Comments received on poems by Neville
Lost Back in Africa .. and On Selling the VW
sorenbarrett said:
Both contain that same air of association one has with items that bring memories and thoughts of another time. Both also have lingering love that shadows the present. Love is one of the great motivators and it lingers long after it has past. Lovely Neville
September 23rd, 2024 07:50
sorenbarrett said:
Both contain that same air of association one has with items that bring memories and thoughts of another time. Both also have lingering love that shadows the present. Love is one of the great motivators and it lingers long after it has past. Lovely Neville
September 23rd, 2024 07:50
Grand Mort .. & .. The Transient Value of Slaves
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes we will all turn to dust eventually, nothing can stop that Neville.
Some people just cannot see the good that others supply them.
Andy
September 23rd, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes we will all turn to dust eventually, nothing can stop that Neville.
Some people just cannot see the good that others supply them.
Andy
September 23rd, 2024 01:23
Grand Mort .. & .. The Transient Value of Slaves
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, I stands corrected, having read the previous commentary before opening my proverbial trap, mistakenly believing you endorsed Political Correctness, as it\'s termed (which, incidentally, I do NOT).
\"...dust to dust--\" was nevir pritty, but it allus happens, exceptin\' in a rarer few instances.
Me likes this prettily rendered discussion on the painful reality haunting all, its none too subtle poignancy trailing all we do. Thank you very much for sharing, good Sir.
September 22nd, 2024 13:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, I stands corrected, having read the previous commentary before opening my proverbial trap, mistakenly believing you endorsed Political Correctness, as it\'s termed (which, incidentally, I do NOT).
\"...dust to dust--\" was nevir pritty, but it allus happens, exceptin\' in a rarer few instances.
Me likes this prettily rendered discussion on the painful reality haunting all, its none too subtle poignancy trailing all we do. Thank you very much for sharing, good Sir.
September 22nd, 2024 13:40
Grand Mort .. & .. The Transient Value of Slaves
orchidee said:
Good writes N. Me 3 brain cells can\'t cope with TWO poems per day, that may be on the cryptic side, or that have hidden meanings. lol.
September 22nd, 2024 10:25
orchidee said:
Good writes N. Me 3 brain cells can\'t cope with TWO poems per day, that may be on the cryptic side, or that have hidden meanings. lol.
September 22nd, 2024 10:25
Grand Mort .. & .. The Transient Value of Slaves
Doggerel Dave said:
- I\'m sure she will...I hope to conk out gently or with a small amount of help....
- 2024, and slavery alive and well...
- I hope so, but I\'ve neva known my PC to stay sorted for too long, like it doesn\'t want to bore me or saddle me with too many fixed habits....
Thanks Neville
September 22nd, 2024 07:33
Doggerel Dave said:
- I\'m sure she will...I hope to conk out gently or with a small amount of help....
- 2024, and slavery alive and well...
- I hope so, but I\'ve neva known my PC to stay sorted for too long, like it doesn\'t want to bore me or saddle me with too many fixed habits....
Thanks Neville
September 22nd, 2024 07:33
Grand Mort .. & .. The Transient Value of Slaves
sorenbarrett said:
PC wearing out? Mine went that way a couple of weeks ago. I took this a different way unil I read your note. I felt as if you were talking of my brain and it wearing out no longer able to produce poems. Maybe this was set in my head by the first poem and that the spores left behind will devour me. great write Neville
September 22nd, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
PC wearing out? Mine went that way a couple of weeks ago. I took this a different way unil I read your note. I felt as if you were talking of my brain and it wearing out no longer able to produce poems. Maybe this was set in my head by the first poem and that the spores left behind will devour me. great write Neville
September 22nd, 2024 06:02
If the Cap Don\'t Fit .. & .. Glare
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good ones Neville, but I hope that whisky was not my Laphroaig.
Andy
September 22nd, 2024 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good ones Neville, but I hope that whisky was not my Laphroaig.
Andy
September 22nd, 2024 01:15
If the Cap Don\'t Fit .. & .. Glare
Dove said:
Silly me, here I am thinking pill caps, bottle caps, darn things hurt my hand twisting them off. Most definitely give the caps you wear away,
September 21st, 2024 11:11
Dove said:
Silly me, here I am thinking pill caps, bottle caps, darn things hurt my hand twisting them off. Most definitely give the caps you wear away,
September 21st, 2024 11:11
If the Cap Don\'t Fit .. & .. Glare
orchidee said:
You know old Orchi\'s trying to wear this cap that\'s too big for him. He can\'t see where he\'s going. Doh!
Well, he wears it so he won\'t see KP much. lol.
September 21st, 2024 05:52
orchidee said:
You know old Orchi\'s trying to wear this cap that\'s too big for him. He can\'t see where he\'s going. Doh!
Well, he wears it so he won\'t see KP much. lol.
September 21st, 2024 05:52
If the Cap Don\'t Fit .. & .. Glare
sorenbarrett said:
Almost got me Neville I think I have left visual field neglect. Almost missed the two for one special. Hats I have many and switch them all the time. I have to admit that some don\'t serve me well and I don\'t look good in others so I pass them off there are even some that I keep and don\'t wear. As for that whiskey sour I love em and hate when they are too bittersweet, Nicely done.
September 21st, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Almost got me Neville I think I have left visual field neglect. Almost missed the two for one special. Hats I have many and switch them all the time. I have to admit that some don\'t serve me well and I don\'t look good in others so I pass them off there are even some that I keep and don\'t wear. As for that whiskey sour I love em and hate when they are too bittersweet, Nicely done.
September 21st, 2024 05:27
If the Cap Don\'t Fit .. & .. Glare
Doggerel Dave said:
But if you is still \'ere, can\'t be nothing much wrong with your PC...
However, technical issues aside, your premium page entry here does highlight a common phenomenon, to whit promotion or elevation to a level above the proud wearer\'s level of competence..... Economic considerations sometimes complicate the issue......
Thanks for the freebee, Neville. 😊
September 21st, 2024 04:21
Doggerel Dave said:
But if you is still \'ere, can\'t be nothing much wrong with your PC...
However, technical issues aside, your premium page entry here does highlight a common phenomenon, to whit promotion or elevation to a level above the proud wearer\'s level of competence..... Economic considerations sometimes complicate the issue......
Thanks for the freebee, Neville. 😊
September 21st, 2024 04:21
The Full Five and Three Quarters .. & Gloat
Accidental Poet said:
Try using logic on your PC. PCs can be replaced. 😁
September 21st, 2024 02:07
Accidental Poet said:
Try using logic on your PC. PCs can be replaced. 😁
September 21st, 2024 02:07
The Full Five and Three Quarters .. & Gloat
Goldfinch60 said:
Two fine ones Neville, I hope yout can get your |PC sorted.
Andy
September 21st, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Two fine ones Neville, I hope yout can get your |PC sorted.
Andy
September 21st, 2024 01:52
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
Bobby O said:
I’m still sending to detachment from feeling the first piece presents. For me it is a perfect commentary that was brave enough and confident enough to stamp efficacy with the most powerful trump card in history , a mothers love
September 20th, 2024 23:49
Bobby O said:
I’m still sending to detachment from feeling the first piece presents. For me it is a perfect commentary that was brave enough and confident enough to stamp efficacy with the most powerful trump card in history , a mothers love
September 20th, 2024 23:49
The Full Five and Three Quarters .. & Gloat
orchidee said:
You can thank me five and three quarterly too! heehee.
September 20th, 2024 14:19
orchidee said:
You can thank me five and three quarterly too! heehee.
September 20th, 2024 14:19
They Lied About the Five Minute Warning
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of grammer school during the cold war when we had drills of hiding under our desks for a neuclear attack as if that would do any good.
September 20th, 2024 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of grammer school during the cold war when we had drills of hiding under our desks for a neuclear attack as if that would do any good.
September 20th, 2024 05:35
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
Tom Dylan said:
Some powerful pieces, Nevlle and like the two for one offer. Cheers, Tom
September 20th, 2024 05:18
Tom Dylan said:
Some powerful pieces, Nevlle and like the two for one offer. Cheers, Tom
September 20th, 2024 05:18
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good poems Neville, those Cryo babes to my mind are unthinkable.
Love could solve all in the second one.
Andy
September 20th, 2024 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good poems Neville, those Cryo babes to my mind are unthinkable.
Love could solve all in the second one.
Andy
September 20th, 2024 01:18
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
orchidee said:
I am not here - I am frozen in ice. That must be how I\'m millions of years old. Goldfinch is too. lol.
September 19th, 2024 13:01
orchidee said:
I am not here - I am frozen in ice. That must be how I\'m millions of years old. Goldfinch is too. lol.
September 19th, 2024 13:01
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
Accidental Poet said:
They may not be related, but they are equally well penned N. 😉👍
September 19th, 2024 08:55
Accidental Poet said:
They may not be related, but they are equally well penned N. 😉👍
September 19th, 2024 08:55
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
Cassie58 said:
I do like your two for the price of one days Neville. Nothing like a bargain.
Your Cryo Babes, makes me shiver. I really don’t approve of the meddling that is already going on, yet alone what is around the corner. I can only say, that I am happy, I am not going to be around to see it all. It is positively scary. It is totally unethical in my book.
As to The Hurting Game, this comes across as very competitive. I think it’s a good idea to call a truce and take a breather. I would imagine that this scenario is perfectly common place in some households. Not my ideal, but hey whatever works for some. Best kiss and makeup by bedtime:)
Have a happy Thursday.
September 19th, 2024 08:41
Cassie58 said:
I do like your two for the price of one days Neville. Nothing like a bargain.
Your Cryo Babes, makes me shiver. I really don’t approve of the meddling that is already going on, yet alone what is around the corner. I can only say, that I am happy, I am not going to be around to see it all. It is positively scary. It is totally unethical in my book.
As to The Hurting Game, this comes across as very competitive. I think it’s a good idea to call a truce and take a breather. I would imagine that this scenario is perfectly common place in some households. Not my ideal, but hey whatever works for some. Best kiss and makeup by bedtime:)
Have a happy Thursday.
September 19th, 2024 08:41
Now Out in The Open
Tom Dylan said:
A fascinating piece, Neville. You really paint the picture, convey the emotion, and the last line just nailed it, mate. A fine write.
September 19th, 2024 07:31
Tom Dylan said:
A fascinating piece, Neville. You really paint the picture, convey the emotion, and the last line just nailed it, mate. A fine write.
September 19th, 2024 07:31
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m sure glad you included that statement about the two being not related or I would have been all day scratching my head. The first is a most interesting thought that had not occured to me before. Maybe people won\'t believe in parenthood in those days. The second I can feel as if I had said it myself. Nicely worded
September 19th, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m sure glad you included that statement about the two being not related or I would have been all day scratching my head. The first is a most interesting thought that had not occured to me before. Maybe people won\'t believe in parenthood in those days. The second I can feel as if I had said it myself. Nicely worded
September 19th, 2024 05:27
Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game
Doggerel Dave said:
So two responses, Neville:
- I personally find all reproductive technology pretty repulsive. I am much in harmony with this one.
- A recognizable dynamic in some relationships I have observed…
I felt comfortable with those two – they felt real in their implied rebukes.
September 19th, 2024 02:42
Doggerel Dave said:
So two responses, Neville:
- I personally find all reproductive technology pretty repulsive. I am much in harmony with this one.
- A recognizable dynamic in some relationships I have observed…
I felt comfortable with those two – they felt real in their implied rebukes.
September 19th, 2024 02:42
Now Out in The Open
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville with a seemingly fulfilling finale.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville with a seemingly fulfilling finale.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 01:44
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