Comments received on poems by Neville
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
MendedFences27 said:
Could there be more? So many things get overlooked, are never sought after,
or are just plain missed as valueless. In the course of life much is never experienced, because of its lack of necessity. People draw the breadth of their living into the quarters of their habitat. Life becomes richer as horizons are expanded.
An eye-opening poem that gives examples of things missed and questions whether we should be more open-minded. Loved the personification of \"the leaf rejoicing.\" I believe your examples cover all of the senses save the sense of touch and I guessed this to be intentional. Great poem. - Phil A.
October 6th, 2023 14:09
MendedFences27 said:
Could there be more? So many things get overlooked, are never sought after,
or are just plain missed as valueless. In the course of life much is never experienced, because of its lack of necessity. People draw the breadth of their living into the quarters of their habitat. Life becomes richer as horizons are expanded.
An eye-opening poem that gives examples of things missed and questions whether we should be more open-minded. Loved the personification of \"the leaf rejoicing.\" I believe your examples cover all of the senses save the sense of touch and I guessed this to be intentional. Great poem. - Phil A.
October 6th, 2023 14:09
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
Sunsetmet said:
I love your words truly meaningful you really thought them out thanks so much great poet
October 6th, 2023 07:22
Sunsetmet said:
I love your words truly meaningful you really thought them out thanks so much great poet
October 6th, 2023 07:22
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
arqios said:
There seems to be a significant olfactory trigger to this sensing. Mmm....
October 6th, 2023 06:16
arqios said:
There seems to be a significant olfactory trigger to this sensing. Mmm....
October 6th, 2023 06:16
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
L. B. Mek said:
\'take the silver
off white glint
on a herons cheek ..
Visible only
in the half-light,
or the tremor
of a single leaf rejoicing,\'
Oh what a gift to drink lavishly
from your intoxicating poetic ink
A dreamscape of language
gifting a sip of fresh fall cyder brew
simply
!!!BRILLIANT!!!
\'THE\' Poet
thank you, Hyung
October 6th, 2023 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'take the silver
off white glint
on a herons cheek ..
Visible only
in the half-light,
or the tremor
of a single leaf rejoicing,\'
Oh what a gift to drink lavishly
from your intoxicating poetic ink
A dreamscape of language
gifting a sip of fresh fall cyder brew
simply
!!!BRILLIANT!!!
\'THE\' Poet
thank you, Hyung
October 6th, 2023 06:04
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
L. B. Mek said:
“The best bridge
between despair and hope
is a good night\'s sleep.”
well, too fckn bad
so many of us, are
insomniacs...
October 6th, 2023 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
“The best bridge
between despair and hope
is a good night\'s sleep.”
well, too fckn bad
so many of us, are
insomniacs...
October 6th, 2023 05:59
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
L. B. Mek said:
\'to plunge himself
into her hunger ..\'
(sadly..
.. our crude - cold humanity
is heading exactly
to that drought of emotion reality
in our soon to be
dystopian society
removed from a mirage community
let alone
that vulnerability of intimacy...)
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
\'where we offer shallow, no mess
solutions
to your lifetime of debilitating scars\'
visionary Brilliance dear Poet supreme
By the Time the majority
can relate to these lines
it will have already been
too late...
how monstrously deflating
to contemplate!
October 6th, 2023 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'to plunge himself
into her hunger ..\'
(sadly..
.. our crude - cold humanity
is heading exactly
to that drought of emotion reality
in our soon to be
dystopian society
removed from a mirage community
let alone
that vulnerability of intimacy...)
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
\'where we offer shallow, no mess
solutions
to your lifetime of debilitating scars\'
visionary Brilliance dear Poet supreme
By the Time the majority
can relate to these lines
it will have already been
too late...
how monstrously deflating
to contemplate!
October 6th, 2023 05:55
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
orchidee said:
Dang it! What we been missing? I been missing all this with KP around. All I get is the smell of botox! lol.
October 6th, 2023 04:10
orchidee said:
Dang it! What we been missing? I been missing all this with KP around. All I get is the smell of botox! lol.
October 6th, 2023 04:10
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
LIZ said:
Precognition? Because this whole poem reminds me of.....being intuitive. Having....found....recognition of something that\'s about to happen...a hint. Even maybe...de ja vu! And yet, your question at the end, to me, says....\"we know, we found, so what are we waiting for?\". Got me thinking hard! Thank you!! 💜
October 6th, 2023 03:05
LIZ said:
Precognition? Because this whole poem reminds me of.....being intuitive. Having....found....recognition of something that\'s about to happen...a hint. Even maybe...de ja vu! And yet, your question at the end, to me, says....\"we know, we found, so what are we waiting for?\". Got me thinking hard! Thank you!! 💜
October 6th, 2023 03:05
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
Bella Shepard said:
Blessed sleep, do we ever get enough of it in our world today? Quantity and quality up for grabs. Wishing you peaceful sleep whenever you can grab it. Good write dear friend!
October 5th, 2023 14:49
Bella Shepard said:
Blessed sleep, do we ever get enough of it in our world today? Quantity and quality up for grabs. Wishing you peaceful sleep whenever you can grab it. Good write dear friend!
October 5th, 2023 14:49
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
MendedFences27 said:
A traffic light of artful intent. We squeeze a moment here, a moment there, simply for the gratification of continuing on the journey of poetic expression. Sometimes we pause long enough to pen a few lines of truthfulness. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2023 11:52
MendedFences27 said:
A traffic light of artful intent. We squeeze a moment here, a moment there, simply for the gratification of continuing on the journey of poetic expression. Sometimes we pause long enough to pen a few lines of truthfulness. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2023 11:52
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
Pop64 said:
Sleep, the intermission between our various acts. I really like the way you identify its brief but required action as it is part of our lives. Well done!
October 5th, 2023 05:24
Pop64 said:
Sleep, the intermission between our various acts. I really like the way you identify its brief but required action as it is part of our lives. Well done!
October 5th, 2023 05:24
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
orchidee said:
Yes - is your work part of life, or is your life part of work? as one said somewhere. Might have been me said it originally - who knows. Doh!
You staggered back in amazement at the wit of that saying? 😁
October 5th, 2023 05:05
orchidee said:
Yes - is your work part of life, or is your life part of work? as one said somewhere. Might have been me said it originally - who knows. Doh!
You staggered back in amazement at the wit of that saying? 😁
October 5th, 2023 05:05
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
Teddy.15 said:
LOL wonderful, a cap nap of poetry. Brilliant the imagery is fab. ❤️
October 5th, 2023 04:01
Teddy.15 said:
LOL wonderful, a cap nap of poetry. Brilliant the imagery is fab. ❤️
October 5th, 2023 04:01
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
LIZ said:
I swear your titles are amazing!! \"This is not a turning point, a parking place or reversing bay\"-- sleep really does feel like ONE SECOND sometimes. And then, back to the grind it is!! We got this though!! 💜💜💜💜💜
October 5th, 2023 03:28
LIZ said:
I swear your titles are amazing!! \"This is not a turning point, a parking place or reversing bay\"-- sleep really does feel like ONE SECOND sometimes. And then, back to the grind it is!! We got this though!! 💜💜💜💜💜
October 5th, 2023 03:28
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
arqios said:
Oh but are we allowed to U-turn here? I often wonder.
October 5th, 2023 03:25
arqios said:
Oh but are we allowed to U-turn here? I often wonder.
October 5th, 2023 03:25
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Neville, I was hooked from the beginning.
Andy
October 5th, 2023 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Neville, I was hooked from the beginning.
Andy
October 5th, 2023 01:12
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
Bobby O said:
So so si much here to capture without proper immersion dedicated and realistic interpretive skill so I humbly will admire and truly mean that it’s a piece that could be the whole syllabus for professorial to shed light to lessers inches by inch and still need extra time !!
October 5th, 2023 01:00
Bobby O said:
So so si much here to capture without proper immersion dedicated and realistic interpretive skill so I humbly will admire and truly mean that it’s a piece that could be the whole syllabus for professorial to shed light to lessers inches by inch and still need extra time !!
October 5th, 2023 01:00
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
MendedFences27 said:
A fantasy of the highest order. An amazing tale of sexual fulfillment with an air of futuristic opulence. \"Rainbow Rooms Incorporated,\" leaves much for the reader to ponder - What of all the other colors? - What are the rules? etc.
Loved the impersonal nature of the event. Loved the whole damn thing! - Phil A. -
October 4th, 2023 20:48
MendedFences27 said:
A fantasy of the highest order. An amazing tale of sexual fulfillment with an air of futuristic opulence. \"Rainbow Rooms Incorporated,\" leaves much for the reader to ponder - What of all the other colors? - What are the rules? etc.
Loved the impersonal nature of the event. Loved the whole damn thing! - Phil A. -
October 4th, 2023 20:48
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
Bella Shepard said:
What a strange and magical room, where passions abound, and appetites quenched through the miracle of a credit card. A thrilling story, brilliant imagery, and as always, your incredible style.
October 4th, 2023 12:58
Bella Shepard said:
What a strange and magical room, where passions abound, and appetites quenched through the miracle of a credit card. A thrilling story, brilliant imagery, and as always, your incredible style.
October 4th, 2023 12:58
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
Pop64 said:
Damn! This is a story, a compilation of a setting, cast, subject, finale, it had it all! Exciting? Yes, all built up to a remarkable climax and an ending that revealed the truth of the white room. Marvelous work!
October 4th, 2023 07:40
Pop64 said:
Damn! This is a story, a compilation of a setting, cast, subject, finale, it had it all! Exciting? Yes, all built up to a remarkable climax and an ending that revealed the truth of the white room. Marvelous work!
October 4th, 2023 07:40
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
Teddy.15 said:
An extraordinary piece here the imagery I hope never to see inside that white room. Fabulous Neville. A beautiful ending kudos on all the imagery. ❤️
October 4th, 2023 05:34
Teddy.15 said:
An extraordinary piece here the imagery I hope never to see inside that white room. Fabulous Neville. A beautiful ending kudos on all the imagery. ❤️
October 4th, 2023 05:34
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I can\'t remember which one it was:
Was KP wet and windswept cos I left her outdoors in a storm?
OR did we arrive too late at the Rainbow Rooms, cos I put our watches back 3 hours on purpose?! heehee.
It\'s nutty adventures ya know. 😁
October 4th, 2023 04:25
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I can\'t remember which one it was:
Was KP wet and windswept cos I left her outdoors in a storm?
OR did we arrive too late at the Rainbow Rooms, cos I put our watches back 3 hours on purpose?! heehee.
It\'s nutty adventures ya know. 😁
October 4th, 2023 04:25
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, old lovers are never forgotten.
Andy
October 4th, 2023 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, old lovers are never forgotten.
Andy
October 4th, 2023 00:55
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
Bobby O said:
When love appeared I was surprised. But then I re thought , it’s typical of you to hold the important impact for that perfect moment. Abracadabra !!
October 3rd, 2023 21:23
Bobby O said:
When love appeared I was surprised. But then I re thought , it’s typical of you to hold the important impact for that perfect moment. Abracadabra !!
October 3rd, 2023 21:23
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
Christina8 said:
I like where you are headed with this....so things like \"more please\" and other things I cannot utter here. A very good write if I do say so myself!
October 3rd, 2023 13:43
Christina8 said:
I like where you are headed with this....so things like \"more please\" and other things I cannot utter here. A very good write if I do say so myself!
October 3rd, 2023 13:43
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
Lorenz said:
inspired whispers
concerto for a voice.
October 3rd, 2023 06:00
Lorenz said:
inspired whispers
concerto for a voice.
October 3rd, 2023 06:00
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
LIZ said:
Mmmmm \"Between one old forbidden lover and another\", naughty whispers?
\"I can’t wait to have you”...for example? Am I close at all?? 💜
October 3rd, 2023 02:47
LIZ said:
Mmmmm \"Between one old forbidden lover and another\", naughty whispers?
\"I can’t wait to have you”...for example? Am I close at all?? 💜
October 3rd, 2023 02:47
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
orchidee said:
Good write N,
I grew a moustache, so that KP would think she is kissing a dead caterpillar. Well, when I kiss her, not often, it\'s like kissing an old trout! lol.
October 3rd, 2023 02:26
orchidee said:
Good write N,
I grew a moustache, so that KP would think she is kissing a dead caterpillar. Well, when I kiss her, not often, it\'s like kissing an old trout! lol.
October 3rd, 2023 02:26
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
Teddy.15 said:
Well I would hope that its \"I love you\" but then again I\'m a romantic teddy lol ❤️
October 3rd, 2023 00:38
Teddy.15 said:
Well I would hope that its \"I love you\" but then again I\'m a romantic teddy lol ❤️
October 3rd, 2023 00:38
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