Comments received on poems by Neville



Now Looking Back With Anticipation
Bella Shepard said:

This poem is so moving dear Nev. It speaks to me of our children, of the hope and anticipation we have for their future, and of the love and pride we feel as we watch them blossom, as we knew they would. A father\'s heart here, I think. Beautiful!!

November 15th, 2023 15:37

Now Looking Back With Anticipation
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
Doh! All I see in me tea leaves is KP asking for more money for botox!
She will end up a ghostly trout-like apparition! heehee.

November 15th, 2023 04:45

Now Looking Back With Anticipation
arqios said:

Earl Grey is a constant friend.

November 15th, 2023 04:36

Whispered
Goldfinch60 said:

May that whisper bring more than love to you Neville.

Andy

November 15th, 2023 01:26

Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
Bella Shepard said:

What a touching memory, and how sweet of you to procure the remedy. I hope it did the trick. Long ago memories, always there waiting to pop up. Love this poem!

November 14th, 2023 15:26

Whispered
MendedFences27 said:

It won\'t be the first time you \"whisper\" in that \"baby\'s ear.\" Grandad\'s can share many \"secrets\" with granddaughters, and it\'s all because of that \"smile.\" A beautifully gentle poem. - Phil A.

November 14th, 2023 11:39

Whispered
Christina8 said:

Wonderful poem, Nev, no doubt about your adorable granddaughter, such a sweet poem!

November 14th, 2023 10:01

Whispered
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

November 14th, 2023 06:23

Whispered
arqios said:

To be more than loved and in both directions twice as blessed!

November 14th, 2023 05:52

Whispered
LIZ said:

Awwwww so beautiful!! Babies are the best secret keepers!!! 🤭💜💜💜💜

November 14th, 2023 03:41

Whispered
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
I whisper in KP\'s ear sweet nothings - I only whisper: \'I got no more money for your botox today, dear!\' lol.

November 14th, 2023 03:18

Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
MendedFences27 said:



November 13th, 2023 14:23

Twisted History the Rape of the Plains People  
Dove said:

Having Native American blood , albeit a tiny morsal, I applause this poem. Enjoyed the read! Love the smell of sage..

November 13th, 2023 10:02

Squeezed Between Our Now and Thens
Dove said:

I\'m wearing that girdle of now and then. \"Then\" is telling me it fits perfectly, but now it\'s too tight.

November 13th, 2023 09:57

Behold All My Literary Demons
Dove said:

I didn\'t peg you as an Angel, or someone divine, just a devilish poet, who writes sublime.

November 13th, 2023 09:53

Shallow Cuts Too Deep
Dove said:

A cry for help, A cry for love, in modern times even a text can be missed. The world is full of pain, undoubtedly she needed a hug & kiss..

November 13th, 2023 09:50

Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
Accidental Poet said:

But, did you keep the tooth as a keepsake of that departed lover? Imagine if you will, running into her today and presenting it to her. 🙂

November 13th, 2023 09:33

Shallow Cuts Too Deep
Bobby O said:

Three dimensional w the actuality pang and metaphorically delivering the solemn time and tide owns their own pace and thus avoid any race w the ultimate ticking clock lest undelivered be intended

November 13th, 2023 06:13

Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
Bobby O said:

A Proper salute reminds of fortune and I felt this and what better testimony than the remembered gift of a single malt. Homage defined !

November 13th, 2023 05:18

Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
arqios said:

A periodic battle that is even more painful than the flashes of agony when the beverage is too hot or too frosty... ouchie

November 13th, 2023 04:08

Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
LIZ said:

Taking on someone\'s pain....even if it\'s a long ago memory...still stings. 💜💜💜

November 13th, 2023 03:00

Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
KP wanted to swill and swallow some gin, but I gave her some pig\'s swill! lol.
I\'m a beastly guinea pig sometimes. She will use me for part of her real fur coat.

November 13th, 2023 02:43

Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
Goldfinch60 said:

Sad words Neville, I do hope you are OK.

Andy

November 13th, 2023 02:19

Shallow Cuts Too Deep
Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong emotive words Neville. Dealing with suicide is so hard for others.

Andy

November 13th, 2023 02:08

Shallow Cuts Too Deep
Neville said:


Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such an insightful and encouraging review .. All Good Things, Neville

November 12th, 2023 13:52

Squeezed Between Our Now and Thens
Accidental Poet said:

Oh how this takes me down a long loved and remembered road. Thanks N, A wonderful write. 🌹

November 12th, 2023 10:23

Shallow Cuts Too Deep
Accidental Poet said:

Life is rarely easy N. And all too often the ones who pay the most in pain are the ones who need the most in love. A fine piece of work N.

November 12th, 2023 10:16

Shallow Cuts Too Deep
Christina8 said:

I\'m sorry that you have to go through the turmoil of things like these. it sounds positively awful that she accidentally committed suicide. I think not having that closure would be hard too....C

November 12th, 2023 09:45

Shallow Cuts Too Deep
arqios said:

....what\'s worst than waste is not that there is no retrieval or retrieve but that there is the \'disposal\' to face. May the closure be one of healing and hope.

November 12th, 2023 07:57

Shallow Cuts Too Deep
Teddy.15 said:

Bloomin ell Nev, suicide with its raw edge. Superbly composed. 💙

November 12th, 2023 04:48



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