Comments received on poems by Neville



Clean Sheets
Jerry Reynolds said:

A beautiful image, Neville. How I loved those summer days.

September 28th, 2024 09:21

Remembering An Orange Room
FrasMac said:

appreciate the emotional impact, just the way I like a poem to leave me feeling

September 28th, 2024 01:44

Remembering An Orange Room
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving words Neville ending with such sadness. Great write.

Andy

September 28th, 2024 01:16

Remembering An Orange Room
Dan Williams said:

The heartache is wonderfully expressed. Good job.

September 27th, 2024 13:13

Remembering An Orange Room
orchidee said:

Good write N.
KP turned orange - too much suntan stuff?! lol.

September 27th, 2024 11:12

Remembering An Orange Room
Cheeky Missy said:

Correct me iffen I\'m mistaken, but the reference specifically to an orange room seems reminiscent of the \'60\'s or \'70\'s, rendering this delightful tribute to former days all the more winsome. Frankly, having considered it further I\'m reminded of my long since departed adopted grandmother\'s house-- the walls were a rather garrish purple and green. That aside, this is beautifully rendered with a gently haunting poignancy and excellent details. Thank you so very much for sharing.

September 27th, 2024 08:36

Remembering An Orange Room
Accidental Poet said:

Ahh, but at least you have the memories. 🌹

September 27th, 2024 08:35

Remembering An Orange Room
Jerry Reynolds said:

A beautiful love story, Neville. The tragic twist did not take away its sweetness. Well, done.

September 27th, 2024 07:15

Thinking Back on Polly
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Neville.

Andy

September 27th, 2024 01:47

Thinking Back on Polly
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 26th, 2024 12:32

Thinking Back on Polly
orchidee said:

Good write N.

September 26th, 2024 09:50

Thinking Back on Polly
Jerry Reynolds said:

Sorry for your loss, Neville.

September 26th, 2024 08:27

Thinking Back on Polly
sorenbarrett said:

The things that we don\'t know until too late and how they make changes in things that could have been or things that become. Sad story my friend a bit haunting.

September 26th, 2024 07:54

Thinking Back on Polly
Cassie58 said:

Remembering Polly, and also introducing her tragically short life to your readers. It is hard to comprehend sometimes just how cruel life can be. You lost a lovely young friend before she had time to fully bloom. This morning, another young boy 15 years old was knifed to death. More devastated family and friends. Dear Neville, a most poignant write. On a school bus. ……..A rose from me 🌹

September 26th, 2024 07:22

A Different Kettle of Fish
Tom Dylan said:

Completely agree, Neville. Things have moved on so quickly, but not for the better. A fine write.

September 26th, 2024 06:14

Thinking Back on Polly
Doggerel Dave said:

Yeh - can\'t do it when it is early and too raw.

September 26th, 2024 06:07

Thinking Back on Polly
Doggerel Dave said:

This a case study, Neville? When ‘sliding doors’ becomes a matter of life or death, then it is more than even a tragedy.

September 26th, 2024 05:37

A Different Kettle of Fish
sorenbarrett said:

I wonder it our ancesters spoke of the times before fire? I often look back on (those days) and just feel happy that I was able to live them. I got the feeling Neville and have to agree

September 25th, 2024 20:40

A Different Kettle of Fish
Thomas W Case said:

So very true, my friend.

September 25th, 2024 14:12

A Different Kettle of Fish
orchidee said:

Yes, I of course, was on \'The Rocket\' steam train when it first reached the terrifying speed of 29mph, I think it was.
I give KP a literal kettle of fish for her dinner! lol.

September 25th, 2024 11:01

A Different Kettle of Fish
Doggerel Dave said:


“Those were the days, my friend, We thought …… “
It’s just change, Neville..gotta have change – even if I personally don’t bloody like much of it…



September 25th, 2024 09:21

A Different Kettle of Fish
Jerry Reynolds said:

Oh, the tune we played then. Dear Neville. What a kettle of fish it was. You could make love and not die. Watch TV and not cry.

September 25th, 2024 07:56

A Neighbour Loved
Tom Dylan said:

Just beautiful, Neville. A fine write.

September 25th, 2024 07:49

A Neighbour Loved
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Neville, those love of yesterday are never forgotten.

Andy

September 25th, 2024 01:42

A Neighbour Loved
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 24th, 2024 14:39

A Neighbour Loved
Thomas W Case said:

So beautiful. Well done.

September 24th, 2024 14:07

A Neighbour Loved
Doggerel Dave said:

Maps a long relationship, its constancy so very well, Neville. I felt that one.

September 24th, 2024 08:41

A Neighbour Loved
Jerry Reynolds said:

Neville, Neville, With talk like that you will not get mis-laid.

September 24th, 2024 07:09

Lost Back in Africa .. and On Selling the VW
Tom Dylan said:

A couple of belters, Neville. And 2 for 1 poetry, love it. :-)

September 24th, 2024 05:25

A Neighbour Loved
sorenbarrett said:

Relationships over the years and how some things never change. Although the flesh rots the emotions remain fresh, a child\'s heart in an old body. Absolutely lovely

September 24th, 2024 05:09



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