Comments received on poems by Neville
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
sorenbarrett said:
The first endearing the second experience is the best learning tool. We do treat boys and girls differently as least traditionally so. Girls with tenderness and boys with toughness. Should we? I don\'t know.
August 23rd, 2024 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
The first endearing the second experience is the best learning tool. We do treat boys and girls differently as least traditionally so. Girls with tenderness and boys with toughness. Should we? I don\'t know.
August 23rd, 2024 06:08
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
Cassie58 said:
You know Neville after reading both of these poems a few times, I have come to the conclusion, that despite it all, you do have a razor sharp brain and a bloomin petal soft heart under that dark exterior. Love your poem for Astrid and The Making of a Broken Man is still my current reading. Worth every penny and knowing the proceeds are going to good causes, is the icing on the cake. Happy Friday my friend.
August 23rd, 2024 04:52
Cassie58 said:
You know Neville after reading both of these poems a few times, I have come to the conclusion, that despite it all, you do have a razor sharp brain and a bloomin petal soft heart under that dark exterior. Love your poem for Astrid and The Making of a Broken Man is still my current reading. Worth every penny and knowing the proceeds are going to good causes, is the icing on the cake. Happy Friday my friend.
August 23rd, 2024 04:52
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, anywhere now - Thanks for the reminder, Neville.
These two went over my head, really, as I have managed to produce no issue...
August 23rd, 2024 02:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, anywhere now - Thanks for the reminder, Neville.
These two went over my head, really, as I have managed to produce no issue...
August 23rd, 2024 02:57
About to Be Forgot
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that there will be a new light waiting for you Neville.
Andy
August 23rd, 2024 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that there will be a new light waiting for you Neville.
Andy
August 23rd, 2024 01:03
About to Be Forgot
MendedFences27 said:
Some things are best left unlit, hidden in the shadows, so to speak. However, they can rear their ugly faces into our minds when we least expect it. Depending on their impact on us they may never be forgotten completely.
Your poem says all these things in a more poetic way. And the use of candlelight is a powerful symbolism for a separated relationship. - Phil A.
August 22nd, 2024 09:49
MendedFences27 said:
Some things are best left unlit, hidden in the shadows, so to speak. However, they can rear their ugly faces into our minds when we least expect it. Depending on their impact on us they may never be forgotten completely.
Your poem says all these things in a more poetic way. And the use of candlelight is a powerful symbolism for a separated relationship. - Phil A.
August 22nd, 2024 09:49
About to Be Forgot
Doggerel Dave said:
Probably for the best............................
August 22nd, 2024 07:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Probably for the best............................
August 22nd, 2024 07:47
About to Be Forgot
Cassie58 said:
Some things are best forgotten, particularly when they end really badly. It appears here that the ghosts are out playing on the mind.
tainted, shared history - ouch
I think I would be inclined to burn some sage.
I can’t help thinking that these memories will cross pathways again. A great write Neville.Happy Thursday.
August 22nd, 2024 05:29
Cassie58 said:
Some things are best forgotten, particularly when they end really badly. It appears here that the ghosts are out playing on the mind.
tainted, shared history - ouch
I think I would be inclined to burn some sage.
I can’t help thinking that these memories will cross pathways again. A great write Neville.Happy Thursday.
August 22nd, 2024 05:29
About to Be Forgot
orchidee said:
Good write N.
That\'s what I\'m about to do with KP - the last line of your poem. lol.
August 22nd, 2024 05:17
orchidee said:
Good write N.
That\'s what I\'m about to do with KP - the last line of your poem. lol.
August 22nd, 2024 05:17
About to Be Forgot
sorenbarrett said:
Memories that prick the soul of things promoting guilt done and comfort felt. all to be lost in forgetfulness. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
Memories that prick the soul of things promoting guilt done and comfort felt. all to be lost in forgetfulness. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 05:12
Made Like a Mountain & A Brief Conversation in A Bar About Bears ..
Goldfinch60 said:
You\'ve seen that TWIX advert haven\'t you Neville.
Andy
https://youtu.be/CXxEGG1v074
August 22nd, 2024 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
You\'ve seen that TWIX advert haven\'t you Neville.
Andy
https://youtu.be/CXxEGG1v074
August 22nd, 2024 01:14
Made Like a Mountain & A Brief Conversation in A Bar About Bears ..
Cassie58 said:
You know however I read that first poem, I do believe you are being Wednesday wicked lol. As for bears, I keep thinking of the bare necessities of life. So I guess there is a link there somewhere .Happy Wednesday Neville.
August 21st, 2024 09:14
Cassie58 said:
You know however I read that first poem, I do believe you are being Wednesday wicked lol. As for bears, I keep thinking of the bare necessities of life. So I guess there is a link there somewhere .Happy Wednesday Neville.
August 21st, 2024 09:14
Made Like a Mountain & A Brief Conversation in A Bar About Bears ..
sorenbarrett said:
Thinking about the wild again Neville wild sex and wild bare no bear encounters?.
August 21st, 2024 07:36
sorenbarrett said:
Thinking about the wild again Neville wild sex and wild bare no bear encounters?.
August 21st, 2024 07:36
The Breaking In of A New Summers Day
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely setting in this poem and the section that caught my interest most was:
\"a fanfare of
old cocks, each groaning ..
Only bakers,
freaks and those waiting to
be hanged,
God fearing fishermen and
unfaithful
lovers, dare venture from
the shadows\"
Very descriptive and so nicely worded. Lovely Neville
August 21st, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely setting in this poem and the section that caught my interest most was:
\"a fanfare of
old cocks, each groaning ..
Only bakers,
freaks and those waiting to
be hanged,
God fearing fishermen and
unfaithful
lovers, dare venture from
the shadows\"
Very descriptive and so nicely worded. Lovely Neville
August 21st, 2024 05:27
New Freedoms to Roam .. & Dissent
Goldfinch60 said:
Those nuns can be so frightening Neville.
Andy
August 21st, 2024 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Those nuns can be so frightening Neville.
Andy
August 21st, 2024 00:39
New Freedoms to Roam .. & Dissent
Bella Shepard said:
To shed is to be free, especially those inhibitions that could be heaped upon those too young to know better. Good write my friend, I hope she never looked back.
August 20th, 2024 13:49
Bella Shepard said:
To shed is to be free, especially those inhibitions that could be heaped upon those too young to know better. Good write my friend, I hope she never looked back.
August 20th, 2024 13:49
If Looks Could Kill
Cassie58 said:
This little scenario, played out to me like threesome in a tv play. Husband and wife meet very old friend. He, delighted to see his old mate, her not so. But then maybe it was a reminder of something in the past well hidden from unsuspecting husband. And you know what they say about a woman scorned lol. Hell hath no fury. How are my detective skills doing Neville? Go on, make my day. 😂
August 20th, 2024 08:20
Cassie58 said:
This little scenario, played out to me like threesome in a tv play. Husband and wife meet very old friend. He, delighted to see his old mate, her not so. But then maybe it was a reminder of something in the past well hidden from unsuspecting husband. And you know what they say about a woman scorned lol. Hell hath no fury. How are my detective skills doing Neville? Go on, make my day. 😂
August 20th, 2024 08:20
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
NafisaSB said:
this reminds me of my sister in law, whom we lost a few months back - she was in a coma, and none of us wanted to see her suffer, and yet the pain of losing her is still there - so can empathize..
yes one day, we will go too, so let\'s use the time in hand fruitfully
August 20th, 2024 08:17
NafisaSB said:
this reminds me of my sister in law, whom we lost a few months back - she was in a coma, and none of us wanted to see her suffer, and yet the pain of losing her is still there - so can empathize..
yes one day, we will go too, so let\'s use the time in hand fruitfully
August 20th, 2024 08:17
New Freedoms to Roam .. & Dissent
sorenbarrett said:
Ah interrelated poems lovely. My old grammar teacher taught us that run on sentences lead to the loss of thought. However in this case the thought was not lost but rather enhanced. It was that second thought with the second poem that caused it to drift. His name was not Johnson was it? Fun read Neville
August 20th, 2024 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
Ah interrelated poems lovely. My old grammar teacher taught us that run on sentences lead to the loss of thought. However in this case the thought was not lost but rather enhanced. It was that second thought with the second poem that caused it to drift. His name was not Johnson was it? Fun read Neville
August 20th, 2024 06:01
New Freedoms to Roam .. & Dissent
Cassie58 said:
More bargain poems Neville. I do love a bargain. Two for the price of one. They appear to be related in some way. You know those Convent educated girls, from memory always spent more time in the confession box. The second sort, was more concerned about her halo. She needed to keep it well polished and it sounds that she succeeded. Have a peaceful and contented Tuesday my friend.
August 20th, 2024 05:46
Cassie58 said:
More bargain poems Neville. I do love a bargain. Two for the price of one. They appear to be related in some way. You know those Convent educated girls, from memory always spent more time in the confession box. The second sort, was more concerned about her halo. She needed to keep it well polished and it sounds that she succeeded. Have a peaceful and contented Tuesday my friend.
August 20th, 2024 05:46
New Freedoms to Roam .. & Dissent
Doggerel Dave said:
Looks like once she rids herself of all that gear, she knows where she\'s going.....maybe she could give number two a nudge, or gazump her completely.
Think I\'d be any good as a problem auntie in the back of those women\'s mag...... well maybe not...
August 20th, 2024 02:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Looks like once she rids herself of all that gear, she knows where she\'s going.....maybe she could give number two a nudge, or gazump her completely.
Think I\'d be any good as a problem auntie in the back of those women\'s mag...... well maybe not...
August 20th, 2024 02:43
New Freedoms to Roam .. & Dissent
orchidee said:
Good write N. I don\'t suppose I will unravel anything cryptic, whether it\'s one, two, or 100 poems! lol.
August 20th, 2024 01:43
orchidee said:
Good write N. I don\'t suppose I will unravel anything cryptic, whether it\'s one, two, or 100 poems! lol.
August 20th, 2024 01:43
If Looks Could Kill
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, some people just cannot accept others.
Andy
August 20th, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, some people just cannot accept others.
Andy
August 20th, 2024 01:25
If Looks Could Kill
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I never see KP\'s true looks - always covered in a mask of botox she is. lol.
August 20th, 2024 01:22
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I never see KP\'s true looks - always covered in a mask of botox she is. lol.
August 20th, 2024 01:22
If Looks Could Kill
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like a hell of a story lurking in there somewhere. 🤔
August 19th, 2024 20:35
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like a hell of a story lurking in there somewhere. 🤔
August 19th, 2024 20:35
If Looks Could Kill
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like an old master I saw in a gallery somewhere, but cannot recall...
Clear picture in a few words though.
August 19th, 2024 16:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like an old master I saw in a gallery somewhere, but cannot recall...
Clear picture in a few words though.
August 19th, 2024 16:48
If Looks Could Kill
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Neville you have left me with no clue as to who was found and who was scorned. So many fit this profile. Such a contrast portrayed in this, Even a metaphor for poets recognized and those not and even put down. Loved the flow and the contrast as well as word choice.
August 19th, 2024 16:47
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Neville you have left me with no clue as to who was found and who was scorned. So many fit this profile. Such a contrast portrayed in this, Even a metaphor for poets recognized and those not and even put down. Loved the flow and the contrast as well as word choice.
August 19th, 2024 16:47
Making Green & Reflex
Bella Shepard said:
Two stunning pieces, you\'ve outdone yourself in brevity, wit and color blending. Made me smile bigly. Thank you!
August 19th, 2024 12:54
Bella Shepard said:
Two stunning pieces, you\'ve outdone yourself in brevity, wit and color blending. Made me smile bigly. Thank you!
August 19th, 2024 12:54
You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ladies of yours seem to be all over the world Neville.
Andy
August 19th, 2024 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ladies of yours seem to be all over the world Neville.
Andy
August 19th, 2024 01:04
You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo
Dan Williams said:
Yes, very cool indeed. Is she gone? Is the dog? Well done.
August 19th, 2024 00:31
Dan Williams said:
Yes, very cool indeed. Is she gone? Is the dog? Well done.
August 19th, 2024 00:31
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