Comments received on poems by Neville
The Reason Why Colours Make Out
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully crafted both the imagery and the subtle rhyme within. It began softly and emerged itself as the dawn with glowing soft colors. Very nice
October 2nd, 2024 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully crafted both the imagery and the subtle rhyme within. It began softly and emerged itself as the dawn with glowing soft colors. Very nice
October 2nd, 2024 04:41
Irksome Quandaries
Goldfinch60 said:
Infinity is at the end of the road Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Infinity is at the end of the road Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2024 01:41
Irksome Quandaries
MendedFences27 said:
The closer you get to the end, the more infinity looms like a precipice. The only evidence along the continuum lies buried in the graveyards.
As best I could I attempted to answer your question, raised in your poem. I doubt it will be of much help, because it is obvious.
Unless of course. the continuum is the evidence. - Thank you for provoking my thoughts, - Phil A.
September 30th, 2024 10:04
MendedFences27 said:
The closer you get to the end, the more infinity looms like a precipice. The only evidence along the continuum lies buried in the graveyards.
As best I could I attempted to answer your question, raised in your poem. I doubt it will be of much help, because it is obvious.
Unless of course. the continuum is the evidence. - Thank you for provoking my thoughts, - Phil A.
September 30th, 2024 10:04
Irksome Quandaries
Doggerel Dave said:
Have you heard of psychosis, perchance? During my adolescence I pondered this, and had to claw myself back to mundane reality all by my self.... Sorry, Neville - no laughs here.
September 30th, 2024 07:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Have you heard of psychosis, perchance? During my adolescence I pondered this, and had to claw myself back to mundane reality all by my self.... Sorry, Neville - no laughs here.
September 30th, 2024 07:14
Calling the Bluff
Tom Dylan said:
This one made me smile, Neville. There was almost an Eastwood \'Go ahead, make my day,\' ending. Loved it.
September 30th, 2024 06:38
Tom Dylan said:
This one made me smile, Neville. There was almost an Eastwood \'Go ahead, make my day,\' ending. Loved it.
September 30th, 2024 06:38
Irksome Quandaries
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some, having irksome quandaries. Are they good to have?!
I\'m talking rubbish again. lol.
September 30th, 2024 05:54
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some, having irksome quandaries. Are they good to have?!
I\'m talking rubbish again. lol.
September 30th, 2024 05:54
Irksome Quandaries
sorenbarrett said:
That picture doesn\'t fit into my three dimentional mind, My guess is it lies off the continuum. But then who am I to say, never was much good at math
September 30th, 2024 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
That picture doesn\'t fit into my three dimentional mind, My guess is it lies off the continuum. But then who am I to say, never was much good at math
September 30th, 2024 05:37
Calling the Bluff
Goldfinch60 said:
Protection perfect eh Neville? I do have a Swiss Army knife. LOL
Andy
September 30th, 2024 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Protection perfect eh Neville? I do have a Swiss Army knife. LOL
Andy
September 30th, 2024 02:18
Calling the Bluff
Dan Williams said:
I almost hesitate to say in this judgmental world, but I am also armed to the teeth. Better to have it and not need it...
September 30th, 2024 00:38
Dan Williams said:
I almost hesitate to say in this judgmental world, but I am also armed to the teeth. Better to have it and not need it...
September 30th, 2024 00:38
Calling the Bluff
Doggerel Dave said:
Paranoia perpetuates protectiveness prodigiously providing proactively piled ‘ponry. Please add the ‘wea’ only when fully provided.
September 29th, 2024 20:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Paranoia perpetuates protectiveness prodigiously providing proactively piled ‘ponry. Please add the ‘wea’ only when fully provided.
September 29th, 2024 20:32
Calling the Bluff
Accidental Poet said:
Well since you asked, there is a immature delusional maniac running for the office only someone of mature competence is allowed to enter. Have taser, straight jacket and men in white coats ready for acquisition. 🙄
September 29th, 2024 19:27
Accidental Poet said:
Well since you asked, there is a immature delusional maniac running for the office only someone of mature competence is allowed to enter. Have taser, straight jacket and men in white coats ready for acquisition. 🙄
September 29th, 2024 19:27
Remembering An Orange Room
sorenbarrett said:
Dark, sad and haunting casting a shadow over the landscape. Whether personal or not I felt it.
September 29th, 2024 16:55
sorenbarrett said:
Dark, sad and haunting casting a shadow over the landscape. Whether personal or not I felt it.
September 29th, 2024 16:55
Calling the Bluff
orchidee said:
Sounds like someone that one would say \'Hello\' to, and get the reply \'What do ya mean hello? I will punch ya on the nose for saying that!\'\'
September 29th, 2024 11:24
orchidee said:
Sounds like someone that one would say \'Hello\' to, and get the reply \'What do ya mean hello? I will punch ya on the nose for saying that!\'\'
September 29th, 2024 11:24
Calling the Bluff
Cheeky Missy said:
Having watched all the 007 flicks, yes, you Brits would say that. Since there\'s always more than one way to skin a cat, I think I\'ll leave it at that. Sweetly rendered in to the point brevity with fascinatingly telling details and a none too subtle poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
September 29th, 2024 09:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Having watched all the 007 flicks, yes, you Brits would say that. Since there\'s always more than one way to skin a cat, I think I\'ll leave it at that. Sweetly rendered in to the point brevity with fascinatingly telling details and a none too subtle poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
September 29th, 2024 09:19
Calling the Bluff
Jerry Reynolds said:
I am out of range. But I will watch it for sure. I had a chuckle over that one, Neville
September 29th, 2024 08:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
I am out of range. But I will watch it for sure. I had a chuckle over that one, Neville
September 29th, 2024 08:27
Calling the Bluff
sorenbarrett said:
I hear just a bit of touchiness in this. I better measure my words well in this comment and may already have stepped over my bounds. I always sleep with a machete under my pillow, just in case
September 29th, 2024 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
I hear just a bit of touchiness in this. I better measure my words well in this comment and may already have stepped over my bounds. I always sleep with a machete under my pillow, just in case
September 29th, 2024 06:53
Clean Sheets
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville but love takes it beyond not being loved.
Andy
September 29th, 2024 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville but love takes it beyond not being loved.
Andy
September 29th, 2024 01:27
Clean Sheets
Doggerel Dave said:
It’s like you tore a page out of my nonexistent diary:
Regular visits, always clean sheets.. Good with zero emotional commitment. Then one Saturday another male already there. Coffie round well used kitchen table inherited from her mother. All cool. He seemed like good guy. Same language of origin; obvious empathy between. Left after coffee. Perhaps all he knew of me was a casual neighbor passing the time of day……. Best wishes to her, she was lovely.
September 28th, 2024 17:37
Doggerel Dave said:
It’s like you tore a page out of my nonexistent diary:
Regular visits, always clean sheets.. Good with zero emotional commitment. Then one Saturday another male already there. Coffie round well used kitchen table inherited from her mother. All cool. He seemed like good guy. Same language of origin; obvious empathy between. Left after coffee. Perhaps all he knew of me was a casual neighbor passing the time of day……. Best wishes to her, she was lovely.
September 28th, 2024 17:37
Clean Sheets
Jerry Reynolds said:
A beautiful image, Neville. How I loved those summer days.
September 28th, 2024 09:21
Jerry Reynolds said:
A beautiful image, Neville. How I loved those summer days.
September 28th, 2024 09:21
Remembering An Orange Room
FrasMac said:
appreciate the emotional impact, just the way I like a poem to leave me feeling
September 28th, 2024 01:44
FrasMac said:
appreciate the emotional impact, just the way I like a poem to leave me feeling
September 28th, 2024 01:44
Remembering An Orange Room
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Neville ending with such sadness. Great write.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Neville ending with such sadness. Great write.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:16
Remembering An Orange Room
Dan Williams said:
The heartache is wonderfully expressed. Good job.
September 27th, 2024 13:13
Dan Williams said:
The heartache is wonderfully expressed. Good job.
September 27th, 2024 13:13
Remembering An Orange Room
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP turned orange - too much suntan stuff?! lol.
September 27th, 2024 11:12
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP turned orange - too much suntan stuff?! lol.
September 27th, 2024 11:12
Remembering An Orange Room
Cheeky Missy said:
Correct me iffen I\'m mistaken, but the reference specifically to an orange room seems reminiscent of the \'60\'s or \'70\'s, rendering this delightful tribute to former days all the more winsome. Frankly, having considered it further I\'m reminded of my long since departed adopted grandmother\'s house-- the walls were a rather garrish purple and green. That aside, this is beautifully rendered with a gently haunting poignancy and excellent details. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 27th, 2024 08:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Correct me iffen I\'m mistaken, but the reference specifically to an orange room seems reminiscent of the \'60\'s or \'70\'s, rendering this delightful tribute to former days all the more winsome. Frankly, having considered it further I\'m reminded of my long since departed adopted grandmother\'s house-- the walls were a rather garrish purple and green. That aside, this is beautifully rendered with a gently haunting poignancy and excellent details. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 27th, 2024 08:36
Remembering An Orange Room
Accidental Poet said:
Ahh, but at least you have the memories. 🌹
September 27th, 2024 08:35
Accidental Poet said:
Ahh, but at least you have the memories. 🌹
September 27th, 2024 08:35
Remembering An Orange Room
Jerry Reynolds said:
A beautiful love story, Neville. The tragic twist did not take away its sweetness. Well, done.
September 27th, 2024 07:15
Jerry Reynolds said:
A beautiful love story, Neville. The tragic twist did not take away its sweetness. Well, done.
September 27th, 2024 07:15
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