Comments received on poems by Neville
The Repatriation of Shards
Doggerel Dave said:
Your words evoke memories of English cathedrals which I love. One of my many inconsistencies would be that I have not a sliver of religiosity in me….
Thanks for the prompted recollection of visits past, Neville.
October 17th, 2024 18:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Your words evoke memories of English cathedrals which I love. One of my many inconsistencies would be that I have not a sliver of religiosity in me….
Thanks for the prompted recollection of visits past, Neville.
October 17th, 2024 18:05
The Repatriation of Shards
MendedFences27 said:
Once bright and shining as part of a stained-glass window high on the walls of a cathedral, now dark and graying, fallen and broken \"shards.\" Sorry, but it happens and there is no going back. There are only memories of what was, which is all well and good, but it\'s better to keep on making new memories, together.
Lots of imagery here with \"mullioned windows,\" \"ancient book written in tongues,\" and \"magnificent mosques, temples, and cathedrals.\" It all adds up to aging. I find it best to keep looking ahead.
LOL....This poem, to me, harkens to olden times to portray a life on the far side of the hill. Or, as the old saying goes, \"Not to worry, you can still chase women.... Downhill.
October 17th, 2024 12:09
MendedFences27 said:
Once bright and shining as part of a stained-glass window high on the walls of a cathedral, now dark and graying, fallen and broken \"shards.\" Sorry, but it happens and there is no going back. There are only memories of what was, which is all well and good, but it\'s better to keep on making new memories, together.
Lots of imagery here with \"mullioned windows,\" \"ancient book written in tongues,\" and \"magnificent mosques, temples, and cathedrals.\" It all adds up to aging. I find it best to keep looking ahead.
LOL....This poem, to me, harkens to olden times to portray a life on the far side of the hill. Or, as the old saying goes, \"Not to worry, you can still chase women.... Downhill.
October 17th, 2024 12:09
The Repatriation of Shards
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
a terrific poem!!,💯
Fantastic imagery
and captivating
word choices throughout! 👍
Much enjoyed my friend!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 17th, 2024 09:51
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
a terrific poem!!,💯
Fantastic imagery
and captivating
word choices throughout! 👍
Much enjoyed my friend!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 17th, 2024 09:51
The Repatriation of Shards
sorenbarrett said:
Ahh the remnants of past glory now covered in dust, to be what we once were and be remembered, the aim of us all
October 17th, 2024 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Ahh the remnants of past glory now covered in dust, to be what we once were and be remembered, the aim of us all
October 17th, 2024 05:52
The Repatriation of Shards
arqios said:
A mystical connection bridged by what we know and what was known however relegated to reliquaries, somewhere in forgetfulness clues sparkle under our very noses!
October 17th, 2024 05:51
arqios said:
A mystical connection bridged by what we know and what was known however relegated to reliquaries, somewhere in forgetfulness clues sparkle under our very noses!
October 17th, 2024 05:51
Pants
arqios said:
It’s all the rage it seems more so with the low waisted over-pants lol!
October 17th, 2024 04:24
arqios said:
It’s all the rage it seems more so with the low waisted over-pants lol!
October 17th, 2024 04:24
Just As Sunsets
Bobby O said:
Ok , so I imagine there is a visual of orange triangular shrinking fading luminous segment but you’re sneaky so I believe the togethered cuddle with smiling minds drifting toward comfortable and warm is both of you are still engaged with the energy of recent intimacy and wantonly enjoying every joule of its after glow.
Just Sayin’ !
October 16th, 2024 08:39
Bobby O said:
Ok , so I imagine there is a visual of orange triangular shrinking fading luminous segment but you’re sneaky so I believe the togethered cuddle with smiling minds drifting toward comfortable and warm is both of you are still engaged with the energy of recent intimacy and wantonly enjoying every joule of its after glow.
Just Sayin’ !
October 16th, 2024 08:39
Pants
Thomas W Case said:
Great point. I wear shorts for as long as possible.
October 13th, 2024 22:58
Thomas W Case said:
Great point. I wear shorts for as long as possible.
October 13th, 2024 22:58
Pants
Goldfinch60 said:
You tend to see so many more \'builders bums\' now Neville.
Andy
October 13th, 2024 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
You tend to see so many more \'builders bums\' now Neville.
Andy
October 13th, 2024 02:02
Pants
Thad Wilk said:
Well enjoy your trip
to Narbonne France!! 🍺
Most of them there
still wear, under pants! 🤣
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
October 12th, 2024 10:29
Thad Wilk said:
Well enjoy your trip
to Narbonne France!! 🍺
Most of them there
still wear, under pants! 🤣
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
October 12th, 2024 10:29
Pants
Doggerel Dave said:
Evidently here in Australia (a part of the world you omitted to mention, Neville) there is a fashion colloquially known as ‘going commando’. Don’t ask – I’ve got me own arrangements – don’t ask…..
According to their website yer can order online – save you all the bother of going to Le Grand Buffet in Narbwhatever……..
October 12th, 2024 06:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Evidently here in Australia (a part of the world you omitted to mention, Neville) there is a fashion colloquially known as ‘going commando’. Don’t ask – I’ve got me own arrangements – don’t ask…..
According to their website yer can order online – save you all the bother of going to Le Grand Buffet in Narbwhatever……..
October 12th, 2024 06:35
Pants
sorenbarrett said:
A good question Neville I think its part of the doesn\'t matter movement Male, Female, neither, inside out, right side out, backwards, forwards, all the same. Have a great trip
October 12th, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
A good question Neville I think its part of the doesn\'t matter movement Male, Female, neither, inside out, right side out, backwards, forwards, all the same. Have a great trip
October 12th, 2024 05:23
The Catch in A Love Song .. & Upon Turning the Other Cheek
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good ones Neville. Enjoy your break.
Andy
October 12th, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good ones Neville. Enjoy your break.
Andy
October 12th, 2024 01:52
The Catch in A Love Song .. & Upon Turning the Other Cheek
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😮
What a terrific
double treat here
you have penned!! 🏆
Just resonates
with greatness
much enjoyed my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace! Thad
PS. Enjoy your few days off! 😄
October 11th, 2024 14:01
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😮
What a terrific
double treat here
you have penned!! 🏆
Just resonates
with greatness
much enjoyed my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace! Thad
PS. Enjoy your few days off! 😄
October 11th, 2024 14:01
The Catch in A Love Song .. & Upon Turning the Other Cheek
peet said:
Great write. Enjoy the much deserved break and keep writing.
October 11th, 2024 13:59
peet said:
Great write. Enjoy the much deserved break and keep writing.
October 11th, 2024 13:59
The Catch in A Love Song .. & Upon Turning the Other Cheek
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Nevilie
October 11th, 2024 09:33
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Nevilie
October 11th, 2024 09:33
The Catch in A Love Song .. & Upon Turning the Other Cheek
Cheeky Missy said:
[We will definitely miss you, Sir; please don\'t be absent for long.] Fascinating with so much to contemplate, as well as what aka Soren already excellently noted, the second seeming clearly an echo of that incident in the gospels, methinks I\'m insufficiently awake yet to comment properly. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy only heightened by the allusion and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
October 11th, 2024 06:29
Cheeky Missy said:
[We will definitely miss you, Sir; please don\'t be absent for long.] Fascinating with so much to contemplate, as well as what aka Soren already excellently noted, the second seeming clearly an echo of that incident in the gospels, methinks I\'m insufficiently awake yet to comment properly. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy only heightened by the allusion and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
October 11th, 2024 06:29
The Catch in A Love Song .. & Upon Turning the Other Cheek
sorenbarrett said:
Two for one what a bargain. The first hit me as so typical of relationships all woven in time with crossings and falling back, loopes leaving us back at cross roads and renewals. It is its ending line that shows you to be a poet at heart. The second so full of references to Christ and Mary and the relation of it to a present relationship where pain is not in what one does to the other but in the potential loss of the other. Once again the last line is the clincher. Nice Neville will miss your poems hurry back
October 11th, 2024 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
Two for one what a bargain. The first hit me as so typical of relationships all woven in time with crossings and falling back, loopes leaving us back at cross roads and renewals. It is its ending line that shows you to be a poet at heart. The second so full of references to Christ and Mary and the relation of it to a present relationship where pain is not in what one does to the other but in the potential loss of the other. Once again the last line is the clincher. Nice Neville will miss your poems hurry back
October 11th, 2024 05:41
The Catch in A Love Song .. & Upon Turning the Other Cheek
Neville said:
Now you are just being two cheeky
October 11th, 2024 02:49
Neville said:
Now you are just being two cheeky
October 11th, 2024 02:49
The Catch in A Love Song .. & Upon Turning the Other Cheek
orchidee said:
Good writes N. Enjoy your break.
October 11th, 2024 02:12
orchidee said:
Good writes N. Enjoy your break.
October 11th, 2024 02:12
Fit For Purpose
Goldfinch60 said:
Back in the day the pub I went was like that Neville, no music, no games tables, just good beer and good friends, darts and cards.
Wharfedale speakers take me back.
Andy
October 11th, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Back in the day the pub I went was like that Neville, no music, no games tables, just good beer and good friends, darts and cards.
Wharfedale speakers take me back.
Andy
October 11th, 2024 01:41
Fit For Purpose
sorenbarrett said:
The blues of a rainy day accompanied by blues is my choice. Drinking can be raucous but I still prefer the more personal and not the franchise but the privately owned more homesy places. Nicely written Neville
October 10th, 2024 19:59
sorenbarrett said:
The blues of a rainy day accompanied by blues is my choice. Drinking can be raucous but I still prefer the more personal and not the franchise but the privately owned more homesy places. Nicely written Neville
October 10th, 2024 19:59
Fit For Purpose
MendedFences27 said:
Reminds me of pub\'s years ago whose only purpose was for drinking. Now a days, they\'re more restaurant-like. It\'s good you found one like that.
I think you described it beautifully, crowded, noisy, and purposeful. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2024 15:58
MendedFences27 said:
Reminds me of pub\'s years ago whose only purpose was for drinking. Now a days, they\'re more restaurant-like. It\'s good you found one like that.
I think you described it beautifully, crowded, noisy, and purposeful. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2024 15:58
Clean Sheets
MaxSmith said:
A warmly welcomed hot summer beautiful picturesque masterpiece
Nice work Nev
October 10th, 2024 13:05
MaxSmith said:
A warmly welcomed hot summer beautiful picturesque masterpiece
Nice work Nev
October 10th, 2024 13:05
Fit For Purpose
MaxSmith said:
Good Evening Nev
I feel like a trip to the pub for a drink with some chilled music after this one and it\'s been a while.
Never disappoint, enjoyed very much Nev
October 10th, 2024 11:27
MaxSmith said:
Good Evening Nev
I feel like a trip to the pub for a drink with some chilled music after this one and it\'s been a while.
Never disappoint, enjoyed very much Nev
October 10th, 2024 11:27
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