Comments received on poems by Neville
A Few Things Wrong With the World Today
orchidee said:
It\'s days - and years - as the human race has always been, humans capable of evil and good. I don\'t think there are \'the bad old days\' nor \'the good old days\'. Fido told me that - he said \'Have a day off from slagging off KP!\'
November 17th, 2024 03:10
orchidee said:
It\'s days - and years - as the human race has always been, humans capable of evil and good. I don\'t think there are \'the bad old days\' nor \'the good old days\'. Fido told me that - he said \'Have a day off from slagging off KP!\'
November 17th, 2024 03:10
Selene of All Skies
Goldfinch60 said:
May your angel always be with you Neville.
Andy
November 17th, 2024 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
May your angel always be with you Neville.
Andy
November 17th, 2024 02:27
The Look
Cassie58 said:
This scenario played out before my eyes and in slow motion. Timing can be so cruel can’t it, particularly when the clock is ticking. A smile can be everything, a certain look, now that is something else altogether. There’s a time and a place for everything. This poem made me feel sad. I hope I’ve read you right my friend.
November 16th, 2024 09:19
Cassie58 said:
This scenario played out before my eyes and in slow motion. Timing can be so cruel can’t it, particularly when the clock is ticking. A smile can be everything, a certain look, now that is something else altogether. There’s a time and a place for everything. This poem made me feel sad. I hope I’ve read you right my friend.
November 16th, 2024 09:19
Essence
Neilton said:
Such a romantic poem ! It made me feel nostalgic but so happy at the same time! Beautiful work once again Neville
November 16th, 2024 09:02
Neilton said:
Such a romantic poem ! It made me feel nostalgic but so happy at the same time! Beautiful work once again Neville
November 16th, 2024 09:02
The Look
Neilton said:
Even though I\'m still very young I think know that look very well ! You expressed every emotion perfectly! Beautiful work !!
November 16th, 2024 08:55
Neilton said:
Even though I\'m still very young I think know that look very well ! You expressed every emotion perfectly! Beautiful work !!
November 16th, 2024 08:55
Selene of All Skies
sorenbarrett said:
Isis always was my favorite goddess. Just like a woman on a 28 day cycle and always changing. Lovely Neville
November 16th, 2024 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
Isis always was my favorite goddess. Just like a woman on a 28 day cycle and always changing. Lovely Neville
November 16th, 2024 08:50
Selene of All Skies
orchidee said:
KP tries to fool me - says her middle name is Selene! lol.
November 16th, 2024 07:53
orchidee said:
KP tries to fool me - says her middle name is Selene! lol.
November 16th, 2024 07:53
Selene of All Skies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah…the moon! 🌕 Forever a muse. A wonderful write my friend! 👏🌹🖤❤️🖤
November 16th, 2024 07:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah…the moon! 🌕 Forever a muse. A wonderful write my friend! 👏🌹🖤❤️🖤
November 16th, 2024 07:28
Selene of All Skies
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m mooning away for more of her, and awaiting her return - she sounds quite lovely.
November 16th, 2024 05:13
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m mooning away for more of her, and awaiting her return - she sounds quite lovely.
November 16th, 2024 05:13
The Look
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write, my friend! I read it, liked it, faved it, then had an appointment. Now, I am commenting! I know that \"look\" and you\'ve nailed it. Thanks for sharing! 👏🌹
November 15th, 2024 16:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write, my friend! I read it, liked it, faved it, then had an appointment. Now, I am commenting! I know that \"look\" and you\'ve nailed it. Thanks for sharing! 👏🌹
November 15th, 2024 16:14
Essence
Tom Dylan said:
Brilliant, Neville. A great write. Some fantastic lines here.
November 15th, 2024 09:08
Tom Dylan said:
Brilliant, Neville. A great write. Some fantastic lines here.
November 15th, 2024 09:08
The Look
arqios said:
Quasi flirtations appear to humanise us in a sterile and anonymous existence.
November 15th, 2024 08:00
arqios said:
Quasi flirtations appear to humanise us in a sterile and anonymous existence.
November 15th, 2024 08:00
The Look
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, flirtation is too tantalizing in myriad instances, the coy half turn but natural, yet how you render it so exquisitely with a delicious delicacy which haunts the deeply poignant moment. Thank you for sharing.
November 15th, 2024 06:03
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, flirtation is too tantalizing in myriad instances, the coy half turn but natural, yet how you render it so exquisitely with a delicious delicacy which haunts the deeply poignant moment. Thank you for sharing.
November 15th, 2024 06:03
The Look
sorenbarrett said:
A new watch or clock that may be more accurate than those now available on the market. Sad and in that all too human.
November 15th, 2024 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
A new watch or clock that may be more accurate than those now available on the market. Sad and in that all too human.
November 15th, 2024 05:49
The Look
Doggerel Dave said:
A smile - everything, access, a chance...or nothing. Little doubt which this was. Insight here to something hard to express, even if I wanted or needed to.
Thanks, Neville.
November 15th, 2024 05:25
Doggerel Dave said:
A smile - everything, access, a chance...or nothing. Little doubt which this was. Insight here to something hard to express, even if I wanted or needed to.
Thanks, Neville.
November 15th, 2024 05:25
The Look
Goldfinch60 said:
It happens so often Neville, that look can bring many memories from many people.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
It happens so often Neville, that look can bring many memories from many people.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:57
Essence
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville, she will always be with you in your mind.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville, she will always be with you in your mind.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:45
The Look
Bobby O said:
The elicit that is scant hope can disproportionately intoxicate such that no matter our prep or resolve it still will win next Time, an emotion oft deemed worst only because dislike of prolonged torment is deemed definitive. I vociferously reject that supposition offering the logic of an argument that requires one to look past lewd content. I just chickened out so I’m leaving it there!
November 15th, 2024 02:44
Bobby O said:
The elicit that is scant hope can disproportionately intoxicate such that no matter our prep or resolve it still will win next Time, an emotion oft deemed worst only because dislike of prolonged torment is deemed definitive. I vociferously reject that supposition offering the logic of an argument that requires one to look past lewd content. I just chickened out so I’m leaving it there!
November 15th, 2024 02:44
Essence
MendedFences27 said:
Something always remains of a lover no longer with us. I suppose that the longer and deeper the relationship the more the depth of remembrance. The detail of this poem, seems to mean a treasured love. You have painted her picture for all of us to enjoy. - Phil A.
November 14th, 2024 17:35
MendedFences27 said:
Something always remains of a lover no longer with us. I suppose that the longer and deeper the relationship the more the depth of remembrance. The detail of this poem, seems to mean a treasured love. You have painted her picture for all of us to enjoy. - Phil A.
November 14th, 2024 17:35
Essence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully descriptive and beautiful written poem! I am now filled with its essence! Thank you for sharing, kind sir! 🙏
November 14th, 2024 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully descriptive and beautiful written poem! I am now filled with its essence! Thank you for sharing, kind sir! 🙏
November 14th, 2024 07:55
Essence
Cassie58 said:
Your poem Neville stimulates the senses as well as being brimful of fine architectural and shore line imagery. I was reminded of a visit to the Ashmoleum museum in Oxford, and a display case which held the mummy of a young woman, far from where she originated. That experience, stirred up many emotions seeing her there. This is a beautiful piece of writing. You should be proud of it.
November 14th, 2024 07:41
Cassie58 said:
Your poem Neville stimulates the senses as well as being brimful of fine architectural and shore line imagery. I was reminded of a visit to the Ashmoleum museum in Oxford, and a display case which held the mummy of a young woman, far from where she originated. That experience, stirred up many emotions seeing her there. This is a beautiful piece of writing. You should be proud of it.
November 14th, 2024 07:41
Essence
Cheeky Missy said:
Well. If only sonnets such as suitors were wont in the day to proffer to their ladies could come off as effectively, they might have stayed in style. This pretty piece romps and frolics with such vigor I couldn\'t help whistling in concluding as seemed required. Beautifully rendered with near exquisite imagery and lively poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 05:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Well. If only sonnets such as suitors were wont in the day to proffer to their ladies could come off as effectively, they might have stayed in style. This pretty piece romps and frolics with such vigor I couldn\'t help whistling in concluding as seemed required. Beautifully rendered with near exquisite imagery and lively poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 05:25
Essence
sorenbarrett said:
Are Neville this poem carries so many senses and leaves a feeling imprinted as if it were a fossil in the brain. They poetic an archaeological find the raises primitive emotions.
November 14th, 2024 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
Are Neville this poem carries so many senses and leaves a feeling imprinted as if it were a fossil in the brain. They poetic an archaeological find the raises primitive emotions.
November 14th, 2024 05:15
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