Comments received on poems by Neville



  Unilaterally Mine
arqios said:

Would you want it any other way!? P\'raps not :-)

October 29th, 2024 04:18

Another Moment Lost
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good and so true \'back in the day\'.

Andy

October 29th, 2024 03:40

  Unilaterally Mine
orchidee said:

Good write N.

October 29th, 2024 02:58

Another Moment Lost
Accidental Poet said:

Maybe its not too late? 🤔

October 29th, 2024 00:41

Medlar to Blet
Neilton said:

Amazing poem Neville! I Loved it !

October 28th, 2024 17:07

Another Moment Lost
Neilton said:

\"Time and the inclination of youth\"
What a great line ! Beautiful poem Neville!!

October 28th, 2024 16:46

Another Moment Lost
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous, brilliant work.

October 28th, 2024 13:11

Another Moment Lost
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Nevilie

October 28th, 2024 12:50

Another Moment Lost
MendedFences27 said:

All the moments of our youth should be treasured. They are why we are where we are today. Experience comes from mistakes as well as pleasurable moments.
I don\'t know who sculpted those statues, but would they be there today, if whoever did, had rushed headlong into man/womanhood too soon?
Another thought-provoking poem. Very pensive. A picture of path choice. We wend along making decisions galore and end up where we are. Would we change anything? If we did, would we end up the same? Maybe not.

October 28th, 2024 12:08

Another Moment Lost
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome penning
and so true! 👍
So many things
I should have done
but did not do.. 😢
Terrific read thank you!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad


October 28th, 2024 09:45

Another Moment Lost
sorenbarrett said:

Carpe diem, those that hesitate are lost. Some opportunities come only once in a life time. So well said

October 28th, 2024 09:39

Another Moment Lost
arqios said:

Hesitations in hindsight are brought on by naivety, and the number of moments lost are a testament and measure of my naive youth!

October 28th, 2024 07:00

Another Moment Lost
Doggerel Dave said:

Early days, Neville, early days. Them statues certainly had something to say perhaps not quite then...

\'Hesitations\' at that time, has a certain resonance for me.......

October 28th, 2024 06:44

Another Moment Lost
orchidee said:

Good write N.

October 28th, 2024 04:55

Another Moment Lost
Michael Edwards said:

Love this and thinking back some 60 years I can relate - what a super shortie.

October 28th, 2024 03:33

Medlar to Blet
Goldfinch60 said:

May that juice fill our lives with wonder and joy Neville.

Andy

October 28th, 2024 02:26

Halfway to Hanoi
Dan Williams said:

Wow. This is sadness coming at you from different directions. If it helps, you have my respect for what you have endured.

October 27th, 2024 22:49

Some Things Change Too Much
Young Fella said:

Delighted to read your words. Really enjoyed it.

October 27th, 2024 15:58

Medlar to Blet
Accidental Poet said:

If I could comment on this Medlar Blet thing I would, but I think it best I say...

October 27th, 2024 13:58

Medlar to Blet
MendedFences27 said:

Well, I\'m now much more informed today than yesterday, when I didn\'t know what a medlar and bletting were. Research left me wondering what they would taste like. I read of everything from applesauce to caramel. I asked my wife if she\'d ever heard of them and she said, \"No,\" I explained to her about bletting, and she threatened to hang me from a tree and let me slowly weep. Doesn\'t sound too promising for any medlar jams or jellies. So, thank you for the exposure to medlars, I am now a wiser man. - Phil A.

October 27th, 2024 11:47

Medlar to Blet
orchidee said:

I\'ve not the foggiest idea of this fruit - something about dog\'s backside in the comments..... Doh!
Good write N.

October 27th, 2024 09:30

Medlar to Blet
Ezekiel Olayemi said:

A captivating poem sir ... Speak much volume to those that understand 👏

October 27th, 2024 07:49

Medlar to Blet
Doggerel Dave said:

Medlar, is a large shrub or small tree in the rose family Rosaceae; Blet, ‘a state of softness or decay in certain fruits, such as the medlar, brought about by overripening’. (getting there…) Fell down at Coptic jar, as I ain’t going to break into any glass case in some museum…..

October 27th, 2024 06:58

Medlar to Blet
Cheeky Missy said:

This is too charming and so sweetly rendered, I could hug myself after the pretty indulgence. Thank you so very much for sharing!

October 27th, 2024 06:15

Medlar to Blet
sorenbarrett said:

There is an unexplicable element about this poem that feels like it has been hanging on that tree ripening and it weeps droping metaphoric tears. This water gives life to the poem. The water that is at first murky becomes clearer with time. Sweets for the children. Loved this poem Neville wished I had thought ot it.

October 27th, 2024 05:31

Medlar to Blet
arqios said:

The image of the Coptic jar burns brightly into the ‘after image’ of the poem; always preparing and always ready!

October 27th, 2024 05:16

Halfway to Hanoi
Goldfinch60 said:

Love can come i so many ways Neville.

Andy

October 27th, 2024 02:44

Halfway to Hanoi
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant.

October 26th, 2024 23:38

Halfway to Hanoi
Thad Wilk said:

A thought provoking,
melancholy
and heart rendering
poem and story,
awesome
presentation my friend!! 🏅
My pleasure to read indeed!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad



October 26th, 2024 20:13

Calling the Bluff
Ezekiel Olayemi said:

That\'s so nice 👏

October 26th, 2024 20:03



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