Comments received on poems by Neville
Always & Forever
Silkseduction said:
Neville,
You are magical with your pen- you have written an exceptional piece here. Wonderful job, my friend.
-L
July 26th, 2019 15:50
Silkseduction said:
Neville,
You are magical with your pen- you have written an exceptional piece here. Wonderful job, my friend.
-L
July 26th, 2019 15:50
Always & Forever
Suresh said:
We are all slaves of our desires and our circumstances.......
...... so whence is freedom
.....in dreams
Well penned my friend
July 26th, 2019 11:16
Suresh said:
We are all slaves of our desires and our circumstances.......
...... so whence is freedom
.....in dreams
Well penned my friend
July 26th, 2019 11:16
Always & Forever
Christina8 said:
This poem is very sweet. Instantly got me thinking of the slow song (the title did) but overall done very well!--C
July 26th, 2019 10:54
Christina8 said:
This poem is very sweet. Instantly got me thinking of the slow song (the title did) but overall done very well!--C
July 26th, 2019 10:54
Always & Forever
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Quite a read!
Interesting question...
“What more
might a slave possibly want
discounting freedom....”
I suppose it depends on the slave and the type of freedom the slave seeks!
~Laura~
July 26th, 2019 10:09
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Quite a read!
Interesting question...
“What more
might a slave possibly want
discounting freedom....”
I suppose it depends on the slave and the type of freedom the slave seeks!
~Laura~
July 26th, 2019 10:09
Always & Forever
dusk arising said:
Oh my, here writes a man who has surrendered his credit card to the lady of a dream he once had before bank managers chased him down the high street of his bankrupt finances and wizened now shares a warning to malekind.
Could have just written DON\'T DO IT!
Tongue firmly in cheek of course. Another of your two edged beauties today.
July 26th, 2019 09:54
dusk arising said:
Oh my, here writes a man who has surrendered his credit card to the lady of a dream he once had before bank managers chased him down the high street of his bankrupt finances and wizened now shares a warning to malekind.
Could have just written DON\'T DO IT!
Tongue firmly in cheek of course. Another of your two edged beauties today.
July 26th, 2019 09:54
Always & Forever
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
I thought it was gonna be a tortuous poem on my singing, with that title! heehee.
July 26th, 2019 06:47
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
I thought it was gonna be a tortuous poem on my singing, with that title! heehee.
July 26th, 2019 06:47
Always & Forever
Fay Slimm. said:
Devotion wrapped in eloquent lines makes this read even more coated in warm allure .................. Fay.
July 26th, 2019 03:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Devotion wrapped in eloquent lines makes this read even more coated in warm allure .................. Fay.
July 26th, 2019 03:35
A Silent Refrain
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Neville, to go forward in love or to refrain is a question that we have all probably asked at some point in our lives - is there an answer?
July 26th, 2019 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Neville, to go forward in love or to refrain is a question that we have all probably asked at some point in our lives - is there an answer?
July 26th, 2019 00:52
A Silent Refrain
Suresh said:
Some things are better left unlearned, but heartache is a pseudonym for romance, and maybe poverty and hard times too.
July 25th, 2019 16:19
Suresh said:
Some things are better left unlearned, but heartache is a pseudonym for romance, and maybe poverty and hard times too.
July 25th, 2019 16:19
A Silent Refrain
MendedFences27 said:
Timing is so critical to a relationship. Too soon or too late can bring disaster. Some fall at first sight, others only after years of being in contact. I\'ve seen successful marriages after many years together and some after only weeks.
Do the words \"feline\" and \"felon\" derive from the same root? What do \"Cats\" know of poverty and hard times? Seems they live in someone\'s lap of luxury. The urge is irresistable, the restraint torturous. There is no answer to this age old quandary. Just go with the flow. Nice poem. Made me think.- Phil A.
July 25th, 2019 14:44
MendedFences27 said:
Timing is so critical to a relationship. Too soon or too late can bring disaster. Some fall at first sight, others only after years of being in contact. I\'ve seen successful marriages after many years together and some after only weeks.
Do the words \"feline\" and \"felon\" derive from the same root? What do \"Cats\" know of poverty and hard times? Seems they live in someone\'s lap of luxury. The urge is irresistable, the restraint torturous. There is no answer to this age old quandary. Just go with the flow. Nice poem. Made me think.- Phil A.
July 25th, 2019 14:44
A Silent Refrain
orchidee said:
Did she sing? Cat-like? Meeoowwooo! A fine write Neville.
July 25th, 2019 11:39
orchidee said:
Did she sing? Cat-like? Meeoowwooo! A fine write Neville.
July 25th, 2019 11:39
A Silent Refrain
Christina8 said:
This is a great read and I thank you for sharing this fine piece with us today!
July 25th, 2019 10:12
Christina8 said:
This is a great read and I thank you for sharing this fine piece with us today!
July 25th, 2019 10:12
A Silent Refrain
kevin browne said:
There\'s nothing like a good purr in poetry and you stroked it out perfectly. Good work.
July 25th, 2019 07:35
kevin browne said:
There\'s nothing like a good purr in poetry and you stroked it out perfectly. Good work.
July 25th, 2019 07:35
A Silent Refrain
sylviasearcher said:
Your words are very feline indeed!
(Yes you are right o hid a compliment in there!)
July 25th, 2019 04:58
sylviasearcher said:
Your words are very feline indeed!
(Yes you are right o hid a compliment in there!)
July 25th, 2019 04:58
A Silent Refrain
dusk arising said:
Methinks you do not need teaching. However a refresher course can be so invigorating.
July 25th, 2019 04:17
dusk arising said:
Methinks you do not need teaching. However a refresher course can be so invigorating.
July 25th, 2019 04:17
A Silent Refrain
Fay Slimm. said:
Who could resist capitulating to these tender invites my friend - -that kitten knows how to set male-hearts astir. A read to remember and full of your unique style earns top marks from me again........... Fay
July 25th, 2019 03:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Who could resist capitulating to these tender invites my friend - -that kitten knows how to set male-hearts astir. A read to remember and full of your unique style earns top marks from me again........... Fay
July 25th, 2019 03:49
When You Were Perfect
MendedFences27 said:
Perfection found, and then lost. Memories remain. Wishes expressed to be equally remembered. Recollection filters all.
Enjoyed this reflection from the past, so well expressed, in your unique style. Last line is a killer, a wow line , to be remembered by all who read it. It just leaves the reader wanting more.
Love, whether here and living or just a memory, still warms the heart. a terrific poem. - Phil A.
July 24th, 2019 18:25
MendedFences27 said:
Perfection found, and then lost. Memories remain. Wishes expressed to be equally remembered. Recollection filters all.
Enjoyed this reflection from the past, so well expressed, in your unique style. Last line is a killer, a wow line , to be remembered by all who read it. It just leaves the reader wanting more.
Love, whether here and living or just a memory, still warms the heart. a terrific poem. - Phil A.
July 24th, 2019 18:25
A Thimbleful of Seeds
MendedFences27 said:
Could not agree more, since I believe Love and Life are everything. Here, you speak it well, with emotion and pride. In particular, I enjoyed the way that you organized your stanzas. Mix in some rhyme, some ideals, and you have a poem of seriousness about Man\'s existence. Short and to the point. Enjoyed all of it. - Phil A.
July 24th, 2019 17:33
MendedFences27 said:
Could not agree more, since I believe Love and Life are everything. Here, you speak it well, with emotion and pride. In particular, I enjoyed the way that you organized your stanzas. Mix in some rhyme, some ideals, and you have a poem of seriousness about Man\'s existence. Short and to the point. Enjoyed all of it. - Phil A.
July 24th, 2019 17:33
A Thimbleful of Seeds
Christina8 said:
Good to see you are so passionate about love and life.....very inspirational words, my friend!!
July 24th, 2019 14:22
Christina8 said:
Good to see you are so passionate about love and life.....very inspirational words, my friend!!
July 24th, 2019 14:22
A Thimbleful of Seeds
Goldfinch60 said:
My faith in My Spirit is unchanging and death has no mysteries as if I were to die for anyone or anything in My Life I know that I will always be with My Spirit.
Good thought provoking write Neville.
July 24th, 2019 04:57
Goldfinch60 said:
My faith in My Spirit is unchanging and death has no mysteries as if I were to die for anyone or anything in My Life I know that I will always be with My Spirit.
Good thought provoking write Neville.
July 24th, 2019 04:57
A Thimbleful of Seeds
Fay Slimm. said:
A list of emotive reasons why some believe strongly that love of life is to die for and with an ending stanza that states without doubt which camp your kind heart lies in......... a read to remember my friend.
July 24th, 2019 02:22
Fay Slimm. said:
A list of emotive reasons why some believe strongly that love of life is to die for and with an ending stanza that states without doubt which camp your kind heart lies in......... a read to remember my friend.
July 24th, 2019 02:22
A Thimbleful of Seeds
orchidee said:
A good write Neville.
Fido was about to bark when he saw \'passion\', but I said - not that sort of passion, Fido! heehee.
July 24th, 2019 02:00
orchidee said:
A good write Neville.
Fido was about to bark when he saw \'passion\', but I said - not that sort of passion, Fido! heehee.
July 24th, 2019 02:00
A Thimbleful of Seeds
dusk arising said:
Passionate words from a man of passions.
July 24th, 2019 01:53
dusk arising said:
Passionate words from a man of passions.
July 24th, 2019 01:53
Crimson Swathe
Goldfinch60 said:
That field of poppies is so powerful in our lives. One hopes that that wasteland reminds all of the troubles of the past and those who gave their lives for us did so so it would not happen again.
\"MAKE LOVE! NOT WAR!\"
July 24th, 2019 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
That field of poppies is so powerful in our lives. One hopes that that wasteland reminds all of the troubles of the past and those who gave their lives for us did so so it would not happen again.
\"MAKE LOVE! NOT WAR!\"
July 24th, 2019 00:41
Wanting to be Wanted
Christina8 said:
I think this is a wonderful rhyming poem yet a sad situation. Nonetheless, beautifully written. Glad you got out of this situation.---Christina
July 23rd, 2019 17:58
Christina8 said:
I think this is a wonderful rhyming poem yet a sad situation. Nonetheless, beautifully written. Glad you got out of this situation.---Christina
July 23rd, 2019 17:58
Marcella
Christina8 said:
Very sensual poem. I love it! Obviously more exciting than a Ferrari.....women always are! :-) Great tribute to Marcella!---Christina
July 23rd, 2019 17:50
Christina8 said:
Very sensual poem. I love it! Obviously more exciting than a Ferrari.....women always are! :-) Great tribute to Marcella!---Christina
July 23rd, 2019 17:50
Crimson Swathe
MendedFences27 said:
Hope the girl or Hope the longing? Matters naught. A field of poppies inspired your desire for both, but then... things happened.
Cheer up it\'s only poetry. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2019 16:42
MendedFences27 said:
Hope the girl or Hope the longing? Matters naught. A field of poppies inspired your desire for both, but then... things happened.
Cheer up it\'s only poetry. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2019 16:42
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