Comments received on poems by Neville



Watched
orchidee said:

If any try to voyeur KP they get a nasty shock, and may never recover from it! lol.

December 5th, 2024 08:32

Watched
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Ah, the voyeurs lament! When the tools 🔭 we have don\'t suffice! Enjoyed this one, Neville...as I do your poetry! Well done, friend!

December 5th, 2024 08:21

Watched
Poetic Licence said:

Never have the right tool when we need it, Enjoyed the read

December 5th, 2024 07:43

Watched
arqios said:

Voyeuristic longing amplified! And bettering one’s equipment indicates that even the most dedicated observers need the right tools to truly appreciate the finer details.

December 5th, 2024 06:54

Close Shaves and Final Cuts
Cheeky Missy said:

Not planning none too covertly to kick the proverbial bucket any time prematurely in the near future, are we, Sir?! Madam Tussaud\'s could just as well suffice, couldn\'t she now, for thee? It\'s just that I\'m none too keen on dispensing with you any time soon, I guess. Excellently rendered with grand imagery in charming good humor with unusually haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

December 5th, 2024 02:12

Close Shaves and Final Cuts
Goldfinch60 said:

You are not going to have your last shave yet Neville, life is too precious.

Andy

December 5th, 2024 02:03

Close Shaves and Final Cuts
Jerry Reynolds said:

My sentements exactly, Neville.

December 4th, 2024 16:08

Shanty
Cassie58 said:

Hooray and up she rises, love a good sea shanty. You got one here Neville. A saucy sea shanty with plenty of salt. You’ve got a thumbs up for this one:)

December 4th, 2024 15:16

Close Shaves and Final Cuts
Cassie58 said:

Oh my oh my how bloomin dark can you get 🙂. I knew about mirrors but not about razors. Only you dear Neville can come up with a poem like this 😀

December 4th, 2024 14:57

Close Shaves and Final Cuts
Tristan Robert Lange said:

As a guy who does a whole lot of shaving, completely bald on my head am I (because I am going to be bald on my terms 🤣 and bald is beautiful 🤣)...I have been to have my head shaved by someone else with a straight blade, which is what got me eventually shaving my own head. But when one does knick the head...oh...does the blood run! LOL! Anyway, that is neither here nor there, but I thoroughly enjoyed this poem as I do a good shave Well done, friend! 👏

December 4th, 2024 11:22

Close Shaves and Final Cuts
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Nevilie

December 4th, 2024 10:35

Close Shaves and Final Cuts
Doggerel Dave said:

Regarding the above: Involved in a tour of a morgue once. In passing the mortuary fridge room, noted on door some wag had marked:
“Rooms available: Cool in summer, Quiet Neighbors”




December 4th, 2024 06:29

Close Shaves and Final Cuts
sorenbarrett said:

Neville. Now this is something that I hadn’t thought about. Since you have brought it up though, I want a straight razor shave and that it’s the most satisfying. I like the ending of this point maybe if I pretend to be dead I can get a free shave

December 4th, 2024 05:21

Close Shaves and Final Cuts
Poetic Licence said:

Enjoyable read, thank you

December 4th, 2024 05:14

Close Shaves and Final Cuts
arqios said:

They used to put a mirror close to the nose just to check but a razor check would be good too!

December 4th, 2024 05:11

Close Shaves and Final Cuts
orchidee said:

KP knew I wanted to end it all with a razor, but she has bought me a battery-operated one without batteries. Doh! She insists I must stay to support her with money for botox. lol.

December 4th, 2024 03:07

Shanty
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun words Neville, Mary and I sing in a Sea Shanty Group.

Andy

December 4th, 2024 01:55

Shanty
Doggerel Dave said:

Heave ho me hearties…. They heaved hard enough to pull your format out of shape…
Love their regular rhythms and can even sing, or rather roar along…
Spirit well captured, Neville. More whisky at the bar....👍


December 3rd, 2024 17:04

Shanty
orchidee said:

Seems some are having fun, but I\'m just swooning! lol.

December 3rd, 2024 10:00

Shanty
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Argh! This spins a great yarn of the high seas, matey! Except, in reality, it’s not really a yarn is it? I have had myself a Shanty before, though I no longer drink. Salty indeed! Well done, friend! 🌹👏

December 3rd, 2024 08:59

Shanty
Poetic Licence said:

A tongue in cheek entertaining read, Thank you Neville

December 3rd, 2024 05:54

Shanty
arqios said:

Oh, captures the rough-and-tumble life of sailors, bold and unapologetic language that reflects the sailors\' free-spirited and often reckless nature - it\'s a pirate\'s life for me!.

December 3rd, 2024 05:41

Shanty
sorenbarrett said:

Salty indeed. A poem of ship set sale and a sailors tail. As salty and sensual sexual if you would. I could see the Port towns sailors and felt there language in this poem. Wordplay is wonderful, but not as good as foreplay.

December 3rd, 2024 04:55

A Hand Full of Ashes
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Neville, those ashes are so meaningful.

Andy

December 3rd, 2024 02:55

Such a Waste of Fine Words
NafisaSB said:

wait, there may still be time - if the recipient does not appreciate such unrequited love, we, at least, are deeply touched by the glorious sentiments expressed. keep it up

December 3rd, 2024 00:43

Signs of Things to Come
Doggerel Dave said:

Thought I\'d stay clear...didn\'t want to get confused.....

December 2nd, 2024 16:35

A Hand Full of Ashes
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Neville. Haunting in a way.

December 2nd, 2024 14:58

A Hand Full of Ashes
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Nevilie

December 2nd, 2024 10:41

A Hand Full of Ashes
orchidee said:

Ahh, a menu suggestion in your title of what to give KP for dinner! lol.

December 2nd, 2024 09:07

A Hand Full of Ashes
Doggerel Dave said:

Well then, where to from there?

December 2nd, 2024 07:49



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