Comments received on poems by Neville
This is Not a Threat Okay
Cassie58 said:
Dear Neville, I am looking for the positives in this write. I found only negatives. The most important lesson I think in life is to learn from those negatives. Maybe that is the positive here. Have a lovely Tuesday my friend.
January 23rd, 2024 05:22
Cassie58 said:
Dear Neville, I am looking for the positives in this write. I found only negatives. The most important lesson I think in life is to learn from those negatives. Maybe that is the positive here. Have a lovely Tuesday my friend.
January 23rd, 2024 05:22
This is Not a Threat Okay
orchidee said:
None of the photos KP posed for - still does - did her any good either. She tortures me. She says she will get out the Family Album and show me every picture in it, if I upset her! lol.
January 23rd, 2024 03:24
orchidee said:
None of the photos KP posed for - still does - did her any good either. She tortures me. She says she will get out the Family Album and show me every picture in it, if I upset her! lol.
January 23rd, 2024 03:24
This is Not a Threat Okay
Goldfinch60 said:
Those photos will never get lost Neville.
Andy
January 23rd, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Those photos will never get lost Neville.
Andy
January 23rd, 2024 02:25
Nothing is Free
Bobby O said:
Nuanced precision precluding customary casted semantic opens new path to alternate certainty.
Like Clyde Mcphatter carved trail
ONLY YOU
January 22nd, 2024 15:27
Bobby O said:
Nuanced precision precluding customary casted semantic opens new path to alternate certainty.
Like Clyde Mcphatter carved trail
ONLY YOU
January 22nd, 2024 15:27
Nothing is Free
Doggerel Dave said:
The freedom of absence absolutely screwed, monetarised via meditation classes and sixties trips to India for an encounter with some guru, who would (note this, young ladies) relieve you of your virginity (if, that is…) in the form of a very sacred blessing.
For those who stayed at home the possession of superfluous items at high cost compensated for a spiritual awakening……
January 22nd, 2024 06:43
Doggerel Dave said:
The freedom of absence absolutely screwed, monetarised via meditation classes and sixties trips to India for an encounter with some guru, who would (note this, young ladies) relieve you of your virginity (if, that is…) in the form of a very sacred blessing.
For those who stayed at home the possession of superfluous items at high cost compensated for a spiritual awakening……
January 22nd, 2024 06:43
Nothing is Free
Cassie58 said:
Oh my goodness! How very blue:)
Have a good Monday Neville.
January 22nd, 2024 03:41
Cassie58 said:
Oh my goodness! How very blue:)
Have a good Monday Neville.
January 22nd, 2024 03:41
Nothing is Free
orchidee said:
I keep telling KP that botox is not free! lol.
January 22nd, 2024 03:17
orchidee said:
I keep telling KP that botox is not free! lol.
January 22nd, 2024 03:17
Nothing is Free
Accidental Poet said:
And top shelf is this little scribble N. Excellent. 😉👍
January 22nd, 2024 03:05
Accidental Poet said:
And top shelf is this little scribble N. Excellent. 😉👍
January 22nd, 2024 03:05
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that this was real Neville and not a miracle that you imagined.
Andy
January 22nd, 2024 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that this was real Neville and not a miracle that you imagined.
Andy
January 22nd, 2024 02:14
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds to me a Knight in shining armour, helping someone back to their best is not an easy task and then some. Beautiful to know.
January 22nd, 2024 01:55
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds to me a Knight in shining armour, helping someone back to their best is not an easy task and then some. Beautiful to know.
January 22nd, 2024 01:55
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful tale of what must surely be a Japanese legend. I don\'t know of such a legend. The only connection I could see is their art called Kintsugi, where they take broken ceramics and repair them with lacquer and gold pigment, such that the finished repair work looks like threads on the object. Thus, restoring its beauty. Almost like a miracle. - Phil A.
January 21st, 2024 16:40
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful tale of what must surely be a Japanese legend. I don\'t know of such a legend. The only connection I could see is their art called Kintsugi, where they take broken ceramics and repair them with lacquer and gold pigment, such that the finished repair work looks like threads on the object. Thus, restoring its beauty. Almost like a miracle. - Phil A.
January 21st, 2024 16:40
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Bella Shepard said:
\"Let\'s make it neatly\", according to translation, I was interested. I love the sentiment of this poem, of caring so much for another, to take them to heart and make them whole, seeing something wonderful in them. Beautiful my friend!!
January 21st, 2024 14:18
Bella Shepard said:
\"Let\'s make it neatly\", according to translation, I was interested. I love the sentiment of this poem, of caring so much for another, to take them to heart and make them whole, seeing something wonderful in them. Beautiful my friend!!
January 21st, 2024 14:18
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
orchidee said:
Bit of French there?! Fido will translate it. lol.
January 21st, 2024 08:04
orchidee said:
Bit of French there?! Fido will translate it. lol.
January 21st, 2024 08:04
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Cassie58 said:
Broken items of china and glass can be restored and value can be added to them. Where they are broken, they can be repaired and gold powder or leaf can be worked into the flaws. This is a Japanese art. In your poem, I imagined a shattered bowl put together again and restored to its former beauty. What a lovely idea. I watched a video. Fascinating Neville.
A bit kinder than Botox eh? Happy Sunday.
Chris
January 21st, 2024 06:57
Cassie58 said:
Broken items of china and glass can be restored and value can be added to them. Where they are broken, they can be repaired and gold powder or leaf can be worked into the flaws. This is a Japanese art. In your poem, I imagined a shattered bowl put together again and restored to its former beauty. What a lovely idea. I watched a video. Fascinating Neville.
A bit kinder than Botox eh? Happy Sunday.
Chris
January 21st, 2024 06:57
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Doggerel Dave said:
Did try Guv, honestly. All I got was involved instructions re tense etc (never dun that in English, let alone Japanese) plus an offer to fly me to Japan tout suite. And that ain\'t Japanese either, but it\'s the best I can do to sound sophisticated.
January 21st, 2024 05:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Did try Guv, honestly. All I got was involved instructions re tense etc (never dun that in English, let alone Japanese) plus an offer to fly me to Japan tout suite. And that ain\'t Japanese either, but it\'s the best I can do to sound sophisticated.
January 21st, 2024 05:34
Gaia’s Secret Garden
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like Gaia\'s a bit frisky lass. And Neville\'s after her... 😆
January 20th, 2024 10:17
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like Gaia\'s a bit frisky lass. And Neville\'s after her... 😆
January 20th, 2024 10:17
Gaia’s Secret Garden
Cassie58 said:
Goddess Gaia, brings out the free spirit in all her admirers. I sense that here in your lines.
Surrounded
by rainbows then
dancing
like a candle flame
How lovely is that. Have a super Saturday Neville.
January 20th, 2024 04:05
Cassie58 said:
Goddess Gaia, brings out the free spirit in all her admirers. I sense that here in your lines.
Surrounded
by rainbows then
dancing
like a candle flame
How lovely is that. Have a super Saturday Neville.
January 20th, 2024 04:05
Gaia’s Secret Garden
Goldfinch60 said:
Just lay there Neville but make sure that you rise into the world.
Andy
January 20th, 2024 03:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Just lay there Neville but make sure that you rise into the world.
Andy
January 20th, 2024 03:08
Another One of Those Café Moments
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, took me back to those days in the sixties where music was good and the girls were so good to look at by a shy one like me.
Andy
January 20th, 2024 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, took me back to those days in the sixties where music was good and the girls were so good to look at by a shy one like me.
Andy
January 20th, 2024 02:45
Lavished
Parisab said:
So artful Neville! It portrays a portrait still appreciated by the artist secretly, in some dark and obscure gallery-your work always gets my imagination going, and that’s not an easy task
January 19th, 2024 16:00
Parisab said:
So artful Neville! It portrays a portrait still appreciated by the artist secretly, in some dark and obscure gallery-your work always gets my imagination going, and that’s not an easy task
January 19th, 2024 16:00
Another One of Those Café Moments
Doggerel Dave said:
That focus on physical beauty - something I\'ve fought against within myself (among a number of other discomforting characteristics I have no intention of disclosing here) for most of my life.......
Thanks for the prompt, Neville.
January 19th, 2024 15:53
Doggerel Dave said:
That focus on physical beauty - something I\'ve fought against within myself (among a number of other discomforting characteristics I have no intention of disclosing here) for most of my life.......
Thanks for the prompt, Neville.
January 19th, 2024 15:53
Another One of Those Café Moments
Cassie58 said:
Shy boy. I always liked them best. That’s because I was a shy girl. You took me to the scene. I recognized it. You didn’t notice me. I was in the corner drinking a vanilla milkshake. Have a fab weekend Neville.
January 19th, 2024 05:59
Cassie58 said:
Shy boy. I always liked them best. That’s because I was a shy girl. You took me to the scene. I recognized it. You didn’t notice me. I was in the corner drinking a vanilla milkshake. Have a fab weekend Neville.
January 19th, 2024 05:59
Another One of Those Café Moments
Accidental Poet said:
Hey, old 60\'s # 1 songs ROCK. But I was that shy one too back then. 🙄
January 19th, 2024 05:00
Accidental Poet said:
Hey, old 60\'s # 1 songs ROCK. But I was that shy one too back then. 🙄
January 19th, 2024 05:00
Another One of Those Café Moments
orchidee said:
Well, it couldn\'t have been KP in the cafe - beauty?! lol.
January 19th, 2024 04:29
orchidee said:
Well, it couldn\'t have been KP in the cafe - beauty?! lol.
January 19th, 2024 04:29
Another One of Those Café Moments
Tom Dylan said:
Really captured the scene. Very well done, Neville.
January 19th, 2024 04:16
Tom Dylan said:
Really captured the scene. Very well done, Neville.
January 19th, 2024 04:16
Again Upon Reflection
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, there are many poems of differing types, especially love poems within our minds and hearts.
Andy
January 19th, 2024 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, there are many poems of differing types, especially love poems within our minds and hearts.
Andy
January 19th, 2024 02:18
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