Comments received on poems by Neville



The Whimbrel
orchidee said:

A fine write Neville.

July 15th, 2019 04:34

Miss Me Hard
Goldfinch60 said:

Ships that keep passing in the night.

July 15th, 2019 00:25

Miss Me Hard
Christina8 said:

I really liked this! I don\'t know....sometimes even a quick kiss one is able to love. Well, I certainly did think hard about this! LOL

July 14th, 2019 16:40

Miss Me Hard
Michael Edwards said:

I\'ll decline on this occasion - super little penning.

July 14th, 2019 14:40

Miss Me Hard
Suresh said:

Lets stay FWB, how often does it work.
Thnx N

July 14th, 2019 09:34

Miss Me Hard
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

July 14th, 2019 07:56

Miss Me Hard
Fay Slimm. said:

These few discreetly penned lines gave me my first smile of the day Nev - - read quickly they seemed to put loose assignations in their right place....... without love an affair of the heart is hardly missed. Clever stuff.

July 14th, 2019 03:53

Sunflowers
Suresh said:

A field of sunflowers is really a memorable sight.


July 14th, 2019 00:53

Sunflowers
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a wonderful sight to see and equally wonderful words to accompany it.

July 14th, 2019 00:47

Looking Just to See
Call me S said:

I loved gliding through this poem Neville, it was lovely 😊

July 13th, 2019 08:17

Sunflowers
orchidee said:

A fine write N. Upload a clip of me singing then, if you\'re having problems - there\'s about 10 million clips to choose from! lol.

July 13th, 2019 07:47

Sunflowers
Michael Edwards said:

Sounds like a patch of heaven - great observational write.

July 13th, 2019 05:39

Sunflowers
Poetic Dan said:

Great morning read in the sunshine

July 13th, 2019 03:37

Sunflowers
Fay Slimm. said:

You succeeded with getting the picture of countless sunflower faces on your doorstep dear Nev. - - what a magnificent sight and a precious harvest indeed.

July 13th, 2019 03:31

Sunflowers
Fay Slimm. said:

Wow what a beautiful sight to behold - - the sunflower is high in my list of favourite flowers . and so will be forever - a thrilling read and so well versed I felt I was there by those fields of yellowy-gold my friend. Great to have caught your posting today......... Fay

July 13th, 2019 03:18

Looking Just to See
Poetic Dan said:

You do what you do so very well and make glad to be under a poetic spell

July 7th, 2019 04:58

Tomorrow Lost
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you! I had only one pint yesterday and with thoughts like this running through my mind. I felt at peace one more time.

Great work

July 7th, 2019 04:53

Tomorrow Lost
SerenWise said:

Lovely write, moving and emotive. I particularly like the third stanza... very vivid imagery

July 4th, 2019 21:41

Looking Just to See
dusk arising said:

I\'m sure Orchidee will be really pleased with this piece about his singing.

July 3rd, 2019 05:15

Looking Just to See
orchidee said:

A fine write Neville. I\'m not a blue-eyed boy for nothing ya know. Did what he saw make him swoon?! lol.

July 3rd, 2019 01:50

Looking Just to See
Michael Edwards said:

Beautiful - a gentle read and my eyes (hazel) just floated across the words

July 3rd, 2019 01:22

Looking Just to See
Fay Slimm. said:

This verse leads us into a memory with the expertise of a true wordsmith dear Nev.. Bluest of eyes encounter an experience that etches itself indelibly in the heart\'s eyesight as a moment of poetry which your pen now shares with compelling intrigue - applause for a true masterclass in writing my friend...................... x Fay

July 3rd, 2019 01:15

Looking Just to See
Suresh said:

To recall with the minds eye, that which has been filed away as memories, that is so well recorded by words that form this poetry

July 3rd, 2019 01:14

Looking Just to See
Goldfinch60 said:

Those poetic moments are so special in our lives.

July 3rd, 2019 00:58

Tomorrow Lost
Michael Edwards said:

Some lovely lines. I do like The shade of absent bruise and moments shed like reptile skins.

July 2nd, 2019 09:34

Tomorrow Lost
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Neville, those tomorrows lost make room for the new days found.

July 2nd, 2019 09:15

Tomorrow Lost
orchidee said:

Good write N. Yes, tomorrow is always lost for me. When it gets here, it\'s \'today\'. Doh!

July 2nd, 2019 08:19

Tomorrow Lost
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

A wonderful write that evokes many memories...whether lost or perhaps just dormant! ‘Tis our choice to hang on to them or to let them go and move on!
Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~

July 2nd, 2019 06:32

Tomorrow Lost
Suresh said:

What a memorable recitation.
I cannot seem to come out of a dream state, or maybe I just love being there, letting all the tomorrows be lost

July 2nd, 2019 04:03

Tomorrow Lost
Fay Slimm. said:

very poetic way to describe moving on my friend - - tomorrows are not for re-living regrets of the past - encouraging thoughts and thank you muchly for sharing them............... Fay

July 2nd, 2019 03:30



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