Comments received on poems by Neville
When Does Trust Kick In
orchidee said:
Trust will never kick in, if anyone is hoping to trust me not to add water to their whisky/gin/whatever tipple....!
September 27th, 2019 01:46
orchidee said:
Trust will never kick in, if anyone is hoping to trust me not to add water to their whisky/gin/whatever tipple....!
September 27th, 2019 01:46
When Does Trust Kick In
Fay Slimm. said:
Trust kicks in from that single moment when eyes first meet and lock methinks Nev.......... otherwise none of the other could follow - much thanks for another delicious piece of gentle erotica - digested with a sigh and a nostalgic smile ............... Fay
September 27th, 2019 01:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Trust kicks in from that single moment when eyes first meet and lock methinks Nev.......... otherwise none of the other could follow - much thanks for another delicious piece of gentle erotica - digested with a sigh and a nostalgic smile ............... Fay
September 27th, 2019 01:10
When Does Trust Kick In
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust takes time to \'kick in\' but once there it is wonderful but the smallest thing in life can cause that trust to be annulled.
September 27th, 2019 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust takes time to \'kick in\' but once there it is wonderful but the smallest thing in life can cause that trust to be annulled.
September 27th, 2019 01:08
Poppies
Suresh said:
A winter wonderland, that\'s what wild poppies create in the hills of Southern California, just as your words wonderfully brought them to life.
September 27th, 2019 00:23
Suresh said:
A winter wonderland, that\'s what wild poppies create in the hills of Southern California, just as your words wonderfully brought them to life.
September 27th, 2019 00:23
Poppies
Michael Edwards said:
But not all poppy species are red. Fine write neville
September 26th, 2019 15:14
Michael Edwards said:
But not all poppy species are red. Fine write neville
September 26th, 2019 15:14
Poppies
Clara said:
I like the conflict here, what the red could signify, like post boxes and childrens\' toys and what the red in the poppy signifies...
Wonderful write.
September 26th, 2019 05:51
Clara said:
I like the conflict here, what the red could signify, like post boxes and childrens\' toys and what the red in the poppy signifies...
Wonderful write.
September 26th, 2019 05:51
Poppies
Fay Slimm. said:
A reverent but light-hearted look at poppy-red and all it pertains to and then a heart-wrenching reflection on poppy- memorial to lives lost in war - much more to your verse than comes from one read Nev - so into my favourites goes this poetic gem - thanking you too for the reminder.
September 26th, 2019 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
A reverent but light-hearted look at poppy-red and all it pertains to and then a heart-wrenching reflection on poppy- memorial to lives lost in war - much more to your verse than comes from one read Nev - so into my favourites goes this poetic gem - thanking you too for the reminder.
September 26th, 2019 03:48
Poppies
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
It\'s not a fine day for me though. But why? well, I forgot my purple pills, and tuned in to \'Lorraine\' on telly. Why did I bore myself to death?! As in \'boredom\'. lol
September 26th, 2019 03:25
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
It\'s not a fine day for me though. But why? well, I forgot my purple pills, and tuned in to \'Lorraine\' on telly. Why did I bore myself to death?! As in \'boredom\'. lol
September 26th, 2019 03:25
Deciduous
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Neville, the conversations that go on within forests and woods can be startling.
September 26th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Neville, the conversations that go on within forests and woods can be startling.
September 26th, 2019 00:20
These Words
marijoy said:
I’m getting acquainted with your poetry way. Modern and discernible.
September 25th, 2019 21:03
marijoy said:
I’m getting acquainted with your poetry way. Modern and discernible.
September 25th, 2019 21:03
Deciduous
marijoy said:
My friend poet Neville, I apologize for my ignorance but I did not understand your poem even though I love your words very much. Maybe because I’m not from England? Sending love ❤️
September 25th, 2019 20:49
marijoy said:
My friend poet Neville, I apologize for my ignorance but I did not understand your poem even though I love your words very much. Maybe because I’m not from England? Sending love ❤️
September 25th, 2019 20:49
Deciduous
dusk arising said:
Nice word play - good fun read. Root and branch stuff for the fine wordsmith that u are sir!
September 25th, 2019 10:44
dusk arising said:
Nice word play - good fun read. Root and branch stuff for the fine wordsmith that u are sir!
September 25th, 2019 10:44
Deciduous
Michael Edwards said:
Great write which gave me a smile. Feeling a bit de-leaved myself at the moment.
September 25th, 2019 04:05
Michael Edwards said:
Great write which gave me a smile. Feeling a bit de-leaved myself at the moment.
September 25th, 2019 04:05
Deciduous
Fay Slimm. said:
The difference between ever and naked deciduous makes needing that Veronica\'s warm love so vital methinks.... . I smiled at your word-play with that term - - - \"re-leaved\" .............intriguing nature- read Nev.
September 25th, 2019 04:02
Fay Slimm. said:
The difference between ever and naked deciduous makes needing that Veronica\'s warm love so vital methinks.... . I smiled at your word-play with that term - - - \"re-leaved\" .............intriguing nature- read Nev.
September 25th, 2019 04:02
These Words
Goldfinch60 said:
Words should be exposed to the world as yours are on this site.
September 25th, 2019 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Words should be exposed to the world as yours are on this site.
September 25th, 2019 02:43
These Words
Christina8 said:
A great write as it shows your skill as a poet in the beginning......
September 24th, 2019 14:50
Christina8 said:
A great write as it shows your skill as a poet in the beginning......
September 24th, 2019 14:50
These Words
dusk arising said:
I like it, the contrasting elite and whores at my level.
Reminds me i need a new quilt.
September 24th, 2019 12:31
dusk arising said:
I like it, the contrasting elite and whores at my level.
Reminds me i need a new quilt.
September 24th, 2019 12:31
These Words
Fay Slimm. said:
A great early write for it shows your potential to a fine degree Nev............... am delighted to read some of your very first words..
September 24th, 2019 04:02
Fay Slimm. said:
A great early write for it shows your potential to a fine degree Nev............... am delighted to read some of your very first words..
September 24th, 2019 04:02
Stashed
Goldfinch60 said:
May your memories
Forever be there for you,
To eternity.
Andy
September 24th, 2019 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
May your memories
Forever be there for you,
To eternity.
Andy
September 24th, 2019 00:38
Stashed
dusk arising said:
Sadly our memory can let us down though Neville. As I have said before, a lot of those memories which bring me great joy i have committed to paper as a kind of insurance. I wonder when the day will come that i read my pieces and say \'did that really happen to me?\'
Thankfully the majority are still quite vivvid i\'m pleased to add.
September 23rd, 2019 12:31
dusk arising said:
Sadly our memory can let us down though Neville. As I have said before, a lot of those memories which bring me great joy i have committed to paper as a kind of insurance. I wonder when the day will come that i read my pieces and say \'did that really happen to me?\'
Thankfully the majority are still quite vivvid i\'m pleased to add.
September 23rd, 2019 12:31
A Perfectly Reasonable Question
Suresh said:
The space you temporarily occupied will continue to be occupied, thus, be comforted, for it shall be always tended.
Since one only exists as memorialized by others, be comforted, for the memory of you shall such continue.
Therefore, the space n time that is you, is n will forever thus remain.
September 23rd, 2019 11:21
Suresh said:
The space you temporarily occupied will continue to be occupied, thus, be comforted, for it shall be always tended.
Since one only exists as memorialized by others, be comforted, for the memory of you shall such continue.
Therefore, the space n time that is you, is n will forever thus remain.
September 23rd, 2019 11:21
Stashed
orchidee said:
I was gonna write a poem: \'And some things are easier (or best) forgotten!\' lol.
September 23rd, 2019 10:48
orchidee said:
I was gonna write a poem: \'And some things are easier (or best) forgotten!\' lol.
September 23rd, 2019 10:48
Stashed
Fay Slimm. said:
Memory indeed holds everything stashed very safe where none can break into, try to alter or even destroy. Thanks Nev. for the idea on where to hide views we find precious .......... Fay
September 23rd, 2019 07:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Memory indeed holds everything stashed very safe where none can break into, try to alter or even destroy. Thanks Nev. for the idea on where to hide views we find precious .......... Fay
September 23rd, 2019 07:11
Stashed
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
“Stashed”...
...indeed!
Some things are worthwhile committing to memory!
~Laura~
September 23rd, 2019 06:53
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
“Stashed”...
...indeed!
Some things are worthwhile committing to memory!
~Laura~
September 23rd, 2019 06:53
Splitting Hairs
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I like this one!
As Andy said, “May that moon be ours forever.”
~Laura~
September 22nd, 2019 14:03
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I like this one!
As Andy said, “May that moon be ours forever.”
~Laura~
September 22nd, 2019 14:03
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