Comments received on poems by Neville
In the Wake of a Wish
Bobby O said:
The wish is such that our wonderment is true.
September 28th, 2023 00:41
Bobby O said:
The wish is such that our wonderment is true.
September 28th, 2023 00:41
In the Wake of a Wish
Goldfinch60 said:
We are back to the \"What if....\" scenario once more Neville.
Andy
September 27th, 2023 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
We are back to the \"What if....\" scenario once more Neville.
Andy
September 27th, 2023 01:14
In the Wake of a Wish
Christina8 said:
I have wondered that same thing....I think \"what might have been\" is a thought on many peoples minds from time to time. Great write!
September 26th, 2023 10:27
Christina8 said:
I have wondered that same thing....I think \"what might have been\" is a thought on many peoples minds from time to time. Great write!
September 26th, 2023 10:27
In the Wake of a Wish
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor at many levels. Every once in a while such a metaphor comes to mind and this is one. Nicely done Neville
September 26th, 2023 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor at many levels. Every once in a while such a metaphor comes to mind and this is one. Nicely done Neville
September 26th, 2023 05:03
In the Wake of a Wish
Doggerel Dave said:
Much depended on the hand I was delt - not a good \'un, but I played it to the full....didn\'t fold unless left with little choice and there were moments when I could\'ve made a better call but overall never went bust.
Got me contemplating, reminiscing again, Neville......
September 26th, 2023 04:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Much depended on the hand I was delt - not a good \'un, but I played it to the full....didn\'t fold unless left with little choice and there were moments when I could\'ve made a better call but overall never went bust.
Got me contemplating, reminiscing again, Neville......
September 26th, 2023 04:57
In the Wake of a Wish
LIZ said:
You never know.....wishes...do come true. Maybe not how we expected! But they do come true!! 💜
September 26th, 2023 02:35
LIZ said:
You never know.....wishes...do come true. Maybe not how we expected! But they do come true!! 💜
September 26th, 2023 02:35
Ned’s View
Doggerel Dave said:
OK – going to attempt to parse this conundrum.
Ned…Ned Kelly? Nah, I think not - he was more into steel rather than loom woven vests… but he did swing….
Looms? Much empathy and sympathy for the Luddites… as the benefits of new technology have not been uniformly distributed.
Thanks for the thought (or two), Neville.
September 25th, 2023 04:34
Doggerel Dave said:
OK – going to attempt to parse this conundrum.
Ned…Ned Kelly? Nah, I think not - he was more into steel rather than loom woven vests… but he did swing….
Looms? Much empathy and sympathy for the Luddites… as the benefits of new technology have not been uniformly distributed.
Thanks for the thought (or two), Neville.
September 25th, 2023 04:34
Ned’s View
L. B. Mek said:
\'brand new loom ..\'
it all started with those pesky looms
trying to glean and weave, fate
programming our lives in binary
mythical, code..
should have left it all, well alone
we were dashing
in our ignorance and animal skin...
Brilliant!
(I bow to your superior talent
I am fan, because of poetry
like this, you share so regularly)
thank you! Hyung
hope you n yours have a peaceful week
🍻
September 25th, 2023 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'brand new loom ..\'
it all started with those pesky looms
trying to glean and weave, fate
programming our lives in binary
mythical, code..
should have left it all, well alone
we were dashing
in our ignorance and animal skin...
Brilliant!
(I bow to your superior talent
I am fan, because of poetry
like this, you share so regularly)
thank you! Hyung
hope you n yours have a peaceful week
🍻
September 25th, 2023 04:10
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
L. B. Mek said:
seven days and a month early..
also, reduce the amount of mirrors
in the house..
also..... (don\'t place these thoughts in my head)
also.. Thank you! Hyung
for another great read
lol
(forgive me I\'m in a playful mood)
September 25th, 2023 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
seven days and a month early..
also, reduce the amount of mirrors
in the house..
also..... (don\'t place these thoughts in my head)
also.. Thank you! Hyung
for another great read
lol
(forgive me I\'m in a playful mood)
September 25th, 2023 04:02
When My Heart Fell in Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'and fresh laundered sheets ..\'
honeymoon phases be da best
the rest can just, wait
in the wise words of Quagmire
\'giggidy, giggidy\' heat
🍻😎😉
September 25th, 2023 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'and fresh laundered sheets ..\'
honeymoon phases be da best
the rest can just, wait
in the wise words of Quagmire
\'giggidy, giggidy\' heat
🍻😎😉
September 25th, 2023 04:00
Ned’s View
LIZ said:
Oh Neville....it\'s definitely changing our human environment. It can be scary. Definitely not a solution to real world problems....but one can only hope....it\'s realized....before it\'s too late....or is it already? 💜
September 25th, 2023 03:21
LIZ said:
Oh Neville....it\'s definitely changing our human environment. It can be scary. Definitely not a solution to real world problems....but one can only hope....it\'s realized....before it\'s too late....or is it already? 💜
September 25th, 2023 03:21
Ned’s View
Teddy.15 said:
You are talking of robots taking over our jobs and lives. Powerful stuff dear Nev. Unfortunately here they are everywhere even the banks have cyber pens to use now. 💜
September 25th, 2023 03:16
Teddy.15 said:
You are talking of robots taking over our jobs and lives. Powerful stuff dear Nev. Unfortunately here they are everywhere even the banks have cyber pens to use now. 💜
September 25th, 2023 03:16
Ned’s View
Goldfinch60 said:
It may well be Neville but hopefully some time soon people in power will realise they are destroying the world.
Andy
September 25th, 2023 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
It may well be Neville but hopefully some time soon people in power will realise they are destroying the world.
Andy
September 25th, 2023 02:49
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words Neville.
Andy
September 25th, 2023 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words Neville.
Andy
September 25th, 2023 02:41
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
Doggerel Dave said:
\"The end of the affair\"?
Subtle and neat. Though I read through twice before I realised that the first word last line was not \'symbiotic\'.
September 24th, 2023 18:22
Doggerel Dave said:
\"The end of the affair\"?
Subtle and neat. Though I read through twice before I realised that the first word last line was not \'symbiotic\'.
September 24th, 2023 18:22
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
Bobby O said:
Forever forgotten is different than forgotten rhythm which might suggest a soon repair with in exact procedure. One less or maybe One More black and tan could be a baseline start?
September 24th, 2023 17:32
Bobby O said:
Forever forgotten is different than forgotten rhythm which might suggest a soon repair with in exact procedure. One less or maybe One More black and tan could be a baseline start?
September 24th, 2023 17:32
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
Parisab said:
I respect the mature words, love shifts its energy I presume…
September 24th, 2023 17:00
Parisab said:
I respect the mature words, love shifts its energy I presume…
September 24th, 2023 17:00
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
spilleronsheet said:
This is a heartfelt poetry…it feels like issues of adulting for me…with time we forget to cherish the time with ourselves and ending as strangers with the voice inside…lovely poetry dear Neville….
September 24th, 2023 15:58
spilleronsheet said:
This is a heartfelt poetry…it feels like issues of adulting for me…with time we forget to cherish the time with ourselves and ending as strangers with the voice inside…lovely poetry dear Neville….
September 24th, 2023 15:58
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
Bella Shepard said:
For me, you put into words a feeling that comes over me more and more these days. I\'m aging, life is changing, and sometimes I don\'t recognize the stranger that\'s here now. This poem is so touching in which ever context you choose to see it. Thank you for sharing!
September 24th, 2023 12:31
Bella Shepard said:
For me, you put into words a feeling that comes over me more and more these days. I\'m aging, life is changing, and sometimes I don\'t recognize the stranger that\'s here now. This poem is so touching in which ever context you choose to see it. Thank you for sharing!
September 24th, 2023 12:31
Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m guessing grand parents are visiting the beautiful babe today, my goodness sometimes life can be or feel so complicated, I\'ve felt like a stranger many times being away from home, but actually in the end I\'m home. ❤️
September 24th, 2023 11:37
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m guessing grand parents are visiting the beautiful babe today, my goodness sometimes life can be or feel so complicated, I\'ve felt like a stranger many times being away from home, but actually in the end I\'m home. ❤️
September 24th, 2023 11:37
When My Heart Fell in Love
Bobby O said:
Hmmmm. Heart. Brain. Soul. Spirit. I think padding the intangible to insure an available escape clause is pure brilliance.
September 24th, 2023 01:08
Bobby O said:
Hmmmm. Heart. Brain. Soul. Spirit. I think padding the intangible to insure an available escape clause is pure brilliance.
September 24th, 2023 01:08
When My Heart Fell in Love
Goldfinch60 said:
May that freedom be forever with you Neville.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
May that freedom be forever with you Neville.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:51
Accumulations
Goldfinch60 said:
Every moment we change history when together Neville.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Every moment we change history when together Neville.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:38
When My Heart Fell in Love
Bella Shepard said:
The first blush of love does indeed dazzle the senses. The shine can wear off and back to reality. No harm, no foul? Truly an engaging write for the little gray cells my friend
September 23rd, 2023 13:57
Bella Shepard said:
The first blush of love does indeed dazzle the senses. The shine can wear off and back to reality. No harm, no foul? Truly an engaging write for the little gray cells my friend
September 23rd, 2023 13:57
When My Heart Fell in Love
Parisab said:
Poem reveals that the love is the intersection of soul in synch with spirit. And that’s such a breakthrough!
September 23rd, 2023 11:31
Parisab said:
Poem reveals that the love is the intersection of soul in synch with spirit. And that’s such a breakthrough!
September 23rd, 2023 11:31
When My Heart Fell in Love
orchidee said:
Good write N. A lot of \'ufffing\' here. I dunno wot it is, of course!
September 23rd, 2023 04:57
orchidee said:
Good write N. A lot of \'ufffing\' here. I dunno wot it is, of course!
September 23rd, 2023 04:57
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