Comments received on poems by Neville
Three Summers
Parisab said:
One is afraid that after three summers , they might fall. Love the title and the heat the poem gives off, poetic friend.
February 25th, 2024 11:32
Parisab said:
One is afraid that after three summers , they might fall. Love the title and the heat the poem gives off, poetic friend.
February 25th, 2024 11:32
575
Accidental Poet said:
An interesting scribble
Far removed from any quibble
A poet not in sight will belittle
Such fine poetry based on syllables 👍
February 25th, 2024 11:24
Accidental Poet said:
An interesting scribble
Far removed from any quibble
A poet not in sight will belittle
Such fine poetry based on syllables 👍
February 25th, 2024 11:24
575
Christina8 said:
Wonderful 5/7/5....Strikes me that you are writing about a wound, probably emotional. Very nice one!
February 25th, 2024 10:14
Christina8 said:
Wonderful 5/7/5....Strikes me that you are writing about a wound, probably emotional. Very nice one!
February 25th, 2024 10:14
Three Summers
rhmn_7 said:
Maybe the next summer is already upon us, (hopefully).
February 25th, 2024 09:22
rhmn_7 said:
Maybe the next summer is already upon us, (hopefully).
February 25th, 2024 09:22
575
Cassie58 said:
A perfect 5/7/5 Neville. So few words, yet so much pain contained in them and in the spaces in between. A case of when less says more. I felt this one.
February 25th, 2024 06:58
Cassie58 said:
A perfect 5/7/5 Neville. So few words, yet so much pain contained in them and in the spaces in between. A case of when less says more. I felt this one.
February 25th, 2024 06:58
575
Doggerel Dave said:
Not good at numerology, Neville... after all, it took me a long time ...no some time... no a reasonable amount of time to place 69 into its correct place in the hierarchy of values.....
February 25th, 2024 04:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Not good at numerology, Neville... after all, it took me a long time ...no some time... no a reasonable amount of time to place 69 into its correct place in the hierarchy of values.....
February 25th, 2024 04:57
575
orchidee said:
I\'m afraid KP dared to look in all the mirrors in our house. She had 7,483 of them. They\'ve all cracked! lol.
February 25th, 2024 04:53
orchidee said:
I\'m afraid KP dared to look in all the mirrors in our house. She had 7,483 of them. They\'ve all cracked! lol.
February 25th, 2024 04:53
Three Summers
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame but I am sure you found a new life Neville.
Andy
February 25th, 2024 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame but I am sure you found a new life Neville.
Andy
February 25th, 2024 02:00
Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Cassie58 said:
Who needs central heating on a cold February evening when you can have scorchio at MPS. Cooking on regulo 9 here Neville:)
February 24th, 2024 16:37
Cassie58 said:
Who needs central heating on a cold February evening when you can have scorchio at MPS. Cooking on regulo 9 here Neville:)
February 24th, 2024 16:37
Three Summers
Cassie58 said:
I am reminded of that old saying Neville, it’s better to have loved and lost than never loved at all. Three whole summers would have covered a lot of blue sky loving. A poignant poem of loss here. Sudden surprise endings are like a thunderbolt. They are the most painful sadly. Happy Saturday my friend.
February 24th, 2024 15:37
Cassie58 said:
I am reminded of that old saying Neville, it’s better to have loved and lost than never loved at all. Three whole summers would have covered a lot of blue sky loving. A poignant poem of loss here. Sudden surprise endings are like a thunderbolt. They are the most painful sadly. Happy Saturday my friend.
February 24th, 2024 15:37
Three Summers
orchidee said:
Do two swallows (a variation on \'one swallow\', I discovered) make a Summer?
If not, how many swallows do we need to see?! Or how many guinea pigs?! lol.
February 24th, 2024 13:35
orchidee said:
Do two swallows (a variation on \'one swallow\', I discovered) make a Summer?
If not, how many swallows do we need to see?! Or how many guinea pigs?! lol.
February 24th, 2024 13:35
Three Summers
Teddy.15 said:
Three whole summers are better than none my dear Nev. 🌹
February 24th, 2024 08:18
Teddy.15 said:
Three whole summers are better than none my dear Nev. 🌹
February 24th, 2024 08:18
Three Summers
Accidental Poet said:
Three\'s better than none, and it did lead to a great little poem. 😉👍
February 24th, 2024 07:56
Accidental Poet said:
Three\'s better than none, and it did lead to a great little poem. 😉👍
February 24th, 2024 07:56
Three Summers
Doggerel Dave said:
Them\'s the breaks, Mate...nothing lasts forever (despite all the rhubarb about diamonds.....)
February 24th, 2024 05:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Them\'s the breaks, Mate...nothing lasts forever (despite all the rhubarb about diamonds.....)
February 24th, 2024 05:11
Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Goldfinch60 said:
It must have been a wonderful time Neville.
Andy
February 24th, 2024 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
It must have been a wonderful time Neville.
Andy
February 24th, 2024 02:44
Glare
Bella Shepard said:
The mind\'s eye holds the image, but the heart holds emotion, kept safe as a wonderful memory. Beautifully versed dear friend.
February 23rd, 2024 15:35
Bella Shepard said:
The mind\'s eye holds the image, but the heart holds emotion, kept safe as a wonderful memory. Beautifully versed dear friend.
February 23rd, 2024 15:35
Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Bella Shepard said:
Titillating, tantalizing, and metaphorically tremendous. I\'d say \"WOW,\" but that would be an understatement. You\'ve given this old Catholic School Girl something to ponder. Yes indeed!
February 23rd, 2024 15:22
Bella Shepard said:
Titillating, tantalizing, and metaphorically tremendous. I\'d say \"WOW,\" but that would be an understatement. You\'ve given this old Catholic School Girl something to ponder. Yes indeed!
February 23rd, 2024 15:22
Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m having a hot flush over here lol love the scenery especially on your last lines. 🔥
February 23rd, 2024 13:15
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m having a hot flush over here lol love the scenery especially on your last lines. 🔥
February 23rd, 2024 13:15
Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Christina8 said:
As erotica, I think your poetry is so vivid in your descriptions, delicately and tastefully so.....I think I need to step out for some air!
February 23rd, 2024 11:51
Christina8 said:
As erotica, I think your poetry is so vivid in your descriptions, delicately and tastefully so.....I think I need to step out for some air!
February 23rd, 2024 11:51
Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Accidental Poet said:
A personal experience I presume N, and a great one at that. 😉👍
February 23rd, 2024 10:24
Accidental Poet said:
A personal experience I presume N, and a great one at that. 😉👍
February 23rd, 2024 10:24
Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve ex-seeded yourself there, Neville...
February 23rd, 2024 08:51
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve ex-seeded yourself there, Neville...
February 23rd, 2024 08:51
Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
orchidee said:
Don\'t explain the meaning further, or I will swoon! lol.
February 23rd, 2024 06:43
orchidee said:
Don\'t explain the meaning further, or I will swoon! lol.
February 23rd, 2024 06:43
Glare
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories can bring so many emotions Neville.
(My Laphroaig always tastes wonderful though - LOL)
Andy
February 23rd, 2024 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories can bring so many emotions Neville.
(My Laphroaig always tastes wonderful though - LOL)
Andy
February 23rd, 2024 02:42
Glare
Kinsey Peterson said:
The way you used the changing of the alcohol was very well done to describe the emotions within your piece. I appreciate learning from your work :)
February 22nd, 2024 13:50
Kinsey Peterson said:
The way you used the changing of the alcohol was very well done to describe the emotions within your piece. I appreciate learning from your work :)
February 22nd, 2024 13:50
Glare
Accidental Poet said:
As long as you\'ve survived N, that\'s the important thing. 😉👍
February 22nd, 2024 10:19
Accidental Poet said:
As long as you\'ve survived N, that\'s the important thing. 😉👍
February 22nd, 2024 10:19
Glare
orchidee said:
How can I forget the forget-me-nots of KP\'s botox eyes?! lol.
February 22nd, 2024 05:47
orchidee said:
How can I forget the forget-me-nots of KP\'s botox eyes?! lol.
February 22nd, 2024 05:47
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