Comments received on poems by Neville
Bemused to Death
Neilton said:
Excellent work here Neville ! Truly enjoyed your poem !!!
October 24th, 2024 07:46
Neilton said:
Excellent work here Neville ! Truly enjoyed your poem !!!
October 24th, 2024 07:46
Bemused to Death
sorenbarrett said:
Neville loved the sly useof wording here in the winter of a relationship the freeze paired with burn and the reference to hell and the burn of either cold or heat is a woven fabric well knit. Yes relationships are seasons and a thaw could be expected unless we are going through climate change and into another ice age. Hope for a thaw and keep writing.
October 24th, 2024 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
Neville loved the sly useof wording here in the winter of a relationship the freeze paired with burn and the reference to hell and the burn of either cold or heat is a woven fabric well knit. Yes relationships are seasons and a thaw could be expected unless we are going through climate change and into another ice age. Hope for a thaw and keep writing.
October 24th, 2024 05:50
Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Love the sentiment, and the repetition just nailed it. Love it, mate.
October 24th, 2024 04:12
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Love the sentiment, and the repetition just nailed it. Love it, mate.
October 24th, 2024 04:12
Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do
Cheeky Missy said:
Darn, it\'s just after midnight here in Lincoln\'s Land and all my fatigued brain conjures in reply is the lilting \"these are a few of my favorite things--\"! This is too perfect and charmingly rendered with a haunting poignancy which swears many relate. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 24th, 2024 00:21
Cheeky Missy said:
Darn, it\'s just after midnight here in Lincoln\'s Land and all my fatigued brain conjures in reply is the lilting \"these are a few of my favorite things--\"! This is too perfect and charmingly rendered with a haunting poignancy which swears many relate. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 24th, 2024 00:21
Some Things Change Too Much
NafisaSB said:
aww, that\'s so sad- unrequited love is hard to digest
October 23rd, 2024 23:51
NafisaSB said:
aww, that\'s so sad- unrequited love is hard to digest
October 23rd, 2024 23:51
Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do
NafisaSB said:
keep trying - one day the light at the end of the tunnel will be so bright as to be blinding - and you will also find the strength to forgive, forget, and move on...
been there, done that....
October 23rd, 2024 23:50
NafisaSB said:
keep trying - one day the light at the end of the tunnel will be so bright as to be blinding - and you will also find the strength to forgive, forget, and move on...
been there, done that....
October 23rd, 2024 23:50
Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do
Doggerel Dave said:
And two tunnels a metaphor for? Sorry Neville, much of what I find here (these pages) goes right over my head. But apparently lotsa poets here understand one another…so…
October 23rd, 2024 22:06
Doggerel Dave said:
And two tunnels a metaphor for? Sorry Neville, much of what I find here (these pages) goes right over my head. But apparently lotsa poets here understand one another…so…
October 23rd, 2024 22:06
Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do
Thomas W Case said:
I sure relate to this one. Great work.
October 23rd, 2024 14:39
Thomas W Case said:
I sure relate to this one. Great work.
October 23rd, 2024 14:39
Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s like an Isosceles triangle, it won\'t work unless all sides are equal. Clear the to-do list with an I-don\'t reply. The light can\'t be seen from the perspective employed, turn around and get out of that tunnel. Short quirky answers to the dilemma. A most intriguing poem. It appeared to me to be looking for an impossible answer. It always seems the more we do the more do\'s are born. The light at the end of the tunnel is a bus coming straight at you.
Well so much for tunnels, for today. Enjoyed your poem, made me think. \"Is the world just a series of tunnels?\" - Phil A.
October 23rd, 2024 13:26
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s like an Isosceles triangle, it won\'t work unless all sides are equal. Clear the to-do list with an I-don\'t reply. The light can\'t be seen from the perspective employed, turn around and get out of that tunnel. Short quirky answers to the dilemma. A most intriguing poem. It appeared to me to be looking for an impossible answer. It always seems the more we do the more do\'s are born. The light at the end of the tunnel is a bus coming straight at you.
Well so much for tunnels, for today. Enjoyed your poem, made me think. \"Is the world just a series of tunnels?\" - Phil A.
October 23rd, 2024 13:26
Some Things Change Too Much
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing write, Neville. This reads so many different ways. Nicely done, mate.
October 23rd, 2024 09:41
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing write, Neville. This reads so many different ways. Nicely done, mate.
October 23rd, 2024 09:41
Short Changed on A Long Greek Island
Kerry said:
Poor neville with a small n. At least you got some olives! Love how you end it...with the elbow!
October 23rd, 2024 06:45
Kerry said:
Poor neville with a small n. At least you got some olives! Love how you end it...with the elbow!
October 23rd, 2024 06:45
Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do
arqios said:
That is a bind many get caught in and try as hard as I might could not believe that therapy is able to fix. But that’s just me.
October 23rd, 2024 05:38
arqios said:
That is a bind many get caught in and try as hard as I might could not believe that therapy is able to fix. But that’s just me.
October 23rd, 2024 05:38
Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do
sorenbarrett said:
You are more persistent than I, I surrendered years ago and find that going with the flow is more in line with the Tao. I love the first two lines. When I can\'t see the light I learn to enjoy the darkness. I think the hardest thing of all is to learn to forgive oneself. A poem with many hidden gems concealed in the lines
October 23rd, 2024 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
You are more persistent than I, I surrendered years ago and find that going with the flow is more in line with the Tao. I love the first two lines. When I can\'t see the light I learn to enjoy the darkness. I think the hardest thing of all is to learn to forgive oneself. A poem with many hidden gems concealed in the lines
October 23rd, 2024 05:01
Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do
Accidental Poet said:
All one can do is try N. 👍
October 23rd, 2024 04:59
Accidental Poet said:
All one can do is try N. 👍
October 23rd, 2024 04:59
Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do
Neilton said:
Ahh I couldn\'t relate more to a poem ! Now with school the psychological pressure is killing me ! Amazing poem
October 23rd, 2024 03:40
Neilton said:
Ahh I couldn\'t relate more to a poem ! Now with school the psychological pressure is killing me ! Amazing poem
October 23rd, 2024 03:40
Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do
Goldfinch60 said:
So sad Neville we must be able to move on as I am sure that you will.
Andy
October 23rd, 2024 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
So sad Neville we must be able to move on as I am sure that you will.
Andy
October 23rd, 2024 01:36
Some Things Change Too Much
Goldfinch60 said:
This can be so true Neville looking back through albums show what we did with others and very few of ourselves.
Andy
October 23rd, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
This can be so true Neville looking back through albums show what we did with others and very few of ourselves.
Andy
October 23rd, 2024 01:21
Some Things Change Too Much
Dan Williams said:
Misplaced priorities and a pretty cold heart. I have been there too. Nice work.
October 22nd, 2024 23:11
Dan Williams said:
Misplaced priorities and a pretty cold heart. I have been there too. Nice work.
October 22nd, 2024 23:11
Some Things Change Too Much
MendedFences27 said:
\"Full of complete strangers.\" Sometimes, the passage of time leaves one unrecognizable. The love exists in the keeping of the \"albums,\" cherished memories, no doubt. This poem points to the \"changing\" of lovers over time and how it changes their relationship. I like to think it grows deeper and more meaningful. A scene from the lives of older lovers. Very poignant. - Phil A.
October 22nd, 2024 13:13
MendedFences27 said:
\"Full of complete strangers.\" Sometimes, the passage of time leaves one unrecognizable. The love exists in the keeping of the \"albums,\" cherished memories, no doubt. This poem points to the \"changing\" of lovers over time and how it changes their relationship. I like to think it grows deeper and more meaningful. A scene from the lives of older lovers. Very poignant. - Phil A.
October 22nd, 2024 13:13
Some Things Change Too Much
Thad Wilk said:
Awww, a poignant 😢
and evocative poem!
Short and succinct with
deep feelings and
thoughts eloquently
expressed.
My pleasure to read!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 22nd, 2024 11:49
Thad Wilk said:
Awww, a poignant 😢
and evocative poem!
Short and succinct with
deep feelings and
thoughts eloquently
expressed.
My pleasure to read!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 22nd, 2024 11:49
Some Things Change Too Much
orchidee said:
KP\'s 5 million albums only have one person in them - her! lol.
October 22nd, 2024 09:52
orchidee said:
KP\'s 5 million albums only have one person in them - her! lol.
October 22nd, 2024 09:52
Some Things Change Too Much
sorenbarrett said:
Ahh the meaning here taken in so many ways. The mind wanders and ponders, is it a desire to to forget the past? Is it contentment with the present? What does it mean when one keeps no photos? The comparison of keeping them of others and not of you creates phantoms that shadow the present. There is a metaphor here as well photos are memories and those too if discarded mean dealing only with the present. A haunting poem of dreary existence frozen and locked in the now. We are what we have become with no way to return to what we were.
October 22nd, 2024 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
Ahh the meaning here taken in so many ways. The mind wanders and ponders, is it a desire to to forget the past? Is it contentment with the present? What does it mean when one keeps no photos? The comparison of keeping them of others and not of you creates phantoms that shadow the present. There is a metaphor here as well photos are memories and those too if discarded mean dealing only with the present. A haunting poem of dreary existence frozen and locked in the now. We are what we have become with no way to return to what we were.
October 22nd, 2024 05:55
Rough Justice
Goldfinch60 said:
We have all made mistakes but those of us who care can rectify them.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
We have all made mistakes but those of us who care can rectify them.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:36
Short Changed on A Long Greek Island
Goldfinch60 said:
I love olives Neville.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
I love olives Neville.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:26
In the Beginning of Our Forever
Dan Williams said:
Ah, the mixed blessing of longevity. A perfect example of the trip being the real goal. Nice.
October 21st, 2024 23:18
Dan Williams said:
Ah, the mixed blessing of longevity. A perfect example of the trip being the real goal. Nice.
October 21st, 2024 23:18
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