Yes indeed I took this for more than just a relationship gone bad but something more hiding out in the open. The litteral story is one of coldness and I felt this in the poem\'s construction and wording. It gave me chills.
September 18th, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
Hiding out in the open. Yes indeed I took this for more than just a relationship gone bad but something more hiding out in the open. The litteral story is one of coldness and I felt this in the poem\'s construction and wording. It gave me chills.
September 18th, 2024 05:05
Now Out in The Open
Cassie58 said:
In a poem that got colder by degrees as I read through, there was a surprising upturn in the final lines. A poem of contrasts between then and now. The warmth is so much kinder on the soul. The cold is callous. I have always hated winter. You convey emotion so very well here Neville. Have a beautiful day my friend.
September 18th, 2024 03:32
Cassie58 said:
In a poem that got colder by degrees as I read through, there was a surprising upturn in the final lines. A poem of contrasts between then and now. The warmth is so much kinder on the soul. The cold is callous. I have always hated winter. You convey emotion so very well here Neville. Have a beautiful day my friend.
September 18th, 2024 03:32
Now Out in The Open
orchidee said:
Good write N.
We\'re cold here emotionally at times - shivery - a time of grieving.
Not hard-hearted, but some of us could not bear to stay long with a loved one when in hospital, not that he was in pain exactly, but suffering.
September 18th, 2024 02:27
orchidee said:
Good write N.
We\'re cold here emotionally at times - shivery - a time of grieving.
Not hard-hearted, but some of us could not bear to stay long with a loved one when in hospital, not that he was in pain exactly, but suffering.
September 18th, 2024 02:27
Black Pearls
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville, I too have come across young people like that and I have this ability to help them by just listening, it doe not sound like much but if they know that you are really listening to them they keep speaking and the problems they have come to them and they realise what they are and tend to get over them themselves.
Andy
September 18th, 2024 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville, I too have come across young people like that and I have this ability to help them by just listening, it doe not sound like much but if they know that you are really listening to them they keep speaking and the problems they have come to them and they realise what they are and tend to get over them themselves.
Andy
September 18th, 2024 01:51
Black Pearls
Bobby O said:
I had a nice visit here but did wish though , instead of windy seeds, some partially cooked pasta was the master of the pirouette , FUSILI maybe?
September 17th, 2024 23:56
Bobby O said:
I had a nice visit here but did wish though , instead of windy seeds, some partially cooked pasta was the master of the pirouette , FUSILI maybe?
September 17th, 2024 23:56
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