Comments received on poems by Neville
Bride of the Hedgerows
Michael Edwards said:
Super lyrical write - love the idea of bride of the hedgerows.
December 22nd, 2018 05:31
Michael Edwards said:
Super lyrical write - love the idea of bride of the hedgerows.
December 22nd, 2018 05:31
War is Not for Lovers
Michael Edwards said:
Read this earlier today and came back for a second read - then realised I\'d not commented - well I have now - a super write.
December 21st, 2018 15:23
Michael Edwards said:
Read this earlier today and came back for a second read - then realised I\'d not commented - well I have now - a super write.
December 21st, 2018 15:23
War is Not for Lovers
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-wrenching read about the truth of the trenches when death caught the many and few ever made it home - - your phrasing and flow in this sad lament is admirable Neville.
December 21st, 2018 06:29
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-wrenching read about the truth of the trenches when death caught the many and few ever made it home - - your phrasing and flow in this sad lament is admirable Neville.
December 21st, 2018 06:29
War is Not for Lovers
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes it does still hurt to think about it.
\"War is not for lovers\"
December 21st, 2018 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes it does still hurt to think about it.
\"War is not for lovers\"
December 21st, 2018 02:18
A Blue Toothbrush
Michael Edwards said:
Never happened to me when I was at work - but then my working day was totally controlled by my secretary who was in charge of my diary - no chance of mid-morning nooky. Nuff said - I enjoyed the read 18+ or not.
December 20th, 2018 11:00
Michael Edwards said:
Never happened to me when I was at work - but then my working day was totally controlled by my secretary who was in charge of my diary - no chance of mid-morning nooky. Nuff said - I enjoyed the read 18+ or not.
December 20th, 2018 11:00
A Blue Toothbrush
Neville said:
are saying you think these words do not warrant the 18+ label I gave them at the time of posting?
December 20th, 2018 09:04
Neville said:
are saying you think these words do not warrant the 18+ label I gave them at the time of posting?
December 20th, 2018 09:04
A Blue Toothbrush
orchidee said:
Oh no, woof! Fido, me 18+ watchdog started barking? Should this be marked 18+?! heehee.
December 20th, 2018 08:46
orchidee said:
Oh no, woof! Fido, me 18+ watchdog started barking? Should this be marked 18+?! heehee.
December 20th, 2018 08:46
The Drowning Game
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I think you may have taken the vision from my eyes, the words from my lips and the \'bray\' from my heart.
Who needs Kate Chopin 🤗
December 19th, 2018 02:52
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I think you may have taken the vision from my eyes, the words from my lips and the \'bray\' from my heart.
Who needs Kate Chopin 🤗
December 19th, 2018 02:52
The Drowning Game
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sprites can be so magnetic and uts impossible not to be attracted to them.
Another very good write Neville.
December 19th, 2018 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sprites can be so magnetic and uts impossible not to be attracted to them.
Another very good write Neville.
December 19th, 2018 01:43
Whale Whispering
Goldfinch60 said:
I have never seen a whale but seen poipoises and dolphins, they are wondrous, as are your words.
December 18th, 2018 15:19
Goldfinch60 said:
I have never seen a whale but seen poipoises and dolphins, they are wondrous, as are your words.
December 18th, 2018 15:19
Whale Whispering
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
This is indeed an excellent write! I concur with Sylvia’s and Fay’s brilliant comments!
I enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
December 18th, 2018 08:04
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
This is indeed an excellent write! I concur with Sylvia’s and Fay’s brilliant comments!
I enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
December 18th, 2018 08:04
Whale Whispering
Fay Slimm. said:
So explicit the description of dancing leviathans I was there with you watching them canter and play - a beautiful read Neville. which goes into my favourites
December 18th, 2018 07:34
Fay Slimm. said:
So explicit the description of dancing leviathans I was there with you watching them canter and play - a beautiful read Neville. which goes into my favourites
December 18th, 2018 07:34
Whale Whispering
sylviasearcher said:
I am glad you are more than happy.
You are welcome.
December 18th, 2018 06:15
sylviasearcher said:
I am glad you are more than happy.
You are welcome.
December 18th, 2018 06:15
Whale Whispering
sylviasearcher said:
Captures the almighty beauty and power of things we cannot grasp nor understand.
December 18th, 2018 05:59
sylviasearcher said:
Captures the almighty beauty and power of things we cannot grasp nor understand.
December 18th, 2018 05:59
Versal Law
Michael Edwards said:
You can read it either way - complete law or a law starting with the flourish of manuscript but it doesn\'t matter - love stretching and pulling the language beyond the usual comfort zones - as Uncle Fred said - \'Go with the flow\'.
December 17th, 2018 07:18
Michael Edwards said:
You can read it either way - complete law or a law starting with the flourish of manuscript but it doesn\'t matter - love stretching and pulling the language beyond the usual comfort zones - as Uncle Fred said - \'Go with the flow\'.
December 17th, 2018 07:18
Versal Law
Neville said:
no rush, take your time & thanks for visiting.. Neville
December 17th, 2018 05:34
Neville said:
no rush, take your time & thanks for visiting.. Neville
December 17th, 2018 05:34
Versal Law
orchidee said:
Swoon! I thought ya was writing some \'laws of poetry\' or summat. Now I gotta have a lie down to recover. lol.
December 17th, 2018 05:28
orchidee said:
Swoon! I thought ya was writing some \'laws of poetry\' or summat. Now I gotta have a lie down to recover. lol.
December 17th, 2018 05:28
Upon A Midnight Calling
whisperingquill said:
Intricate weaving
fantastic word choices
December 16th, 2018 12:33
whisperingquill said:
Intricate weaving
fantastic word choices
December 16th, 2018 12:33
The Birth of Opals
Michael Edwards said:
Greensleeves is playing as I read this - the two go so well together - a super read.
December 16th, 2018 06:09
Michael Edwards said:
Greensleeves is playing as I read this - the two go so well together - a super read.
December 16th, 2018 06:09
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