Comments received on poems by Neville
In the Beginning of Our Forever
Doggerel Dave said:
Pretty happy where I am right now...but don\'t want to go on for ever... though if infinity has to be tackled then there better be some pretty good provision for this somewhere.....
October 21st, 2024 16:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Pretty happy where I am right now...but don\'t want to go on for ever... though if infinity has to be tackled then there better be some pretty good provision for this somewhere.....
October 21st, 2024 16:32
In the Beginning of Our Forever
Thad Wilk said:
A lovely, touching and
thought provoking write!! 🤩
Ahhh, longevity and love.
Very evocative poem,
thanks for sharing,
to read a delight!!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
October 21st, 2024 10:14
Thad Wilk said:
A lovely, touching and
thought provoking write!! 🤩
Ahhh, longevity and love.
Very evocative poem,
thanks for sharing,
to read a delight!!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
October 21st, 2024 10:14
In the Beginning of Our Forever
arqios said:
….‘longevity’; now there’s a word that never concerned me much, but there are quite a few people and things that make one want to live forever!
October 21st, 2024 06:19
arqios said:
….‘longevity’; now there’s a word that never concerned me much, but there are quite a few people and things that make one want to live forever!
October 21st, 2024 06:19
In the Beginning of Our Forever
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there. A great feeling, exhilarating. At such times I have often wondered how there can be a begining to infinity and that such love must have extended backward forever as well. Loved the poem it reopened some old feelings and thoughts
October 21st, 2024 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there. A great feeling, exhilarating. At such times I have often wondered how there can be a begining to infinity and that such love must have extended backward forever as well. Loved the poem it reopened some old feelings and thoughts
October 21st, 2024 04:51
Rough Justice
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Neville. A fine write with some great lines.
October 21st, 2024 02:26
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Neville. A fine write with some great lines.
October 21st, 2024 02:26
Irksome Quandaries
NafisaSB said:
i think the title suits the query - keep asking....maybe one day, the answer will dawn on you-all the best
October 20th, 2024 23:13
NafisaSB said:
i think the title suits the query - keep asking....maybe one day, the answer will dawn on you-all the best
October 20th, 2024 23:13
Rough Justice
Thad Wilk said:
A phenomenal write,
exhilarating awesomeness!!🏆
I left that same door behind
a long time ago
too, I must profess! 🥳
Wonderfully woven!! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 20th, 2024 14:21
Thad Wilk said:
A phenomenal write,
exhilarating awesomeness!!🏆
I left that same door behind
a long time ago
too, I must profess! 🥳
Wonderfully woven!! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 20th, 2024 14:21
Rough Justice
Cheeky Missy said:
You were NOT supposed to make me audibly giggle with this, but la dee dah! I couldn\'t help meself. Fascinating and so charmingly rendered with perfect imagery and a waltzing but subtle sense of humor, or is it just me? Thank you very much for sharing!
October 20th, 2024 06:49
Cheeky Missy said:
You were NOT supposed to make me audibly giggle with this, but la dee dah! I couldn\'t help meself. Fascinating and so charmingly rendered with perfect imagery and a waltzing but subtle sense of humor, or is it just me? Thank you very much for sharing!
October 20th, 2024 06:49
Rough Justice
sorenbarrett said:
Many walk back that dusty trail and reopen the door to a flood of more casualties including themselves. Having once escaped bar the door and never turn back.
October 20th, 2024 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
Many walk back that dusty trail and reopen the door to a flood of more casualties including themselves. Having once escaped bar the door and never turn back.
October 20th, 2024 06:22
Rough Justice
Doggerel Dave said:
There’s a part of me which says ‘why worry? I will be out of here before the shit really hits the fan where I am now’
Also a part of me the non-religious, who can’t help speculating, says ‘what if’…..
October 20th, 2024 05:52
Doggerel Dave said:
There’s a part of me which says ‘why worry? I will be out of here before the shit really hits the fan where I am now’
Also a part of me the non-religious, who can’t help speculating, says ‘what if’…..
October 20th, 2024 05:52
Rough Justice
arqios said:
Making it out alive in one piece however tattered was the prime goal of ‘survival.’ These days we have tick-tock and such.
October 20th, 2024 04:17
arqios said:
Making it out alive in one piece however tattered was the prime goal of ‘survival.’ These days we have tick-tock and such.
October 20th, 2024 04:17
Rough Justice
Bobby O said:
Nice. Victors write the history books and drink the hidden cache’ of booze
Q E D!
October 20th, 2024 02:27
Bobby O said:
Nice. Victors write the history books and drink the hidden cache’ of booze
Q E D!
October 20th, 2024 02:27
Short Changed on A Long Greek Island
orchidee said:
Best not tell me the truth of it then. I will only swoon! lol.
October 19th, 2024 09:15
orchidee said:
Best not tell me the truth of it then. I will only swoon! lol.
October 19th, 2024 09:15
Short Changed on A Long Greek Island
arqios said:
How many bowls of olives 🫒 can one digest in the span of three weeks!
October 19th, 2024 07:04
arqios said:
How many bowls of olives 🫒 can one digest in the span of three weeks!
October 19th, 2024 07:04
Short Changed on A Long Greek Island
Doggerel Dave said:
Which island was it? (Ah, I know: a gentleman.....) but you never know....
October 19th, 2024 05:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Which island was it? (Ah, I know: a gentleman.....) but you never know....
October 19th, 2024 05:59
Short Changed on A Long Greek Island
sorenbarrett said:
At least no STD\'s or guilt, Loved the set up in the first stanza foreshadowing the outcome. This was later reinforced in the final stanza. I have in later years grown to like green olives but not those type of relationships. Loved the poem as well
October 19th, 2024 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
At least no STD\'s or guilt, Loved the set up in the first stanza foreshadowing the outcome. This was later reinforced in the final stanza. I have in later years grown to like green olives but not those type of relationships. Loved the poem as well
October 19th, 2024 05:20
Short Changed on A Long Greek Island
orchidee said:
I know the bit that\'s not true - it was apples, not olives! lol.
October 19th, 2024 02:50
orchidee said:
I know the bit that\'s not true - it was apples, not olives! lol.
October 19th, 2024 02:50
Gaea’s Garden
NafisaSB said:
oh wow, wish i could be like gea - i am at a total loss ometimes, and at others, sailing along smoothly
short but sweet..
October 19th, 2024 01:53
NafisaSB said:
oh wow, wish i could be like gea - i am at a total loss ometimes, and at others, sailing along smoothly
short but sweet..
October 19th, 2024 01:53
Deep Secrets
Goldfinch60 said:
Some secrets can be hidden forever Neville.
Andy
October 19th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Some secrets can be hidden forever Neville.
Andy
October 19th, 2024 01:24
Deep Secrets
Doggerel Dave said:
As stated, it\'s the signature almost hidden away on a fine piece of art. You were lucky she was with you, enabled your riff ....sometimes...nah forget it - it was a long time ago...
October 18th, 2024 21:12
Doggerel Dave said:
As stated, it\'s the signature almost hidden away on a fine piece of art. You were lucky she was with you, enabled your riff ....sometimes...nah forget it - it was a long time ago...
October 18th, 2024 21:12
Deep Secrets
arqios said:
Brought me back to that one breakfast after, where the orchids on the pancakes 🥞 were edible! Good things tend to come in pairs!
October 18th, 2024 07:37
arqios said:
Brought me back to that one breakfast after, where the orchids on the pancakes 🥞 were edible! Good things tend to come in pairs!
October 18th, 2024 07:37
Deep Secrets
sorenbarrett said:
Errotic and sensual with great lines \"More perfect than an orchid smiling\" Such tactful yet vivid imagery gave way to the softest and tenderest loving ending so well put that it brought a smile to my face.
October 18th, 2024 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
Errotic and sensual with great lines \"More perfect than an orchid smiling\" Such tactful yet vivid imagery gave way to the softest and tenderest loving ending so well put that it brought a smile to my face.
October 18th, 2024 05:18
Deep Secrets
orchidee said:
How come you know my \'dark horse\' adventures? - orchid(ee)! lol.
October 18th, 2024 02:59
orchidee said:
How come you know my \'dark horse\' adventures? - orchid(ee)! lol.
October 18th, 2024 02:59
The Repatriation of Shards
Goldfinch60 said:
Thay whole will be there Neville once we start talking to each other
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Andy
October 18th, 2024 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Thay whole will be there Neville once we start talking to each other
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Andy
October 18th, 2024 01:15
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