Comments received on poems by Neville
Silverback
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
It\'s said grey/white hairs are a sign of wisdom. KP has none of course. lol.
In our old ages, I will go \'silver\' and she will melt from botox.
August 6th, 2023 02:04
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
It\'s said grey/white hairs are a sign of wisdom. KP has none of course. lol.
In our old ages, I will go \'silver\' and she will melt from botox.
August 6th, 2023 02:04
When Absolutely Gone
Doggerel Dave said:
My record card is so mixed better it was shredded and the world move on.....
August 5th, 2023 18:28
Doggerel Dave said:
My record card is so mixed better it was shredded and the world move on.....
August 5th, 2023 18:28
When Absolutely Gone
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m feeling philosophical this morning and can\'t help but say (there will be opinions expressed on this) that love always comes with a price. Sometimes it\'s painful, sometimes bittersweet, and sometimes happiness, but always a price. The pain of separation, the bittersweetness of a temporary state of bliss followed by a breakup, or the happiness where he gives his love and she does likewise, a trade if you will, but nevertheless, a price.
OK, so I guess your poem struck a chord with me. Maybe we all seek the same thing. Well, needless to say I enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
August 5th, 2023 11:04
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m feeling philosophical this morning and can\'t help but say (there will be opinions expressed on this) that love always comes with a price. Sometimes it\'s painful, sometimes bittersweet, and sometimes happiness, but always a price. The pain of separation, the bittersweetness of a temporary state of bliss followed by a breakup, or the happiness where he gives his love and she does likewise, a trade if you will, but nevertheless, a price.
OK, so I guess your poem struck a chord with me. Maybe we all seek the same thing. Well, needless to say I enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
August 5th, 2023 11:04
When Absolutely Gone
Christina8 said:
You make everyone you come in contact with feel incredible! You will certainly have that legacy...x
August 5th, 2023 07:44
Christina8 said:
You make everyone you come in contact with feel incredible! You will certainly have that legacy...x
August 5th, 2023 07:44
When Absolutely Gone
LIZ said:
\"For the love I gave away freely\" YES!! I want to be remembered by the love we shared, and the way we made each other feel (hopefully incredible)!! 💜
August 5th, 2023 05:33
LIZ said:
\"For the love I gave away freely\" YES!! I want to be remembered by the love we shared, and the way we made each other feel (hopefully incredible)!! 💜
August 5th, 2023 05:33
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
‘ faulty umbrella ‘ makes me think maybe she hasn’t enough protection around her .. and that perhaps it ‘ rains on her too much.. she sounds a bit like a sad pained person maybe .. who isn’t in the sun enough lol
Great poem interesting words .. 🙂
August 5th, 2023 03:08
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
‘ faulty umbrella ‘ makes me think maybe she hasn’t enough protection around her .. and that perhaps it ‘ rains on her too much.. she sounds a bit like a sad pained person maybe .. who isn’t in the sun enough lol
Great poem interesting words .. 🙂
August 5th, 2023 03:08
When Absolutely Gone
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
When KP goes, she\'s gonna be stuffed as a trout on my mantlepiece - taxidermy. lol.
August 5th, 2023 02:29
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
When KP goes, she\'s gonna be stuffed as a trout on my mantlepiece - taxidermy. lol.
August 5th, 2023 02:29
Afterbirth
Parisab said:
Words flow while you seem all focused on your daughter with empathy all the way-no way to know exactly how she’ll feel from each moment of this miraculous challenge, but it seems like you are mastering the art of fatherhood…
August 5th, 2023 00:59
Parisab said:
Words flow while you seem all focused on your daughter with empathy all the way-no way to know exactly how she’ll feel from each moment of this miraculous challenge, but it seems like you are mastering the art of fatherhood…
August 5th, 2023 00:59
Afterbirth
Doggerel Dave said:
I have absolutely no idea why any woman would volunteer to do this.....
August 4th, 2023 18:56
Doggerel Dave said:
I have absolutely no idea why any woman would volunteer to do this.....
August 4th, 2023 18:56
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Sunsetmet said:
This is lovely how it is worded Elephant to me good luck I love them
August 4th, 2023 14:21
Sunsetmet said:
This is lovely how it is worded Elephant to me good luck I love them
August 4th, 2023 14:21
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing , Neville )). I love the soft tone to this poem and the way the words flow
So nicely expressed
August 4th, 2023 12:22
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing , Neville )). I love the soft tone to this poem and the way the words flow
So nicely expressed
August 4th, 2023 12:22
Afterbirth
Christina8 said:
OMG your write rings so true! It may even be a different experience with each child.I hope your daughter heals and with it, peace of mind . i know sleepless nights well and i hope that gets better too! Hugs
August 4th, 2023 08:32
Christina8 said:
OMG your write rings so true! It may even be a different experience with each child.I hope your daughter heals and with it, peace of mind . i know sleepless nights well and i hope that gets better too! Hugs
August 4th, 2023 08:32
Afterbirth
Bobby O said:
Like a Birmingham Dart shooter
Trip 20
Trip 20
Dbl 20 out! Tell all to stuff their pockets w the mini arrows cuz WHEN ITS your turn you finish
Mood swings tears dried all fair advice applied, have respect for that man with the Plan.
August 4th, 2023 06:33
Bobby O said:
Like a Birmingham Dart shooter
Trip 20
Trip 20
Dbl 20 out! Tell all to stuff their pockets w the mini arrows cuz WHEN ITS your turn you finish
Mood swings tears dried all fair advice applied, have respect for that man with the Plan.
August 4th, 2023 06:33
Afterbirth
Teddy.15 said:
What empathy you behold truly, being a new mum is the most crazy experience a women can ever have, I\'ve done it so I can safely say this, emotions and hormones. I know she is your beloved daughter but you got inside her mind and a few million other women too. You always amaze me But this is out of extraordinary dear Nev. Kudos on so many levels. Sending big hugs and loads of love to you all from Italy 💖
August 4th, 2023 05:43
Teddy.15 said:
What empathy you behold truly, being a new mum is the most crazy experience a women can ever have, I\'ve done it so I can safely say this, emotions and hormones. I know she is your beloved daughter but you got inside her mind and a few million other women too. You always amaze me But this is out of extraordinary dear Nev. Kudos on so many levels. Sending big hugs and loads of love to you all from Italy 💖
August 4th, 2023 05:43
Afterbirth
orchidee said:
KP\'s mood swings are unbearable. She\'s only in a mood when she can\'t afford more botox. lol.
Here\'s a poem by her: \'Me, me, me, me,......\'
August 4th, 2023 04:59
orchidee said:
KP\'s mood swings are unbearable. She\'s only in a mood when she can\'t afford more botox. lol.
Here\'s a poem by her: \'Me, me, me, me,......\'
August 4th, 2023 04:59
Afterbirth
L. B. Mek said:
!Brilliant!
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XauMRc4pXZc
)
August 4th, 2023 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
!Brilliant!
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XauMRc4pXZc
)
August 4th, 2023 04:12
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
you\'ve perfected your flow and timing
in your trademark poetic, conversational style
it all reads so effortless
even on a first read, it feels like something I\'ve practised before
August 4th, 2023 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
you\'ve perfected your flow and timing
in your trademark poetic, conversational style
it all reads so effortless
even on a first read, it feels like something I\'ve practised before
August 4th, 2023 04:10
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
L. B. Mek said:
\'feel, taste,
smell and see
you smiling ..
Full on, that is\'
(reading your pearls of poetic wisdom
my cherished friend
is like having a conversation
with someone who has known us a long time
you imbue so much relatable accessibility
and versions of a past, we somehow recognise,
allowing us to delve deep in your ink and excavate
our very own private answers
to questions, we would otherwise
would still be happy to keep repressed
pretending, we didn\'t know they were there...)
thank you!
August 4th, 2023 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'feel, taste,
smell and see
you smiling ..
Full on, that is\'
(reading your pearls of poetic wisdom
my cherished friend
is like having a conversation
with someone who has known us a long time
you imbue so much relatable accessibility
and versions of a past, we somehow recognise,
allowing us to delve deep in your ink and excavate
our very own private answers
to questions, we would otherwise
would still be happy to keep repressed
pretending, we didn\'t know they were there...)
thank you!
August 4th, 2023 04:05
Tongue Spillage
L. B. Mek said:
so true dear Poet supreme!
\'toxicity\' is a most subtle
yet debilitating, ingredient of love...
(certain relationships seem to be vacuum sealed
in their own cyclical despair
too invested for either party to walk away
yet, within a week of that now
well practised make-up routine
both are playing that cagey assassin game
waiting to see, which lie
will stab deeper
and which betrayal, will eventually
deal that final blow
till then, they\'re left restlessly squirming
fidgeting, trying to gage the threat
of every kiss and embrace...)
August 4th, 2023 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
so true dear Poet supreme!
\'toxicity\' is a most subtle
yet debilitating, ingredient of love...
(certain relationships seem to be vacuum sealed
in their own cyclical despair
too invested for either party to walk away
yet, within a week of that now
well practised make-up routine
both are playing that cagey assassin game
waiting to see, which lie
will stab deeper
and which betrayal, will eventually
deal that final blow
till then, they\'re left restlessly squirming
fidgeting, trying to gage the threat
of every kiss and embrace...)
August 4th, 2023 03:57
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories bring back such wonderful memories Neville.
Andy
August 4th, 2023 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories bring back such wonderful memories Neville.
Andy
August 4th, 2023 00:41
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
MendedFences27 said:
The girl may have forgotten you but the elephant sure as hell hasn\'t.
A most intriguing poem. A memory from the past relived and now memorialized forever. Life\'s crossroads cause the most colorful meetings. This is a classic, - Phil A.
August 3rd, 2023 15:20
MendedFences27 said:
The girl may have forgotten you but the elephant sure as hell hasn\'t.
A most intriguing poem. A memory from the past relived and now memorialized forever. Life\'s crossroads cause the most colorful meetings. This is a classic, - Phil A.
August 3rd, 2023 15:20
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
orchidee said:
KP\'s got a naughty elephant joke, but she can\'t repeat it in public - requests for it via e-mail, please! lol.
August 3rd, 2023 12:58
orchidee said:
KP\'s got a naughty elephant joke, but she can\'t repeat it in public - requests for it via e-mail, please! lol.
August 3rd, 2023 12:58
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
jarcher54 said:
My wife had an uncle who ran away in his mid-teens and joined the circus back in the 1930\'s. He was apparently a clown and a roadie. If I recall, you\'ve had an eye issue that affects colors? Well, maybe that clown career is off the table, but you are now MPS\'s court jester so there\'s that!
August 3rd, 2023 09:13
jarcher54 said:
My wife had an uncle who ran away in his mid-teens and joined the circus back in the 1930\'s. He was apparently a clown and a roadie. If I recall, you\'ve had an eye issue that affects colors? Well, maybe that clown career is off the table, but you are now MPS\'s court jester so there\'s that!
August 3rd, 2023 09:13
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
Bella Shepard said:
Love is such a tangled web, that if we had the power to lay straight, every strand, would we? It\'s the unpredictibility that keeps us on our toes, as does the weather. Beautifully crafted and a joy to read dear Nev. Wishing you fair skies!
August 3rd, 2023 08:13
Bella Shepard said:
Love is such a tangled web, that if we had the power to lay straight, every strand, would we? It\'s the unpredictibility that keeps us on our toes, as does the weather. Beautifully crafted and a joy to read dear Nev. Wishing you fair skies!
August 3rd, 2023 08:13
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Doggerel Dave said:
Loved the circus...and the fantasies I had about the lady on the flying trapeze... until the sawdust got the better of my asthma.
Never mind - the evocation was all...
August 3rd, 2023 05:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Loved the circus...and the fantasies I had about the lady on the flying trapeze... until the sawdust got the better of my asthma.
Never mind - the evocation was all...
August 3rd, 2023 05:55
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Parisab said:
I just imagined a boy looking at a vintage circus post card…this poem seems subliminal and I wonder what Jung would have said! So beautiful…
August 3rd, 2023 01:42
Parisab said:
I just imagined a boy looking at a vintage circus post card…this poem seems subliminal and I wonder what Jung would have said! So beautiful…
August 3rd, 2023 01:42
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Bobby O said:
That’s true treasure.
The wheel snd the write.
August 3rd, 2023 01:37
Bobby O said:
That’s true treasure.
The wheel snd the write.
August 3rd, 2023 01:37
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
KP was an elephant-rider in a circus. One day she fell off. The elephant stepped on her, but its foot bounced off her, as she is full of botox! lol.
Don\'t ya just love it when she\'s taken down a peg or two.
August 3rd, 2023 01:34
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
KP was an elephant-rider in a circus. One day she fell off. The elephant stepped on her, but its foot bounced off her, as she is full of botox! lol.
Don\'t ya just love it when she\'s taken down a peg or two.
August 3rd, 2023 01:34
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful in every way, pain can bring such art as this. 💖
August 3rd, 2023 01:32
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful in every way, pain can bring such art as this. 💖
August 3rd, 2023 01:32
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