Comments received on poems by Neville
Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
Thomas W Case said:
Grand Slam, superb work. I hope the olives were Kalamatas.
October 9th, 2024 12:01
Thomas W Case said:
Grand Slam, superb work. I hope the olives were Kalamatas.
October 9th, 2024 12:01
Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
MaxSmith said:
Two for the price of one, we are lucky.
Full of fun and purpose. With a dabble of hope.
My cup of tea
Enjoyed very much Nev
October 9th, 2024 11:11
MaxSmith said:
Two for the price of one, we are lucky.
Full of fun and purpose. With a dabble of hope.
My cup of tea
Enjoyed very much Nev
October 9th, 2024 11:11
Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
peet said:
Beautiful. Do write more. Looking forward to seeing
October 9th, 2024 09:55
peet said:
Beautiful. Do write more. Looking forward to seeing
October 9th, 2024 09:55
Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Neville
October 9th, 2024 09:46
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Neville
October 9th, 2024 09:46
Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Great write Neville! Wise words to end for sure! Powerful share that mixes poetic personal experience with timeless wisdom! Well done!
October 9th, 2024 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Great write Neville! Wise words to end for sure! Powerful share that mixes poetic personal experience with timeless wisdom! Well done!
October 9th, 2024 09:17
Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
Doggerel Dave said:
So all it takes is stopped rain (you should be so lucky) anchovies, olives, house white wine, black bread and of course, each other to wax philosophical does it?..š„
October 9th, 2024 07:25
Doggerel Dave said:
So all it takes is stopped rain (you should be so lucky) anchovies, olives, house white wine, black bread and of course, each other to wax philosophical does it?..š„
October 9th, 2024 07:25
Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely, akin to diary notes shared for private indulgence and the delight of viewing, leaving the reader elated at having vicariously enjoyed through the lens of the subtly eloquent poet. Beautifully rendered with a disarming simplicity and subtly winking poignancy, not to mention excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 9th, 2024 07:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely, akin to diary notes shared for private indulgence and the delight of viewing, leaving the reader elated at having vicariously enjoyed through the lens of the subtly eloquent poet. Beautifully rendered with a disarming simplicity and subtly winking poignancy, not to mention excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 9th, 2024 07:10
Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
sorenbarrett said:
In our rush to get nowhere we miss the sensual pleasures of life. Taking one\'s time to smell the roses give purpose, meaning, hope and the realization that one does exist in this rat race about us. That\'s my shallow take on this poem that I felt as enjoyable as the olives, white wine, anchovies, and black bread. Thanks for the company
October 9th, 2024 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
In our rush to get nowhere we miss the sensual pleasures of life. Taking one\'s time to smell the roses give purpose, meaning, hope and the realization that one does exist in this rat race about us. That\'s my shallow take on this poem that I felt as enjoyable as the olives, white wine, anchovies, and black bread. Thanks for the company
October 9th, 2024 05:15
Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
arqios said:
Back to back - olives and purpose... there is yet hope still!
October 9th, 2024 03:48
arqios said:
Back to back - olives and purpose... there is yet hope still!
October 9th, 2024 03:48
Just As Sunsets
Goldfinch60 said:
But that glow will always return Neville to bring that brightness back.
Andy
October 9th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
But that glow will always return Neville to bring that brightness back.
Andy
October 9th, 2024 01:24
Just As Sunsets
Dan Williams said:
And imagine you must, treasure these times to help offset less happy ones. Good job.
October 9th, 2024 00:06
Dan Williams said:
And imagine you must, treasure these times to help offset less happy ones. Good job.
October 9th, 2024 00:06
Just As Sunsets
Cheeky Missy said:
The delicious silence within which this seems to occur, subtly warming to heights unspoken leaves me half breathless and without words. Lovely and so beautifully rendered with a mild and subtle poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 8th, 2024 16:13
Cheeky Missy said:
The delicious silence within which this seems to occur, subtly warming to heights unspoken leaves me half breathless and without words. Lovely and so beautifully rendered with a mild and subtle poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 8th, 2024 16:13
Benign Bridges
MaxSmith said:
Good evening Nev.
Your completely right, it\'s such a shame so much time is wasted on such things.
Life and time far too precious to waste.
Glad to see your still writing.
October 8th, 2024 13:49
MaxSmith said:
Good evening Nev.
Your completely right, it\'s such a shame so much time is wasted on such things.
Life and time far too precious to waste.
Glad to see your still writing.
October 8th, 2024 13:49
Just As Sunsets
MendedFences27 said:
As the \"Sunsets\" behind \"displaced fragments of ancient mountains\" It signifies the end of a relationship, though both sense, maybe, a rekindling. This is a
gorgeous way to symbolize the dark coldness of parting ways. There is a sadness with a splinter of hope expressed here. Great symbolism and a scene we\'ve all lived through. - Phil A.
October 8th, 2024 13:26
MendedFences27 said:
As the \"Sunsets\" behind \"displaced fragments of ancient mountains\" It signifies the end of a relationship, though both sense, maybe, a rekindling. This is a
gorgeous way to symbolize the dark coldness of parting ways. There is a sadness with a splinter of hope expressed here. Great symbolism and a scene we\'ve all lived through. - Phil A.
October 8th, 2024 13:26
Just As Sunsets
arqios said:
Our imagination brings a spark, united vision fuels passionā¦ sunsets are potent prompts.
October 8th, 2024 07:00
arqios said:
Our imagination brings a spark, united vision fuels passionā¦ sunsets are potent prompts.
October 8th, 2024 07:00
Just As Sunsets
sorenbarrett said:
Very sensual as well as beautiful but melancholic with a sense of sadness yet fulfilment. I like the taste of this fine wine. A great vintage
October 8th, 2024 06:25
sorenbarrett said:
Very sensual as well as beautiful but melancholic with a sense of sadness yet fulfilment. I like the taste of this fine wine. A great vintage
October 8th, 2024 06:25
Benign Bridges
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, bridges need to be built in the world to protect its wonder.
Andy
October 8th, 2024 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, bridges need to be built in the world to protect its wonder.
Andy
October 8th, 2024 01:08
Benign Bridges
Dan Williams said:
While I empathize with your sentiment, I fear there will be wars as long as there are humans.
October 7th, 2024 23:56
Dan Williams said:
While I empathize with your sentiment, I fear there will be wars as long as there are humans.
October 7th, 2024 23:56
Benign Bridges
Doggerel Dave said:
The bridge - architectural embodiment of peace and prosperity, Neville.
October 7th, 2024 07:38
Doggerel Dave said:
The bridge - architectural embodiment of peace and prosperity, Neville.
October 7th, 2024 07:38
Benign Bridges
sorenbarrett said:
Not a bad idea to throw them off the bridge. No wars are not worth fighting for unless you are an arms producer. I might add money is not worth fighting for. Good write Neville
October 7th, 2024 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
Not a bad idea to throw them off the bridge. No wars are not worth fighting for unless you are an arms producer. I might add money is not worth fighting for. Good write Neville
October 7th, 2024 04:53
Mad Dog in America
Goldfinch60 said:
My bunker was destroyed Neville that is why I normally think outside the box.
Andy
October 7th, 2024 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
My bunker was destroyed Neville that is why I normally think outside the box.
Andy
October 7th, 2024 01:15
Mad Dog in America
Dan Williams said:
If I thought building a bunker would help, I would be hard at it. When I was in grade school we would have drills where you were to hide under your desk; right. Words of wisdom here.
October 7th, 2024 00:01
Dan Williams said:
If I thought building a bunker would help, I would be hard at it. When I was in grade school we would have drills where you were to hide under your desk; right. Words of wisdom here.
October 7th, 2024 00:01
Mad Dog in America
sorenbarrett said:
A true portrayal of American history and its expantion then deterioration and general paranoia. Good write Neville
October 6th, 2024 19:16
sorenbarrett said:
A true portrayal of American history and its expantion then deterioration and general paranoia. Good write Neville
October 6th, 2024 19:16
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