Comments received on poems by Neville
Light Bites
Doggerel Dave said:
So this spider, in conformity with modern taste, has dispensed with the parlour and all that palaver and went straight.....even avoided the chase...?
July 24th, 2024 08:49
Doggerel Dave said:
So this spider, in conformity with modern taste, has dispensed with the parlour and all that palaver and went straight.....even avoided the chase...?
July 24th, 2024 08:49
Light Bites
sorenbarrett said:
Oh what a tangled web we weave....
Reminded me of my grandfather that used to sing to the kids \"Baby bye there\'s a fly let us watch him you and I.....\" Oh yes I know it has much deeper meaning as well.
July 24th, 2024 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Oh what a tangled web we weave....
Reminded me of my grandfather that used to sing to the kids \"Baby bye there\'s a fly let us watch him you and I.....\" Oh yes I know it has much deeper meaning as well.
July 24th, 2024 06:30
False Promises and Little White Lies
Goldfinch60 said:
So true in many ways Neville.
Andy
July 24th, 2024 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
So true in many ways Neville.
Andy
July 24th, 2024 01:49
False Promises and Little White Lies
Dan Williams said:
People all too often make promises they are unable to keep, unrealistic or just insincere. All to casually used. Good work.
July 24th, 2024 00:41
Dan Williams said:
People all too often make promises they are unable to keep, unrealistic or just insincere. All to casually used. Good work.
July 24th, 2024 00:41
False Promises and Little White Lies
Bella Shepard said:
Promises are made these days to achieve a desired end. And when that end is attained, somehow the promise never existed, it is an alternate reality we live in. Will we ever be able to trust the word of another again? Quite a chilling write my friend, but a much needed one.
July 23rd, 2024 13:36
Bella Shepard said:
Promises are made these days to achieve a desired end. And when that end is attained, somehow the promise never existed, it is an alternate reality we live in. Will we ever be able to trust the word of another again? Quite a chilling write my friend, but a much needed one.
July 23rd, 2024 13:36
False Promises and Little White Lies
MendedFences27 said:
I suppose one could follow the trail of white tissues and get to know someone, but only their sad side. I like the subtlety of this poem. many meanings hidden i the tissue box. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2024 12:04
MendedFences27 said:
I suppose one could follow the trail of white tissues and get to know someone, but only their sad side. I like the subtlety of this poem. many meanings hidden i the tissue box. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2024 12:04
False Promises and Little White Lies
Doggerel Dave said:
Bitter, or merely observation, Neville?
July 23rd, 2024 09:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Bitter, or merely observation, Neville?
July 23rd, 2024 09:28
False Promises and Little White Lies
sorenbarrett said:
A great write Neville. I knew a man once who on his word alone with no written contract lost over a million dollars sending him into bankruptcy. A man of honor whose word was more valuable to him than his wealth. I see little of these days. it may be more of a black tissue of dark lies. Nicely done
July 23rd, 2024 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
A great write Neville. I knew a man once who on his word alone with no written contract lost over a million dollars sending him into bankruptcy. A man of honor whose word was more valuable to him than his wealth. I see little of these days. it may be more of a black tissue of dark lies. Nicely done
July 23rd, 2024 05:55
False Promises and Little White Lies
orchidee said:
I never knew I made false promises and told little white lies! lol.
July 23rd, 2024 03:16
orchidee said:
I never knew I made false promises and told little white lies! lol.
July 23rd, 2024 03:16
False Promises and Little White Lies
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, mate. Works on a lot of levels, relationships, politics... very good, Neville.
July 23rd, 2024 02:17
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, mate. Works on a lot of levels, relationships, politics... very good, Neville.
July 23rd, 2024 02:17
Living Like Ghosts
MendedFences27 said:
We all have secrets that we bury very deep inside. Your ghosts can extract those and use them. Are they therapists?
A very intriguing poem. I was left with questions without answers. _ Phil A.
July 22nd, 2024 17:22
MendedFences27 said:
We all have secrets that we bury very deep inside. Your ghosts can extract those and use them. Are they therapists?
A very intriguing poem. I was left with questions without answers. _ Phil A.
July 22nd, 2024 17:22
Living Like Ghosts
Bella Shepard said:
For some reason your words make me think of those living with mental illness, hiding in plain sight, but not really part of the world, unsuspecting lonely souls. At least that is my take. I love your phrasing, and I love a poem of contemplation. Kudos!!
July 22nd, 2024 13:49
Bella Shepard said:
For some reason your words make me think of those living with mental illness, hiding in plain sight, but not really part of the world, unsuspecting lonely souls. At least that is my take. I love your phrasing, and I love a poem of contemplation. Kudos!!
July 22nd, 2024 13:49
Living Like Ghosts
Doggerel Dave said:
..... without any question re the source of those secrets (opinions - \'truths\')...... Go for it Neville.
July 22nd, 2024 06:53
Doggerel Dave said:
..... without any question re the source of those secrets (opinions - \'truths\')...... Go for it Neville.
July 22nd, 2024 06:53
Living Like Ghosts
sorenbarrett said:
Ah this metaphor could be applied to many different things. How many poets steal lines from others? And even if not consciously then from some vague distant memory verses appear out of thin air that we think are ours. Loved the short lines that gave timing to the poem. Very nicely done Neville
July 22nd, 2024 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
Ah this metaphor could be applied to many different things. How many poets steal lines from others? And even if not consciously then from some vague distant memory verses appear out of thin air that we think are ours. Loved the short lines that gave timing to the poem. Very nicely done Neville
July 22nd, 2024 05:24
Living Like Ghosts
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
What secrets do KP and I keep from each other?! lol.
I don\'t hide any from her. I say, e.g. \'You\'re looking uglier each day, dear!\' lol.
July 22nd, 2024 04:52
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
What secrets do KP and I keep from each other?! lol.
I don\'t hide any from her. I say, e.g. \'You\'re looking uglier each day, dear!\' lol.
July 22nd, 2024 04:52
Dear Miss. Jennifer Jones
Christina8 said:
Whoa, private \"lessons\" from a hot teacher..Can\'t imagine the exhilaration you must have felt. Nice poem you have here!
July 21st, 2024 08:49
Christina8 said:
Whoa, private \"lessons\" from a hot teacher..Can\'t imagine the exhilaration you must have felt. Nice poem you have here!
July 21st, 2024 08:49
Dear Miss. Jennifer Jones
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and memories Neville.
Andy
July 20th, 2024 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and memories Neville.
Andy
July 20th, 2024 01:06
Dear Miss. Jennifer Jones
Cassie58 said:
Iāām sure those private lessons put you on a pathway of life long learning and discovery:)
So what was it Miss Jones taught you? Of course, it must have been poetry š
I bet you had a smile on your face penning this memory:)
July 19th, 2024 16:40
Cassie58 said:
Iāām sure those private lessons put you on a pathway of life long learning and discovery:)
So what was it Miss Jones taught you? Of course, it must have been poetry š
I bet you had a smile on your face penning this memory:)
July 19th, 2024 16:40
Dear Miss. Jennifer Jones
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m sure those private lessons stood you in good stead for years to come, or for years that were to come, or more properly for the future. The naughty side of you just won\'t be supressed, fortunately. As always a tantalizing write!
July 19th, 2024 14:35
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m sure those private lessons stood you in good stead for years to come, or for years that were to come, or more properly for the future. The naughty side of you just won\'t be supressed, fortunately. As always a tantalizing write!
July 19th, 2024 14:35
Dear Miss. Jennifer Jones
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville
Every young man needs one.
July 19th, 2024 13:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville
Every young man needs one.
July 19th, 2024 13:27
Dear Miss. Jennifer Jones
Thomas W Case said:
I love private lessons. Excellent work, my friend.
July 19th, 2024 10:47
Thomas W Case said:
I love private lessons. Excellent work, my friend.
July 19th, 2024 10:47
Dear Miss. Jennifer Jones
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the flow and format of this poem Neville. A great write that came to a satisfying end.
July 19th, 2024 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the flow and format of this poem Neville. A great write that came to a satisfying end.
July 19th, 2024 05:22
Dear Miss. Jennifer Jones
orchidee said:
Details of the private lessons, please. Noooo, says Fido to me - You\'ll only swoon! lol.
July 19th, 2024 01:33
orchidee said:
Details of the private lessons, please. Noooo, says Fido to me - You\'ll only swoon! lol.
July 19th, 2024 01:33
Three Poppies
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great work, my friend.
July 19th, 2024 00:05
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great work, my friend.
July 19th, 2024 00:05
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