Comments received on poems by Neville



Fleeced
Cassie58 said:

This feels like a black shadow lurking in the background. Makes me think of negative thoughts or even depression. The golden ones are much more positive. Make sure you sit in the sun and not the shade. This poem can be interpreted in different ways. That’s what I read on the tin. Happy Thursday Neville.

February 29th, 2024 01:48

Fleeced
Accidental Poet said:

I know the feeling well. Great write N. 👍

February 29th, 2024 01:05

My Very Dearest Sigmund
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. Great job.

February 28th, 2024 22:41

My Very Dearest Sigmund
Bella Shepard said:

I\'m sure your ego and id were quite refreshed after such a cathartic massage. Good for Hannah, and more so for you. Just wondering what she was playing, Chopin, Mozart? You are the funnest!

February 28th, 2024 16:35

My Very Dearest Sigmund
Accidental Poet said:

May your quest be granted Sir N. 😉👍

February 28th, 2024 10:11

My Very Dearest Sigmund
Doggerel Dave said:

Yer old Sigmond, while decried in some (many?) circles, certainly had a few truths which have more than lingered… so, guilt free, go tickle them ivories…no, ignore the ivories….

February 28th, 2024 07:15

My Very Dearest Sigmund
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful, and powerful dear Nev, I have always found people with ego are the ones we should avoid. 🌹

February 28th, 2024 03:45

My Very Dearest Sigmund
orchidee said:

I probably never knew ego and id could be massaged that way! Best not explain it further to me, or I will swoon! heehee.

February 28th, 2024 03:22

For All Those Once Beautiful
Goldfinch60 said:

That beauty has only changed Neville, all are beautiful in differing ways.

Andy

February 28th, 2024 02:20

For All Those Once Beautiful
Doggerel Dave said:

My Doc told me I\'m maturing like fine wine when I popped in for my yearly assessment.... (true).... or was it cheese?....... gorgonzola? ....Anyway, I left with another \'script.....

February 27th, 2024 17:22

For All Those Once Beautiful
Kinsey Peterson said:

As always, a lovely piece. This reminds me of a quote: \"Let\'s do it for the love that used to be here. It is reason enough.\" Something I find to be a beautiful sentiment.

February 27th, 2024 15:24

For All Those Once Beautiful
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous.

February 27th, 2024 13:10

For All Those Once Beautiful
Teddy.15 said:

lol definitely humourous. Yeh tell me about it 🤣 I used to walk the catwalk I mean walk the cat lol ok on a serious note those who believe they are gorgeous are usually the ones who are not! That\'s what I believe anyway. A wonderful provoking piece here dear Nev. 🌹

February 27th, 2024 12:15

For All Those Once Beautiful
Christina8 said:

Wonderfully said!! Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.....

February 27th, 2024 10:33

For All Those Once Beautiful
Cassie58 said:

Youth thankfully does not define beauty. There is beauty everywhere for those who look and inner beauty lasts forever. What’s more I recognize it when I come across it.

Wisdom comes with age.

I’ll always raise my glass to you Neville.

February 27th, 2024 10:18

For All Those Once Beautiful
Accidental Poet said:

Yes, but beauty within one\'s heart is eternal. Well penned my gifted friend. 👍

February 27th, 2024 09:26

For All Those Once Beautiful
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
KP was once beautiful, but I can\'t think when! lol.

February 27th, 2024 09:14

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Goldfinch60 said:

Your father will always be with you Neville as mine is with me.

Andy

February 27th, 2024 02:22

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Bella Shepard said:

This poem requires words it is hard to find, to tell you how deeply moving it is. I sense a selfless man, who loved you unconditionally as you gazed into those eyes, a very special smile he tried to forge, just for you. I visited my father in the hospital on a Saturday morning, and that afternoon he died alone, in a hospital bed. I envy you those moments you had and cherish. God bless dear Nev.

February 26th, 2024 17:12

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Teddy.15 said:

Very beautiful. Your last lines really powerful and speak by themselves 🌹

February 26th, 2024 15:19

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Accidental Poet said:

A very emotional write here N. Brings back my own memories of both my parents passing. 🫂

February 26th, 2024 09:53

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
orchidee said:

Yes, a moving piece N.
Meanwhile - I wish KP would move - to the Moon permanently. lol.

February 26th, 2024 09:08

575
Neville said:


Absolutely a femme fatal wound no less …

February 26th, 2024 08:30

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Tom Dylan said:

A moving piece, Neville.

February 26th, 2024 08:10

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Cassie58 said:

Now you’ve gone and done it! Started the water works off in the company of rain on the window pane. This piece apart from being incredibly moving is also inspirational poetry. I feel sad for you too and you have me thinking about my own father and how much I miss him. Good morning my friend.

February 26th, 2024 06:29

The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Doggerel Dave said:

Takes more than a clinician\'s view of the world to cope with....
A very pain filled piece, Neville.

February 26th, 2024 05:06

575
Goldfinch60 said:

I know you still are
Your words bring joy to us all
Just keep on looking

Andy

February 26th, 2024 02:23

575
Bella Shepard said:

\"I grieve, therefore I am\". We must have both sides to feel deeply, and to know what love truly is. Beautifully said in 3 perfect lines!

February 25th, 2024 18:01

575
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

February 25th, 2024 16:45

No Comment
Neilton said:

a very sensitive topic..Amazing work!!

February 25th, 2024 15:09



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