Comments received on poems by Neville
noitcelfeR
Mil57Man said:
Short, sweet and a powerful message. From ocean to ocean, from sea to sea. I found, there\'s only one me.
February 10th, 2020 10:07
Mil57Man said:
Short, sweet and a powerful message. From ocean to ocean, from sea to sea. I found, there\'s only one me.
February 10th, 2020 10:07
noitcelfeR
Poetic Dan said:
Hahaha fantastic, I didn\'t see that one coming. Always appreciated!
February 10th, 2020 08:42
Poetic Dan said:
Hahaha fantastic, I didn\'t see that one coming. Always appreciated!
February 10th, 2020 08:42
noitcelfeR
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever my friend this turnabout word which had me working out what it meant before I read your verse. Finding oneself seems to need facing forward and inward after that jump off the shelf eh .......... will try that today......... x
February 10th, 2020 08:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever my friend this turnabout word which had me working out what it meant before I read your verse. Finding oneself seems to need facing forward and inward after that jump off the shelf eh .......... will try that today......... x
February 10th, 2020 08:22
Hark thee Lover
Daydream Believer said:
Wonderful piece, things can disappear so quickly and only once gone do we notice. There is beauty in your words, coupled with a heavy heart it feels. Saving this one because it reminds me to slow down, that life is important, those small wonders
Thank you
February 9th, 2020 04:24
Daydream Believer said:
Wonderful piece, things can disappear so quickly and only once gone do we notice. There is beauty in your words, coupled with a heavy heart it feels. Saving this one because it reminds me to slow down, that life is important, those small wonders
Thank you
February 9th, 2020 04:24
Hark thee Lover
orchidee said:
I hearkened to this fine write N.
I\'m about to read of \'seeing, but not seeing\', as in not seeing or perceiving with our minds. It can apply to spiritual and to natural things.
Hope all is well.
February 9th, 2020 03:01
orchidee said:
I hearkened to this fine write N.
I\'m about to read of \'seeing, but not seeing\', as in not seeing or perceiving with our minds. It can apply to spiritual and to natural things.
Hope all is well.
February 9th, 2020 03:01
Hark thee Lover
Fay Slimm. said:
These words of love\'s changing face are charged with such imagery that readers will not only \"harken\" but have hearts tugged with its appeal. So good to have you back posting again Neville and a very warm welcome.
February 9th, 2020 02:22
Fay Slimm. said:
These words of love\'s changing face are charged with such imagery that readers will not only \"harken\" but have hearts tugged with its appeal. So good to have you back posting again Neville and a very warm welcome.
February 9th, 2020 02:22
Hark thee Lover
dusk arising said:
This is quite quite beautiful Neville. Sight of such wonderful things as the starling mumuration brings to mind how easily we take for granted the gift of sight, our most dominant of senses.
I wish you well in this trying time.
It is good to see your words here again..... particularly when so excellent as this piece.
Into my favourites.
February 8th, 2020 19:53
dusk arising said:
This is quite quite beautiful Neville. Sight of such wonderful things as the starling mumuration brings to mind how easily we take for granted the gift of sight, our most dominant of senses.
I wish you well in this trying time.
It is good to see your words here again..... particularly when so excellent as this piece.
Into my favourites.
February 8th, 2020 19:53
War is Not for Lovers
Seek said:
Love is anathema to pain, sadness and grief, if I read your poem well. Even if my take is a little off, it was a sumptuous read.
January 8th, 2020 22:52
Seek said:
Love is anathema to pain, sadness and grief, if I read your poem well. Even if my take is a little off, it was a sumptuous read.
January 8th, 2020 22:52
Truism
Suresh said:
like your words, life is WIP - very few reach absolute contentment, wouldn\'t that be blissful!
Not to steer away from your poem
November 19th, 2019 22:58
Suresh said:
like your words, life is WIP - very few reach absolute contentment, wouldn\'t that be blissful!
Not to steer away from your poem
November 19th, 2019 22:58
Truism
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen Nev identifies results so well in these few lines with this telling account of the power Sameness can yield in a shaky relationship .
November 19th, 2019 03:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen Nev identifies results so well in these few lines with this telling account of the power Sameness can yield in a shaky relationship .
November 19th, 2019 03:51
Truism
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes very true Neville, all the time we have that \'work in progress\' we know we are alive and worth something.
November 19th, 2019 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes very true Neville, all the time we have that \'work in progress\' we know we are alive and worth something.
November 19th, 2019 02:05
Two Harbours
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times of past so eloquently portrayed in your words Neville.
November 19th, 2019 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times of past so eloquently portrayed in your words Neville.
November 19th, 2019 01:35
Two Harbours
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely island, lovely city and a great poem to do it justice.
November 18th, 2019 13:25
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely island, lovely city and a great poem to do it justice.
November 18th, 2019 13:25
Two Harbours
orchidee said:
A fine write Nev. Is this about Maltesers - a box of chocs?! heehee.
November 18th, 2019 12:20
orchidee said:
A fine write Nev. Is this about Maltesers - a box of chocs?! heehee.
November 18th, 2019 12:20
Two Harbours
Suresh said:
Very invoking of times past, eternal beauty and now broken promises.
November 18th, 2019 11:38
Suresh said:
Very invoking of times past, eternal beauty and now broken promises.
November 18th, 2019 11:38
Two Harbours
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful poem, and may I say well written!
November 18th, 2019 11:22
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful poem, and may I say well written!
November 18th, 2019 11:22
Two Harbours
Fay Slimm. said:
Two harbours could never be more achingly remembered than in this romantically tender ode - - the tale of promises made then broken wrings with regret in that final line Nev........ a heart-wrench of a read.
November 18th, 2019 09:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Two harbours could never be more achingly remembered than in this romantically tender ode - - the tale of promises made then broken wrings with regret in that final line Nev........ a heart-wrench of a read.
November 18th, 2019 09:37
War is Not for Lovers
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Neville, those that died were all loved by somebody.
November 10th, 2019 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Neville, those that died were all loved by somebody.
November 10th, 2019 00:53
War is Not for Lovers
dusk arising said:
Brilliant evocative writing. Hard hitting reality. Each of the thousands who died was a loving soul of hopes, wishes, and desires..... destined to become a number history records.
Very moving.
November 9th, 2019 15:45
dusk arising said:
Brilliant evocative writing. Hard hitting reality. Each of the thousands who died was a loving soul of hopes, wishes, and desires..... destined to become a number history records.
Very moving.
November 9th, 2019 15:45
War is Not for Lovers
Suresh said:
War is for lovers, otherwise how else would one pen such poetry
November 9th, 2019 12:08
Suresh said:
War is for lovers, otherwise how else would one pen such poetry
November 9th, 2019 12:08
War is Not for Lovers
Poetic Dan said:
War is not for lovers, although lovers do fight best
As the fire that burns within our chest, would only take arms to defend the nest
I\'ve never forgotten the first time I heard the lines, the first casualty of war, is the truth!
Beautifully written of the wars that we are still yet to learn from.
Much peace and respect
November 9th, 2019 11:40
Poetic Dan said:
War is not for lovers, although lovers do fight best
As the fire that burns within our chest, would only take arms to defend the nest
I\'ve never forgotten the first time I heard the lines, the first casualty of war, is the truth!
Beautifully written of the wars that we are still yet to learn from.
Much peace and respect
November 9th, 2019 11:40
War is Not for Lovers
Fay Slimm. said:
The appropriate picture your emotive pen paints wrings tears from my eyes - - war most certainly is not for lovers my friend........... Fay
November 9th, 2019 11:01
Fay Slimm. said:
The appropriate picture your emotive pen paints wrings tears from my eyes - - war most certainly is not for lovers my friend........... Fay
November 9th, 2019 11:01
Take Me Somewhere
Goldfinch60 said:
She obviously wants you all the time and anywhere. (It is uncomfortable on the stairs though).
November 6th, 2019 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
She obviously wants you all the time and anywhere. (It is uncomfortable on the stairs though).
November 6th, 2019 02:00
Take Me Somewhere
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
She sounds a bit needy Nev tell her to take the bus
November 5th, 2019 16:26
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
She sounds a bit needy Nev tell her to take the bus
November 5th, 2019 16:26
Take Me Somewhere
Christina8 said:
Fantastic write Neville...so playfully written! Well done!
November 5th, 2019 16:21
Christina8 said:
Fantastic write Neville...so playfully written! Well done!
November 5th, 2019 16:21
Take Me Somewhere
PoeticBiscuit said:
Sounds like someone’s enjoying themselves,
Great write!
November 5th, 2019 15:06
PoeticBiscuit said:
Sounds like someone’s enjoying themselves,
Great write!
November 5th, 2019 15:06
Take Me Somewhere
Aislinn Wilson said:
How delightfully playful. Great write.
November 5th, 2019 14:11
Aislinn Wilson said:
How delightfully playful. Great write.
November 5th, 2019 14:11
Take Me Somewhere
orchidee said:
She\'s a saucy lass - or mare! heehee. I\'m gonna dash to meet her! lol.
November 5th, 2019 12:34
orchidee said:
She\'s a saucy lass - or mare! heehee. I\'m gonna dash to meet her! lol.
November 5th, 2019 12:34
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