Comments received on poems by Neville



Assessing the Blues
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

A newspaper is read and thatch blank and white,,, I am confused are you.
Great inquisitive piece Neville

October 1st, 2019 05:07

Assessing the Blues
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha - - a round of applause after reading this poetic play on words my clever friend. If I ever get blue I will read this one again .......... thanking you muchly for my big smile.

October 1st, 2019 05:00

Wishes
Goldfinch60 said:

Wish we had.... , so many things that we could have done but at least some of those wishes happened otherwise you would not be wishing for more. Wonderful emotive write Neville.

Andy

October 1st, 2019 00:46

Wishes
Bragee said:

Enjoy life because time is the only thing we can never get back.

September 30th, 2019 15:39

Wishes
dusk arising said:

My old ma used to say quite often \"If wishes were horses, then beggars would ride\".
Born in 1909 what a different world she lived thru her 98 years.

Your piece gave me great reflection. Wishes eh?

September 30th, 2019 14:09

Wishes
Clara said:

Oh this is truly a reminder to not be trapped in the building of a life but to actually live it and enjoy it with the ones you love. Lovely wishful poem N. Made me smile yet feel sad at the same time.

September 30th, 2019 11:44

Wishes
orchidee said:

Pop round then - there\'s a pond with ducks not too far from us! We\'ll go and feed them. Good write N.

September 30th, 2019 10:53

Wishes
Michael Edwards said:

That goes for all of us - so busy building a career and so little time to spend - if only....!

September 30th, 2019 08:53

Wishes
Christina8 said:

A very touching write! I think we all share a few of these poignant wishes....time passes all too soon.

September 30th, 2019 06:32

Wishes
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Wish wish wish...Amazing wish👍💐

September 30th, 2019 04:55

Wishes
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh those wishes when time has had its results -- a poem touching the hearts of all who wished the same things my friend.............. such a poignancy should be shared and thank you for posting these words.............. Fay

September 30th, 2019 04:54

Childish Smiles
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write but do I detect further machinations to come.

September 30th, 2019 00:47

Childish Smiles
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

It\'s a kinda magic
Well captured Neville

September 29th, 2019 15:41

Childish Smiles
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

“Childish Smiles”

Endearing...
to say the least!

A wonderful write!

~Laura~


September 29th, 2019 08:20

Childish Smiles
orchidee said:

Should I meet her?! lol.

September 29th, 2019 07:12

Childish Smiles
Alta H Mabin said:

A lovely write, Neville.

September 29th, 2019 05:41

Childish Smiles
Fay Slimm. said:

Sweet memories run through these few lines giving a most appealing read. I can relate to the stealing of minds with short-lasting dreams my friend............................ Fay

September 29th, 2019 04:42

Yellow River
Goldfinch60 said:

A very sad emotive write, it is so sad that so many were killed in this way.

September 29th, 2019 01:49

Yellow River
Christina8 said:

A stunning and sobering write my friend...

September 28th, 2019 22:28

Yellow River
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

This is a powerful sad write! Thank you for sharing and reminding us that there is cruelty in this world...unfortunately!

~Laura~



September 28th, 2019 15:33

Yellow River
Clara said:

Wow. I read this through a couple of times. I must admit and I don\'t know much about it but I am definitely going to look into this. Really well written and expressed considering the subject matter at hand. Greatly impressed N.

September 28th, 2019 13:45

Yellow River
orchidee said:

A fine write Nev, of monstrous goings-on.

September 28th, 2019 12:37

Yellow River
kevin browne said:

I see you evolving with greatness everytime I get to read your work. This is a good fine and understandable piece...

September 28th, 2019 12:09

Yellow River
Alta H Mabin said:

Incredibly emotional. Thank you for sharing this Neville. x

September 28th, 2019 11:53

Yellow River
Fay Slimm. said:

Reading this hitherto unknown and abominable method of female birth control has been a real learning curve for this poet Nev. - - - may guilt haunt the changes made in a culture that thought so little of human life..........clearly told this shock of a piece will linger long after the read................ tearfully Fay.

September 28th, 2019 10:49

Yellow River
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Well written piece!!👍

September 28th, 2019 10:25

When Does Trust Kick In
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Wow great!!

September 28th, 2019 04:38

When Does Trust Kick In
Poetic Dan said:

Oops. Never you just try not to feed the flame of doubt, even when it\'s right you just ask do we have to scream and shout ;)

Loved every moment of this and appreciate the thoughts it gave, I think I\'ve healed a trigger but only time will tell


September 27th, 2019 18:52

When Does Trust Kick In
Clara said:

Trust unless they provide a reason not to trust. Great poem!

September 27th, 2019 08:41

When Does Trust Kick In
Christina8 said:

I think trust takes some time to kick in but trust me when I say I love this poem!!

September 27th, 2019 06:20



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