Comments received on poems by Neville
Through a Tangle of Shadows
PoeticBiscuit said:
Hmm, so many ways to interpret this one. Well done N, this one is a zinger.
August 16th, 2019 20:05
PoeticBiscuit said:
Hmm, so many ways to interpret this one. Well done N, this one is a zinger.
August 16th, 2019 20:05
Through a Tangle of Shadows
Christina8 said:
So many things come to mind upon reading this. Another brilliant write, neville!
August 16th, 2019 17:14
Christina8 said:
So many things come to mind upon reading this. Another brilliant write, neville!
August 16th, 2019 17:14
Through a Tangle of Shadows
Suresh said:
A tangled web your words have woven
Try as much, understand the mystery of words chosen
Not ashamed to admit, yellow tinge has me confused
As far as the verse itself, has me totally amused
August 16th, 2019 15:38
Suresh said:
A tangled web your words have woven
Try as much, understand the mystery of words chosen
Not ashamed to admit, yellow tinge has me confused
As far as the verse itself, has me totally amused
August 16th, 2019 15:38
Through a Tangle of Shadows
dusk arising said:
So today i learn a new put-down...
\"kiss my bruise punk\"
August 16th, 2019 12:38
dusk arising said:
So today i learn a new put-down...
\"kiss my bruise punk\"
August 16th, 2019 12:38
War a Senryu
dusk arising said:
Both of which are not dollar earners for the power crazed.
Sadly how true are your words when we look at the history of mankind.
August 16th, 2019 12:17
dusk arising said:
Both of which are not dollar earners for the power crazed.
Sadly how true are your words when we look at the history of mankind.
August 16th, 2019 12:17
Through a Tangle of Shadows
FineB said:
Hello Neville
A good write!
Certainly unforgettable.
I hope you were gentle with your lady friend.
Keep writing FineB
August 16th, 2019 12:00
FineB said:
Hello Neville
A good write!
Certainly unforgettable.
I hope you were gentle with your lady friend.
Keep writing FineB
August 16th, 2019 12:00
Through a Tangle of Shadows
Fay Slimm. said:
Shadows veer imagination toward the forbidden at times and these beguiling lines have a touch of hidden erotic that leaves a tangle of what, where and why in my curious mind - - - you conjour excitement with veritable ease mon ami.................
August 16th, 2019 06:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Shadows veer imagination toward the forbidden at times and these beguiling lines have a touch of hidden erotic that leaves a tangle of what, where and why in my curious mind - - - you conjour excitement with veritable ease mon ami.................
August 16th, 2019 06:54
Through a Tangle of Shadows
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Out there Neville...
Out There
August 16th, 2019 06:15
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Out there Neville...
Out There
August 16th, 2019 06:15
Through a Tangle of Shadows
orchidee said:
What\'s going on there?! Oohh. And should I try it?! lol.
August 16th, 2019 01:46
orchidee said:
What\'s going on there?! Oohh. And should I try it?! lol.
August 16th, 2019 01:46
Singular I’s
Suresh said:
In reality it\'s always been only an \"I\", the we and the us was are imposed relationships.
No regrets
August 15th, 2019 23:32
Suresh said:
In reality it\'s always been only an \"I\", the we and the us was are imposed relationships.
No regrets
August 15th, 2019 23:32
War a Senryu
sylviasearcher said:
A more true observation I could not have made myself
August 15th, 2019 02:20
sylviasearcher said:
A more true observation I could not have made myself
August 15th, 2019 02:20
War a Senryu
Poetic Dan said:
Wiser than the enemy will ever be!
Poetry will set us all free
August 15th, 2019 01:57
Poetic Dan said:
Wiser than the enemy will ever be!
Poetry will set us all free
August 15th, 2019 01:57
War a Senryu
Fay Slimm. said:
Enlightening senryu dear Nev and so very true. Hate and war indeed beget outcry from poets which rings with experience we cannot forget.
August 15th, 2019 01:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Enlightening senryu dear Nev and so very true. Hate and war indeed beget outcry from poets which rings with experience we cannot forget.
August 15th, 2019 01:55
War a Senryu
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE ~ Our MANTRA has always been *Make Love not War !* Ever since CAIN killed ABEL ~ mankind has been at WAR ! Since 1945 (74 years ~ a lifetime !) there has not been another World War. However in the last 74 years there has always been a *WAR* somewhere on Earth. Millions have been killed - most of them innocent Civilians !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 15th, 2019 01:53
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE ~ Our MANTRA has always been *Make Love not War !* Ever since CAIN killed ABEL ~ mankind has been at WAR ! Since 1945 (74 years ~ a lifetime !) there has not been another World War. However in the last 74 years there has always been a *WAR* somewhere on Earth. Millions have been killed - most of them innocent Civilians !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 15th, 2019 01:53
War a Senryu
Michael Edwards said:
And so it always will be - great little \'un.
August 15th, 2019 01:37
Michael Edwards said:
And so it always will be - great little \'un.
August 15th, 2019 01:37
War a Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true.
Poem by Spike Milligan:
\"If I die in war,
You will remember me.
If I live in peace,
You won\'t\"
August 15th, 2019 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true.
Poem by Spike Milligan:
\"If I die in war,
You will remember me.
If I live in peace,
You won\'t\"
August 15th, 2019 01:20
Singular I’s
PoeticBiscuit said:
I very much enjoy the formatting of your poems, they’re always so appealing to the eyes.
August 14th, 2019 14:06
PoeticBiscuit said:
I very much enjoy the formatting of your poems, they’re always so appealing to the eyes.
August 14th, 2019 14:06
Talk Me Poetry
Fay Slimm. said:
My eyes fell on this resurrected piece of bold story-telling again and had just as much thrill reading it the second time Nev....... your gift for the atmospheric never fails ........ great read.
August 14th, 2019 10:31
Fay Slimm. said:
My eyes fell on this resurrected piece of bold story-telling again and had just as much thrill reading it the second time Nev....... your gift for the atmospheric never fails ........ great read.
August 14th, 2019 10:31
Singular I’s
Christina8 said:
A bit of a sad write for today but very well penned.
August 14th, 2019 09:57
Christina8 said:
A bit of a sad write for today but very well penned.
August 14th, 2019 09:57
Singular I’s
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
A wonderful, imaginative write.
Keep writing FineB
August 14th, 2019 04:15
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
A wonderful, imaginative write.
Keep writing FineB
August 14th, 2019 04:15
Singular I’s
sylviasearcher said:
You know you just snapped my attention with the formatting.
The lonely page
My favourite line 😊
August 14th, 2019 04:10
sylviasearcher said:
You know you just snapped my attention with the formatting.
The lonely page
My favourite line 😊
August 14th, 2019 04:10
Singular I’s
orchidee said:
Doh! I\'m all in a tizzy.
Am I \'I\', \'Me\'. \'or \'Myself\'? Or am I \'You\'?
Nope, I can\'t be you, cos you are you!
I\'m digging this hole deeper, and I\'m in it.... lol.
(Take a purple pill or two, Orchi).
August 14th, 2019 02:58
orchidee said:
Doh! I\'m all in a tizzy.
Am I \'I\', \'Me\'. \'or \'Myself\'? Or am I \'You\'?
Nope, I can\'t be you, cos you are you!
I\'m digging this hole deeper, and I\'m in it.... lol.
(Take a purple pill or two, Orchi).
August 14th, 2019 02:58
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