Comments received on poems by Neville



Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Teddy.15 said:

Narcasism at a new level dear Nev, there are unfortunately more than a few minds in this world that would have this exact pleasure. My own sister came to mind. 🌹

May 8th, 2024 05:14

Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Doggerel Dave said:

Wot? Not done the washing up again?

May 8th, 2024 03:12

Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive sad words Neville, nobody deserves to in our world.

Andy

May 8th, 2024 01:51

The Spilling of Orion’s Last Great Secret
Goldfinch60 said:

Looking up to the night sky brings glory, hope and beauty Neville.

Andy

May 8th, 2024 01:44

Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
orchidee said:

KP sweats and melts her botox on warmer days - she would! lol.

May 8th, 2024 01:32

Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
2781 said:

Sounds like torture

May 8th, 2024 01:19

The Spilling of Orion’s Last Great Secret
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful imagery. I can see it.

May 7th, 2024 11:24

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Tom Dylan said:

A lovely sentiment, Neville, just perfectly captured.

May 7th, 2024 09:58

The Spilling of Orion’s Last Great Secret
Accidental Poet said:

Blessed be they who cast their gaze into the star filled skies wondering of all the unanswered questions. Awesome poem N. 😊👍

May 7th, 2024 08:59

The Spilling of Orion’s Last Great Secret
2781 said:

\"To whom will you compare me?
or who is my equal?\" Say the Holy One.
Lift up your eyes and look to the heavens:
Who created all these?
He who brings out the starry host one by one
and calls them all by name.
Because of his great power and mighty strength,
not one of them is missing.

May 7th, 2024 07:47

The Spilling of Orion’s Last Great Secret
Doggerel Dave said:

You poor buggers in the northern hemisphere have no idea. To look , away from city and other distracting earth-bound light at the ‘milky way’ – the galaxy to which our sun and hence we are bound, from our viewpoint south is on its own both a humbling and wonderful experience.
And that is just a small part of our galaxy, never mind the billions of others in our own universe. And……….
Thanks Neville.


May 7th, 2024 07:15

The Spilling of Orion’s Last Great Secret
Cassie58 said:

Star gazing in the heavens looking for Orion’s Belt. Her Majesty must be a very close neighbour. I reckon a dazzler of a star. . Can you see it without a telescope? What’s the secret Neville? Just asking as a star gazer myself:) Happy Tuesday.

May 7th, 2024 05:50

The Spilling of Orion’s Last Great Secret
orchidee said:

An atmospheric write there N - pun intended.

May 7th, 2024 02:22

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Goldfinch60 said:

It must be love as life is like this when love is in the air Neville.

Andy

May 7th, 2024 01:04

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work and use of the senses. This tastes good.

May 6th, 2024 14:45

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Teddy.15 said:

And now the resident romance poet, 🤣 sounds to me someone has put the spring in your step dear Nev. I\'m definitely enjoying those muse. 🌹

May 6th, 2024 11:25

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Cassie58 said:

I detect some spring in your summer steps Neville. May your days always be summer. Happy bank holiday Monday. What romantic poetry you pen poet.

May 6th, 2024 02:52

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
orchidee said:

And - can ya beat a bit of coincidence? I\'m waffling now. lol.

May 6th, 2024 02:20

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
orchidee said:

Yes, I did a similar poem for KP. It began:
\'Can you explain dearest, why there is a dullness to each new day, and why I got further downhill every day married to you?!\' lol

May 6th, 2024 02:19

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
2781 said:

His glory goes on...

May 6th, 2024 02:13

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Doggerel Dave said:

Obviously going well, Neville. The flavour is sweet.

May 6th, 2024 01:37

Le Plagiaire
Goldfinch60 said:

Poems can come from so many different places Neville.

Andy

May 6th, 2024 01:08

Le Plagiaire
Cassie58 said:

You know this is so incredibly romantic. Writing love poems for a love. He could easily be forgiven for pinching a few words that inspired him from another source. I’d forgive him , even though the author of what was copied, might not be so bloomin soft. Lovely Neville.

May 5th, 2024 14:14

Hush Now Little Wren
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous.

May 5th, 2024 13:59

Le Plagiaire
Thomas W Case said:

Amazing work.

May 5th, 2024 13:59

Le Plagiaire
Accidental Poet said:

Proof that beautiful poetry can come from the least expected places. 😊🌹

May 5th, 2024 10:45

Le Plagiaire
Teddy.15 said:

Oh my, oh so very romantic 😍

May 5th, 2024 05:52

Le Plagiaire
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh come on , mate I ain\'t got much time... if you are talking about a plagiarist, then say so. I ain\'t got time to get a translation of all this Frenchie stuff.....
PS Please do your best to encourage orchi along the correct path....

May 5th, 2024 04:52

Le Plagiaire
orchidee said:

The dreaded plagiarism? Sounds like \'plague\'.
A guy pinched another poets words, posted them, complete with his own photo, saying he had written it. He incurred poets wrath.

May 5th, 2024 02:46

What Makes Us Broken
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Neville, others should not be able to hurt any true love relationships.

Andy

May 5th, 2024 01:15



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