Comments received on poems by Neville
Nothing is Free
Cassie58 said:
Oh my goodness! How very blue:)
Have a good Monday Neville.
January 22nd, 2024 03:41
Cassie58 said:
Oh my goodness! How very blue:)
Have a good Monday Neville.
January 22nd, 2024 03:41
Nothing is Free
orchidee said:
I keep telling KP that botox is not free! lol.
January 22nd, 2024 03:17
orchidee said:
I keep telling KP that botox is not free! lol.
January 22nd, 2024 03:17
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that this was real Neville and not a miracle that you imagined.
Andy
January 22nd, 2024 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope that this was real Neville and not a miracle that you imagined.
Andy
January 22nd, 2024 02:14
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds to me a Knight in shining armour, helping someone back to their best is not an easy task and then some. Beautiful to know.
January 22nd, 2024 01:55
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds to me a Knight in shining armour, helping someone back to their best is not an easy task and then some. Beautiful to know.
January 22nd, 2024 01:55
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful tale of what must surely be a Japanese legend. I don\'t know of such a legend. The only connection I could see is their art called Kintsugi, where they take broken ceramics and repair them with lacquer and gold pigment, such that the finished repair work looks like threads on the object. Thus, restoring its beauty. Almost like a miracle. - Phil A.
January 21st, 2024 16:40
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful tale of what must surely be a Japanese legend. I don\'t know of such a legend. The only connection I could see is their art called Kintsugi, where they take broken ceramics and repair them with lacquer and gold pigment, such that the finished repair work looks like threads on the object. Thus, restoring its beauty. Almost like a miracle. - Phil A.
January 21st, 2024 16:40
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Bella Shepard said:
\"Let\'s make it neatly\", according to translation, I was interested. I love the sentiment of this poem, of caring so much for another, to take them to heart and make them whole, seeing something wonderful in them. Beautiful my friend!!
January 21st, 2024 14:18
Bella Shepard said:
\"Let\'s make it neatly\", according to translation, I was interested. I love the sentiment of this poem, of caring so much for another, to take them to heart and make them whole, seeing something wonderful in them. Beautiful my friend!!
January 21st, 2024 14:18
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
orchidee said:
Bit of French there?! Fido will translate it. lol.
January 21st, 2024 08:04
orchidee said:
Bit of French there?! Fido will translate it. lol.
January 21st, 2024 08:04
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Cassie58 said:
Broken items of china and glass can be restored and value can be added to them. Where they are broken, they can be repaired and gold powder or leaf can be worked into the flaws. This is a Japanese art. In your poem, I imagined a shattered bowl put together again and restored to its former beauty. What a lovely idea. I watched a video. Fascinating Neville.
A bit kinder than Botox eh? Happy Sunday.
Chris
January 21st, 2024 06:57
Cassie58 said:
Broken items of china and glass can be restored and value can be added to them. Where they are broken, they can be repaired and gold powder or leaf can be worked into the flaws. This is a Japanese art. In your poem, I imagined a shattered bowl put together again and restored to its former beauty. What a lovely idea. I watched a video. Fascinating Neville.
A bit kinder than Botox eh? Happy Sunday.
Chris
January 21st, 2024 06:57
kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru
Doggerel Dave said:
Did try Guv, honestly. All I got was involved instructions re tense etc (never dun that in English, let alone Japanese) plus an offer to fly me to Japan tout suite. And that ain\'t Japanese either, but it\'s the best I can do to sound sophisticated.
January 21st, 2024 05:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Did try Guv, honestly. All I got was involved instructions re tense etc (never dun that in English, let alone Japanese) plus an offer to fly me to Japan tout suite. And that ain\'t Japanese either, but it\'s the best I can do to sound sophisticated.
January 21st, 2024 05:34
Gaia’s Secret Garden
Cassie58 said:
Goddess Gaia, brings out the free spirit in all her admirers. I sense that here in your lines.
Surrounded
by rainbows then
dancing
like a candle flame
How lovely is that. Have a super Saturday Neville.
January 20th, 2024 04:05
Cassie58 said:
Goddess Gaia, brings out the free spirit in all her admirers. I sense that here in your lines.
Surrounded
by rainbows then
dancing
like a candle flame
How lovely is that. Have a super Saturday Neville.
January 20th, 2024 04:05
Gaia’s Secret Garden
Goldfinch60 said:
Just lay there Neville but make sure that you rise into the world.
Andy
January 20th, 2024 03:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Just lay there Neville but make sure that you rise into the world.
Andy
January 20th, 2024 03:08
Another One of Those Café Moments
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, took me back to those days in the sixties where music was good and the girls were so good to look at by a shy one like me.
Andy
January 20th, 2024 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, took me back to those days in the sixties where music was good and the girls were so good to look at by a shy one like me.
Andy
January 20th, 2024 02:45
Lavished
Parisab said:
So artful Neville! It portrays a portrait still appreciated by the artist secretly, in some dark and obscure gallery-your work always gets my imagination going, and that’s not an easy task
January 19th, 2024 16:00
Parisab said:
So artful Neville! It portrays a portrait still appreciated by the artist secretly, in some dark and obscure gallery-your work always gets my imagination going, and that’s not an easy task
January 19th, 2024 16:00
Another One of Those Café Moments
Doggerel Dave said:
That focus on physical beauty - something I\'ve fought against within myself (among a number of other discomforting characteristics I have no intention of disclosing here) for most of my life.......
Thanks for the prompt, Neville.
January 19th, 2024 15:53
Doggerel Dave said:
That focus on physical beauty - something I\'ve fought against within myself (among a number of other discomforting characteristics I have no intention of disclosing here) for most of my life.......
Thanks for the prompt, Neville.
January 19th, 2024 15:53
Another One of Those Café Moments
Cassie58 said:
Shy boy. I always liked them best. That’s because I was a shy girl. You took me to the scene. I recognized it. You didn’t notice me. I was in the corner drinking a vanilla milkshake. Have a fab weekend Neville.
January 19th, 2024 05:59
Cassie58 said:
Shy boy. I always liked them best. That’s because I was a shy girl. You took me to the scene. I recognized it. You didn’t notice me. I was in the corner drinking a vanilla milkshake. Have a fab weekend Neville.
January 19th, 2024 05:59
Another One of Those Café Moments
orchidee said:
Well, it couldn\'t have been KP in the cafe - beauty?! lol.
January 19th, 2024 04:29
orchidee said:
Well, it couldn\'t have been KP in the cafe - beauty?! lol.
January 19th, 2024 04:29
Another One of Those Café Moments
Tom Dylan said:
Really captured the scene. Very well done, Neville.
January 19th, 2024 04:16
Tom Dylan said:
Really captured the scene. Very well done, Neville.
January 19th, 2024 04:16
Again Upon Reflection
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, there are many poems of differing types, especially love poems within our minds and hearts.
Andy
January 19th, 2024 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, there are many poems of differing types, especially love poems within our minds and hearts.
Andy
January 19th, 2024 02:18
Again Upon Reflection
Doggerel Dave said:
Love yourself? Have I missed something?
You know I have trouble with metaphor, Neville.....
January 18th, 2024 16:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Love yourself? Have I missed something?
You know I have trouble with metaphor, Neville.....
January 18th, 2024 16:53
The Whole of A Woman Shared
Alan R said:
Paints a picture! it was anice read
January 18th, 2024 05:51
Alan R said:
Paints a picture! it was anice read
January 18th, 2024 05:51
Again Upon Reflection
Cassie58 said:
This poem is so beautiful in its sentiment. For anyone who dares to look, they might even find that spring has made an early visit. You know you could charm the birds out of the trees when you write like this. Have a glorious day Neville.
January 18th, 2024 05:16
Cassie58 said:
This poem is so beautiful in its sentiment. For anyone who dares to look, they might even find that spring has made an early visit. You know you could charm the birds out of the trees when you write like this. Have a glorious day Neville.
January 18th, 2024 05:16
Again Upon Reflection
Tom Dylan said:
Very good, Neville. Really well written and love the sentiment.
January 18th, 2024 04:08
Tom Dylan said:
Very good, Neville. Really well written and love the sentiment.
January 18th, 2024 04:08
Again Upon Reflection
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Btu woe is me! I got no mirrors left. KP broke them all - she looked in them! heehee. I am cruel, a naughty furry guinea pig. lol.
January 18th, 2024 03:23
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Btu woe is me! I got no mirrors left. KP broke them all - she looked in them! heehee. I am cruel, a naughty furry guinea pig. lol.
January 18th, 2024 03:23
Lavished
Bobby O said:
How clever ? The Canvas becomes a character with various degrees of depth and function. Versatility and Anthropomorphization combined
January 18th, 2024 03:21
Bobby O said:
How clever ? The Canvas becomes a character with various degrees of depth and function. Versatility and Anthropomorphization combined
January 18th, 2024 03:21
The Whole of A Woman Shared
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville, it happens like this sometimes and it can be hard to overcome but love is so strong in our lives.
Andy
January 18th, 2024 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville, it happens like this sometimes and it can be hard to overcome but love is so strong in our lives.
Andy
January 18th, 2024 02:12
The Whole of A Woman Shared
MendedFences27 said:
If it\'s in the realm of human existence, it\'s fodder for poetry. From Bukowski to Dickinson, from Dylan Thomas to Bob Dylan, poetry expresses the thoughts of poets regardless of subject matter.
To me your poem speaks to loneliness and desire. In this part of the world some are prudish and some insatiable, some loyal and some promiscuous. Human behavior is limitless. Write what you will. There will always be the objectors. One reason poetry exists is Discovery. Enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
January 17th, 2024 13:27
MendedFences27 said:
If it\'s in the realm of human existence, it\'s fodder for poetry. From Bukowski to Dickinson, from Dylan Thomas to Bob Dylan, poetry expresses the thoughts of poets regardless of subject matter.
To me your poem speaks to loneliness and desire. In this part of the world some are prudish and some insatiable, some loyal and some promiscuous. Human behavior is limitless. Write what you will. There will always be the objectors. One reason poetry exists is Discovery. Enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
January 17th, 2024 13:27
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