Comments received on poems by dbremner
My Mind
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet, in the succinctness of a haiku how excellently you've portrayed it!!! I quite enjoyed this! Excellent!
January 15th, 2011 11:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet, in the succinctness of a haiku how excellently you've portrayed it!!! I quite enjoyed this! Excellent!
January 15th, 2011 11:58
Life
Cheeky Missy said:
It is such a bitter poem....and so hopeless too...ending defiantly at the inevitable miseries we must generally all face. But we DO have a Creator, and He does give us all purpose....if only He would open all our eyes to see, and quicken us, giving us Hope to live what He has given us.....I so wish I might somehow comfort you, but then am at a loss how to do so. If I may say so to you...seek the Lord evermore...He IS Life.....don't become a bitter island, hardening your heart lest anymore crush you,...please? And....Remember Me.
January 14th, 2011 10:46
Cheeky Missy said:
It is such a bitter poem....and so hopeless too...ending defiantly at the inevitable miseries we must generally all face. But we DO have a Creator, and He does give us all purpose....if only He would open all our eyes to see, and quicken us, giving us Hope to live what He has given us.....I so wish I might somehow comfort you, but then am at a loss how to do so. If I may say so to you...seek the Lord evermore...He IS Life.....don't become a bitter island, hardening your heart lest anymore crush you,...please? And....Remember Me.
January 14th, 2011 10:46
Londons Flower
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet tribute to "Lily"....I am unfamiliar with her....will you tell me more?
January 13th, 2011 12:24
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet tribute to "Lily"....I am unfamiliar with her....will you tell me more?
January 13th, 2011 12:24
Espionage
Cheeky Missy said:
It is a fascinating perspective on a spy. I belong somewhere so horribly by this definition may be one.....on the other hand, I do not see how Nathan Hale, beloved spy in the Revolutionary War or the Spy of James Fenimor Cooper's book of the same name were such as you've just presented. But then again, I don't know. It is a very interesting consideration you've presented and I enjoyed it.
January 12th, 2011 14:56
Cheeky Missy said:
It is a fascinating perspective on a spy. I belong somewhere so horribly by this definition may be one.....on the other hand, I do not see how Nathan Hale, beloved spy in the Revolutionary War or the Spy of James Fenimor Cooper's book of the same name were such as you've just presented. But then again, I don't know. It is a very interesting consideration you've presented and I enjoyed it.
January 12th, 2011 14:56
A Tribute to Take Five
Cheeky Missy said:
This seems to offer perhaps a deeper perspective on your poem Jazz-filled Love. Excellent!
January 11th, 2011 14:42
Cheeky Missy said:
This seems to offer perhaps a deeper perspective on your poem Jazz-filled Love. Excellent!
January 11th, 2011 14:42
Starlight
jerrypat said:
The stars are missing
Tomorrow's another day
For light of our life.
Like your 5-7-5
January 10th, 2011 22:48
jerrypat said:
The stars are missing
Tomorrow's another day
For light of our life.
Like your 5-7-5
January 10th, 2011 22:48
The Prejudice You Serve
Dolphine29 said:
The honesty and respect will unite, what prejudice tries to separate with hurt and humiliation. I think this as well, Excellent :)
Best
D
January 9th, 2011 01:11
Dolphine29 said:
The honesty and respect will unite, what prejudice tries to separate with hurt and humiliation. I think this as well, Excellent :)
Best
D
January 9th, 2011 01:11
Longing
Dolphine29 said:
I feel also like that so many times.
Nice Haiku
Best
D
January 9th, 2011 01:05
Dolphine29 said:
I feel also like that so many times.
Nice Haiku
Best
D
January 9th, 2011 01:05
Shades Of Red
jerrypat said:
A lot of expressive stanza's here.
Love equated with the environment is a new twist, and I congratulate you for it.
I'm happy you don't like "ratings." I've always maintained that when we write our comments IS the rating.
January 7th, 2011 06:27
jerrypat said:
A lot of expressive stanza's here.
Love equated with the environment is a new twist, and I congratulate you for it.
I'm happy you don't like "ratings." I've always maintained that when we write our comments IS the rating.
January 7th, 2011 06:27
Quietness of the Dunes
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i'm really drunk man...
but its probably the best love poem i've ever read
January 4th, 2011 17:06
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i'm really drunk man...
but its probably the best love poem i've ever read
January 4th, 2011 17:06
Coffee Shop Romance
Dolphine29 said:
You have such a way to make a coffee shop so tender and anticipated that makes me feel longing and ... well that's my affair.
Very nice poem
Best
D.
January 2nd, 2011 11:56
Dolphine29 said:
You have such a way to make a coffee shop so tender and anticipated that makes me feel longing and ... well that's my affair.
Very nice poem
Best
D.
January 2nd, 2011 11:56
Coffee Shop Romance
Dolphine29 said:
You have such a way to make a coffee shop so tender and anticipated that makes me feel longing and ... well that's my affair.
Very nice poem
Best
D.
January 2nd, 2011 11:08
Dolphine29 said:
You have such a way to make a coffee shop so tender and anticipated that makes me feel longing and ... well that's my affair.
Very nice poem
Best
D.
January 2nd, 2011 11:08
The Puzzle of Love
Dolphine29 said:
Hi:
Nice, very nice. A fair view of the facination phase in romance, I think :)
Happy New Year.
Bye
D
December 31st, 2010 10:53
Dolphine29 said:
Hi:
Nice, very nice. A fair view of the facination phase in romance, I think :)
Happy New Year.
Bye
D
December 31st, 2010 10:53
Some Thoughts Of You
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent piece. I like it very much. It is very sweet. And it IS for real, isn't it???
December 30th, 2010 20:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent piece. I like it very much. It is very sweet. And it IS for real, isn't it???
December 30th, 2010 20:28
Some Thoughts Of You
Dolphine29 said:
Greetings,
Are you writing the poem imagining someone, you don't even know about, yet?
I do that with thoughts and poems about love, because well I haven't met someone to inspire that for real.
It's beautiful though, just like too utopic to be real, my humble opinion.
Best
Dolphine
December 30th, 2010 19:15
Dolphine29 said:
Greetings,
Are you writing the poem imagining someone, you don't even know about, yet?
I do that with thoughts and poems about love, because well I haven't met someone to inspire that for real.
It's beautiful though, just like too utopic to be real, my humble opinion.
Best
Dolphine
December 30th, 2010 19:15
Some Thoughts Of You
nair36 said:
I know exactly what you mean. Great great poem
December 30th, 2010 17:15
nair36 said:
I know exactly what you mean. Great great poem
December 30th, 2010 17:15
Hopes and Fears
nair36 said:
I liked the first part too where you described how the setting sun melts to the sea... paints a clear image... great poem.
December 29th, 2010 23:05
nair36 said:
I liked the first part too where you described how the setting sun melts to the sea... paints a clear image... great poem.
December 29th, 2010 23:05
Quietness of the Dunes
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent too, scamp! It is delightfully romantic....I could envision it so well, as you painted the picture with words. It is a sweet poem....I quite enjoyed it!
December 29th, 2010 23:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent too, scamp! It is delightfully romantic....I could envision it so well, as you painted the picture with words. It is a sweet poem....I quite enjoyed it!
December 29th, 2010 23:05
Love, Space, Stars
Cheeky Missy said:
It is very sweet. And a sweet thought when a lover gazes into the starry sky. I really like it!!
December 29th, 2010 23:01
Cheeky Missy said:
It is very sweet. And a sweet thought when a lover gazes into the starry sky. I really like it!!
December 29th, 2010 23:01
Hopes and Fears
Cheeky Missy said:
I like the picture you painted in the first stanza, leading into the rest of the poem.....it is a sweet thought indeed, yet, since I must face and taste my fears, I but try ignore them, or deny them in vain hopes, until they catch up again with me. I'll consider your advice, though.
December 29th, 2010 22:52
Cheeky Missy said:
I like the picture you painted in the first stanza, leading into the rest of the poem.....it is a sweet thought indeed, yet, since I must face and taste my fears, I but try ignore them, or deny them in vain hopes, until they catch up again with me. I'll consider your advice, though.
December 29th, 2010 22:52
Hopes and Fears
spoon said:
a message id love 2 wake up to in the morning...
December 29th, 2010 17:20
spoon said:
a message id love 2 wake up to in the morning...
December 29th, 2010 17:20
It is True?
Dolphine29 said:
May I ask ... Is it true? Have you ever felt that way or do want to feel that way?
I just feel that love could be like this, but it seems like longing, to me anyway.
Conforting piece.
best
D
December 26th, 2010 00:49
Dolphine29 said:
May I ask ... Is it true? Have you ever felt that way or do want to feel that way?
I just feel that love could be like this, but it seems like longing, to me anyway.
Conforting piece.
best
D
December 26th, 2010 00:49
Love, Space, Stars
Dolphine29 said:
Really nice!! It made me smile, at least is in a way, what I do feel evertime I see the sky filled with stars.
Merry Christmas!
Dolphine
December 26th, 2010 00:34
Dolphine29 said:
Really nice!! It made me smile, at least is in a way, what I do feel evertime I see the sky filled with stars.
Merry Christmas!
Dolphine
December 26th, 2010 00:34
Our Morning Song
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i seriously don't know what to say...its beautiful to say the least..
December 24th, 2010 10:22
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i seriously don't know what to say...its beautiful to say the least..
December 24th, 2010 10:22
4 a.m.
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw thank you so very much, lover....I'll think of you, You'll think of me... and together we will dream of forever together....if only it might be...your 4 a.m.call....let it flourish! Love, your wee Snowflake I really like this poem...from YOU!
December 23rd, 2010 16:02
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw thank you so very much, lover....I'll think of you, You'll think of me... and together we will dream of forever together....if only it might be...your 4 a.m.call....let it flourish! Love, your wee Snowflake I really like this poem...from YOU!
December 23rd, 2010 16:02
Romance Is Our Fire
Cheeky Missy said:
I love this poem since in it you have for me immortalized that card's picture....I can see it yet again as I read the poem, and I LOVE your interpretation of it! If only we could post it with your tribute! Enough that we know? Thanks so much for writing a poem from it, for you really have etched it in forever's book of love. Nuff said? I really love this poem....and Snowflake loves her Romeo....that's the answer to your last two stanzas.
December 22nd, 2010 18:42
Cheeky Missy said:
I love this poem since in it you have for me immortalized that card's picture....I can see it yet again as I read the poem, and I LOVE your interpretation of it! If only we could post it with your tribute! Enough that we know? Thanks so much for writing a poem from it, for you really have etched it in forever's book of love. Nuff said? I really love this poem....and Snowflake loves her Romeo....that's the answer to your last two stanzas.
December 22nd, 2010 18:42
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