Comments received on poems by Neville
Poppy Seeds
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Yep, someone wanted to know the way to Mars. I said \'Take the No.11 bus; get off at the third cloud on your right; the bus destination indicator will say \'Cuckoo Land\'. lol.
June 28th, 2019 02:29
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Yep, someone wanted to know the way to Mars. I said \'Take the No.11 bus; get off at the third cloud on your right; the bus destination indicator will say \'Cuckoo Land\'. lol.
June 28th, 2019 02:29
A Sound for Sore Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Neville, words and music can always be interspersed to bring beauty into our lives.
June 28th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Neville, words and music can always be interspersed to bring beauty into our lives.
June 28th, 2019 00:48
A Sound for Sore Eyes
kevin browne said:
Class act here going on in your work. Brilliant and don\'t stop growing with you pen.
June 27th, 2019 16:04
kevin browne said:
Class act here going on in your work. Brilliant and don\'t stop growing with you pen.
June 27th, 2019 16:04
A Sound for Sore Eyes
Suresh said:
My words will fall far short in praising your words
June 27th, 2019 11:46
Suresh said:
My words will fall far short in praising your words
June 27th, 2019 11:46
A Sound for Sore Eyes
orchidee said:
An eloquent write Neville. So he heard me singing in the feral choir? He would have dashed out straightway in torment! heehee.
June 27th, 2019 03:13
orchidee said:
An eloquent write Neville. So he heard me singing in the feral choir? He would have dashed out straightway in torment! heehee.
June 27th, 2019 03:13
A Sound for Sore Eyes
Fay Slimm. said:
This read leaves me breathless with admiration for linguistic word-craft from its title to the revealing last line. First class writing again Neville.
June 27th, 2019 03:07
Fay Slimm. said:
This read leaves me breathless with admiration for linguistic word-craft from its title to the revealing last line. First class writing again Neville.
June 27th, 2019 03:07
Dance
Suresh said:
I envision an abandoned place where shadows dance hauntingly, with a stagnant pool of still and dark waters.
Very enjoyable piece.
June 26th, 2019 11:26
Suresh said:
I envision an abandoned place where shadows dance hauntingly, with a stagnant pool of still and dark waters.
Very enjoyable piece.
June 26th, 2019 11:26
Dance
orchidee said:
What you up to in that forest?! Don\'t fall on me like a ton of bricks, but that happened on a similar comment I made to a poet. That\'ll teach me to be too familiar! lol.
June 26th, 2019 04:16
orchidee said:
What you up to in that forest?! Don\'t fall on me like a ton of bricks, but that happened on a similar comment I made to a poet. That\'ll teach me to be too familiar! lol.
June 26th, 2019 04:16
Dance
Fay Slimm. said:
So clear your amorous tale I feel I am on that mill-pool bank and dancing in between deep shadows - a lovely first read of my day dear Neville.
June 26th, 2019 03:45
Fay Slimm. said:
So clear your amorous tale I feel I am on that mill-pool bank and dancing in between deep shadows - a lovely first read of my day dear Neville.
June 26th, 2019 03:45
Dance
Neville said:
I am delighted.. what a smashing thing to say.. cheers Dan...... Neville
June 26th, 2019 03:12
Neville said:
I am delighted.. what a smashing thing to say.. cheers Dan...... Neville
June 26th, 2019 03:12
Dance
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic! I\'ve had a song call dance monkey in my head all morning, now I\'m going to have to play it!
Really enjoyed what felt like in and out of the dark and light, the dance of life!
June 26th, 2019 03:08
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic! I\'ve had a song call dance monkey in my head all morning, now I\'m going to have to play it!
Really enjoyed what felt like in and out of the dark and light, the dance of life!
June 26th, 2019 03:08
Zen Hunting
Fay Slimm. said:
Growing accustomed to pleasure of bliss sounds like the monk though dis-robed had found his Nirvana - -and I agree the wait for enlightenment can be better endured with an aesthetic mate - - your poetry Nev describes life so clearly with all its surprises - yet throws in a slice of intrigue which I like. Good last read of my day so Bon nuit mon ami and sleep well ...........x from Fay
June 25th, 2019 17:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Growing accustomed to pleasure of bliss sounds like the monk though dis-robed had found his Nirvana - -and I agree the wait for enlightenment can be better endured with an aesthetic mate - - your poetry Nev describes life so clearly with all its surprises - yet throws in a slice of intrigue which I like. Good last read of my day so Bon nuit mon ami and sleep well ...........x from Fay
June 25th, 2019 17:22
Whale Whispering
Suresh said:
The docile behemoths, yet graceful and a delight to watch. Yes, their abrupt leap from the oceanic depth, and the thunderous flop on its surface, all gracefully done. Their whispers traveling thousands of miles - to fetch another of their kind.
June 25th, 2019 16:56
Suresh said:
The docile behemoths, yet graceful and a delight to watch. Yes, their abrupt leap from the oceanic depth, and the thunderous flop on its surface, all gracefully done. Their whispers traveling thousands of miles - to fetch another of their kind.
June 25th, 2019 16:56
Best Before See Date
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Love has no best before Nville it grows sweeter like a fine wine...
Your poetry gets better and better all the time this is sublime
June 25th, 2019 15:39
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Love has no best before Nville it grows sweeter like a fine wine...
Your poetry gets better and better all the time this is sublime
June 25th, 2019 15:39
Best Before See Date
Goldfinch60 said:
As our age increases our reaction slow and become stationery but the mind climbs on to the joys of the passed which gives us succour within our aging minds.
June 25th, 2019 15:13
Goldfinch60 said:
As our age increases our reaction slow and become stationery but the mind climbs on to the joys of the passed which gives us succour within our aging minds.
June 25th, 2019 15:13
Best Before See Date
Suresh said:
Age has a way of putting us in a catatonic state, and leaves us a cauldron of memories
June 25th, 2019 12:52
Suresh said:
Age has a way of putting us in a catatonic state, and leaves us a cauldron of memories
June 25th, 2019 12:52
Best Before See Date
Fay Slimm. said:
The pathos in these tender lines Nev. tells of past yesteryear-embraces with such haunting words - - a beguiling write which touches this reader\'s heart.
June 25th, 2019 07:06
Fay Slimm. said:
The pathos in these tender lines Nev. tells of past yesteryear-embraces with such haunting words - - a beguiling write which touches this reader\'s heart.
June 25th, 2019 07:06
Best Before See Date
orchidee said:
Aww, why they call you out of date? Or you mean me?! heehee.
June 25th, 2019 06:29
orchidee said:
Aww, why they call you out of date? Or you mean me?! heehee.
June 25th, 2019 06:29
Best Before See Date
Neville said:
your take on these words is so much appreciated my friend.. I just love the way words can be variously interpreted... and no... not a hundred miles off mark.. not by a long chalk..... Neville
June 25th, 2019 04:02
Neville said:
your take on these words is so much appreciated my friend.. I just love the way words can be variously interpreted... and no... not a hundred miles off mark.. not by a long chalk..... Neville
June 25th, 2019 04:02
Best Before See Date
dusk arising said:
Thats the stuff dreams are dreamed in. A somehow distant \'cotton wooley\' recollection of what happened in REM sleep..... eludes us for we dream in delta and theta waves (i think).
If i am 100 miles off the mark - apologies. I felt the whole of your piece today was alike attempting, on waking, to return to a lovely dream.
June 25th, 2019 03:46
dusk arising said:
Thats the stuff dreams are dreamed in. A somehow distant \'cotton wooley\' recollection of what happened in REM sleep..... eludes us for we dream in delta and theta waves (i think).
If i am 100 miles off the mark - apologies. I felt the whole of your piece today was alike attempting, on waking, to return to a lovely dream.
June 25th, 2019 03:46
There Are No Graves
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful write Neville. I have never been to Auschwitz but those who I know who have been say that it changes their life, such an austere place that leaves them full of grief and in some cases anger that this was allowed to happen.
June 25th, 2019 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful write Neville. I have never been to Auschwitz but those who I know who have been say that it changes their life, such an austere place that leaves them full of grief and in some cases anger that this was allowed to happen.
June 25th, 2019 01:01
There Are No Graves
kevin browne said:
Excellent expression of obvious deep thought about a situation of silence, yet still, the loudness comes within your words in the fascinating write. Good tribute to the there is no place at all where there are no graves.
June 24th, 2019 23:15
kevin browne said:
Excellent expression of obvious deep thought about a situation of silence, yet still, the loudness comes within your words in the fascinating write. Good tribute to the there is no place at all where there are no graves.
June 24th, 2019 23:15
Before We Die
Suresh said:
To quote one of my brevity\'s that defines this work beautifully -
You wove the words innocently, yet left the meaning exposed
June 24th, 2019 14:55
Suresh said:
To quote one of my brevity\'s that defines this work beautifully -
You wove the words innocently, yet left the meaning exposed
June 24th, 2019 14:55
There Are No Graves
Suresh said:
I see your quill got the teardrop for its dry ink.
Mans cuelty towards its kind has existed throughout existence, but it reached new heights in these concentration camps.
What\'s worse is that none of this has had any impact, for millions are still slaughtered every year.
Plaster your poem in everyone\'s mind, and hope for change.
June 24th, 2019 12:49
Suresh said:
I see your quill got the teardrop for its dry ink.
Mans cuelty towards its kind has existed throughout existence, but it reached new heights in these concentration camps.
What\'s worse is that none of this has had any impact, for millions are still slaughtered every year.
Plaster your poem in everyone\'s mind, and hope for change.
June 24th, 2019 12:49
There Are No Graves
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This made me sit back and applaud Neville.
It made me shiver at he scale of your contemplation of this haunting event.
I Can feel its chill
June 24th, 2019 11:16
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This made me sit back and applaud Neville.
It made me shiver at he scale of your contemplation of this haunting event.
I Can feel its chill
June 24th, 2019 11:16
There Are No Graves
Michael Edwards said:
This sums up so well my memories of this dreadful \'monument\' to man\'s worst evils. Super work Neville.
June 24th, 2019 10:39
Michael Edwards said:
This sums up so well my memories of this dreadful \'monument\' to man\'s worst evils. Super work Neville.
June 24th, 2019 10:39
There Are No Graves
dusk arising said:
I knew this was Auschwitz as soon as i began to read it.
No there are no physical gravestones. Instead we all carry an internal gravestone for the human beings, individuals, people, families, children, babies, grandmothers, sisters, brothers, fathers... people like all of us here who were each once more than a single figure in a total of MILLIONS murdered by this sick regime. Each with their own aspirations, humour, art, sufferings, pride, loyalties, love,, kindness, caring, human fkkng beings.
Yet it happens again on a smaller scale
Very sombre and extremely powerful dark writing from you today. Perfectly fitting for the subject. Raises strong feelings.
June 24th, 2019 07:59
dusk arising said:
I knew this was Auschwitz as soon as i began to read it.
No there are no physical gravestones. Instead we all carry an internal gravestone for the human beings, individuals, people, families, children, babies, grandmothers, sisters, brothers, fathers... people like all of us here who were each once more than a single figure in a total of MILLIONS murdered by this sick regime. Each with their own aspirations, humour, art, sufferings, pride, loyalties, love,, kindness, caring, human fkkng beings.
Yet it happens again on a smaller scale
Very sombre and extremely powerful dark writing from you today. Perfectly fitting for the subject. Raises strong feelings.
June 24th, 2019 07:59
Ache
dusk arising said:
Aches which nag you and only time will heal are the weight of life\'s unfairness sometimes. Personally i try to shrug them off with the selfish consolation that, somewhere, someone probably felt/feels the same about me.
Your piece is compact and powerful saying so much to, and for, those who empathise.
June 24th, 2019 07:36
dusk arising said:
Aches which nag you and only time will heal are the weight of life\'s unfairness sometimes. Personally i try to shrug them off with the selfish consolation that, somewhere, someone probably felt/feels the same about me.
Your piece is compact and powerful saying so much to, and for, those who empathise.
June 24th, 2019 07:36
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