Comments received on poems by dbremner
Chance Meeting
Dolphine29 said:
I like it. Makes me wonder… if this is something that happens all the time... we miss chances, the actual to meet someone significant in your life, maybe for fate or just a mistake, is still a play on destiny or just a light hope to let it be. ... You got me thinking.
Best
V.
June 4th, 2012 16:20
Dolphine29 said:
I like it. Makes me wonder… if this is something that happens all the time... we miss chances, the actual to meet someone significant in your life, maybe for fate or just a mistake, is still a play on destiny or just a light hope to let it be. ... You got me thinking.
Best
V.
June 4th, 2012 16:20
Days End
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, delightfully romantic! She is lucky, precious girl. How very sweet a tribute to romance, from the romance of nature's beautiful Au Revoir to that tender feeling between a man and woman. Wonderful and lovely. Excellent imagery. The fire of love brightens the darkness so deliciously.
December 13th, 2011 21:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, delightfully romantic! She is lucky, precious girl. How very sweet a tribute to romance, from the romance of nature's beautiful Au Revoir to that tender feeling between a man and woman. Wonderful and lovely. Excellent imagery. The fire of love brightens the darkness so deliciously.
December 13th, 2011 21:58
Giving Up
Cheeky Missy said:
If you were inclined you might classify it as reflection or else sad. A defeated, mournful cry, it yet grasps, gasping for life and fresh air as it finishes. Thought-provoking and rather poignant. A far cry from a year ago today?
December 10th, 2011 22:50
Cheeky Missy said:
If you were inclined you might classify it as reflection or else sad. A defeated, mournful cry, it yet grasps, gasping for life and fresh air as it finishes. Thought-provoking and rather poignant. A far cry from a year ago today?
December 10th, 2011 22:50
For A Polish Girl in Hyde Park
Cheeky Missy said:
Poignant and bittersweet, with wonderful imagery painting that seeming moment of ecstasy which had to inevitably be relinquished. I love the images, half intrigued by the tale, for something so much deeper seems lurking, just evading my comprehension. Excellent....I like it.
December 7th, 2011 00:12
Cheeky Missy said:
Poignant and bittersweet, with wonderful imagery painting that seeming moment of ecstasy which had to inevitably be relinquished. I love the images, half intrigued by the tale, for something so much deeper seems lurking, just evading my comprehension. Excellent....I like it.
December 7th, 2011 00:12
Lily Allen on Vinyl
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, long time no see! I like that "be real" admonition. This has a serious message almost subtly woven into its little scene and argument, nigh intriguing and fascinating. Desire for what might not be the best because it has been long adored. Satisfaction with lesser because beloved. Mayhap I've missed the message? Interesting and thought-provoking. I like it.
Nice to see you here again. Seems a sorry replica of what it was a year ago, a ghostly playground whose former playmates have scattered to greener pastures...or? Me too...sort of...and sort of not.
November 26th, 2011 19:00
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, long time no see! I like that "be real" admonition. This has a serious message almost subtly woven into its little scene and argument, nigh intriguing and fascinating. Desire for what might not be the best because it has been long adored. Satisfaction with lesser because beloved. Mayhap I've missed the message? Interesting and thought-provoking. I like it.
Nice to see you here again. Seems a sorry replica of what it was a year ago, a ghostly playground whose former playmates have scattered to greener pastures...or? Me too...sort of...and sort of not.
November 26th, 2011 19:00
Girl With a Beige Scarf
erin wynette said:
hahahaha!!!you're welcome!!!there is something in youe poem, maybe the words you use that makes feel as if am the girl you're referring to and made me wanna say, YES ITS FOR ME!.IT'S FOR ME!!!am dreaming...lol
February 8th, 2011 12:23
erin wynette said:
hahahaha!!!you're welcome!!!there is something in youe poem, maybe the words you use that makes feel as if am the girl you're referring to and made me wanna say, YES ITS FOR ME!.IT'S FOR ME!!!am dreaming...lol
February 8th, 2011 12:23
Girl With a Beige Scarf
erin wynette said:
i love the way you write!!!i can't help but put myself into the shoe of that girl!!!
February 8th, 2011 08:45
erin wynette said:
i love the way you write!!!i can't help but put myself into the shoe of that girl!!!
February 8th, 2011 08:45
Thoughts on a Girls Self Portrait
Cheeky Missy said:
The portrait is an image momentarily(?) indelibly etched in your mind's eye, having caught and retained your fancy, titillating your imagination for a time.....like so many things unwittingly do. And so many moments in living are thus without a camera etched forever in our mind's eye and gallery, which cameras, paper and ink/paint may never capture. In this instance, however, the artist did succeed at creating a vivid, though vain, image in the admiring viewer. Your tribute to it is excellent, especially combined with your explanatory "author's comment." I liked it very well.
February 7th, 2011 18:02
Cheeky Missy said:
The portrait is an image momentarily(?) indelibly etched in your mind's eye, having caught and retained your fancy, titillating your imagination for a time.....like so many things unwittingly do. And so many moments in living are thus without a camera etched forever in our mind's eye and gallery, which cameras, paper and ink/paint may never capture. In this instance, however, the artist did succeed at creating a vivid, though vain, image in the admiring viewer. Your tribute to it is excellent, especially combined with your explanatory "author's comment." I liked it very well.
February 7th, 2011 18:02
Sunday Gathering
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently written....are you genuinely expressing your beliefs? While churches have long been preaching false gospels, devilishly enslaving people, that is according to God's Word by His prophets.....why did you go so far as to eliminate God?
February 6th, 2011 22:00
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently written....are you genuinely expressing your beliefs? While churches have long been preaching false gospels, devilishly enslaving people, that is according to God's Word by His prophets.....why did you go so far as to eliminate God?
February 6th, 2011 22:00
Sunday Gathering
Emi said:
Very contrary to common belief. I like it. :) I happen to share the same views as expressed in this poem. I love the last line - "Freedom is condemnation". :)
February 6th, 2011 17:16
Emi said:
Very contrary to common belief. I like it. :) I happen to share the same views as expressed in this poem. I love the last line - "Freedom is condemnation". :)
February 6th, 2011 17:16
My Own Reflection
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating...alluring. But as once hopeful "WE"....the reflection of the other...the other's equally passionate fire of love, we so desired to meet in each other's eyes. And if it IS love, then it cannot end as this poem thus envisions, with a destruction of the fondest hopes and dearest loves by time...can it? Love will forgive and pass over the necessary imperfections, thus growing deeper and stronger over time...the image more clearly than ever, etched and moulded in each other....wouldn't it? I much enjoyed reading this, and was only disappointed in the sorry thought that meeting your own reflection in her eyes would be the destruction of the love you now had. I figure from the Sartre quote you were making a poem of that thought; yet love, if it is true would not do so, would it? Beautiful and bittersweet.....again, I enjoyed it.
February 5th, 2011 16:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating...alluring. But as once hopeful "WE"....the reflection of the other...the other's equally passionate fire of love, we so desired to meet in each other's eyes. And if it IS love, then it cannot end as this poem thus envisions, with a destruction of the fondest hopes and dearest loves by time...can it? Love will forgive and pass over the necessary imperfections, thus growing deeper and stronger over time...the image more clearly than ever, etched and moulded in each other....wouldn't it? I much enjoyed reading this, and was only disappointed in the sorry thought that meeting your own reflection in her eyes would be the destruction of the love you now had. I figure from the Sartre quote you were making a poem of that thought; yet love, if it is true would not do so, would it? Beautiful and bittersweet.....again, I enjoyed it.
February 5th, 2011 16:14
Saint-Malo - A Tribute
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow....and thank you so very much for taking the reader there in this delightful depiction/description of St.Malo!!! They say a picture is worth a thousand words and this verbal image is almost truly alive with the sights, colours, scents, and sounds. I quite enjoyed it!!! Thanks so much for it...I've never before heard or known of it.
February 4th, 2011 17:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow....and thank you so very much for taking the reader there in this delightful depiction/description of St.Malo!!! They say a picture is worth a thousand words and this verbal image is almost truly alive with the sights, colours, scents, and sounds. I quite enjoyed it!!! Thanks so much for it...I've never before heard or known of it.
February 4th, 2011 17:40
Carousel
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! Yet again, via the haiku you've succinctly snapshotted....a carousel! Beautifully done! I love it for how well you've done it, and seeing it by this description, can almost hear and smell the fair even now.....
February 3rd, 2011 14:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! Yet again, via the haiku you've succinctly snapshotted....a carousel! Beautifully done! I love it for how well you've done it, and seeing it by this description, can almost hear and smell the fair even now.....
February 3rd, 2011 14:34
Spring Flowers
Emi said:
Awww I love this. :) I mostly write more depressing poems, because I seem to know more about that, so I love to read happier poetry. It makes me smile, and this was really nice. :)
February 1st, 2011 18:06
Emi said:
Awww I love this. :) I mostly write more depressing poems, because I seem to know more about that, so I love to read happier poetry. It makes me smile, and this was really nice. :)
February 1st, 2011 18:06
Spring Flowers
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, too sweet....such a welcome picture you've so delightfully drawn in this beautiful piece! Tenderly capturing their delicate allure, for which our winter-bound selves (mine, anyway) long. This almost wafts the fragrance for which we pine, in the scene you've painted now. Excellent! I love it!
February 1st, 2011 13:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, too sweet....such a welcome picture you've so delightfully drawn in this beautiful piece! Tenderly capturing their delicate allure, for which our winter-bound selves (mine, anyway) long. This almost wafts the fragrance for which we pine, in the scene you've painted now. Excellent! I love it!
February 1st, 2011 13:30
Dawn Chorus
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful. You succinctly captured the delight of the new day's trilling. I love how you did it....the haiku is perfect for expressing it shortly and sweetly. Excellent! I quite enjoy that pleasure your poem has paid tribute to, and this was a sweet reminder....I loved it!
January 28th, 2011 23:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful. You succinctly captured the delight of the new day's trilling. I love how you did it....the haiku is perfect for expressing it shortly and sweetly. Excellent! I quite enjoy that pleasure your poem has paid tribute to, and this was a sweet reminder....I loved it!
January 28th, 2011 23:46
Life
Belinda AMeharry said:
This is such a sad poem.
We do have a creator.
I see this about a book, thank God for that.
January 27th, 2011 07:25
Belinda AMeharry said:
This is such a sad poem.
We do have a creator.
I see this about a book, thank God for that.
January 27th, 2011 07:25
La Chamade - A Tribute
Cheeky Missy said:
Too bad I am totally unfamiliar with the novel inspiring this beautifully romantic poem, for I'm guessing you probably captured it perfectly in, as they say, "a nutshell." It is delightful for the image it evokes. I enjoyed it.
January 20th, 2011 09:54
Cheeky Missy said:
Too bad I am totally unfamiliar with the novel inspiring this beautifully romantic poem, for I'm guessing you probably captured it perfectly in, as they say, "a nutshell." It is delightful for the image it evokes. I enjoyed it.
January 20th, 2011 09:54
Soft Smile
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is so lovely and romantic! You perfectly captured it all in a haiku! I LOVE this one!!!
January 19th, 2011 15:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is so lovely and romantic! You perfectly captured it all in a haiku! I LOVE this one!!!
January 19th, 2011 15:59
Heavy Swell
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating! I love it! You've described it so perfectly....both it's character and superficially as it is visually seen...each as it is experienced! Excellent!!
January 18th, 2011 14:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating! I love it! You've described it so perfectly....both it's character and superficially as it is visually seen...each as it is experienced! Excellent!!
January 18th, 2011 14:28
Peaceful River
Cheeky Missy said:
Very beautiful and succinct. I love the picture you've so delightfully created in these few words....I am there and can feel it. Lovely, fantastic!
January 17th, 2011 13:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Very beautiful and succinct. I love the picture you've so delightfully created in these few words....I am there and can feel it. Lovely, fantastic!
January 17th, 2011 13:34
Lenins Words (A Dream)
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Excellent! La. I think you've captured the spirit beautifully. Marvelous!!!
January 16th, 2011 15:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Excellent! La. I think you've captured the spirit beautifully. Marvelous!!!
January 16th, 2011 15:38
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