Comments received on poems by Neville
Heathen
SerenWise said:
I love this! very evocative imagery, really nicely written :)
February 21st, 2019 18:09
SerenWise said:
I love this! very evocative imagery, really nicely written :)
February 21st, 2019 18:09
Heathen
Suresh said:
I stare at those relic and wonder. .....
....in the absence of being there, wonder is all I can do!
Love the read
February 21st, 2019 13:05
Suresh said:
I stare at those relic and wonder. .....
....in the absence of being there, wonder is all I can do!
Love the read
February 21st, 2019 13:05
Heathen
Fay Slimm. said:
Inside a museum to the poet is a chance for fancy to impregnate the relics with seeing and tasting flakes of past loves - which your verse has done well - in fact so well that i felt myself there wearing the clay mask - - another thrill of a read Nev.
February 21st, 2019 12:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Inside a museum to the poet is a chance for fancy to impregnate the relics with seeing and tasting flakes of past loves - which your verse has done well - in fact so well that i felt myself there wearing the clay mask - - another thrill of a read Nev.
February 21st, 2019 12:03
Heathen
Neville said:
That may have been becoz you were lagging behind... thanks for throwing yourself into this scribble DA..... N
February 21st, 2019 10:36
Neville said:
That may have been becoz you were lagging behind... thanks for throwing yourself into this scribble DA..... N
February 21st, 2019 10:36
Heathen
dusk arising said:
Cor mistah, you dont half bring out the neanderthal in me. Me and the boys invented the spear you know.
57 varieties of us there was. They called me ketchup.
February 21st, 2019 09:45
dusk arising said:
Cor mistah, you dont half bring out the neanderthal in me. Me and the boys invented the spear you know.
57 varieties of us there was. They called me ketchup.
February 21st, 2019 09:45
Heathen
orchidee said:
Yep, we was roaming about in those caves centuries ago. Well I was. Was you too?!
February 21st, 2019 05:14
orchidee said:
Yep, we was roaming about in those caves centuries ago. Well I was. Was you too?!
February 21st, 2019 05:14
What Do You Drive
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes a good fun write that fits well with the music -da doo.
February 21st, 2019 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes a good fun write that fits well with the music -da doo.
February 21st, 2019 01:41
What Do You Drive
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed the read but haven\'t a clue how Lou Reed\'s (who is Lou Reed - must google him) Walk On The Wild Side goes - might know if I heard it though,.
February 20th, 2019 10:01
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed the read but haven\'t a clue how Lou Reed\'s (who is Lou Reed - must google him) Walk On The Wild Side goes - might know if I heard it though,.
February 20th, 2019 10:01
What Do You Drive
dusk arising said:
I can hear that baritone sax solo..... and the coloured girls say \'do da do - dad doo dad doo\' etc
Feels odd writing \'coloured\' in 2019
The song by Lou Reed was actually about a transvestite friend of his so maybe the \'lady\' in your piece did u a favour being gone. But i don\'t know which way you swing LOL.
February 20th, 2019 07:52
dusk arising said:
I can hear that baritone sax solo..... and the coloured girls say \'do da do - dad doo dad doo\' etc
Feels odd writing \'coloured\' in 2019
The song by Lou Reed was actually about a transvestite friend of his so maybe the \'lady\' in your piece did u a favour being gone. But i don\'t know which way you swing LOL.
February 20th, 2019 07:52
What Do You Drive
Fay Slimm. said:
The shame of being taken in by a two-timing dame eh Nev ? - - Loved this fun poem with its excellent flow and amazing rhyme-schemes - am still singin\' it in my head.
February 20th, 2019 06:40
Fay Slimm. said:
The shame of being taken in by a two-timing dame eh Nev ? - - Loved this fun poem with its excellent flow and amazing rhyme-schemes - am still singin\' it in my head.
February 20th, 2019 06:40
What Do You Drive
sylviasearcher said:
I think it all went wrong at ‘hey babe’ lol.
Need to work on your chat up lines!
Catchy expression of it though.
Played like a comedy sketch in my mind.
Not sure if that was the intention? 😂
Ps by all went wrong I meant the man in your poem not your poem. I liked the poem, it made me laugh. Laughing is good.
February 20th, 2019 04:10
sylviasearcher said:
I think it all went wrong at ‘hey babe’ lol.
Need to work on your chat up lines!
Catchy expression of it though.
Played like a comedy sketch in my mind.
Not sure if that was the intention? 😂
Ps by all went wrong I meant the man in your poem not your poem. I liked the poem, it made me laugh. Laughing is good.
February 20th, 2019 04:10
What Do You Drive
orchidee said:
Where did she go? Was she related to Boadicea? Oh, that was yesterday\'s gal! lol.
February 20th, 2019 03:57
orchidee said:
Where did she go? Was she related to Boadicea? Oh, that was yesterday\'s gal! lol.
February 20th, 2019 03:57
What Do You Drive
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Dooh Da Doo Dad Doo Do
Thanks Neville... I think
Love Lou Reed
Great concept
Andrew
February 20th, 2019 03:56
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Dooh Da Doo Dad Doo Do
Thanks Neville... I think
Love Lou Reed
Great concept
Andrew
February 20th, 2019 03:56
Shield Maiden
SerenWise said:
This is awesome, I love the use of language and metaphor! Good job :)
February 19th, 2019 17:37
SerenWise said:
This is awesome, I love the use of language and metaphor! Good job :)
February 19th, 2019 17:37
Shield Maiden
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Dark and powerful Neville I liked it Great write AGAIN!
February 19th, 2019 17:03
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Dark and powerful Neville I liked it Great write AGAIN!
February 19th, 2019 17:03
Shield Maiden
Michael Edwards said:
A right shudder of a read that stays with you - fine work Neville.
February 19th, 2019 12:11
Michael Edwards said:
A right shudder of a read that stays with you - fine work Neville.
February 19th, 2019 12:11
Shield Maiden
sylviasearcher said:
This piece intrigued me.
I was left a little uncertain about how the author felt about his creation or the image in his head?
It reminded me of baba yaga or such mythical wild woman ideas.
There is a calmness yet a dread.
An emptiness yet battlefield ablaze.
Perhaps an acceptance of fate?
February 19th, 2019 06:09
sylviasearcher said:
This piece intrigued me.
I was left a little uncertain about how the author felt about his creation or the image in his head?
It reminded me of baba yaga or such mythical wild woman ideas.
There is a calmness yet a dread.
An emptiness yet battlefield ablaze.
Perhaps an acceptance of fate?
February 19th, 2019 06:09
Shield Maiden
Fay Slimm. said:
A dark and sad shape indeed is your feral maiden Neville - - loved the cold flow of this shivery piece -
- -a wraith of the tarot-card table so adeptly described makes a haunt of a read.
February 19th, 2019 04:47
Fay Slimm. said:
A dark and sad shape indeed is your feral maiden Neville - - loved the cold flow of this shivery piece -
- -a wraith of the tarot-card table so adeptly described makes a haunt of a read.
February 19th, 2019 04:47
Shield Maiden
orchidee said:
Oohh what\'s she up to there, battling on? She certainly \'gets out more\' - like I should do! Did she \'get her coat\' having \'over-stayed her welcome\' somewhere, then go off on these adventures?!
February 19th, 2019 04:25
orchidee said:
Oohh what\'s she up to there, battling on? She certainly \'gets out more\' - like I should do! Did she \'get her coat\' having \'over-stayed her welcome\' somewhere, then go off on these adventures?!
February 19th, 2019 04:25
Away With Words
Fay Slimm. said:
ha ha - - well one was to think about NAKED - - but the others are too near the bone...........
February 18th, 2019 13:41
Fay Slimm. said:
ha ha - - well one was to think about NAKED - - but the others are too near the bone...........
February 18th, 2019 13:41
Away With Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Hey Neville - what a great idea for reader participation - - - I thought of a few cheeky ones but settled for - --
\"Lets all think about FUN for a change\"
February 18th, 2019 07:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Hey Neville - what a great idea for reader participation - - - I thought of a few cheeky ones but settled for - --
\"Lets all think about FUN for a change\"
February 18th, 2019 07:45
Away With Words
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great right Neville
My word would be compassion or forgivemess or care or concern or humaness or oh I don\'t know now I\'m all stressed thinking about what word it would be thanks Nev!
lol
February 18th, 2019 05:15
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great right Neville
My word would be compassion or forgivemess or care or concern or humaness or oh I don\'t know now I\'m all stressed thinking about what word it would be thanks Nev!
lol
February 18th, 2019 05:15
Away With Words
Michael Edwards said:
Under water basket weaving?
Oh sorry that\'s four words - how about privycleaning ?
Great fun write.
February 18th, 2019 04:13
Michael Edwards said:
Under water basket weaving?
Oh sorry that\'s four words - how about privycleaning ?
Great fun write.
February 18th, 2019 04:13
Away With Words
orchidee said:
Yes, those pesky words - they are cads, bounders, jolly bad shows, eh?!
February 18th, 2019 03:03
orchidee said:
Yes, those pesky words - they are cads, bounders, jolly bad shows, eh?!
February 18th, 2019 03:03
Away With Words
sylviasearcher said:
Aphasia?
Voicelessness?
Emptiness?
Apathy?
Powerlessness?
Oh so many words could fill that void.
It reminded me of a poem I wrote.
February 18th, 2019 02:56
sylviasearcher said:
Aphasia?
Voicelessness?
Emptiness?
Apathy?
Powerlessness?
Oh so many words could fill that void.
It reminded me of a poem I wrote.
February 18th, 2019 02:56
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