Comments received on poems by Neville
Chaos Theory
orchidee said:
How are you N? I\'m feeling decidedly queasy, but that\'s cos I just tuned into \'Lorraine\' on telly. Call the men in white coats if I watch it the whole week. I shall be insane with boredom!
Don\'t torture yourself - don\'t tune in to it! You\'ll end up a jibbering wreck, as I might do. lol.
July 2nd, 2019 03:04
orchidee said:
How are you N? I\'m feeling decidedly queasy, but that\'s cos I just tuned into \'Lorraine\' on telly. Call the men in white coats if I watch it the whole week. I shall be insane with boredom!
Don\'t torture yourself - don\'t tune in to it! You\'ll end up a jibbering wreck, as I might do. lol.
July 2nd, 2019 03:04
Captivating Games
sylviasearcher said:
This was playful. I liked it but I am trying to work out the function of the change of format in the middle...
I liked want having a line of his or her own
July 2nd, 2019 02:35
sylviasearcher said:
This was playful. I liked it but I am trying to work out the function of the change of format in the middle...
I liked want having a line of his or her own
July 2nd, 2019 02:35
What We Got
Suresh said:
I am me, you are what I want to be
Have often thought on these lines, that you have expressed so well
July 1st, 2019 22:53
Suresh said:
I am me, you are what I want to be
Have often thought on these lines, that you have expressed so well
July 1st, 2019 22:53
Chaos Theory
Suresh said:
The RIPPLE EFFECT.
We know the consequences, yet, we choose to remain, ignorant and illiterate
.
We surrender our responsibilities to others, like politicians, and the defenders become the aggressors - ironic!
CHAOS, once enacted,natives its toll.
Engaging subject, thnx
July 1st, 2019 10:45
Suresh said:
The RIPPLE EFFECT.
We know the consequences, yet, we choose to remain, ignorant and illiterate
.
We surrender our responsibilities to others, like politicians, and the defenders become the aggressors - ironic!
CHAOS, once enacted,natives its toll.
Engaging subject, thnx
July 1st, 2019 10:45
Chaos Theory
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE for your CHAOTIC ODE ! Since the MOON LANDING ~ 50 years ago ~ we have seen the Earth (from Space) as Small Global Village ~ with the G2O leaders as Village Elders and all of us increasingly reponsible for the Future consevation of the quality of Village Life ! A sombre & mind daunting message indeed ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our HOT AIR BALLOONS Thanks A & B 🧡🧡🧡
July 1st, 2019 08:28
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE for your CHAOTIC ODE ! Since the MOON LANDING ~ 50 years ago ~ we have seen the Earth (from Space) as Small Global Village ~ with the G2O leaders as Village Elders and all of us increasingly reponsible for the Future consevation of the quality of Village Life ! A sombre & mind daunting message indeed ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our HOT AIR BALLOONS Thanks A & B 🧡🧡🧡
July 1st, 2019 08:28
Chaos Theory
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE for your CHAOTIC ODE ! Since the MOON LANDING ~ 50 years ago ~ we have seen the Earth (from Space) as Small Global Village ~ with the G2O leaders as Village Elders and all of us increasingly reponsible for the Future consevation of the quality of Village Life ! A sombre & mind daunting message indeed ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our HOT AIR BALLOONS Thanks A & B 🧡🧡🧡
July 1st, 2019 08:28
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE for your CHAOTIC ODE ! Since the MOON LANDING ~ 50 years ago ~ we have seen the Earth (from Space) as Small Global Village ~ with the G2O leaders as Village Elders and all of us increasingly reponsible for the Future consevation of the quality of Village Life ! A sombre & mind daunting message indeed ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our HOT AIR BALLOONS Thanks A & B 🧡🧡🧡
July 1st, 2019 08:28
Chaos Theory
Michael Edwards said:
A compelling way to describe man\'s total disrespect for the planet - and a fine write it is.
July 1st, 2019 07:55
Michael Edwards said:
A compelling way to describe man\'s total disrespect for the planet - and a fine write it is.
July 1st, 2019 07:55
Chaos Theory
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful way to describe time\'s indifferent effects as it ticks away - a compelling outcry against human blindness to planet-abuse and thank you for wording the need so poetically Nev. - - - a meaningful write..................... Fay
July 1st, 2019 04:21
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful way to describe time\'s indifferent effects as it ticks away - a compelling outcry against human blindness to planet-abuse and thank you for wording the need so poetically Nev. - - - a meaningful write..................... Fay
July 1st, 2019 04:21
Captivating Games
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Neville, I have already been captured and been that wonderful way for 38 years.
July 1st, 2019 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Neville, I have already been captured and been that wonderful way for 38 years.
July 1st, 2019 00:52
Captivating Games
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written, love the use of rhyme, especially the second stanza
June 30th, 2019 20:31
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written, love the use of rhyme, especially the second stanza
June 30th, 2019 20:31
Captivating Games
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING NEVILLE : ANGELA here : Its 10:30 am (MON) in NZ first Clinic is 1 pm just catching up on MPS ! Love yout quintet of triplets each one a Captivating Love Match ! BRIAN and I are 11,500 miles apart so we often play Cyber Captivating Games !
1. Im the KITE @ the end of an 11,500 mile string !
2. Our LOGO is two doves kissing on the wing !
3. CYBER LOVE is like a Nameless colour
4. When BRIAN comesfor me (OCTOBER) we wont play Silly Games !
5. When we*re together again our shackles will be LOVE !
Loved your very elegant POEM
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 30th, 2019 16:47
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING NEVILLE : ANGELA here : Its 10:30 am (MON) in NZ first Clinic is 1 pm just catching up on MPS ! Love yout quintet of triplets each one a Captivating Love Match ! BRIAN and I are 11,500 miles apart so we often play Cyber Captivating Games !
1. Im the KITE @ the end of an 11,500 mile string !
2. Our LOGO is two doves kissing on the wing !
3. CYBER LOVE is like a Nameless colour
4. When BRIAN comesfor me (OCTOBER) we wont play Silly Games !
5. When we*re together again our shackles will be LOVE !
Loved your very elegant POEM
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 30th, 2019 16:47
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Suresh said:
One thinks of those that one loves, when another loved one is leaving us.
Heartfelt
June 30th, 2019 14:00
Suresh said:
One thinks of those that one loves, when another loved one is leaving us.
Heartfelt
June 30th, 2019 14:00
Captivating Games
Suresh said:
I visualize five spells separating two loves, and with each verse a spell dissipates.... And no, it\'s not too much to ask.
I am still figuring out the spells ....
June 30th, 2019 12:41
Suresh said:
I visualize five spells separating two loves, and with each verse a spell dissipates.... And no, it\'s not too much to ask.
I am still figuring out the spells ....
June 30th, 2019 12:41
Captivating Games
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s lots of things I\'d like to be but actually I aint disappointed with what I am - a smug git lol
Niceione Neville
June 30th, 2019 09:06
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s lots of things I\'d like to be but actually I aint disappointed with what I am - a smug git lol
Niceione Neville
June 30th, 2019 09:06
Captivating Games
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville, though I might swoon with shackles! lol.
June 30th, 2019 07:25
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville, though I might swoon with shackles! lol.
June 30th, 2019 07:25
Captivating Games
Fay Slimm. said:
Ask for shackles and you will be caught in the love-game with verses like this one my tender friend - - an alluring read and I want to say how much I enjoyed the way you you want to play games that captivate this reader - - - - another thoroughly engaging write. ..................... Fay
June 30th, 2019 03:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Ask for shackles and you will be caught in the love-game with verses like this one my tender friend - - an alluring read and I want to say how much I enjoyed the way you you want to play games that captivate this reader - - - - another thoroughly engaging write. ..................... Fay
June 30th, 2019 03:38
I Found Myself Thinking of You
SerenWise said:
Sad but very meaningful, I think we can all relate on some level
June 30th, 2019 02:14
SerenWise said:
Sad but very meaningful, I think we can all relate on some level
June 30th, 2019 02:14
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Goldfinch60 said:
MY father and I were so close, he died in 1995 and I still think of him every day. A wonderful person who is still with me as I am sure your father is with you Neville.
June 30th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
MY father and I were so close, he died in 1995 and I still think of him every day. A wonderful person who is still with me as I am sure your father is with you Neville.
June 30th, 2019 00:20
I Found Myself Thinking of You
orchidee said:
A poignant and sensitive write Neville.
My insensitive version is - What ya doing thinking of me? Ya must have remembered my singing, and gone mad! heehee.
June 29th, 2019 11:20
orchidee said:
A poignant and sensitive write Neville.
My insensitive version is - What ya doing thinking of me? Ya must have remembered my singing, and gone mad! heehee.
June 29th, 2019 11:20
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Oh yes...
I most definitely can relate!
It has been eight years, nine months, and seven days. It seems like just a few hours ago! Will always remember!
Thank you for sharing your most personal moments!
~Laura~
June 29th, 2019 05:03
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Oh yes...
I most definitely can relate!
It has been eight years, nine months, and seven days. It seems like just a few hours ago! Will always remember!
Thank you for sharing your most personal moments!
~Laura~
June 29th, 2019 05:03
I Found Myself Thinking of You
Fay Slimm. said:
We who care deeply do really die in fragments when those we love have to say goodbye - I can relate to these tender words so well my friend.
June 29th, 2019 03:44
Fay Slimm. said:
We who care deeply do really die in fragments when those we love have to say goodbye - I can relate to these tender words so well my friend.
June 29th, 2019 03:44
Poppy Seeds
Goldfinch60 said:
Going up passed the clouds can bring some wonderful memories of love and joy.
June 29th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Going up passed the clouds can bring some wonderful memories of love and joy.
June 29th, 2019 00:48
Poppy Seeds
Suresh said:
This darn gravity keep me grounded, or else I\'ll in those clouds and among those poppy seeds in a blink of an eye, no directions necessary
Very enjoyable
June 28th, 2019 11:38
Suresh said:
This darn gravity keep me grounded, or else I\'ll in those clouds and among those poppy seeds in a blink of an eye, no directions necessary
Very enjoyable
June 28th, 2019 11:38
Poppy Seeds
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Neville, are you Peter?
Very interesting
June 28th, 2019 08:26
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Neville, are you Peter?
Very interesting
June 28th, 2019 08:26
Poppy Seeds
Poetic Dan said:
Stop going left! Message well received my friend. Great write
June 28th, 2019 02:43
Poetic Dan said:
Stop going left! Message well received my friend. Great write
June 28th, 2019 02:43
Poppy Seeds
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a meeting with love lost and remembered - - - such a thing can happen when we walk amid poppy fields but no-one puts it better than thee...........
June 28th, 2019 02:35
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a meeting with love lost and remembered - - - such a thing can happen when we walk amid poppy fields but no-one puts it better than thee...........
June 28th, 2019 02:35
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