Comments received on poems by Neville
The Drowning Game
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sprites can be so magnetic and uts impossible not to be attracted to them.
Another very good write Neville.
December 19th, 2018 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sprites can be so magnetic and uts impossible not to be attracted to them.
Another very good write Neville.
December 19th, 2018 01:43
Whale Whispering
Goldfinch60 said:
I have never seen a whale but seen poipoises and dolphins, they are wondrous, as are your words.
December 18th, 2018 15:19
Goldfinch60 said:
I have never seen a whale but seen poipoises and dolphins, they are wondrous, as are your words.
December 18th, 2018 15:19
Whale Whispering
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
This is indeed an excellent write! I concur with Sylvia’s and Fay’s brilliant comments!
I enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
December 18th, 2018 08:04
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
This is indeed an excellent write! I concur with Sylvia’s and Fay’s brilliant comments!
I enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
December 18th, 2018 08:04
Whale Whispering
Fay Slimm. said:
So explicit the description of dancing leviathans I was there with you watching them canter and play - a beautiful read Neville. which goes into my favourites
December 18th, 2018 07:34
Fay Slimm. said:
So explicit the description of dancing leviathans I was there with you watching them canter and play - a beautiful read Neville. which goes into my favourites
December 18th, 2018 07:34
Whale Whispering
sylviasearcher said:
I am glad you are more than happy.
You are welcome.
December 18th, 2018 06:15
sylviasearcher said:
I am glad you are more than happy.
You are welcome.
December 18th, 2018 06:15
Whale Whispering
sylviasearcher said:
Captures the almighty beauty and power of things we cannot grasp nor understand.
December 18th, 2018 05:59
sylviasearcher said:
Captures the almighty beauty and power of things we cannot grasp nor understand.
December 18th, 2018 05:59
Versal Law
Michael Edwards said:
You can read it either way - complete law or a law starting with the flourish of manuscript but it doesn\'t matter - love stretching and pulling the language beyond the usual comfort zones - as Uncle Fred said - \'Go with the flow\'.
December 17th, 2018 07:18
Michael Edwards said:
You can read it either way - complete law or a law starting with the flourish of manuscript but it doesn\'t matter - love stretching and pulling the language beyond the usual comfort zones - as Uncle Fred said - \'Go with the flow\'.
December 17th, 2018 07:18
Versal Law
Neville said:
no rush, take your time & thanks for visiting.. Neville
December 17th, 2018 05:34
Neville said:
no rush, take your time & thanks for visiting.. Neville
December 17th, 2018 05:34
Versal Law
orchidee said:
Swoon! I thought ya was writing some \'laws of poetry\' or summat. Now I gotta have a lie down to recover. lol.
December 17th, 2018 05:28
orchidee said:
Swoon! I thought ya was writing some \'laws of poetry\' or summat. Now I gotta have a lie down to recover. lol.
December 17th, 2018 05:28
Upon A Midnight Calling
whisperingquill said:
Intricate weaving
fantastic word choices
December 16th, 2018 12:33
whisperingquill said:
Intricate weaving
fantastic word choices
December 16th, 2018 12:33
The Birth of Opals
Michael Edwards said:
Greensleeves is playing as I read this - the two go so well together - a super read.
December 16th, 2018 06:09
Michael Edwards said:
Greensleeves is playing as I read this - the two go so well together - a super read.
December 16th, 2018 06:09
Upon A Midnight Calling
Goldfinch60 said:
Those marks must always be left to show that you have been there.
December 15th, 2018 11:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Those marks must always be left to show that you have been there.
December 15th, 2018 11:33
Upon A Midnight Calling
orchidee said:
Swoon! He been cutting the grass at midnight?! I have to guess what\'s going on there, in me sheltered life. heehee.
December 15th, 2018 03:08
orchidee said:
Swoon! He been cutting the grass at midnight?! I have to guess what\'s going on there, in me sheltered life. heehee.
December 15th, 2018 03:08
On Waking
Fay Slimm. said:
Early morning coupling is good for those born as larks but not for owls - a read which revives memories for me - thanks for journey back to lovely times Neville.
December 14th, 2018 05:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Early morning coupling is good for those born as larks but not for owls - a read which revives memories for me - thanks for journey back to lovely times Neville.
December 14th, 2018 05:02
On Waking
orchidee said:
It all started with those swoony palms! lol. I must \'get out more\' as they say.
December 14th, 2018 03:08
orchidee said:
It all started with those swoony palms! lol. I must \'get out more\' as they say.
December 14th, 2018 03:08
On Waking
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Neville, it leads me in one way only and the answer was yes.
December 14th, 2018 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Neville, it leads me in one way only and the answer was yes.
December 14th, 2018 02:05
The Company of Angels
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write leaving me lost in your world of words.
December 14th, 2018 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write leaving me lost in your world of words.
December 14th, 2018 01:55
On Waking
Michael Edwards said:
Well I have my interpretation - based, thankfully, on a long memory. Much enjoyed - thanks for posting - I will return to it later.
December 14th, 2018 00:22
Michael Edwards said:
Well I have my interpretation - based, thankfully, on a long memory. Much enjoyed - thanks for posting - I will return to it later.
December 14th, 2018 00:22
The Company of Angels
Nicholas Browning said:
This paints a picture in my mind of a man in a tight spot, perhaps fighting in a war or a battle of self reflection, being prayed for by an angel that happens to be someone he knows. Also, there seems to be a dark coven that is conducting some kind of ritual. I am confusion, America explain.
Oh well, don\'t mind me. Just trying to understand it.
I like it to say the least.
December 13th, 2018 16:03
Nicholas Browning said:
This paints a picture in my mind of a man in a tight spot, perhaps fighting in a war or a battle of self reflection, being prayed for by an angel that happens to be someone he knows. Also, there seems to be a dark coven that is conducting some kind of ritual. I am confusion, America explain.
Oh well, don\'t mind me. Just trying to understand it.
I like it to say the least.
December 13th, 2018 16:03
The Company of Angels
sylviasearcher said:
Kind of other worldly. Dreamy. I like it. It\'s well put together
December 13th, 2018 15:05
sylviasearcher said:
Kind of other worldly. Dreamy. I like it. It\'s well put together
December 13th, 2018 15:05
The Company of Angels
Michael Edwards said:
Ditto Diamond\'s comments - I will also reread.
December 13th, 2018 11:56
Michael Edwards said:
Ditto Diamond\'s comments - I will also reread.
December 13th, 2018 11:56
The Width of a Table
Fay Slimm. said:
An ongoing wish which I hope comes true the next time Neville - - you write a convincing story which catches attention most admirably.
December 12th, 2018 13:20
Fay Slimm. said:
An ongoing wish which I hope comes true the next time Neville - - you write a convincing story which catches attention most admirably.
December 12th, 2018 13:20
The Width of a Table
Michael Edwards said:
This carried me with it Neville - the sign of another superb write.
December 12th, 2018 04:28
Michael Edwards said:
This carried me with it Neville - the sign of another superb write.
December 12th, 2018 04:28
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