Comments received on poems by peto
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Bobby O said:
Ritz to the Pawn
Crease in the fold
Reading the phrasing you choose never gets old
September 10th, 2023 07:41
Bobby O said:
Ritz to the Pawn
Crease in the fold
Reading the phrasing you choose never gets old
September 10th, 2023 07:41
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LIZ said:
Doesn\'t seem clear at times. But I\'m grabbing my bag and heels!!! Yes, they match!!! Ayyyyyy this is just incredible!!! \"If it isn\'t too late Readjust twists of fate\"- Now I\'m putting on my crown!! Let\'s go!!! ❤️
September 10th, 2023 07:07
LIZ said:
Doesn\'t seem clear at times. But I\'m grabbing my bag and heels!!! Yes, they match!!! Ayyyyyy this is just incredible!!! \"If it isn\'t too late Readjust twists of fate\"- Now I\'m putting on my crown!! Let\'s go!!! ❤️
September 10th, 2023 07:07
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Introverted Sage said:
This is so beautiful!
Like a warm-squishy eternal flame kind of love!
Love it!
September 9th, 2023 18:18
Introverted Sage said:
This is so beautiful!
Like a warm-squishy eternal flame kind of love!
Love it!
September 9th, 2023 18:18
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Bella Shepard said:
Seamlessly written, flowing like a beautiful stream, this poem has achieved all that it set out to do, describing a love for the ages. You continue to amaze me!
September 9th, 2023 14:52
Bella Shepard said:
Seamlessly written, flowing like a beautiful stream, this poem has achieved all that it set out to do, describing a love for the ages. You continue to amaze me!
September 9th, 2023 14:52
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Parisab said:
These actions made epics and universal love stories, truly a classic :I would carry the world on my shoulder, and die a thousand times each day, should your eyes say yes, none of it is a chore (translations from the lyrics of a Persian song) Thank you for writing this, Peto
September 9th, 2023 09:24
Parisab said:
These actions made epics and universal love stories, truly a classic :I would carry the world on my shoulder, and die a thousand times each day, should your eyes say yes, none of it is a chore (translations from the lyrics of a Persian song) Thank you for writing this, Peto
September 9th, 2023 09:24
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Bobby O said:
I will build you a castle with the tower so high it reaches the moon I’ll gather melodies from birdies that fly and compose you a tune
September 9th, 2023 06:38
Bobby O said:
I will build you a castle with the tower so high it reaches the moon I’ll gather melodies from birdies that fly and compose you a tune
September 9th, 2023 06:38
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LIZ said:
Ohhhhhh wait....wait....I\'m catching my breath!!! Jesus!!!! Ok., my favorite lines: \"As you silence my screams When you tell me You\'ll always be mine\". Ahhhh forever! I\'m falling! AND \"Tickling at the core Of my soul\"- I felt it! Thank you!!
September 9th, 2023 04:01
LIZ said:
Ohhhhhh wait....wait....I\'m catching my breath!!! Jesus!!!! Ok., my favorite lines: \"As you silence my screams When you tell me You\'ll always be mine\". Ahhhh forever! I\'m falling! AND \"Tickling at the core Of my soul\"- I felt it! Thank you!!
September 9th, 2023 04:01
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Introverted Sage said:
Looking at our darkness.. sometimes forgiveness of self is the hardest.
\'And probably do the same things yet again\'
Yes 1000 times! We are who we are! Great write!
September 8th, 2023 18:42
Introverted Sage said:
Looking at our darkness.. sometimes forgiveness of self is the hardest.
\'And probably do the same things yet again\'
Yes 1000 times! We are who we are! Great write!
September 8th, 2023 18:42
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Bella Shepard said:
First of all, impeccable rhyming and flow. Bare the soul and find inspiration for this amazing poem. Too good to be painful!
September 8th, 2023 14:55
Bella Shepard said:
First of all, impeccable rhyming and flow. Bare the soul and find inspiration for this amazing poem. Too good to be painful!
September 8th, 2023 14:55
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Christina8 said:
Your words are purge of feelings...I like your honesty! And you would probably do the same things yet again. I love this piece!! Difficult to write it down so it rhymes, and so eloquently, I believe.
September 8th, 2023 13:08
Christina8 said:
Your words are purge of feelings...I like your honesty! And you would probably do the same things yet again. I love this piece!! Difficult to write it down so it rhymes, and so eloquently, I believe.
September 8th, 2023 13:08
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Teddy.15 said:
Yes Peto this is what love is truly made of, emotions tragedy guilt sorrow it\'s all in here with the truth which is if it was like that in the first place going back would only be the second play! This is wonderful I can feel your soul my friend. And I am beside you as I once had this type of love. Bravo amico 💖
September 8th, 2023 03:14
Teddy.15 said:
Yes Peto this is what love is truly made of, emotions tragedy guilt sorrow it\'s all in here with the truth which is if it was like that in the first place going back would only be the second play! This is wonderful I can feel your soul my friend. And I am beside you as I once had this type of love. Bravo amico 💖
September 8th, 2023 03:14
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LIZ said:
Oh I know, and I\'m enjoying it! 🙂 And...still to be accepted...definitely uplifting!
September 8th, 2023 03:07
LIZ said:
Oh I know, and I\'m enjoying it! 🙂 And...still to be accepted...definitely uplifting!
September 8th, 2023 03:07
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LIZ said:
Jesus!!! And you talk about me??? An explosion of feelings! And I hope, just like me, you\'re just purging, releasing, and letting go! \"Reality irrelevant, Enough to drop an elephant\" Lord have mercy!!! But you\'re right, given the chance, I\'d probably do it again!! Loved it!!!!
September 8th, 2023 02:04
LIZ said:
Jesus!!! And you talk about me??? An explosion of feelings! And I hope, just like me, you\'re just purging, releasing, and letting go! \"Reality irrelevant, Enough to drop an elephant\" Lord have mercy!!! But you\'re right, given the chance, I\'d probably do it again!! Loved it!!!!
September 8th, 2023 02:04
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Bella Shepard said:
I hear Cole Porter\'s \"I\'ve got you under my skin\", playing in the background as you maneuver your way through the tangled web of love, with the eternal hope of a silver lining at the end. This poem has it all in spades my friend!
September 7th, 2023 15:51
Bella Shepard said:
I hear Cole Porter\'s \"I\'ve got you under my skin\", playing in the background as you maneuver your way through the tangled web of love, with the eternal hope of a silver lining at the end. This poem has it all in spades my friend!
September 7th, 2023 15:51
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Pop64 said:
The cadence in this right is flowing and smooth, while your words speak with vivid imagery, successfully providing the clarity and strong meaning of the piece. Beautiful work!
September 7th, 2023 14:01
Pop64 said:
The cadence in this right is flowing and smooth, while your words speak with vivid imagery, successfully providing the clarity and strong meaning of the piece. Beautiful work!
September 7th, 2023 14:01
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peto said:
Thank you sage
I really enjoy your insight
\"Other worldly magical \"
Such a poetic response
Very much appreciated
September 7th, 2023 11:54
peto said:
Thank you sage
I really enjoy your insight
\"Other worldly magical \"
Such a poetic response
Very much appreciated
September 7th, 2023 11:54
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Introverted Sage said:
\'How cruel must it all get
For this one of a kind
To see sunrise announce a new day\'
.. it seems the love that must come out of this is other worldly magical.. that must be why the one under your skin holds hope.. the soul never forgets or so it seems.
September 7th, 2023 10:57
Introverted Sage said:
\'How cruel must it all get
For this one of a kind
To see sunrise announce a new day\'
.. it seems the love that must come out of this is other worldly magical.. that must be why the one under your skin holds hope.. the soul never forgets or so it seems.
September 7th, 2023 10:57
Eclipse
Introverted Sage said:
\'I witnessed this magnificence
Pale into insignificance\'
To have such a deep love and reverence for a person is so beautiful, yet incredibly difficult I imagine. Your poetry always describes the visceral dichotomy so incredibly. Sometimes discreetly sometimes raw, all times brilliant!
September 7th, 2023 10:32
Introverted Sage said:
\'I witnessed this magnificence
Pale into insignificance\'
To have such a deep love and reverence for a person is so beautiful, yet incredibly difficult I imagine. Your poetry always describes the visceral dichotomy so incredibly. Sometimes discreetly sometimes raw, all times brilliant!
September 7th, 2023 10:32
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lenore_inNeverland said:
Oh peto- I agree with everyone else, \"Still that age old romantic
Who\'s under my skin
Hopes one day you\'ll return
With the demons within \"
this is beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! And real, and so so so similar to exactly how I feel at the moment that I am almost considering calling this telepathy!
September 7th, 2023 10:30
lenore_inNeverland said:
Oh peto- I agree with everyone else, \"Still that age old romantic
Who\'s under my skin
Hopes one day you\'ll return
With the demons within \"
this is beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! And real, and so so so similar to exactly how I feel at the moment that I am almost considering calling this telepathy!
September 7th, 2023 10:30
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LIZ said:
Ohhhhh this....\"Still that age old romantic Who\'s under my skin, Hopes one day you\'ll return, With the demons within\" ACCEPTANCE? Raw and real! I\'m a hopeless romantic too! I\'m currently writing a piece that resonates with this one! I love it!!! ❤️
September 7th, 2023 04:32
LIZ said:
Ohhhhh this....\"Still that age old romantic Who\'s under my skin, Hopes one day you\'ll return, With the demons within\" ACCEPTANCE? Raw and real! I\'m a hopeless romantic too! I\'m currently writing a piece that resonates with this one! I love it!!! ❤️
September 7th, 2023 04:32
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Teddy.15 said:
Oh Peto, your very last stanza brings this beautifully to a hopeful end. ❤️
September 7th, 2023 03:26
Teddy.15 said:
Oh Peto, your very last stanza brings this beautifully to a hopeful end. ❤️
September 7th, 2023 03:26
Eclipse
Bella Shepard said:
I found that reading this poem aloud gave it a whole new dimension. Speak it quickly and feel its intensity. Speak it slowly and savour every nuance of its beauty. Stunning!
September 6th, 2023 13:49
Bella Shepard said:
I found that reading this poem aloud gave it a whole new dimension. Speak it quickly and feel its intensity. Speak it slowly and savour every nuance of its beauty. Stunning!
September 6th, 2023 13:49
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Teddy.15 said:
How stunning and your imagery and the northern lights wow I have never seen yet. 💖 a poetic gem my friend.
September 6th, 2023 05:55
Teddy.15 said:
How stunning and your imagery and the northern lights wow I have never seen yet. 💖 a poetic gem my friend.
September 6th, 2023 05:55
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LIZ said:
Oh my!! What a sight! I think you know by now I love the moon...all its phases! So, you\'re pulling at my heart strings! \"I\'m not expecting us to wed, But let\'s indulge each other for a while\" Mmmmm delicious!! 🌙 🌚 🌔 🌕 🌖 🌛
September 6th, 2023 04:26
LIZ said:
Oh my!! What a sight! I think you know by now I love the moon...all its phases! So, you\'re pulling at my heart strings! \"I\'m not expecting us to wed, But let\'s indulge each other for a while\" Mmmmm delicious!! 🌙 🌚 🌔 🌕 🌖 🌛
September 6th, 2023 04:26
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Christina8 said:
As one who knows a broken heart when she sees it, this is just an excellent piece! She \"ditched the shame\" and is ready to be healed by her own love......Powerful!!
September 4th, 2023 08:37
Christina8 said:
As one who knows a broken heart when she sees it, this is just an excellent piece! She \"ditched the shame\" and is ready to be healed by her own love......Powerful!!
September 4th, 2023 08:37
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Bella Shepard said:
Bruised and battered, her raw heart the colour of love, evokes powerful images and emotions. This is a wonderful poem of self realization, with exquisite rhyming and flow from one stanza to the next. Kudos my friend, great write!
September 3rd, 2023 14:06
Bella Shepard said:
Bruised and battered, her raw heart the colour of love, evokes powerful images and emotions. This is a wonderful poem of self realization, with exquisite rhyming and flow from one stanza to the next. Kudos my friend, great write!
September 3rd, 2023 14:06
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Introverted Sage said:
This is beautiful. Healing comes turning pain to love. Great write!
September 3rd, 2023 10:01
Introverted Sage said:
This is beautiful. Healing comes turning pain to love. Great write!
September 3rd, 2023 10:01
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