Comments received on poems by Neville
Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
2781 said:
My mum and her family drank like the fishermen they were, and swore like the troopers they were.
Nothing I am ashamed of.
November 16th, 2023 15:02
2781 said:
My mum and her family drank like the fishermen they were, and swore like the troopers they were.
Nothing I am ashamed of.
November 16th, 2023 15:02
Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Love the story. I was reading an old dictionary one time, I came across the word, \"Jack in the green\" It was someone who stood in the bushes and looked in people\'s windows. I thought it was hysterical, so I started calling all my friends jack in the green. lol
November 16th, 2023 09:15
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Love the story. I was reading an old dictionary one time, I came across the word, \"Jack in the green\" It was someone who stood in the bushes and looked in people\'s windows. I thought it was hysterical, so I started calling all my friends jack in the green. lol
November 16th, 2023 09:15
Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Doggerel Dave said:
What a textured environment you grew up in Neville, rich in verbal colour. All poetry should be seasoned in such a way. No poet could be too precious after that.
November 16th, 2023 06:09
Doggerel Dave said:
What a textured environment you grew up in Neville, rich in verbal colour. All poetry should be seasoned in such a way. No poet could be too precious after that.
November 16th, 2023 06:09
Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
KP say such words in tantrums, when I don\'t give her more money for botox! lol.
This must be Adventure No. 6849748 or summat in \'The Adventures of Orchi and KP\'.
November 16th, 2023 03:10
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
KP say such words in tantrums, when I don\'t give her more money for botox! lol.
This must be Adventure No. 6849748 or summat in \'The Adventures of Orchi and KP\'.
November 16th, 2023 03:10
Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter
Goldfinch60 said:
Language is what it is and nowadays it can be dreadful.
Andy
November 16th, 2023 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Language is what it is and nowadays it can be dreadful.
Andy
November 16th, 2023 02:46
Now Looking Back With Anticipation
Goldfinch60 said:
May that anticipation bring much joy and love to your life Neville.
Andy
November 16th, 2023 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
May that anticipation bring much joy and love to your life Neville.
Andy
November 16th, 2023 02:25
Now Looking Back With Anticipation
Doggerel Dave said:
With the sole exception of the tea choice, I cannot but feel myself in your position ( without the little \'un with whom to dispense absolutely valid advice).
November 16th, 2023 01:12
Doggerel Dave said:
With the sole exception of the tea choice, I cannot but feel myself in your position ( without the little \'un with whom to dispense absolutely valid advice).
November 16th, 2023 01:12
Now Looking Back With Anticipation
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is so moving dear Nev. It speaks to me of our children, of the hope and anticipation we have for their future, and of the love and pride we feel as we watch them blossom, as we knew they would. A father\'s heart here, I think. Beautiful!!
November 15th, 2023 15:37
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is so moving dear Nev. It speaks to me of our children, of the hope and anticipation we have for their future, and of the love and pride we feel as we watch them blossom, as we knew they would. A father\'s heart here, I think. Beautiful!!
November 15th, 2023 15:37
Now Looking Back With Anticipation
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Doh! All I see in me tea leaves is KP asking for more money for botox!
She will end up a ghostly trout-like apparition! heehee.
November 15th, 2023 04:45
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Doh! All I see in me tea leaves is KP asking for more money for botox!
She will end up a ghostly trout-like apparition! heehee.
November 15th, 2023 04:45
Now Looking Back With Anticipation
arqios said:
Earl Grey is a constant friend.
November 15th, 2023 04:36
arqios said:
Earl Grey is a constant friend.
November 15th, 2023 04:36
Whispered
Goldfinch60 said:
May that whisper bring more than love to you Neville.
Andy
November 15th, 2023 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
May that whisper bring more than love to you Neville.
Andy
November 15th, 2023 01:26
Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
Bella Shepard said:
What a touching memory, and how sweet of you to procure the remedy. I hope it did the trick. Long ago memories, always there waiting to pop up. Love this poem!
November 14th, 2023 15:26
Bella Shepard said:
What a touching memory, and how sweet of you to procure the remedy. I hope it did the trick. Long ago memories, always there waiting to pop up. Love this poem!
November 14th, 2023 15:26
Whispered
MendedFences27 said:
It won\'t be the first time you \"whisper\" in that \"baby\'s ear.\" Grandad\'s can share many \"secrets\" with granddaughters, and it\'s all because of that \"smile.\" A beautifully gentle poem. - Phil A.
November 14th, 2023 11:39
MendedFences27 said:
It won\'t be the first time you \"whisper\" in that \"baby\'s ear.\" Grandad\'s can share many \"secrets\" with granddaughters, and it\'s all because of that \"smile.\" A beautifully gentle poem. - Phil A.
November 14th, 2023 11:39
Whispered
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem, Nev, no doubt about your adorable granddaughter, such a sweet poem!
November 14th, 2023 10:01
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem, Nev, no doubt about your adorable granddaughter, such a sweet poem!
November 14th, 2023 10:01
Whispered
arqios said:
To be more than loved and in both directions twice as blessed!
November 14th, 2023 05:52
arqios said:
To be more than loved and in both directions twice as blessed!
November 14th, 2023 05:52
Whispered
LIZ said:
Awwwww so beautiful!! Babies are the best secret keepers!!! 🤭💜💜💜💜
November 14th, 2023 03:41
LIZ said:
Awwwww so beautiful!! Babies are the best secret keepers!!! 🤭💜💜💜💜
November 14th, 2023 03:41
Whispered
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I whisper in KP\'s ear sweet nothings - I only whisper: \'I got no more money for your botox today, dear!\' lol.
November 14th, 2023 03:18
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I whisper in KP\'s ear sweet nothings - I only whisper: \'I got no more money for your botox today, dear!\' lol.
November 14th, 2023 03:18
Twisted History the Rape of the Plains People
Dove said:
Having Native American blood , albeit a tiny morsal, I applause this poem. Enjoyed the read! Love the smell of sage..
November 13th, 2023 10:02
Dove said:
Having Native American blood , albeit a tiny morsal, I applause this poem. Enjoyed the read! Love the smell of sage..
November 13th, 2023 10:02
Squeezed Between Our Now and Thens
Dove said:
I\'m wearing that girdle of now and then. \"Then\" is telling me it fits perfectly, but now it\'s too tight.
November 13th, 2023 09:57
Dove said:
I\'m wearing that girdle of now and then. \"Then\" is telling me it fits perfectly, but now it\'s too tight.
November 13th, 2023 09:57
Behold All My Literary Demons
Dove said:
I didn\'t peg you as an Angel, or someone divine, just a devilish poet, who writes sublime.
November 13th, 2023 09:53
Dove said:
I didn\'t peg you as an Angel, or someone divine, just a devilish poet, who writes sublime.
November 13th, 2023 09:53
Shallow Cuts Too Deep
Dove said:
A cry for help, A cry for love, in modern times even a text can be missed. The world is full of pain, undoubtedly she needed a hug & kiss..
November 13th, 2023 09:50
Dove said:
A cry for help, A cry for love, in modern times even a text can be missed. The world is full of pain, undoubtedly she needed a hug & kiss..
November 13th, 2023 09:50
Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
Accidental Poet said:
But, did you keep the tooth as a keepsake of that departed lover? Imagine if you will, running into her today and presenting it to her. 🙂
November 13th, 2023 09:33
Accidental Poet said:
But, did you keep the tooth as a keepsake of that departed lover? Imagine if you will, running into her today and presenting it to her. 🙂
November 13th, 2023 09:33
Shallow Cuts Too Deep
Bobby O said:
Three dimensional w the actuality pang and metaphorically delivering the solemn time and tide owns their own pace and thus avoid any race w the ultimate ticking clock lest undelivered be intended
November 13th, 2023 06:13
Bobby O said:
Three dimensional w the actuality pang and metaphorically delivering the solemn time and tide owns their own pace and thus avoid any race w the ultimate ticking clock lest undelivered be intended
November 13th, 2023 06:13
Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
Bobby O said:
A Proper salute reminds of fortune and I felt this and what better testimony than the remembered gift of a single malt. Homage defined !
November 13th, 2023 05:18
Bobby O said:
A Proper salute reminds of fortune and I felt this and what better testimony than the remembered gift of a single malt. Homage defined !
November 13th, 2023 05:18
Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
arqios said:
A periodic battle that is even more painful than the flashes of agony when the beverage is too hot or too frosty... ouchie
November 13th, 2023 04:08
arqios said:
A periodic battle that is even more painful than the flashes of agony when the beverage is too hot or too frosty... ouchie
November 13th, 2023 04:08
Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
LIZ said:
Taking on someone\'s pain....even if it\'s a long ago memory...still stings. 💜💜💜
November 13th, 2023 03:00
LIZ said:
Taking on someone\'s pain....even if it\'s a long ago memory...still stings. 💜💜💜
November 13th, 2023 03:00
Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
KP wanted to swill and swallow some gin, but I gave her some pig\'s swill! lol.
I\'m a beastly guinea pig sometimes. She will use me for part of her real fur coat.
November 13th, 2023 02:43
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
KP wanted to swill and swallow some gin, but I gave her some pig\'s swill! lol.
I\'m a beastly guinea pig sometimes. She will use me for part of her real fur coat.
November 13th, 2023 02:43
Hold It, Swill Then Swallow
Goldfinch60 said:
Sad words Neville, I do hope you are OK.
Andy
November 13th, 2023 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Sad words Neville, I do hope you are OK.
Andy
November 13th, 2023 02:19
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