Comments received on poems by Neville



Remembering An Orange Room
Accidental Poet said:

Ahh, but at least you have the memories. 🌹

September 27th, 2024 08:35

Remembering An Orange Room
Jerry Reynolds said:

A beautiful love story, Neville. The tragic twist did not take away its sweetness. Well, done.

September 27th, 2024 07:15

Thinking Back on Polly
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Neville.

Andy

September 27th, 2024 01:47

Thinking Back on Polly
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 26th, 2024 12:32

Thinking Back on Polly
orchidee said:

Good write N.

September 26th, 2024 09:50

Thinking Back on Polly
Jerry Reynolds said:

Sorry for your loss, Neville.

September 26th, 2024 08:27

Thinking Back on Polly
sorenbarrett said:

The things that we don\'t know until too late and how they make changes in things that could have been or things that become. Sad story my friend a bit haunting.

September 26th, 2024 07:54

Thinking Back on Polly
Cassie58 said:

Remembering Polly, and also introducing her tragically short life to your readers. It is hard to comprehend sometimes just how cruel life can be. You lost a lovely young friend before she had time to fully bloom. This morning, another young boy 15 years old was knifed to death. More devastated family and friends. Dear Neville, a most poignant write. On a school bus. ……..A rose from me 🌹

September 26th, 2024 07:22

A Different Kettle of Fish
Tom Dylan said:

Completely agree, Neville. Things have moved on so quickly, but not for the better. A fine write.

September 26th, 2024 06:14

Thinking Back on Polly
Doggerel Dave said:

Yeh - can\'t do it when it is early and too raw.

September 26th, 2024 06:07

Thinking Back on Polly
Doggerel Dave said:

This a case study, Neville? When ‘sliding doors’ becomes a matter of life or death, then it is more than even a tragedy.

September 26th, 2024 05:37

A Different Kettle of Fish
sorenbarrett said:

I wonder it our ancesters spoke of the times before fire? I often look back on (those days) and just feel happy that I was able to live them. I got the feeling Neville and have to agree

September 25th, 2024 20:40

A Different Kettle of Fish
Thomas W Case said:

So very true, my friend.

September 25th, 2024 14:12

A Different Kettle of Fish
orchidee said:

Yes, I of course, was on \'The Rocket\' steam train when it first reached the terrifying speed of 29mph, I think it was.
I give KP a literal kettle of fish for her dinner! lol.

September 25th, 2024 11:01

A Different Kettle of Fish
Doggerel Dave said:


“Those were the days, my friend, We thought …… “
It’s just change, Neville..gotta have change – even if I personally don’t bloody like much of it…



September 25th, 2024 09:21

A Different Kettle of Fish
Jerry Reynolds said:

Oh, the tune we played then. Dear Neville. What a kettle of fish it was. You could make love and not die. Watch TV and not cry.

September 25th, 2024 07:56

A Neighbour Loved
Tom Dylan said:

Just beautiful, Neville. A fine write.

September 25th, 2024 07:49

A Neighbour Loved
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Neville, those love of yesterday are never forgotten.

Andy

September 25th, 2024 01:42

A Neighbour Loved
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 24th, 2024 14:39

A Neighbour Loved
Thomas W Case said:

So beautiful. Well done.

September 24th, 2024 14:07

A Neighbour Loved
Doggerel Dave said:

Maps a long relationship, its constancy so very well, Neville. I felt that one.

September 24th, 2024 08:41

A Neighbour Loved
Jerry Reynolds said:

Neville, Neville, With talk like that you will not get mis-laid.

September 24th, 2024 07:09

Lost Back in Africa .. and On Selling the VW
Tom Dylan said:

A couple of belters, Neville. And 2 for 1 poetry, love it. :-)

September 24th, 2024 05:25

A Neighbour Loved
sorenbarrett said:

Relationships over the years and how some things never change. Although the flesh rots the emotions remain fresh, a child\'s heart in an old body. Absolutely lovely

September 24th, 2024 05:09

A Neighbour Loved
Cassie58 said:

Who would not want to hear those whispered words? You break hearts with your poetry. You are certainly pressing all the write buttons with this one Neville. There’s poetry and then there is this. Beautiful.

September 24th, 2024 04:01

A Neighbour Loved
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Beautiful write Neville! 👍🙂

September 24th, 2024 03:00

A Neighbour Loved
orchidee said:

Good write N.

September 24th, 2024 02:31

Lost Back in Africa .. and On Selling the VW
Goldfinch60 said:

Two fine writes Neville.
The first shows that moment when something you see brings back memories and the second shows that \'things\' cannot overrate love.

Andy

September 24th, 2024 01:12

Grand Mort .. & .. The Transient Value of Slaves
Cassie58 said:

Yes, there’s cheerful. We will all turn to dust one day, wherever we are and whatever our rank. No one escapes the reaper, rich or poor. Your second poem reminds me of twelve years a slave. The awful existence of those young women owned by their slave masters, nothing but shameful. They were whipped as well. Heart breaking. Sad to say modern day slavery is going on under our own noses today , while some keep reflecting on 300 years ago. They need to wake up and smell the coffee. Well penned poems.

September 23rd, 2024 13:56

Lost Back in Africa .. and On Selling the VW
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant.

September 23rd, 2024 10:48



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