Comments received on poems by Neville
Embu
dusk arising said:
What need of words when they are only a carriage of sentiment. The prayer is within not without. For who is there to hear.
February 17th, 2019 08:56
dusk arising said:
What need of words when they are only a carriage of sentiment. The prayer is within not without. For who is there to hear.
February 17th, 2019 08:56
Embu
orchidee said:
I could do with an embu, seeing as I\'m 21 again tomorrow, N. lol. I do meditation sometimes. Nope, not to think myself into being younger!
February 17th, 2019 08:39
orchidee said:
I could do with an embu, seeing as I\'m 21 again tomorrow, N. lol. I do meditation sometimes. Nope, not to think myself into being younger!
February 17th, 2019 08:39
A Handful of Ghosts
SerenWise said:
This is very thought-provoking, nicely done
February 16th, 2019 11:06
SerenWise said:
This is very thought-provoking, nicely done
February 16th, 2019 11:06
A Handful of Ghosts
dusk arising said:
A pleasant near Miss for your heart. Not the right companion for the whole journey but a few pleasant day trips are on the cards by the look of it.
February 16th, 2019 09:41
dusk arising said:
A pleasant near Miss for your heart. Not the right companion for the whole journey but a few pleasant day trips are on the cards by the look of it.
February 16th, 2019 09:41
A Handful of Ghosts
sylviasearcher said:
I sometimes
Wonder
If I share
My bed
With more than
A handful
Of
Ghosts
And whether
There is any
Space
In that bed
Left
For me
Just a thought...
From your words
February 16th, 2019 08:29
sylviasearcher said:
I sometimes
Wonder
If I share
My bed
With more than
A handful
Of
Ghosts
And whether
There is any
Space
In that bed
Left
For me
Just a thought...
From your words
February 16th, 2019 08:29
When I am Far
sylviasearcher said:
There is something quite tender about this one.
February 15th, 2019 09:07
sylviasearcher said:
There is something quite tender about this one.
February 15th, 2019 09:07
When I am Far
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve done it again
with your magical pen.
February 15th, 2019 05:16
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve done it again
with your magical pen.
February 15th, 2019 05:16
When I am Far
dusk arising said:
Hmmmmm how lovers didst communicate their passion afore the days of telecommunications.
Wonderful thinly veiled lubrication of the libido from a talented wordsmith.
February 15th, 2019 04:17
dusk arising said:
Hmmmmm how lovers didst communicate their passion afore the days of telecommunications.
Wonderful thinly veiled lubrication of the libido from a talented wordsmith.
February 15th, 2019 04:17
When I am Far
Fay Slimm. said:
Steeped in poignancy the feel of these words lingers long after the read - another gem of a write dear Neville.
February 15th, 2019 04:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Steeped in poignancy the feel of these words lingers long after the read - another gem of a write dear Neville.
February 15th, 2019 04:14
When I am Far
orchidee said:
I best not ask what\'s going on there. Someone having fun? If so, I\'m glad at least someone is! And is the time going quick, cos it\'s said \'Time goes quick when ya are enjoying yourself\'.
February 15th, 2019 03:51
orchidee said:
I best not ask what\'s going on there. Someone having fun? If so, I\'m glad at least someone is! And is the time going quick, cos it\'s said \'Time goes quick when ya are enjoying yourself\'.
February 15th, 2019 03:51
Sans Sustenance
Goldfinch60 said:
Imagery can be a wonderful sustenance to the mind.
February 15th, 2019 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Imagery can be a wonderful sustenance to the mind.
February 15th, 2019 01:40
Sans Sustenance
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
Yes, indeed...
āSans Sustenanceā...
As you so aptly addressed those with an appetite in the authorās comment space, we all experience hunger!
Enjoyed the read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 14th, 2019 16:33
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
Yes, indeed...
āSans Sustenanceā...
As you so aptly addressed those with an appetite in the authorās comment space, we all experience hunger!
Enjoyed the read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 14th, 2019 16:33
Sans Sustenance
orchidee said:
I drag on and on....ā¦ I\'m known for it (I expect so!) heehee. Woo... should Fido bark at this poem?! lol.
February 14th, 2019 14:14
orchidee said:
I drag on and on....ā¦ I\'m known for it (I expect so!) heehee. Woo... should Fido bark at this poem?! lol.
February 14th, 2019 14:14
Sans Sustenance
dusk arising said:
Superb \'less is more\' lesson for those who drag on and on and on in their MPS offerings.
So many questions the thinking reader will contemplate here.
February 14th, 2019 09:49
dusk arising said:
Superb \'less is more\' lesson for those who drag on and on and on in their MPS offerings.
So many questions the thinking reader will contemplate here.
February 14th, 2019 09:49
Sans Sustenance
dusk arising said:
Superb \'less is more\' lesson for those who drag on and on and on in their MPS offerings.
So many questions the thinking reader will contemplate here.
February 14th, 2019 09:01
dusk arising said:
Superb \'less is more\' lesson for those who drag on and on and on in their MPS offerings.
So many questions the thinking reader will contemplate here.
February 14th, 2019 09:01
Cusp
dusk arising said:
The beach with crashing waves, relentless, powerful beauty. Always refreshes me, reminds me of humanity\'s insignificance in the universe and today i read of the sand i overlook whilst enjoying my mind trips.
More wonder yet then upon my next visit to the shore - i shall recall your piece and include the sand underfoot/bum in my freshly enhanced insignificance.
February 13th, 2019 13:49
dusk arising said:
The beach with crashing waves, relentless, powerful beauty. Always refreshes me, reminds me of humanity\'s insignificance in the universe and today i read of the sand i overlook whilst enjoying my mind trips.
More wonder yet then upon my next visit to the shore - i shall recall your piece and include the sand underfoot/bum in my freshly enhanced insignificance.
February 13th, 2019 13:49
Cusp
Fay Slimm. said:
A classic if ever I read one Neville this piece of lilting description is rich with poetic prose and imagery -- An excellent read I whisper as into my faves it goes.
February 13th, 2019 09:30
Fay Slimm. said:
A classic if ever I read one Neville this piece of lilting description is rich with poetic prose and imagery -- An excellent read I whisper as into my faves it goes.
February 13th, 2019 09:30
Cusp
Neville said:
thank you orchidee.. everything should be just fine, cheers .... N
February 13th, 2019 05:32
Neville said:
thank you orchidee.. everything should be just fine, cheers .... N
February 13th, 2019 05:32
Cusp
orchidee said:
A fine write N. But what\'s going on, on that beach? Will Fido bark at it?! He always noses around everywhere.
February 13th, 2019 05:20
orchidee said:
A fine write N. But what\'s going on, on that beach? Will Fido bark at it?! He always noses around everywhere.
February 13th, 2019 05:20
Self Harm
Goldfinch60 said:
It is such a hard thing to come to terms with, I came across it with a couple of Cadets when I was Chaplain to the Sea Cadets, all I could do was listen and hope that they would be able to see how to come to terms with it in their own way.
February 13th, 2019 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
It is such a hard thing to come to terms with, I came across it with a couple of Cadets when I was Chaplain to the Sea Cadets, all I could do was listen and hope that they would be able to see how to come to terms with it in their own way.
February 13th, 2019 01:04
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