Comments received on poems by Neville
Too Long In the Tooth
Accidental Poet said:
Words unsaid always seem to lead to regret. Well penned N. đź‘Ť
May 31st, 2024 03:15
Accidental Poet said:
Words unsaid always seem to lead to regret. Well penned N. đź‘Ť
May 31st, 2024 03:15
Oh’ to Be Vaporized
orchidee said:
Vaporised like a puff of smoke from those vape thingys. A wish from me for KP! lol.
May 31st, 2024 01:34
orchidee said:
Vaporised like a puff of smoke from those vape thingys. A wish from me for KP! lol.
May 31st, 2024 01:34
Too Long In the Tooth
MendedFences27 said:
Closure upon a relationship is a heartfelt and wonderful thing. Yet, we can survive and flourish without it. Perhaps it is best, to leave well enough alone. Rekindling a fire upon ashes can get one burnt.
\"I could feel it in the tone of your broken voice,\" may be a warning.
An honest and heartfelt poem. Very personal and biographical in nature. Avoid ghosts from the past - Phil A.
May 30th, 2024 14:58
MendedFences27 said:
Closure upon a relationship is a heartfelt and wonderful thing. Yet, we can survive and flourish without it. Perhaps it is best, to leave well enough alone. Rekindling a fire upon ashes can get one burnt.
\"I could feel it in the tone of your broken voice,\" may be a warning.
An honest and heartfelt poem. Very personal and biographical in nature. Avoid ghosts from the past - Phil A.
May 30th, 2024 14:58
Too Long In the Tooth
Doggerel Dave said:
I like to assemble my own take with words I choose, Neville, but:
\"Let it be, let it be, let it be, let it be
There will be an answer, let it be\"
May 30th, 2024 07:05
Doggerel Dave said:
I like to assemble my own take with words I choose, Neville, but:
\"Let it be, let it be, let it be, let it be
There will be an answer, let it be\"
May 30th, 2024 07:05
Too Long In the Tooth
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful write Neville.While closures are best, they don’t always happen. Speaks to me about ghosts from the past.
May 30th, 2024 06:31
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful write Neville.While closures are best, they don’t always happen. Speaks to me about ghosts from the past.
May 30th, 2024 06:31
A Day Out in The Country
jarcher54 said:
Light-hearted on the surface, but a gut punch of a lament for a more peaceful, undisturbed time of tradition and natural rhythms. Sigh.
May 29th, 2024 17:53
jarcher54 said:
Light-hearted on the surface, but a gut punch of a lament for a more peaceful, undisturbed time of tradition and natural rhythms. Sigh.
May 29th, 2024 17:53
So Very Lightly Hued
MendedFences27 said:
Like every fire ever created it is reduced to ashes, but during its passion it shone brighter than fire itself. Your poem describes a maturing relationship in the best way possible, loved it. - Phil A.
May 29th, 2024 16:27
MendedFences27 said:
Like every fire ever created it is reduced to ashes, but during its passion it shone brighter than fire itself. Your poem describes a maturing relationship in the best way possible, loved it. - Phil A.
May 29th, 2024 16:27
So Very Lightly Hued
Bobby O said:
We fade to a status that can’t match the world we inhabit.
May 29th, 2024 11:08
Bobby O said:
We fade to a status that can’t match the world we inhabit.
May 29th, 2024 11:08
So Very Lightly Hued
Eugene S. said:
A pale moon within a husk of straw. Love the imagery, and where you went with this!
May 29th, 2024 03:55
Eugene S. said:
A pale moon within a husk of straw. Love the imagery, and where you went with this!
May 29th, 2024 03:55
So Very Lightly Hued
Cassie58 said:
This little piece of brevity is exquisite in both its sadness and delicate beauty. Where the ashes lay strewn in the grate, there once burned and thrived the heat of a memorable fire. The moon knows that, sees everything and is eternal. The glow of the moon is dazzling. Have a lovely Wednesday Neville.
May 29th, 2024 02:21
Cassie58 said:
This little piece of brevity is exquisite in both its sadness and delicate beauty. Where the ashes lay strewn in the grate, there once burned and thrived the heat of a memorable fire. The moon knows that, sees everything and is eternal. The glow of the moon is dazzling. Have a lovely Wednesday Neville.
May 29th, 2024 02:21
So Very Lightly Hued
Goldfinch60 said:
May that moon always shine on your life Neville.
Andy
May 29th, 2024 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
May that moon always shine on your life Neville.
Andy
May 29th, 2024 01:06
That Time of Year Again
Goldfinch60 said:
So true and so wonderful to believe that Nature will always be there for as as it increases.
Andy
May 29th, 2024 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
So true and so wonderful to believe that Nature will always be there for as as it increases.
Andy
May 29th, 2024 00:49
That Time of Year Again
MendedFences27 said:
We\'ve got a couple of doves nesting about ten feet from our home on a beam the supports the overhanging deck. They certainly \"coo\" a lot. It must be spring.
Funny how Nature pairs them in the spring and then they part. I guess some species stay together through many seasons. A great observation upon Nature. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 28th, 2024 21:39
MendedFences27 said:
We\'ve got a couple of doves nesting about ten feet from our home on a beam the supports the overhanging deck. They certainly \"coo\" a lot. It must be spring.
Funny how Nature pairs them in the spring and then they part. I guess some species stay together through many seasons. A great observation upon Nature. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 28th, 2024 21:39
That Time of Year Again
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful image you paint of these beauriful creatures. The flight of a bird is breathtaking in every sense. I am greeted by a chorus of birdsong each morning as I walk, and never fail to see a cardinal perched atop a telephone pole, singing its heart out, just have to stop, listen and admire. The love of nature shines your words my friend.
May 28th, 2024 13:54
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful image you paint of these beauriful creatures. The flight of a bird is breathtaking in every sense. I am greeted by a chorus of birdsong each morning as I walk, and never fail to see a cardinal perched atop a telephone pole, singing its heart out, just have to stop, listen and admire. The love of nature shines your words my friend.
May 28th, 2024 13:54
That Time of Year Again
Doggerel Dave said:
My partner feeds the birds (I no longer wish to debate this – she does it!) As a result, my visits to her place are marked by a cacophony of bird calls: cockatoos, lorikeets, magpies and, yes, pigeons…. My point here is thanks for the reminder that they court and breed, that might account for their numbers….and the free feed of course….
May 28th, 2024 08:58
Doggerel Dave said:
My partner feeds the birds (I no longer wish to debate this – she does it!) As a result, my visits to her place are marked by a cacophony of bird calls: cockatoos, lorikeets, magpies and, yes, pigeons…. My point here is thanks for the reminder that they court and breed, that might account for their numbers….and the free feed of course….
May 28th, 2024 08:58
That Time of Year Again
Cassie58 said:
There is something mesmerizing about looking at birds in flight. The freedom of the skies. I love the movement you have put into this piece and I do believe these may be swifts in courtship Neville. You have created some fab imagery here.
May 28th, 2024 03:21
Cassie58 said:
There is something mesmerizing about looking at birds in flight. The freedom of the skies. I love the movement you have put into this piece and I do believe these may be swifts in courtship Neville. You have created some fab imagery here.
May 28th, 2024 03:21
That Time of Year Again
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I\'m The Birdman. Do we find them in pairs?! lol.
May 28th, 2024 01:47
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I\'m The Birdman. Do we find them in pairs?! lol.
May 28th, 2024 01:47
Impressions of A Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:
Some just see nothing
Or don\'t believe in our lives
But those who care do.
Andy
May 28th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Some just see nothing
Or don\'t believe in our lives
But those who care do.
Andy
May 28th, 2024 01:19
Impressions of A Senryu
Cassie58 said:
Your light continues to shine. You are far from invisible. Good morning. Happy Tuesday Neville.
May 27th, 2024 23:49
Cassie58 said:
Your light continues to shine. You are far from invisible. Good morning. Happy Tuesday Neville.
May 27th, 2024 23:49
Impressions of A Senryu
Thomas W Case said:
I see you and read you. Keep on going, brother.
May 27th, 2024 16:59
Thomas W Case said:
I see you and read you. Keep on going, brother.
May 27th, 2024 16:59
Impressions of A Senryu
MendedFences27 said:
Where were you? In a land of giants?
This caused be to wonder about being unnoticeable. Is it a good or bad thing.
I know these are hard to pen and have them make sense and offer a clear thought, loved this one -Phil A
May 27th, 2024 14:41
MendedFences27 said:
Where were you? In a land of giants?
This caused be to wonder about being unnoticeable. Is it a good or bad thing.
I know these are hard to pen and have them make sense and offer a clear thought, loved this one -Phil A
May 27th, 2024 14:41
Impressions of A Senryu
orchidee said:
I been invisible nearly, mucking about with blips on here today. KP\'s jinxed it, I bet! lol.
May 27th, 2024 14:39
orchidee said:
I been invisible nearly, mucking about with blips on here today. KP\'s jinxed it, I bet! lol.
May 27th, 2024 14:39
That Gift of A FeelingÂ
Thomas W Case said:
love makes the world go round. You capture the rapture of love here.
May 26th, 2024 23:05
Thomas W Case said:
love makes the world go round. You capture the rapture of love here.
May 26th, 2024 23:05
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