Comments received on poems by Neville



Hold the Sugar
Bobby O said:

Metaphorical Moments carve indelible impressions and even if we beg ourselves to minimize a possibly exaggerated reflection of the event , it’s a battle we often lose.
Like Dat!

May 11th, 2024 16:09

Hold the Sugar
Bella Shepard said:

There is a feeling of personal loss about this poem that is so very touching. A realization that something precious has slipped away, something which was so familiar can no longer be recalled. This really tugged at the heartstrings my friend, incredible write!

May 11th, 2024 13:11

Hold the Sugar
Accidental Poet said:

One things for sure N, it means the world to someone. 🌹

May 11th, 2024 10:34

Hold the Sugar
orchidee said:

Good write N.

May 11th, 2024 09:46

Hold the Sugar
Doggerel Dave said:

That table has seen the wars over the years.... maybe not wars.... that\'s for you to say... Well anyway since it seems to have survived.. I need a strong table.. If at anytime you were thinking of flogging it - sans all the coffee paraphernalia of course....

May 11th, 2024 06:51

Hold the Sugar
Teddy.15 said:

Awe, if it was an important moment for her then yes, she would remember, if not then your writing a poem because you have those fond memories but that\'s love and reflection which makes you a poet in every sense dear Nev. 🌹

May 11th, 2024 06:37

Hold the Sugar
2781 said:

Sounds like me, forgettable.

May 11th, 2024 05:29

Good Reasons for Spilling the Beans
Goldfinch60 said:

One of the things I say in life Neville is \"This is me, if you don\'t like what you see it is not my problem, it is yours!\"

Andy

May 11th, 2024 01:18

Good Reasons for Spilling the Beans
Doggerel Dave said:

You\'ve lead an extraordinary emotionally tortured life Neville, and until you publish your memoir which should place all this in some semblance of order, I will continue to be confounded by the extent of your suffering............................

May 10th, 2024 20:00

Good Reasons for Spilling the Beans
Cassie58 said:

Betrayal by so called friends as well as her is the pits. Spilling the beans serves no purpose. It just adds fuel to the fire. Let it be. Retaliation just piles on more hurt. Quiet dignity is so admirable such a fine quality.

May 10th, 2024 12:29

Good Reasons for Spilling the Beans
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. Right on time. Thank you.

May 10th, 2024 10:46

Good Reasons for Spilling the Beans
Accidental Poet said:

Those were the beans your mother told you about. You didn\'t need them anyway right? 😉

May 10th, 2024 08:32

Good Reasons for Spilling the Beans
Teddy.15 said:

They weren\'t that good friends if they went along with her for the ride, I\'d say move on my dear friend spilling the beans is something only prince harry would do. Dignity is everything and the truth always comes out. 🌹

May 10th, 2024 05:14

Good Reasons for Spilling the Beans
orchidee said:

Not baked beans! heehee. Bit windy.

May 10th, 2024 03:05


On Contemplating the Sound of A Lone Tree Falling
aDarkerMind said:

a thought to end all thoughts.

the very last tree on earth.....falls!

one for the archives here;

May 9th, 2024 14:16

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Reynaldo Casison said:

A Nice Spring vibe and rhythm

May 9th, 2024 04:19

On Contemplating the Sound of A Lone Tree Falling
2781 said:

:and if a tree fall toward the south, or toward the north, in the place where the tree falleth, there it shal be.
I wondered if Solomon was out gathering mushrooms that day.

May 9th, 2024 02:41

On Contemplating the Sound of A Lone Tree Falling
Cassie58 said:

How sad for the lonely tree. I like the idea of loved ones being close at hand when breathing your last. I have such an affinity with trees, I swear I heard this one Neville. A tree hugger first and foremost.

May 9th, 2024 02:40

On Contemplating the Sound of A Lone Tree Falling
Goldfinch60 said:

That contemplation in life takes us to so many places Neville.

Andy

May 9th, 2024 01:44

On Contemplating the Sound of A Lone Tree Falling
orchidee said:

KP stamps her foot loudly when I don\'t give her botox money. She throws her toys out of the pram! lol.

May 9th, 2024 01:27

On Contemplating the Sound of A Lone Tree Falling
Accidental Poet said:

It\'s not whether the tree makes a sound, but that the tree lived. 😊👍

May 9th, 2024 00:44

On Contemplating the Sound of A Lone Tree Falling
Doggerel Dave said:

This is false advertising in my reckoning, Neville.
\'On Contemplating the Sound of A Lone Foot Falling Gently\' would be much more descriptive of the situation\'s essence here.
Don\'t worry, I\'m always keeping an ear out for the tree....all seems peaceful to me.....🦻

May 9th, 2024 00:32

Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Bella Shepard said:

Profoundly clueless\" comes to mind, an aberration in neurology? Makes you wonder how much there is still to be learned about the human brain, and perhaps how little of it we control. Such an appropriate write my friend, for they seem to be coming out of the woodwork these days.

May 8th, 2024 14:59

Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Cassie58 said:

Oh my goodness. I hope she is seeking help and that you have never had to experience such painful vitriol yourself Neville. That word “repent” just sends the shivers down my spine. Yes, some just like to inflict pain.

May 8th, 2024 11:58

Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
orchidee said:

Cooeee, I\'m still here.....yet. I would be! lol.

May 8th, 2024 10:44

Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. You will have that. What\'s the old saying, with friends like that, you don\'t need enemies. Great work.

May 8th, 2024 09:15

Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Accidental Poet said:

Sadly N, there are those in our beautiful compassionate world who would rather see every person suffer in pain and emotional sadness. But as I\'ve always said, \"What goes around usually comes back around.\" Keep that quill wet Sir N. 😉

May 8th, 2024 08:48

Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Teddy.15 said:

Narcasism at a new level dear Nev, there are unfortunately more than a few minds in this world that would have this exact pleasure. My own sister came to mind. 🌹

May 8th, 2024 05:14

Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Doggerel Dave said:

Wot? Not done the washing up again?

May 8th, 2024 03:12



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