Comments received on poems by Neville
Perfect By Chance
Doggerel Dave said:
Fate? Sorry Neville, not for me. But if luck and a good fit works.... then....
PS: Is this your shortest ever?
May 20th, 2024 21:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Fate? Sorry Neville, not for me. But if luck and a good fit works.... then....
PS: Is this your shortest ever?
May 20th, 2024 21:21
Perfect By Chance
Cassie58 said:
All those delicious coincidences make wonderful chat up lines. Having said that I do believe in coincidences that can then go on to make happy. By the time there is a ‘we ‘there has to be a lot of love and happiness. Hope Monday had been kind to you Neville.
May 20th, 2024 12:39
Cassie58 said:
All those delicious coincidences make wonderful chat up lines. Having said that I do believe in coincidences that can then go on to make happy. By the time there is a ‘we ‘there has to be a lot of love and happiness. Hope Monday had been kind to you Neville.
May 20th, 2024 12:39
Perfect By Chance
orchidee said:
You and I are both perfect, of course! And who else?
May 20th, 2024 04:14
orchidee said:
You and I are both perfect, of course! And who else?
May 20th, 2024 04:14
Perfect By Chance
Goldfinch60 said:
If we ever reach perfection Neville we would have nothing for which to aim.
Andy
May 20th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
If we ever reach perfection Neville we would have nothing for which to aim.
Andy
May 20th, 2024 01:50
Perfect By Chance
orchidee said:
Oh woe! Whatever coincidence caused me to marry KP? lol.
May 20th, 2024 01:24
orchidee said:
Oh woe! Whatever coincidence caused me to marry KP? lol.
May 20th, 2024 01:24
Perfect By Chance
Poetic Dan said:
Yet I\'ll still flick that coin when I\'m really stuck! Heads means straight on and yes we should, tales mean stay home with it between your legs safe at home with no to live another day!
Great work my friend
May 20th, 2024 01:02
Poetic Dan said:
Yet I\'ll still flick that coin when I\'m really stuck! Heads means straight on and yes we should, tales mean stay home with it between your legs safe at home with no to live another day!
Great work my friend
May 20th, 2024 01:02
The Ache and The Pull of It
Bella Shepard said:
The ultimatums experienced in youth, while often painful, are much more recoverable than those experienced in elder years, when we crave constancy in life. What are we willing to sacrifice for that. So relatable my friend, so true.
May 19th, 2024 13:48
Bella Shepard said:
The ultimatums experienced in youth, while often painful, are much more recoverable than those experienced in elder years, when we crave constancy in life. What are we willing to sacrifice for that. So relatable my friend, so true.
May 19th, 2024 13:48
Portrait of A Wild Garden
Parisab said:
LOL-Spring beats us to it! I had to visit for a while and see that the “bees and the birds” are still busy doing their thing. May the wind spread your seeds (of poetry) in all forms of wild gardens…
May 19th, 2024 10:40
Parisab said:
LOL-Spring beats us to it! I had to visit for a while and see that the “bees and the birds” are still busy doing their thing. May the wind spread your seeds (of poetry) in all forms of wild gardens…
May 19th, 2024 10:40
A World That Was
kering.karim said:
I desperately clamour for a possibility of hitting a switch and having all this modern world shenanigans gone... But I guess all that remains just a wish
May 19th, 2024 05:01
kering.karim said:
I desperately clamour for a possibility of hitting a switch and having all this modern world shenanigans gone... But I guess all that remains just a wish
May 19th, 2024 05:01
Portrait of A Wild Garden
2781 said:
Upside down here, thanks for the kick up the bum.
May 18th, 2024 19:36
2781 said:
Upside down here, thanks for the kick up the bum.
May 18th, 2024 19:36
Portrait of A Wild Garden
Poetic Dan said:
Rush to get mine done not to be floating in rain water for the next month 🙃
May 18th, 2024 10:40
Poetic Dan said:
Rush to get mine done not to be floating in rain water for the next month 🙃
May 18th, 2024 10:40
The Ache and The Pull of It
Christina8 said:
An intriguing write! Ultimatums suck and can leave one bitter......love how you ended the poem..
May 18th, 2024 08:12
Christina8 said:
An intriguing write! Ultimatums suck and can leave one bitter......love how you ended the poem..
May 18th, 2024 08:12
The Ache and The Pull of It
orchidee said:
Another predictable line form Orchi - I\'m scared of what KP\'s becoming each day through botox. Or scared I won\'t recognise a trout when I see one! lol.
May 18th, 2024 07:19
orchidee said:
Another predictable line form Orchi - I\'m scared of what KP\'s becoming each day through botox. Or scared I won\'t recognise a trout when I see one! lol.
May 18th, 2024 07:19
The Ache and The Pull of It
Poetic Dan said:
The muse that got away or just grateful for the name that evades, at least it fills your page. Glad to see you still riding waves my friend! Much peace and respect
May 18th, 2024 04:03
Poetic Dan said:
The muse that got away or just grateful for the name that evades, at least it fills your page. Glad to see you still riding waves my friend! Much peace and respect
May 18th, 2024 04:03
The Ache and The Pull of It
Cassie58 said:
Ultimatums are sort of bossy. I don’t like them or retaliation which is even worse. My mind wandered here within your words but it focused on the word Scared and impossible circumstances. There is more here between the lines and yes, it’s a puzzler Neville. And then there is always poetry. Have yourself a great day.
May 18th, 2024 03:41
Cassie58 said:
Ultimatums are sort of bossy. I don’t like them or retaliation which is even worse. My mind wandered here within your words but it focused on the word Scared and impossible circumstances. There is more here between the lines and yes, it’s a puzzler Neville. And then there is always poetry. Have yourself a great day.
May 18th, 2024 03:41
Portrait of A Wild Garden
Cassie58 said:
There is something rather lovely about a wild garden and it certainly attracts the birds, bees and butterflies. Maybe relax, gardening is hard work. Nothing wrong in watching the world drift by now and then. Good Saturday morning to you Neville.
May 18th, 2024 03:24
Cassie58 said:
There is something rather lovely about a wild garden and it certainly attracts the birds, bees and butterflies. Maybe relax, gardening is hard work. Nothing wrong in watching the world drift by now and then. Good Saturday morning to you Neville.
May 18th, 2024 03:24
Portrait of A Wild Garden
Goldfinch60 said:
They certainly do so in my garden Neville.
Andy
May 18th, 2024 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
They certainly do so in my garden Neville.
Andy
May 18th, 2024 00:58
Portrait of A Wild Garden
Doggerel Dave said:
Procrastination is my middle name......
Plus I have an abiding preference for an unmanicured garden.
Unblushingly confessional in tidy form, , , , ,
May 17th, 2024 20:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Procrastination is my middle name......
Plus I have an abiding preference for an unmanicured garden.
Unblushingly confessional in tidy form, , , , ,
May 17th, 2024 20:09
Portrait of A Wild Garden
Thomas W Case said:
They will do that. I could use some birds and bees. Good stuff.
May 17th, 2024 12:06
Thomas W Case said:
They will do that. I could use some birds and bees. Good stuff.
May 17th, 2024 12:06
A Man With a Bucket and No Hat
Doggerel Dave said:
Missed out on this one first time round.
I challenge the assumption that he is required to be only one of three things……
May 17th, 2024 01:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Missed out on this one first time round.
I challenge the assumption that he is required to be only one of three things……
May 17th, 2024 01:27
A Man With a Bucket and No Hat
Cassie58 said:
He is unprepared. He is no Boy Scout. The bucket is of no use if there is no water. A hat may have served him better. If he is lost in the desert, he is in trouble. He needs to be found and quick. Have read this one several times Neville. A search party is on the way.
May 16th, 2024 03:31
Cassie58 said:
He is unprepared. He is no Boy Scout. The bucket is of no use if there is no water. A hat may have served him better. If he is lost in the desert, he is in trouble. He needs to be found and quick. Have read this one several times Neville. A search party is on the way.
May 16th, 2024 03:31
A Man With a Bucket and No Hat
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Neville. :-) I read that last line in a kind of John Cooper Clarke voice.
May 16th, 2024 02:10
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Neville. :-) I read that last line in a kind of John Cooper Clarke voice.
May 16th, 2024 02:10
Watching Swifts
Cassie58 said:
Everything to like about this. Back in the light. Finger tips touching, scented summer garden looking at the swifts. I very much like the contrast here. The movement of the swifts in a sky canvas, while they are grounded. You took me there and shared pizza. Fab imagery Neville.
May 16th, 2024 02:02
Cassie58 said:
Everything to like about this. Back in the light. Finger tips touching, scented summer garden looking at the swifts. I very much like the contrast here. The movement of the swifts in a sky canvas, while they are grounded. You took me there and shared pizza. Fab imagery Neville.
May 16th, 2024 02:02
When it All Boils Down to Bad Men and Fools
Cassie58 said:
Nightmares can easily turn into reality. Dark, foreboding and scary. My adrenalin is pumping. Your lines are lyrical Neville. I was reminded of that old song the Eve of Destruction. The loss of freedom …..
May 16th, 2024 01:50
Cassie58 said:
Nightmares can easily turn into reality. Dark, foreboding and scary. My adrenalin is pumping. Your lines are lyrical Neville. I was reminded of that old song the Eve of Destruction. The loss of freedom …..
May 16th, 2024 01:50
A Man With a Bucket and No Hat
orchidee said:
I (of course) am a man with a hat and no bucket! lol.
May 16th, 2024 01:47
orchidee said:
I (of course) am a man with a hat and no bucket! lol.
May 16th, 2024 01:47
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