Comments received on poems by Neville



A Taste of Hope
Bella Shepard said:

That mellow, yellow hints of honey, how sweet the poem, the sentiment and the poet.

November 19th, 2023 13:35

A Taste of Hope
Teddy.15 said:

The positivity in here is certainly hopeful, my dear Nev, loved your imagery and your message darling, without hope nothing would be bright. ❤️

November 19th, 2023 08:39

A Taste of Hope
arqios said:

Yellow is a grand colour that would trump a stoic smile with a tooth bared grin 😁

November 19th, 2023 06:58

A Taste of Hope
orchidee said:

KP got her own back on me. I read this to her and she gave me a yellow banana filled with botox! lol.
That\'s Adventure Number, oh I dunno, 7638495 or summat. I lost count.

November 19th, 2023 05:58

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work my friend.

November 18th, 2023 16:59

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
Christina8 said:

Very interesting poem. There are still asylums? Sounds like you enjoyed each others company.

November 18th, 2023 11:34

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
Thomas W Case said:

Very intriguing. Great work.

November 18th, 2023 09:21

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
Accidental Poet said:

My comfort zone would be around 20-23 C (withe the Sun shining) 😎

November 18th, 2023 09:03

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
arqios said:

The mink coat said it all!

November 18th, 2023 07:09

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
Goldfinch60 said:

Sounds like a very interesting lady Neville, it\'s a shame she went away.

Andy

November 18th, 2023 02:48

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
Goldfinch60 said:

That pride and dignity can be re-awakened Neville and all will be fine.

Andy

November 18th, 2023 02:28

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
orchidee said:

Would that be 39F in Russia, not 39C?
And should I meet her? lol.

November 18th, 2023 02:07

The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat
Doggerel Dave said:

This is too much with too little, Neville. Needs a book or at least an extended essay......................................

November 18th, 2023 02:01

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Parisab said:

That is a good economic policy, when words are a few and to the point! Keeps the time, energy, and emotional resources protected. I wish I were that sensible…

November 17th, 2023 21:59

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
Accidental Poet said:

You two need a room? Meanwhile, I\'ll just look the other way. 👍

November 17th, 2023 21:01

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
Doggerel Dave said:

Best not the open beach, sadly .
Lock the door, draw the curtains...oh, and leave the mandolin outside.... Evokes though a strong feeling of nostalgia of course, the first part - the rest I\'ll take with a grain of....sand....

November 17th, 2023 17:39

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Bella Shepard said:

You\'ve given me the biggest smile with this one! Opposites attract and even meld when it\'s just right. I can imagine the fun they had coming up with those imaginative, rude words, Iand can alomost hear them laughing now. Priceless!!!

November 17th, 2023 14:49

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
amysliterature said:

this really touched me thank you it feels so vulnerable and distant at the same time :)

November 17th, 2023 14:35

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
orchidee said:

Good write N.
I wanted to write \'A certain kind of aloneness - without KP\'. Well, I suppose I hardly see her in person - only on TV, in papers, etc, or if I collect her from the botox clinic. She\'s there 23 hours of every day. lol.

November 17th, 2023 07:45

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
LIZ said:

Mmmmmm long, lost, abused love? Just a thought....💜💜💜💜💜

November 17th, 2023 06:23

An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness
arqios said:

Mandolin eye and a belly-full of strumming…makes for interesting days.

November 17th, 2023 05:32

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Bobby O said:

Expression that is vibrant need not be chaste , especially perfect when shared with commiserate souls

November 17th, 2023 02:50

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
LIZ said:

I love this!!! I think in my family, I\'m the one who curses the most!! 🫢🫢🫢 I wish I could say I\'m sorry....but NOPE!! AND I\'m a proper lady.....when necessary. 😆 💜💜💜💜

November 16th, 2023 16:02

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
2781 said:

My mum and her family drank like the fishermen they were, and swore like the troopers they were.
Nothing I am ashamed of.

November 16th, 2023 15:02

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work. Love the story. I was reading an old dictionary one time, I came across the word, \"Jack in the green\" It was someone who stood in the bushes and looked in people\'s windows. I thought it was hysterical, so I started calling all my friends jack in the green. lol

November 16th, 2023 09:15

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Doggerel Dave said:

What a textured environment you grew up in Neville, rich in verbal colour. All poetry should be seasoned in such a way. No poet could be too precious after that.

November 16th, 2023 06:09

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
KP say such words in tantrums, when I don\'t give her more money for botox! lol.
This must be Adventure No. 6849748 or summat in \'The Adventures of Orchi and KP\'.

November 16th, 2023 03:10

Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Goldfinch60 said:

Language is what it is and nowadays it can be dreadful.

Andy

November 16th, 2023 02:46

Now Looking Back With Anticipation
Goldfinch60 said:

May that anticipation bring much joy and love to your life Neville.

Andy

November 16th, 2023 02:25

Now Looking Back With Anticipation
Doggerel Dave said:

With the sole exception of the tea choice, I cannot but feel myself in your position ( without the little \'un with whom to dispense absolutely valid advice).

November 16th, 2023 01:12



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