Comments received on poems by Neville
Rituals
sorenbarrett said:
Some rituals are enjoyable such as that breakfast that you have made me hungry for. Nevill the poem itself reads in a hypnotic manner as if a mantra or ritual very nice.
August 10th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Some rituals are enjoyable such as that breakfast that you have made me hungry for. Nevill the poem itself reads in a hypnotic manner as if a mantra or ritual very nice.
August 10th, 2024 06:48
Maybe To Be Continued
Dan Williams said:
Amen. There are a few people I can send this to. Nice.
August 9th, 2024 23:48
Dan Williams said:
Amen. There are a few people I can send this to. Nice.
August 9th, 2024 23:48
Maybe To Be Continued
MendedFences27 said:
Death is its own gate-keeper. I\'ve seen healthy people leave at 37 and 47, and also the very sick cling to life until they were 98. Every day is one more experience. To be enjoyed to the fullest.
Live long and prosper.
Enjoyed your poem. - Phil A
August 9th, 2024 10:39
MendedFences27 said:
Death is its own gate-keeper. I\'ve seen healthy people leave at 37 and 47, and also the very sick cling to life until they were 98. Every day is one more experience. To be enjoyed to the fullest.
Live long and prosper.
Enjoyed your poem. - Phil A
August 9th, 2024 10:39
Maybe To Be Continued
sorenbarrett said:
Hope this is not a personal message. It carries with it a sense of tense anticipation of loss. Nicely worded though. Hope there are many more days ahead.
August 9th, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Hope this is not a personal message. It carries with it a sense of tense anticipation of loss. Nicely worded though. Hope there are many more days ahead.
August 9th, 2024 05:27
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. A real thouht-provoking piece.
August 9th, 2024 03:35
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. A real thouht-provoking piece.
August 9th, 2024 03:35
Maybe To Be Continued
Accidental Poet said:
Your welcome is never-ending Sir N Long may your quill be wet from inkwell depth. 🖋️👍
August 9th, 2024 02:38
Accidental Poet said:
Your welcome is never-ending Sir N Long may your quill be wet from inkwell depth. 🖋️👍
August 9th, 2024 02:38
Maybe To Be Continued
orchidee said:
I thought you was gonna write half a poem, and continue it sometime! heehee,
August 9th, 2024 02:18
orchidee said:
I thought you was gonna write half a poem, and continue it sometime! heehee,
August 9th, 2024 02:18
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m reminded of the last few years of my dad\'s life, where he knew he didn\'t have long to live. My mother had gone in 2008, all his friends were gone, and there he is knowing his time is coming. He was ready to go, but still God would not take him yet. I didn\'t want to lose him, but at the same time I had wished that I could grant him that one wish. Well penned N. 🌹
August 9th, 2024 01:59
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m reminded of the last few years of my dad\'s life, where he knew he didn\'t have long to live. My mother had gone in 2008, all his friends were gone, and there he is knowing his time is coming. He was ready to go, but still God would not take him yet. I didn\'t want to lose him, but at the same time I had wished that I could grant him that one wish. Well penned N. 🌹
August 9th, 2024 01:59
Maybe To Be Continued
Cassie58 said:
Another poem from The Making of a Broken Man which is still my current reading. An intriguing little write. How do you cure yourself of someone I ask? Maybe like a light switch, turning them off, obliterating all memory. Why would you do that unless there is a great deal of pain. Happy Friday dear Neville. Weekend’s nearly arrived.
August 9th, 2024 01:53
Cassie58 said:
Another poem from The Making of a Broken Man which is still my current reading. An intriguing little write. How do you cure yourself of someone I ask? Maybe like a light switch, turning them off, obliterating all memory. Why would you do that unless there is a great deal of pain. Happy Friday dear Neville. Weekend’s nearly arrived.
August 9th, 2024 01:53
Maybe To Be Continued
Doggerel Dave said:
This is becoming a habit, Neville.
This is me showing concern:
Are you on a \'Six months left\' schedule?
If not, then carry on remorseless.
August 9th, 2024 01:26
Doggerel Dave said:
This is becoming a habit, Neville.
This is me showing concern:
Are you on a \'Six months left\' schedule?
If not, then carry on remorseless.
August 9th, 2024 01:26
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful.
August 8th, 2024 19:35
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful.
August 8th, 2024 19:35
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
MendedFences27 said:
At 80 I look forward to an unlimited number of years ahead, and why not,
I don\'t get to choose when, so why not look forward to forever.
Your poem highlights the different perspectives of the aged. It\'s purely a numbers game. You will live until you die. Make the most of it. - Phil A
August 8th, 2024 12:51
MendedFences27 said:
At 80 I look forward to an unlimited number of years ahead, and why not,
I don\'t get to choose when, so why not look forward to forever.
Your poem highlights the different perspectives of the aged. It\'s purely a numbers game. You will live until you die. Make the most of it. - Phil A
August 8th, 2024 12:51
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
orchidee said:
I ate a green cooking apple - urrghh - sour! Why did you not COOK it first, asks Fido? lol.
August 8th, 2024 12:03
orchidee said:
I ate a green cooking apple - urrghh - sour! Why did you not COOK it first, asks Fido? lol.
August 8th, 2024 12:03
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Jerry Reynolds said:
I wonder what I will be next sometimes. Is that waiting or wanting? Odds are I\'ll be Chinese or Indian. There are so many more of them than White Dudes.
August 8th, 2024 09:19
Jerry Reynolds said:
I wonder what I will be next sometimes. Is that waiting or wanting? Odds are I\'ll be Chinese or Indian. There are so many more of them than White Dudes.
August 8th, 2024 09:19
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Cassie58 said:
Reminds me of my mum who told me on several occasions she wanted to die. Distressing to hear that , knowing there is nothing you can do to ease her mind . Your poem raises many issues Neville. Much to consider and ponder here. No easy answer.
August 8th, 2024 08:30
Cassie58 said:
Reminds me of my mum who told me on several occasions she wanted to die. Distressing to hear that , knowing there is nothing you can do to ease her mind . Your poem raises many issues Neville. Much to consider and ponder here. No easy answer.
August 8th, 2024 08:30
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed there is Neville. Those with a purpose and those without at any age. Short but full of meaning this poem reminds one to keep busy while waiting.
August 8th, 2024 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed there is Neville. Those with a purpose and those without at any age. Short but full of meaning this poem reminds one to keep busy while waiting.
August 8th, 2024 06:46
I Think I Like You But ..
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. The last line just nailed it.
August 8th, 2024 06:18
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. The last line just nailed it.
August 8th, 2024 06:18
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Doggerel Dave said:
Talking legislation here: Right to die? Dying with dignity.
So for everyone reading/contributing – are you able to make the request?
In New South Wales we now have the very limited right.
Thanks for raising this issue Neville.
August 8th, 2024 03:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Talking legislation here: Right to die? Dying with dignity.
So for everyone reading/contributing – are you able to make the request?
In New South Wales we now have the very limited right.
Thanks for raising this issue Neville.
August 8th, 2024 03:55
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
jarcher54 said:
Oh my... at 70 I think I am way too young to understand this! Will I be this morose someday? (-:
August 8th, 2024 03:34
jarcher54 said:
Oh my... at 70 I think I am way too young to understand this! Will I be this morose someday? (-:
August 8th, 2024 03:34
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Goldfinch60 said:
Tue words Neville, I don\'t want to go yet but I know there will come that day and that is OK too.
Andy
August 8th, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Tue words Neville, I don\'t want to go yet but I know there will come that day and that is OK too.
Andy
August 8th, 2024 01:52
I Think I Like You But ..
Bella Shepard said:
It was an interesting word she chose to use, interactable. And a very interesting exchanage which I presume ended by signing on the dotted line. All was well I hope.
August 7th, 2024 15:38
Bella Shepard said:
It was an interesting word she chose to use, interactable. And a very interesting exchanage which I presume ended by signing on the dotted line. All was well I hope.
August 7th, 2024 15:38
I Think I Like You But ..
MendedFences27 said:
Quite the encounter. The less said the better. Best not to engage in questioning, just make statements.
The directness of your poem gives it the sense of honesty, and her final remark a sense of guilt. Loved it. - Phil A
August 7th, 2024 09:56
MendedFences27 said:
Quite the encounter. The less said the better. Best not to engage in questioning, just make statements.
The directness of your poem gives it the sense of honesty, and her final remark a sense of guilt. Loved it. - Phil A
August 7th, 2024 09:56
I Think I Like You But ..
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Neville. I don\'t question strange.
August 7th, 2024 09:43
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Neville. I don\'t question strange.
August 7th, 2024 09:43
I Think I Like You But ..
Doggerel Dave said:
I woulda asked how you spell \'intracitable\' and then the definition and then pursued the conversation (closed questions) in that direction.... I\'m not fond of evasion generally, just save it for special occasions….
August 7th, 2024 09:01
Doggerel Dave said:
I woulda asked how you spell \'intracitable\' and then the definition and then pursued the conversation (closed questions) in that direction.... I\'m not fond of evasion generally, just save it for special occasions….
August 7th, 2024 09:01
I Think I Like You But ..
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we ask for more than we want to know, or should I say ignorance is bliss. Great build up in this clever write.
August 7th, 2024 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we ask for more than we want to know, or should I say ignorance is bliss. Great build up in this clever write.
August 7th, 2024 04:29
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