Comments received on poems by Neville



What Else is A Metaphor
orchidee said:

The vole is funny? Or that corny metaphor joke?!

July 15th, 2024 05:09

What Else is A Metaphor
orchidee said:

I\'m a vole today - anagram of love. Another in those small critters category.

July 15th, 2024 03:31

What Else is A Metaphor
orchidee said:

They ask me - Why did you meet-her- for - metaphor! (KP, that is). Not another corny joke from me. lol.

July 15th, 2024 03:30

Over Easy
Christina8 said:

An absolutely wonderful write, Neville.
I love that you asked the question as you were probably hungry for her either way....

July 14th, 2024 16:27

Over Easy
Bella Shepard said:

Ooooo, You gave me a smile and then a chuckle. Such a witty double entendre, my complements to the chef.

July 14th, 2024 09:52

The Way of Us
Cassie58 said:

In time we are a mote of dust, a pin prick in an ocean sky.

While we are here we are memory builders. If we are lucky some of those may remain after we have left this plane. A short poem which is brimful of wisdom and meaning.


July 14th, 2024 07:55

Over Easy
Accidental Poet said:

Nothing like a quick wit girl N. ๐Ÿ˜

July 14th, 2024 05:43

Over Easy
2781 said:

It takes me all night to do what I did do all night.

July 14th, 2024 02:26

Over Easy
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Neville.

Andy

July 14th, 2024 01:49

The Way of Us
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words Neville.

Andy

July 14th, 2024 01:42

Over Easy
orchidee said:

I might swoon! lol.

July 14th, 2024 01:24

Over Easy
Doggerel Dave said:

Be prepared, that\'s the Girl Guide\'s marching song...
(Apologies to Tom Lehrer..)

July 14th, 2024 01:05

The Way of Us
Thomas W Case said:

You create a mood here. Excellent work.

July 13th, 2024 18:43

The Way of Us
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'m a nothing speck in eternity or infinity. Unremembered, unremarkable. But I\'ve largely enjoyed this sliver of experience.
Thanks for this provocation, Neville.....

July 13th, 2024 17:17

The Way of Us
MendedFences27 said:

Someone\'s past, present, and future summed up in three lines. From full, to empty, to remembered. Insightful and wise. Much enjoyed. - Phil A.

July 13th, 2024 15:37

The Way of Us
Accidental Poet said:

Wonderful words of wisdom N. Hindsight is always enlightening. ๐Ÿ‘

July 13th, 2024 11:41

The Way of Us
Christina8 said:

I liked this short write...memories are wonderful things too..

July 13th, 2024 11:31

The Way of Us
Bella Shepard said:

The illusion of life is memory, without it we simply \"are\". This one hits a special spot, deeply felt. Great verse my friend!

July 13th, 2024 11:11

For All Those Wearing Pink
Cassie58 said:

Very close to my heart. I count my blessings and am reminded of friends who werenโ€™t so fortunate, and lost out to this awful disease. Your new anthology arrived from Amazon this morning. Yes, I have all eleven. Pleased to support such worthwhile charities Neville.

July 13th, 2024 10:34

The Way of Us
orchidee said:

How was it tomorrow? Eh? I\'m confused of what say it is. lol.

July 13th, 2024 10:23

The Way of Us
2781 said:

It\'s a hard one to like, but I liked it.

July 13th, 2024 09:20

The Way of Us
Tony36 said:

Amazing write

July 13th, 2024 09:14

What Women Want
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic. Hysterical work.

July 12th, 2024 18:23

What Women Want
Doggerel Dave said:

Much poetry here Irrespective of gender is, in my not very humble opinion, deviant inasmuch as it avoids reality in all manner of ways. What after all is a metaphor other than an attempt to avoid, or make pretty, stark reality?
So take that, Sir!!!!!!!!!


July 12th, 2024 18:19

What Women Want
orchidee said:

I dunno what they want. And I\'m unlikely to find out, being married to KP. lol.

July 12th, 2024 11:26

What Women Want
Accidental Poet said:

Ya know N, I\'ve been contemplating this my whole life. I\'ve come to the conclusion there\'s no single answer. You just have to ask them, \"What do you want?\" ๐Ÿค”

July 12th, 2024 11:03

What Women Want
MendedFences27 said:

Wow! If word gets out about this poem, you may become a lonely man. Regardless of the truth you speak. My take is that deviant poetry is rather common. Most poets leap across boundaries with relish. ( Add a little mustard and you\'ve got a wiener ) Deviant comment.
As regards your poem, it speaks a truth and Wows with the last line. Enjoyed. - Phil A.

July 12th, 2024 08:39

What Women Want
2781 said:

Sounds like fishing in murky waters..

July 12th, 2024 08:14

Temporary Blemishes
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done, mate.

July 12th, 2024 06:45

Temporary Blemishes
orchidee said:

Explain no more of that ridge, or I will swoon! lol.

July 12th, 2024 01:22



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