Comments received on poems by Neville



Head Rest
Christina8 said:

This was an exhilarating write! A somewhat erotic read. Enjoyed!

July 23rd, 2019 12:50

Tomorrow Lost
Christina8 said:

Very nice imagery! Yes, lets move on and lets not regret our past. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece!--Christina

July 23rd, 2019 12:44

Crimson Swathe
Christina8 said:

I like this piece quite a bit! It would be romantic to make out in a field of poppies I think because I don\'t relate them to a wasteland.....I think they are beautiful!

July 23rd, 2019 12:41

Crimson Swathe
Suresh said:

Hope lies - hope died......
This poem begging the reader to know the poets mindset
So good tease

July 23rd, 2019 10:06

Crimson Swathe
Fay Slimm. said:

A hint of pathos made me change my mind on the comment I was about to make on these subtle words....... making out in a poppy field could feel good but for that last solemn line.... you did it again and left me wanting just a bit more............... x Fay

July 23rd, 2019 04:19

Crimson Swathe
orchidee said:

A fine write again Neville.
Meanwhile - did hope die long before I sang?! Or was it the expectancy of me singing that caused everyone to \'abandon hope all ye that enter here?!\'\'

July 23rd, 2019 02:50

Crimson Swathe
dusk arising said:

Symbolic poppies always divert my mind to the great loss of warfare.
Poppies though are vibrant life and your words \'make out\' lead me along different thought paths..... tbh im not quite sure where.

July 23rd, 2019 02:27

She Sparkles
sylviasearcher said:

Oh a poem for every glint in your eye eh?!



July 23rd, 2019 01:41

She Sparkles
Christina8 said:

She sounds simply intoxicating!

July 22nd, 2019 20:59

She Sparkles
SerenWise said:

This is wonderful, love the imagery!

July 22nd, 2019 13:44

She Sparkles
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Norwegian wood
I get it Neville ;-)


July 22nd, 2019 12:52

She Sparkles
Michael Edwards said:

Ah the rose and the thorn.

July 22nd, 2019 12:42

She Sparkles
Suresh said:

Black widow spider in the true sense, for it was lust no doubt. You escaped, though bruised, to yet live and love

July 22nd, 2019 09:11

She Sparkles
dusk arising said:

Ah the dagger drawn which is love.

July 22nd, 2019 04:02

She Sparkles
Goldfinch60 said:

The danger that can be in the beauty of life. Good one Neville.

July 22nd, 2019 03:27

She Sparkles
orchidee said:

Good write Neville. You got biscuits there?! heehee.

July 22nd, 2019 02:48

She Sparkles
Fay Slimm. said:

Simple and to the point this summary of pseudo sweetness and sparkle in
the planned moves of a manipulative female and bow to its tawdry truth- - tho\' hopefully you saw it in time and escaped such jaws my friend.......... Fay

July 22nd, 2019 02:25

One Day Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:

Those broken hearts can sometimes be mended.

July 21st, 2019 15:48

One Day Maybe
Suresh said:

Better to hurt now, then to hurt forever.
Well penned, my friend

July 21st, 2019 14:12

One Day Maybe
dusk arising said:

There\'s an untold story and a well intentioned deed revealed here.
Together with the wonder - did she realise it was how it had to be resolved. The regret of hurting a loved one who may never see reason too.
So well compacted into your lines.

July 21st, 2019 10:04

One Day Maybe
orchidee said:

I never knew my singing caused all this trouble and upset! heehee. I\'m a pest though. Me singing goes on. lol.

July 21st, 2019 07:37

One Day Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:

Poetic phrasing to sigh for in this gentle story of time spent as a duo and then ended with kindness - - your talent for tale-telling as always draws this reader for wanting more my friend....... Fay

July 21st, 2019 04:57

One Day Maybe
Michael Edwards said:

Something so appealing about this simple piece - I did enjoy the read .

July 21st, 2019 04:42

No Hint of An End
Suresh said:

The conch shell, swirling within it the mesmerizing sound if the sea, and the smell and taste of salt, when blown has called many a lovers together.
Lovely write indeed.

July 19th, 2019 17:58

No Hint of An End
sylviasearcher said:

I really enjoyed this one Neville! 😌

July 18th, 2019 02:05

No Hint of An End
orchidee said:

Good write Neville.

July 16th, 2019 01:23

No Hint of An End
Goldfinch60 said:

May those words never cease.

July 16th, 2019 01:13

The Whimbrel
Goldfinch60 said:

Brilliant write Neville, I have been bird watching all my life and have Knott yet seen a Whimbrel but have seen the others that you mentioned.

July 16th, 2019 01:06

No Hint of An End
Fay Slimm. said:

A roundelay of tender vibrations follow this read - - wordless but there all the same - the magic of poetry oozes from this simple verse with no hint of an end showing your gift for laying down intriguing words my friend......x Fay - - - - stay safe in your journey to Serbia.

July 16th, 2019 00:54

The Whimbrel
Christina8 said:

A funny and brilliant write Neville! ---Christina

July 15th, 2019 22:26



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