Comments received on poems by Neville
Pretty in Purple and Pink
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people just do not realise how much joy they can give to others Neville.
Andy
September 15th, 2024 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people just do not realise how much joy they can give to others Neville.
Andy
September 15th, 2024 01:39
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
Cassie58 said:
A very meaningful piece of brevity. It doesn’t happen often, but when it does, it makes up for the rest. Nice.
September 14th, 2024 13:06
Cassie58 said:
A very meaningful piece of brevity. It doesn’t happen often, but when it does, it makes up for the rest. Nice.
September 14th, 2024 13:06
Pretty in Purple and Pink
Cassie58 said:
This isn’t about sea food at all is it? Even though I know you like sea food. This is something else entirely. Well that’s my take this Saturday early evening. Very sensual writing Neville.
September 14th, 2024 12:12
Cassie58 said:
This isn’t about sea food at all is it? Even though I know you like sea food. This is something else entirely. Well that’s my take this Saturday early evening. Very sensual writing Neville.
September 14th, 2024 12:12
Pretty in Purple and Pink
orchidee said:
Good write N. How you get back in?
My humour is suspended a bit - see my poem for today.
September 14th, 2024 09:28
orchidee said:
Good write N. How you get back in?
My humour is suspended a bit - see my poem for today.
September 14th, 2024 09:28
Pretty in Purple and Pink
MendedFences27 said:
The release of inhibitions can be hard to overcome. She seemed extreme in a lot of her ways. Her beauty and charms were worth the challenge though.
A sensual poem that builds to a release of its own, (your last line). It speaks well of her. and let\'s hope she finally did \"let go.\" - Phil A.
September 14th, 2024 09:12
MendedFences27 said:
The release of inhibitions can be hard to overcome. She seemed extreme in a lot of her ways. Her beauty and charms were worth the challenge though.
A sensual poem that builds to a release of its own, (your last line). It speaks well of her. and let\'s hope she finally did \"let go.\" - Phil A.
September 14th, 2024 09:12
Pretty in Purple and Pink
Doggerel Dave said:
Answers on a postcard?
A species of hermit crab?
September 14th, 2024 08:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Answers on a postcard?
A species of hermit crab?
September 14th, 2024 08:34
Crumbs
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Emotion, sentiment, all just perfectly captured. Cheers, Tom
September 13th, 2024 05:32
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Emotion, sentiment, all just perfectly captured. Cheers, Tom
September 13th, 2024 05:32
Crumbs
sorenbarrett said:
A master class on how the mundane can be made seductive and sensual, Not just sexual but to the mind pulling it in closer and arrousing interest and a desire for closure. Lovely Neville
September 12th, 2024 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
A master class on how the mundane can be made seductive and sensual, Not just sexual but to the mind pulling it in closer and arrousing interest and a desire for closure. Lovely Neville
September 12th, 2024 05:21
Crumbs
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, it reminded me of the times after my wife died when I was sitting at the dining table eating alone.
Andy
September 12th, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, it reminded me of the times after my wife died when I was sitting at the dining table eating alone.
Andy
September 12th, 2024 01:41
Crumbs
Accidental Poet said:
That you would speak of such things shows that for at least for a moment all was right. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 21:51
Accidental Poet said:
That you would speak of such things shows that for at least for a moment all was right. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 21:51
Crumbs
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! This profoundly sad scene was filled with longing. Trying to remember someone, but not able to reconstruct the entire image, but recalling only a small fragment, enough to bring back the sense of her \"vulnerability.\" Even the \"crumbs of \" your \"croissant\" would not cooperate. A tender and poignant moment laid out in free verse and capturing the poetic moment. - Phil A.
September 11th, 2024 21:14
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! This profoundly sad scene was filled with longing. Trying to remember someone, but not able to reconstruct the entire image, but recalling only a small fragment, enough to bring back the sense of her \"vulnerability.\" Even the \"crumbs of \" your \"croissant\" would not cooperate. A tender and poignant moment laid out in free verse and capturing the poetic moment. - Phil A.
September 11th, 2024 21:14
Crumbs
Cassie58 said:
Moments when the heart and mind are drifting in a sea of what has gone before. Someone is painfully missed. Only the crumbs remain. Beautifully penned Neville. Hope you had a fantastic holiday. Good to find you back.
September 11th, 2024 14:44
Cassie58 said:
Moments when the heart and mind are drifting in a sea of what has gone before. Someone is painfully missed. Only the crumbs remain. Beautifully penned Neville. Hope you had a fantastic holiday. Good to find you back.
September 11th, 2024 14:44
Crumbs
Cheeky Missy said:
Poetry gathers up the crumbs and tenders the same as the delicacy they truly are on the silver platter. The heartbreaking poignancy of this piece resonates and is rather exquisite. Excellently detailed and beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 14:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Poetry gathers up the crumbs and tenders the same as the delicacy they truly are on the silver platter. The heartbreaking poignancy of this piece resonates and is rather exquisite. Excellently detailed and beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 14:23
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
Cheeky Missy said:
Precisely. Thus is too true and excellently rendered in sweet brevity. Thank you.
September 11th, 2024 13:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Precisely. Thus is too true and excellently rendered in sweet brevity. Thank you.
September 11th, 2024 13:22
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
sorenbarrett said:
Neville I had to think about this one for a while and couldn\'t quite decide where it was because of the depth of your write or if my mind was out of alignment. Have missed your writtings
September 11th, 2024 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Neville I had to think about this one for a while and couldn\'t quite decide where it was because of the depth of your write or if my mind was out of alignment. Have missed your writtings
September 11th, 2024 06:09
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, everything must be in line for perfection.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, everything must be in line for perfection.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:54
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels sometimes that it\'s Zen......Neville.... I\'m feeling displaced and disoriented.....
September 10th, 2024 18:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels sometimes that it\'s Zen......Neville.... I\'m feeling displaced and disoriented.....
September 10th, 2024 18:45
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
Tony36 said:
Great write
September 10th, 2024 14:37
Tony36 said:
Great write
September 10th, 2024 14:37
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
Neilton said:
Two poems!! I\'m impressed! Amazing work here Neville!
August 30th, 2024 16:16
Neilton said:
Two poems!! I\'m impressed! Amazing work here Neville!
August 30th, 2024 16:16
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
Bella Shepard said:
A grandfather\'s love touches this first beautiful poem. The second, the story of the effect life has upon us. The two I think inextricably entwined. Lucky you!
August 25th, 2024 10:32
Bella Shepard said:
A grandfather\'s love touches this first beautiful poem. The second, the story of the effect life has upon us. The two I think inextricably entwined. Lucky you!
August 25th, 2024 10:32
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good ones Neville.
Many happy returns to your Granddaughter.
Andy
August 24th, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good ones Neville.
Many happy returns to your Granddaughter.
Andy
August 24th, 2024 01:26
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work, my friend.
August 23rd, 2024 15:16
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work, my friend.
August 23rd, 2024 15:16
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
MendedFences27 said:
A poet\'s brain and a lover\'s heart, or is it the other way round? One year old, it\'s a beautiful time.
Too much handling can ruin the fruit. Sometimes well-intentioned people are prone to overdo it. A man eventually finds his own path, and hopes he survived it all, intact. Today\'s offering is like Chinese chicken, sweet and sour. - Phil A.
August 23rd, 2024 14:51
MendedFences27 said:
A poet\'s brain and a lover\'s heart, or is it the other way round? One year old, it\'s a beautiful time.
Too much handling can ruin the fruit. Sometimes well-intentioned people are prone to overdo it. A man eventually finds his own path, and hopes he survived it all, intact. Today\'s offering is like Chinese chicken, sweet and sour. - Phil A.
August 23rd, 2024 14:51
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Lovely poem on grand-daughter too.
KP is broken - her botox cracked. Now she has fallen to bits. Or should it be - now she\'s all saggy - a sight I may never recover from! heehee.
August 23rd, 2024 06:25
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Lovely poem on grand-daughter too.
KP is broken - her botox cracked. Now she has fallen to bits. Or should it be - now she\'s all saggy - a sight I may never recover from! heehee.
August 23rd, 2024 06:25
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
sorenbarrett said:
The first endearing the second experience is the best learning tool. We do treat boys and girls differently as least traditionally so. Girls with tenderness and boys with toughness. Should we? I don\'t know.
August 23rd, 2024 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
The first endearing the second experience is the best learning tool. We do treat boys and girls differently as least traditionally so. Girls with tenderness and boys with toughness. Should we? I don\'t know.
August 23rd, 2024 06:08
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
Cassie58 said:
You know Neville after reading both of these poems a few times, I have come to the conclusion, that despite it all, you do have a razor sharp brain and a bloomin petal soft heart under that dark exterior. Love your poem for Astrid and The Making of a Broken Man is still my current reading. Worth every penny and knowing the proceeds are going to good causes, is the icing on the cake. Happy Friday my friend.
August 23rd, 2024 04:52
Cassie58 said:
You know Neville after reading both of these poems a few times, I have come to the conclusion, that despite it all, you do have a razor sharp brain and a bloomin petal soft heart under that dark exterior. Love your poem for Astrid and The Making of a Broken Man is still my current reading. Worth every penny and knowing the proceeds are going to good causes, is the icing on the cake. Happy Friday my friend.
August 23rd, 2024 04:52
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