Comments received on poems by peto
Delights
Teddy.15 said:
Peto why thank you lol 🤣 on a serious note I\'m getting to know you and I\'m guessing you are not such a fan of free verse but I am a huge fan of rhyming rhythm and this is wonderful. Biggest of hugs this Friday evening my dear Peto. Who ever she be I reckon she is your muse! 💖
September 15th, 2023 11:10
Teddy.15 said:
Peto why thank you lol 🤣 on a serious note I\'m getting to know you and I\'m guessing you are not such a fan of free verse but I am a huge fan of rhyming rhythm and this is wonderful. Biggest of hugs this Friday evening my dear Peto. Who ever she be I reckon she is your muse! 💖
September 15th, 2023 11:10
Delights
Christina8 said:
Who\'s the lucky lady that has tickled your fancy? lol OMG this is INCREDIBLE!! When you write about such things it\'s like your pen must dance off the page. So interesting to be able to read your rhymes. I really can\'t tell you what I loved most! To your poetic queen! x
September 15th, 2023 08:37
Christina8 said:
Who\'s the lucky lady that has tickled your fancy? lol OMG this is INCREDIBLE!! When you write about such things it\'s like your pen must dance off the page. So interesting to be able to read your rhymes. I really can\'t tell you what I loved most! To your poetic queen! x
September 15th, 2023 08:37
Delights
LIZ said:
I see you\'re getting all romantic on me! Honestly, this is beautiful! You\'re obviously able to see past the picture on the screen!!! This is more my drift!!! Loved it!!!!
September 15th, 2023 06:32
LIZ said:
I see you\'re getting all romantic on me! Honestly, this is beautiful! You\'re obviously able to see past the picture on the screen!!! This is more my drift!!! Loved it!!!!
September 15th, 2023 06:32
Delights
Bobby O said:
If she is worth that fanciful dance then that Horace Greeley quote applies with fanfare. Do we have a role model to bring her into our arena? I’d say Marylyn as her charisma despite still united in attention quest but Ms. Monroe was without child, perhaps Mariah but she doesn’t time slumming, Jackie O fits many aisles but her magnetism didn’t display enough for public touch, so I offer Kim Badunger as those who knew to stay away stil didn’t ?
September 15th, 2023 06:23
Bobby O said:
If she is worth that fanciful dance then that Horace Greeley quote applies with fanfare. Do we have a role model to bring her into our arena? I’d say Marylyn as her charisma despite still united in attention quest but Ms. Monroe was without child, perhaps Mariah but she doesn’t time slumming, Jackie O fits many aisles but her magnetism didn’t display enough for public touch, so I offer Kim Badunger as those who knew to stay away stil didn’t ?
September 15th, 2023 06:23
Delights
Pop64 said:
A lovely tribute, it seems, to a another poet, wordsmith, someone who shares of herself through experiences and words. Beautiful.
September 15th, 2023 06:21
Pop64 said:
A lovely tribute, it seems, to a another poet, wordsmith, someone who shares of herself through experiences and words. Beautiful.
September 15th, 2023 06:21
Magic
Bella Shepard said:
The spell that your dream weaves is both frightening and rhetorically beautiful. Saved by the magic, there\'s definitely magic here!
September 14th, 2023 15:30
Bella Shepard said:
The spell that your dream weaves is both frightening and rhetorically beautiful. Saved by the magic, there\'s definitely magic here!
September 14th, 2023 15:30
Magic
Bobby O said:
A walk turns to run a pebble removed
I said, damned not Coyle or deceived, saved by a magic weave, and that’s just picking just excellent words that screw together 1 million times stronger than I could ever say in a short bursts of clever. You got it going on!
September 14th, 2023 13:39
Bobby O said:
A walk turns to run a pebble removed
I said, damned not Coyle or deceived, saved by a magic weave, and that’s just picking just excellent words that screw together 1 million times stronger than I could ever say in a short bursts of clever. You got it going on!
September 14th, 2023 13:39
Magic
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Peto, I cannot help but say this reminds me of Braveheart. Imagery is truly brilliant. 💖
September 14th, 2023 10:58
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Peto, I cannot help but say this reminds me of Braveheart. Imagery is truly brilliant. 💖
September 14th, 2023 10:58
Magic
peto said:
Many thanks Christina
Always a pleasure to see you here
And always so grateful for your kind words x
September 14th, 2023 08:12
peto said:
Many thanks Christina
Always a pleasure to see you here
And always so grateful for your kind words x
September 14th, 2023 08:12
Spel
Christina8 said:
Well put together, you! There is a hint of sadness but as always love finds her way to you in the end. love the cadence and rhyme in this one a lot! Awesome!
September 14th, 2023 07:00
Christina8 said:
Well put together, you! There is a hint of sadness but as always love finds her way to you in the end. love the cadence and rhyme in this one a lot! Awesome!
September 14th, 2023 07:00
Magic
Christina8 said:
\"To wake up in your arms was the ultimate prize\"...so sweet! I really enjoyed the whole poem! Its really quite beautiful, Stevie, to see the way it all works out. x
September 14th, 2023 06:56
Christina8 said:
\"To wake up in your arms was the ultimate prize\"...so sweet! I really enjoyed the whole poem! Its really quite beautiful, Stevie, to see the way it all works out. x
September 14th, 2023 06:56
Spel
Introverted Sage said:
Nice rhyme and flow!
Sounds like an intense electromagnetic connection you have there.
Intriguing write!
September 14th, 2023 01:15
Introverted Sage said:
Nice rhyme and flow!
Sounds like an intense electromagnetic connection you have there.
Intriguing write!
September 14th, 2023 01:15
Spel
Teddy.15 said:
play 2 🤣 however a shockingly good write, full of irony anger and disappointment which in fact is what love can be. Super my dear Peto. May the sky explode into confetti of love someday 💖
September 13th, 2023 11:23
Teddy.15 said:
play 2 🤣 however a shockingly good write, full of irony anger and disappointment which in fact is what love can be. Super my dear Peto. May the sky explode into confetti of love someday 💖
September 13th, 2023 11:23
Spel
LIZ said:
Damn!!!! Pain! I love this! BUT, this line: \"Please don\'t answer my heartbeat now sounds like the crack, Of the whip used to peel all the skin from my back\" is GOLD! It lets me know exactly where you\'re going. Deception is a horrible crime!! I totally enjoyed it! Oh and I love the title!!!
September 13th, 2023 08:21
LIZ said:
Damn!!!! Pain! I love this! BUT, this line: \"Please don\'t answer my heartbeat now sounds like the crack, Of the whip used to peel all the skin from my back\" is GOLD! It lets me know exactly where you\'re going. Deception is a horrible crime!! I totally enjoyed it! Oh and I love the title!!!
September 13th, 2023 08:21
You could
lenore_inNeverland said:
\"When you can\'t seem to fit in your very own skin
Every virtue you hold dear presents as a sin\"
Some of the trust words ever spoken. This is absolutely spectacular!
September 13th, 2023 05:59
lenore_inNeverland said:
\"When you can\'t seem to fit in your very own skin
Every virtue you hold dear presents as a sin\"
Some of the trust words ever spoken. This is absolutely spectacular!
September 13th, 2023 05:59
You could
Christina8 said:
My first thought was \"holy cow!\" Well, replace cow with another word. This is fantastic, kinda sends you on a fantastic voyage! Very much enjoyed!
September 12th, 2023 08:31
Christina8 said:
My first thought was \"holy cow!\" Well, replace cow with another word. This is fantastic, kinda sends you on a fantastic voyage! Very much enjoyed!
September 12th, 2023 08:31
You could
LIZ said:
Well well...I knew you had it in you!! Seriously this is beautiful! So, there\'s roaring, flying, fighting, feeling, dancing and viewing!! A package deal! Nice!!
September 12th, 2023 00:56
LIZ said:
Well well...I knew you had it in you!! Seriously this is beautiful! So, there\'s roaring, flying, fighting, feeling, dancing and viewing!! A package deal! Nice!!
September 12th, 2023 00:56
Missing
Teddy.15 said:
Mr Peto did you go to venice without meeee? LoL 🤣 awe, I hope with all my heart you find that special arm that holds onto yours. 💖
September 11th, 2023 16:03
Teddy.15 said:
Mr Peto did you go to venice without meeee? LoL 🤣 awe, I hope with all my heart you find that special arm that holds onto yours. 💖
September 11th, 2023 16:03
Missing
Pop64 said:
Events and experiences are always better when shared or seen through a loved one\'s eyes. You\'ve eloquently displayed that with this write. Beautiful
September 11th, 2023 14:42
Pop64 said:
Events and experiences are always better when shared or seen through a loved one\'s eyes. You\'ve eloquently displayed that with this write. Beautiful
September 11th, 2023 14:42
Missing
Introverted Sage said:
You\'ve seen the world it seems and that along with your writing is an amazing gift.
Great write!
Thanks for sharing
September 11th, 2023 13:01
Introverted Sage said:
You\'ve seen the world it seems and that along with your writing is an amazing gift.
Great write!
Thanks for sharing
September 11th, 2023 13:01
Missing
Bella Shepard said:
Your poems have the most beautiful, flowing cadence of rhyme that I just love. You\'ve taken us on an amazing journey to far away places with all of their attractions, and back home again to hearth and home where love awaits. I was oohing and aahing!
September 11th, 2023 11:50
Bella Shepard said:
Your poems have the most beautiful, flowing cadence of rhyme that I just love. You\'ve taken us on an amazing journey to far away places with all of their attractions, and back home again to hearth and home where love awaits. I was oohing and aahing!
September 11th, 2023 11:50
Open
Christina8 said:
This is an absolutely beautiful and well written piece that left me breathless!!!! Just wonderful!!
September 11th, 2023 09:28
Christina8 said:
This is an absolutely beautiful and well written piece that left me breathless!!!! Just wonderful!!
September 11th, 2023 09:28
Missing
Christina8 said:
This is phenomenal stevie!! You mentioned Ancient Egypt....I love it so much I have a hieroglyph tattooed on my arm! What woman wouldn\'t want to hear/see the words you\'ve displayed here....so romantic! Great job!!
September 11th, 2023 09:21
Christina8 said:
This is phenomenal stevie!! You mentioned Ancient Egypt....I love it so much I have a hieroglyph tattooed on my arm! What woman wouldn\'t want to hear/see the words you\'ve displayed here....so romantic! Great job!!
September 11th, 2023 09:21
Missing
LIZ said:
Awwwwww things just don\'t feel the same when that person\'s missing! Beautiful!!
September 11th, 2023 05:08
LIZ said:
Awwwwww things just don\'t feel the same when that person\'s missing! Beautiful!!
September 11th, 2023 05:08
Clear
Introverted Sage said:
This is magical!
\'When the heart sees it all becomes clear\'
It truly does!
Great write!
September 10th, 2023 12:35
Introverted Sage said:
This is magical!
\'When the heart sees it all becomes clear\'
It truly does!
Great write!
September 10th, 2023 12:35
Candlewitch you tube version
LIZ said:
Oh my God!!! I love it!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
September 10th, 2023 08:38
LIZ said:
Oh my God!!! I love it!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
September 10th, 2023 08:38
Candlewitch
LIZ said:
😵😵😵😵😵😵 I\'m right here!! 🧙♀️ 🪄 🧹 I\'m a good witch though....sometimes!!! You realize this is almost....goth!!! Don\'t play with me!!!! LOVED IT!!!!
September 10th, 2023 08:24
LIZ said:
😵😵😵😵😵😵 I\'m right here!! 🧙♀️ 🪄 🧹 I\'m a good witch though....sometimes!!! You realize this is almost....goth!!! Don\'t play with me!!!! LOVED IT!!!!
September 10th, 2023 08:24
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