Comments received on poems by Neville



Gaea’s Garden   
arqios said:

That She is, living proof of resurrection!

October 10th, 2024 05:34

Fit For Purpose
Doggerel Dave said:

Redolent with atmosphere here, Neville.

October 10th, 2024 05:22

Fit For Purpose
arqios said:

There indeed is music to accompany proper drinking as there is music for a road trip, for dancing, for eating to, and almost every other human activity.

October 10th, 2024 04:52

Fit For Purpose
orchidee said:

Thanks N.

October 10th, 2024 02:56

Fit For Purpose
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

October 10th, 2024 02:50

Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
Goldfinch60 said:

Both very good Neville, the second one especially.

Andy

October 10th, 2024 01:20

Just As Sunsets
Accidental Poet said:

But then if you look within, the Sun never really sets. 😁

October 9th, 2024 20:27

Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
Accidental Poet said:

And without hope, I guess we\'re out of luck. But at least we have these words to get by on. 😉

October 9th, 2024 20:22

Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
Thomas W Case said:

Grand Slam, superb work. I hope the olives were Kalamatas.

October 9th, 2024 12:01

Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
MaxSmith said:

Two for the price of one, we are lucky.

Full of fun and purpose. With a dabble of hope.

My cup of tea

Enjoyed very much Nev

October 9th, 2024 11:11

Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
peet said:

Beautiful. Do write more. Looking forward to seeing

October 9th, 2024 09:55

Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Neville

October 9th, 2024 09:46

Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Great write Neville! Wise words to end for sure! Powerful share that mixes poetic personal experience with timeless wisdom! Well done!

October 9th, 2024 09:17

Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
Doggerel Dave said:

So all it takes is stopped rain (you should be so lucky) anchovies, olives, house white wine, black bread and of course, each other to wax philosophical does it?..🥂

October 9th, 2024 07:25

Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
Cheeky Missy said:

Very lovely, akin to diary notes shared for private indulgence and the delight of viewing, leaving the reader elated at having vicariously enjoyed through the lens of the subtly eloquent poet. Beautifully rendered with a disarming simplicity and subtly winking poignancy, not to mention excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.

October 9th, 2024 07:10

Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
sorenbarrett said:

In our rush to get nowhere we miss the sensual pleasures of life. Taking one\'s time to smell the roses give purpose, meaning, hope and the realization that one does exist in this rat race about us. That\'s my shallow take on this poem that I felt as enjoyable as the olives, white wine, anchovies, and black bread. Thanks for the company

October 9th, 2024 05:15

Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
arqios said:

Back to back - olives and purpose... there is yet hope still!

October 9th, 2024 03:48

Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self
orchidee said:

Good writes N.

October 9th, 2024 02:02

Just As Sunsets
Goldfinch60 said:

But that glow will always return Neville to bring that brightness back.

Andy

October 9th, 2024 01:24

Just As Sunsets
Dan Williams said:

And imagine you must, treasure these times to help offset less happy ones. Good job.

October 9th, 2024 00:06

Just As Sunsets
Cheeky Missy said:

The delicious silence within which this seems to occur, subtly warming to heights unspoken leaves me half breathless and without words. Lovely and so beautifully rendered with a mild and subtle poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.

October 8th, 2024 16:13

Benign Bridges
MaxSmith said:

Good evening Nev.

Your completely right, it\'s such a shame so much time is wasted on such things.

Life and time far too precious to waste.

Glad to see your still writing.



October 8th, 2024 13:49

Just As Sunsets
MendedFences27 said:

As the \"Sunsets\" behind \"displaced fragments of ancient mountains\" It signifies the end of a relationship, though both sense, maybe, a rekindling. This is a
gorgeous way to symbolize the dark coldness of parting ways. There is a sadness with a splinter of hope expressed here. Great symbolism and a scene we\'ve all lived through. - Phil A.

October 8th, 2024 13:26

Just As Sunsets
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

October 8th, 2024 11:27

Just As Sunsets
Tony36 said:

Amazing

October 8th, 2024 09:49

Just As Sunsets
arqios said:

Our imagination brings a spark, united vision fuels passion… sunsets are potent prompts.

October 8th, 2024 07:00

Just As Sunsets
sorenbarrett said:

Very sensual as well as beautiful but melancholic with a sense of sadness yet fulfilment. I like the taste of this fine wine. A great vintage

October 8th, 2024 06:25

Just As Sunsets
peet said:

I saw the sunset..Well penned.

October 8th, 2024 06:08

Benign Bridges
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Neville, bridges need to be built in the world to protect its wonder.

Andy

October 8th, 2024 01:08

Benign Bridges
Dan Williams said:

While I empathize with your sentiment, I fear there will be wars as long as there are humans.

October 7th, 2024 23:56



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