Comments received on poems by Neville
Glimpsed
Goldfinch60 said:
May those prisms of light always dance in your life Neville.
Andy
November 8th, 2024 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
May those prisms of light always dance in your life Neville.
Andy
November 8th, 2024 02:43
Glimpsed
Cheeky Missy said:
What, forsooth, is it about light, glittering, flickering, twinkling in whatever medium, that draws the eye and soul almost with a gasp of excitement? But it forever does. The elusive female observed, breathtaken for a moment in that glance translates into a deeper instance of reflection. Fascinating and intriguing, charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery, this tantalizes. Thank you for sharing.
November 7th, 2024 20:26
Cheeky Missy said:
What, forsooth, is it about light, glittering, flickering, twinkling in whatever medium, that draws the eye and soul almost with a gasp of excitement? But it forever does. The elusive female observed, breathtaken for a moment in that glance translates into a deeper instance of reflection. Fascinating and intriguing, charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery, this tantalizes. Thank you for sharing.
November 7th, 2024 20:26
Glimpsed
MendedFences27 said:
Funny how, when something changes color we all become amazed. Refracted light like in a rainbow or here in your \"bottles\" can light up someone\'s eyes. It\'s a scene well painted by you. I loved \" prisms dancing.\" - Phil A.
November 7th, 2024 18:48
MendedFences27 said:
Funny how, when something changes color we all become amazed. Refracted light like in a rainbow or here in your \"bottles\" can light up someone\'s eyes. It\'s a scene well painted by you. I loved \" prisms dancing.\" - Phil A.
November 7th, 2024 18:48
Glimpsed
Doggerel Dave said:
Exactly so.
The view from my kitchen window (breakfast) sans palms, sky distant, foreground corrugated roof. Over eight years assembly a carefully curated line of bottles (not one screw top) block the corrugations, while they play patterns through the glass…….. her eyes have yet to light up…might have traded her in if she hadn’t other virtues……
November 7th, 2024 07:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Exactly so.
The view from my kitchen window (breakfast) sans palms, sky distant, foreground corrugated roof. Over eight years assembly a carefully curated line of bottles (not one screw top) block the corrugations, while they play patterns through the glass…….. her eyes have yet to light up…might have traded her in if she hadn’t other virtues……
November 7th, 2024 07:24
Glimpsed
arqios said:
Anything bright and shiny has its distinct appeal, even polished chrome and stainless steel.
November 7th, 2024 06:52
arqios said:
Anything bright and shiny has its distinct appeal, even polished chrome and stainless steel.
November 7th, 2024 06:52
Glimpsed
sorenbarrett said:
The pairing ot the lighting up of her eyes with the glints from the bottles no accident, Synchronicity Jung felt was a force of equal validity to causation. I ching as valid as probability. What on the surface may seem casual may be causal. Just babeling Neville
November 7th, 2024 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
The pairing ot the lighting up of her eyes with the glints from the bottles no accident, Synchronicity Jung felt was a force of equal validity to causation. I ching as valid as probability. What on the surface may seem casual may be causal. Just babeling Neville
November 7th, 2024 04:10
Glimpsed
orchidee said:
I, rodent-like, added water to those glass bottle of wine! lol. I\'m a furry pest.
November 7th, 2024 03:13
orchidee said:
I, rodent-like, added water to those glass bottle of wine! lol. I\'m a furry pest.
November 7th, 2024 03:13
Catching Up With a Debutante
Goldfinch60 said:
It is just one of those things that happen in life Neville, we meet many people who we would like to get to know better but it never happens.
Andy
November 7th, 2024 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
It is just one of those things that happen in life Neville, we meet many people who we would like to get to know better but it never happens.
Andy
November 7th, 2024 02:20
Catching Up With a Debutante
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😧
An awesome poem and
account of long ago my friend!! 👍
Enjoyed this story
from beginning to end!!💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 6th, 2024 21:34
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😧
An awesome poem and
account of long ago my friend!! 👍
Enjoyed this story
from beginning to end!!💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 6th, 2024 21:34
Catching Up With a Debutante
Doggerel Dave said:
I thought it was more of a sway, actually.. Must have been last Thursday I sighted her...no old buggy yet...
November 6th, 2024 21:27
Doggerel Dave said:
I thought it was more of a sway, actually.. Must have been last Thursday I sighted her...no old buggy yet...
November 6th, 2024 21:27
Catching Up With a Debutante
Cheeky Missy said:
Curiosity killed the proverbial cat, but her seeming profession having been my 2nd choice, now I recall that\'s how my one great uncle met my since great aunt. So, guess it\'s more useful than I\'d realized. That aside, this is excellently rendered with a haunting poignancy and fascinating imagery. Thank you for sharing.
November 6th, 2024 18:48
Cheeky Missy said:
Curiosity killed the proverbial cat, but her seeming profession having been my 2nd choice, now I recall that\'s how my one great uncle met my since great aunt. So, guess it\'s more useful than I\'d realized. That aside, this is excellently rendered with a haunting poignancy and fascinating imagery. Thank you for sharing.
November 6th, 2024 18:48
Catching Up With a Debutante
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is KP Irish? Dunno - I hardly see her in person - mainly in papers, magazines, on TV, etc, etc!
November 6th, 2024 13:31
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is KP Irish? Dunno - I hardly see her in person - mainly in papers, magazines, on TV, etc, etc!
November 6th, 2024 13:31
Catching Up With a Debutante
arqios said:
Brought me back to the memories of my first ever crushes. Those were the days!
November 6th, 2024 05:40
arqios said:
Brought me back to the memories of my first ever crushes. Those were the days!
November 6th, 2024 05:40
Catching Up With a Debutante
sorenbarrett said:
Neville how tightly you weave your story with the rhythm of each breath. Such a human tale it speaks to passion, and that whimsical nostalgia that plagues all of our minds at times, It bleeds a feel of humanity and personal history. Lovely
November 6th, 2024 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
Neville how tightly you weave your story with the rhythm of each breath. Such a human tale it speaks to passion, and that whimsical nostalgia that plagues all of our minds at times, It bleeds a feel of humanity and personal history. Lovely
November 6th, 2024 03:58
The Way it All Ends
Goldfinch60 said:
If only the people in our world cared Neville, if only.....
Andy
November 6th, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
If only the people in our world cared Neville, if only.....
Andy
November 6th, 2024 02:19
The Way it All Ends
Bobby O said:
before the brain could assimilate or reason. Steam served to scare really great
Stay with me here, in the movie Quigley down under he said he doesn’t have much use for handguns, but didn’t climax scene. It was the handgun that was his tool to overcome it. When asked he says I didn’t say I couldn’t use a handgun. I just don’t have much use for them.
Is all of a sudden you had rhyme on your pen today for a bit but though you don’t have much use for mostly it did feel the climactic tension in the poem. Thank you for this great piece, my friend.
November 6th, 2024 00:17
Bobby O said:
before the brain could assimilate or reason. Steam served to scare really great
Stay with me here, in the movie Quigley down under he said he doesn’t have much use for handguns, but didn’t climax scene. It was the handgun that was his tool to overcome it. When asked he says I didn’t say I couldn’t use a handgun. I just don’t have much use for them.
Is all of a sudden you had rhyme on your pen today for a bit but though you don’t have much use for mostly it did feel the climactic tension in the poem. Thank you for this great piece, my friend.
November 6th, 2024 00:17
The Way it All Ends
Accidental Poet said:
No it doesn\'t N. Because all the moron dictators came out to play their silly games of \"Who can push the button first.\" Excellent write N. But very sad.
November 5th, 2024 08:56
Accidental Poet said:
No it doesn\'t N. Because all the moron dictators came out to play their silly games of \"Who can push the button first.\" Excellent write N. But very sad.
November 5th, 2024 08:56
The Way it All Ends
Doggerel Dave said:
Knew before I was not very far in, I would have to find out how to spell ‘Armageddon’. And further look up ‘Hiroshima’ and ‘Nagasaki’. And also ‘Apocalypse’ and perhaps ‘cataclysmic’. But there you go, by the time I dragged my tail here, the work had mostly been done for me…
Too easy compared with your original construction, Neville.
November 5th, 2024 06:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Knew before I was not very far in, I would have to find out how to spell ‘Armageddon’. And further look up ‘Hiroshima’ and ‘Nagasaki’. And also ‘Apocalypse’ and perhaps ‘cataclysmic’. But there you go, by the time I dragged my tail here, the work had mostly been done for me…
Too easy compared with your original construction, Neville.
November 5th, 2024 06:34
The Way it All Ends
sorenbarrett said:
At first thought it metaphoric of a passionate meeting between two people but now tend to believe it is all too literal and climatic cataclysmic and final. Could be. Well worded to evoke fear in the bravest heart.
November 5th, 2024 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
At first thought it metaphoric of a passionate meeting between two people but now tend to believe it is all too literal and climatic cataclysmic and final. Could be. Well worded to evoke fear in the bravest heart.
November 5th, 2024 04:56
Maybe It’s Time to Share Father C’s Secrets
Goldfinch60 said:
Thisa is happening to so many people we have looked up to in the past Neville.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Thisa is happening to so many people we have looked up to in the past Neville.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:50
Maybe It’s Time to Share Father C’s Secrets
NafisaSB said:
sad but true commentary - happens everywhere- needs to be trumpeted so that all are aware..
November 5th, 2024 00:52
NafisaSB said:
sad but true commentary - happens everywhere- needs to be trumpeted so that all are aware..
November 5th, 2024 00:52
Maybe It’s Time to Share Father C’s Secrets
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Nevilie
November 4th, 2024 16:09
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Nevilie
November 4th, 2024 16:09
Maybe It’s Time to Share Father C’s Secrets
orchidee said:
Wolves in sheep\'s clothing.
Is KP a sheep in wolf\'s clothing? (heehee)
November 4th, 2024 10:06
orchidee said:
Wolves in sheep\'s clothing.
Is KP a sheep in wolf\'s clothing? (heehee)
November 4th, 2024 10:06
Maybe It’s Time to Share Father C’s Secrets
Doggerel Dave said:
Unbelievable amount of corruption and hypocrisy involved here. But I don’t believe this is limited to the Catholic church or politics or the family or any other element constituting the fundamentals of society.
I enjoyed this as a clear criticism, just one of many I hope, of a mélange of values unhampered by critical thinking.
Thanks Neville.
November 4th, 2024 05:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Unbelievable amount of corruption and hypocrisy involved here. But I don’t believe this is limited to the Catholic church or politics or the family or any other element constituting the fundamentals of society.
I enjoyed this as a clear criticism, just one of many I hope, of a mélange of values unhampered by critical thinking.
Thanks Neville.
November 4th, 2024 05:17
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