Comments received on poems by Neville
My Chest it Flutters
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Metaphorically rich...
an enjoyable read...
indeed!
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 01:48
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Metaphorically rich...
an enjoyable read...
indeed!
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 01:48
My Chest it Flutters
Goldfinch60 said:
That heart fluttering first feeling was enhanced by the growth of love throughout life.
August 24th, 2019 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
That heart fluttering first feeling was enhanced by the growth of love throughout life.
August 24th, 2019 00:34
My Chest it Flutters
kevin browne said:
And how so many Moons away are there sat to discover the futility of ones life..This is a cheeky one though I must say...
August 23rd, 2019 09:46
kevin browne said:
And how so many Moons away are there sat to discover the futility of ones life..This is a cheeky one though I must say...
August 23rd, 2019 09:46
My Chest it Flutters
Fay Slimm. said:
A fluttering chest and a heart that dances could be time to see the Doc. but knowing why it is again happening shows a love that does not give up - a delicately worded verse of time flying and thanks for the read dear ageless friend..........
August 23rd, 2019 07:29
Fay Slimm. said:
A fluttering chest and a heart that dances could be time to see the Doc. but knowing why it is again happening shows a love that does not give up - a delicately worded verse of time flying and thanks for the read dear ageless friend..........
August 23rd, 2019 07:29
My Chest it Flutters
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s enjoying themselves! heehee.
August 23rd, 2019 03:26
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s enjoying themselves! heehee.
August 23rd, 2019 03:26
My Chest it Flutters
dusk arising said:
I can\'t hold a candle to this kind of verse sir!
Though i did have concerns over your hitherto masked menopausal transsexuality until i read your author\'s comment.
Next time i pass the girls high school i shall carefully listen for juvenile coo-coo-ing.
Certainly had me scratching my smiling head today.
August 23rd, 2019 03:25
dusk arising said:
I can\'t hold a candle to this kind of verse sir!
Though i did have concerns over your hitherto masked menopausal transsexuality until i read your author\'s comment.
Next time i pass the girls high school i shall carefully listen for juvenile coo-coo-ing.
Certainly had me scratching my smiling head today.
August 23rd, 2019 03:25
Over The Hill
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
An interesting and thought provoking write! Many interpretations to be considered!
~Laura~
August 22nd, 2019 17:22
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
An interesting and thought provoking write! Many interpretations to be considered!
~Laura~
August 22nd, 2019 17:22
Over The Hill
Suresh said:
I no longer have a plot of land, thus all I can do is........
but that\'s OK too
no acre, just ache
Throughly enjoyed this one
P.S.
I was granted a wish to tweet-
In my excitement a typo error-
ache instead of acre
Well now I gotta live it- Cest la vie
August 22nd, 2019 11:47
Suresh said:
I no longer have a plot of land, thus all I can do is........
but that\'s OK too
no acre, just ache
Throughly enjoyed this one
P.S.
I was granted a wish to tweet-
In my excitement a typo error-
ache instead of acre
Well now I gotta live it- Cest la vie
August 22nd, 2019 11:47
Over The Hill
Fay Slimm. said:
That acre sounds familiar my friend cos I have one of those too..........such a clever concept Nev. and writ with beguiling covert.
August 22nd, 2019 02:34
Fay Slimm. said:
That acre sounds familiar my friend cos I have one of those too..........such a clever concept Nev. and writ with beguiling covert.
August 22nd, 2019 02:34
Over The Hill
dusk arising said:
Indeed we should all acknowledge our allotted acre of desire and tend it with ambition.
Today we see the sage within you.
August 22nd, 2019 02:25
dusk arising said:
Indeed we should all acknowledge our allotted acre of desire and tend it with ambition.
Today we see the sage within you.
August 22nd, 2019 02:25
Over The Hill
sylviasearcher said:
I started a poem like that once, it ended with a different kind of ache though
There was a longing in this one maybe?
August 22nd, 2019 02:20
sylviasearcher said:
I started a poem like that once, it ended with a different kind of ache though
There was a longing in this one maybe?
August 22nd, 2019 02:20
The Appetite of Voyeurs
orchidee said:
You seen any \'ne\'ermores\' with your binoculars? I wish I would go back to sleep! lol.
August 22nd, 2019 01:54
orchidee said:
You seen any \'ne\'ermores\' with your binoculars? I wish I would go back to sleep! lol.
August 22nd, 2019 01:54
Over The Hill
orchidee said:
I thought was on the theme of age - no?! Keep taking the tablets Orchi! A fine write N.
August 22nd, 2019 01:39
orchidee said:
I thought was on the theme of age - no?! Keep taking the tablets Orchi! A fine write N.
August 22nd, 2019 01:39
The Appetite of Voyeurs
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Hmmm...
Voyeurs’ Insatiable appetite...
interesting and intriguing!
~Laura~
August 22nd, 2019 01:34
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Hmmm...
Voyeurs’ Insatiable appetite...
interesting and intriguing!
~Laura~
August 22nd, 2019 01:34
Just Take a Look
Fay Slimm. said:
A flamboyant female indeed who can ride over established tradition and laugh at its ploys - -yet the same uncaring attitude in taking captives to be discarded shows she who mysteriously smiles loves only self. Hhhmm - - one to avoid methinks.....good read Nev........ x
August 21st, 2019 16:49
Fay Slimm. said:
A flamboyant female indeed who can ride over established tradition and laugh at its ploys - -yet the same uncaring attitude in taking captives to be discarded shows she who mysteriously smiles loves only self. Hhhmm - - one to avoid methinks.....good read Nev........ x
August 21st, 2019 16:49
The Appetite of Voyeurs
Suresh said:
Turning the tables, HA! but then that may be their game too
August 21st, 2019 15:25
Suresh said:
Turning the tables, HA! but then that may be their game too
August 21st, 2019 15:25
The Appetite of Voyeurs
Christina8 said:
Guess I should get some blinds or something for the windows.....didn\'t think my life was that interesting!
August 21st, 2019 11:11
Christina8 said:
Guess I should get some blinds or something for the windows.....didn\'t think my life was that interesting!
August 21st, 2019 11:11
The Appetite of Voyeurs
dusk arising said:
My dark sedan windows and mirrored lenses protect my innocence. I don\'t care who you are, snooping on me, I\'m innocent i tell ya.
August 21st, 2019 04:25
dusk arising said:
My dark sedan windows and mirrored lenses protect my innocence. I don\'t care who you are, snooping on me, I\'m innocent i tell ya.
August 21st, 2019 04:25
The Appetite of Voyeurs
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - now I know to leave the key in the door so you cant peeeeeeeep !!
August 21st, 2019 03:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - - now I know to leave the key in the door so you cant peeeeeeeep !!
August 21st, 2019 03:13
The Appetite of Voyeurs
Michael Edwards said:
Love it - right up my quirky street.
August 21st, 2019 03:02
Michael Edwards said:
Love it - right up my quirky street.
August 21st, 2019 03:02
The Appetite of Voyeurs
Poetic Dan said:
Well I have to look that word up and didn\'t know such a thing, thanks for watching the watches.... I think lol
August 21st, 2019 01:45
Poetic Dan said:
Well I have to look that word up and didn\'t know such a thing, thanks for watching the watches.... I think lol
August 21st, 2019 01:45
The Appetite of Voyeurs
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write N. You got your binoculars too?!
August 21st, 2019 01:44
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write N. You got your binoculars too?!
August 21st, 2019 01:44
Fly Me in Circles
Michael Edwards said:
This seems so personal and so tender - fine write N
August 20th, 2019 13:00
Michael Edwards said:
This seems so personal and so tender - fine write N
August 20th, 2019 13:00
From a Certain Distance
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
“From a Certain Distance”
So many interpretations
with this intriguing write!
Let me just say...
from East to West...
and all the rest!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura!
August 20th, 2019 07:42
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
“From a Certain Distance”
So many interpretations
with this intriguing write!
Let me just say...
from East to West...
and all the rest!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura!
August 20th, 2019 07:42
Fly Me in Circles
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Love the title of your well crafted poem!
A delightful read!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
August 20th, 2019 04:49
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Love the title of your well crafted poem!
A delightful read!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
August 20th, 2019 04:49
Fly Me in Circles
dusk arising said:
An intimate moment between lovers beautifully portrayed.
August 20th, 2019 04:27
dusk arising said:
An intimate moment between lovers beautifully portrayed.
August 20th, 2019 04:27
Fly Me in Circles
sylviasearcher said:
Even though these could well be the words of a player, they played so well indeed!
August 20th, 2019 02:30
sylviasearcher said:
Even though these could well be the words of a player, they played so well indeed!
August 20th, 2019 02:30
Fly Me in Circles
orchidee said:
Now I don\'t know these things - did she bite her lip and make your shoulder bleed at the same time? But how, at the same time?! How were her gnashers?!
And are you going round in circles? Where ya going? So many questions......
August 20th, 2019 01:39
orchidee said:
Now I don\'t know these things - did she bite her lip and make your shoulder bleed at the same time? But how, at the same time?! How were her gnashers?!
And are you going round in circles? Where ya going? So many questions......
August 20th, 2019 01:39
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